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2025外研版高中英语选择性必修第四册
Part 4 Writing
关于太空生活的日记
写作题目
假如现在是2050年,你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观,举行聚会,与外星人(alien)通电话……总之,你们玩得很愉快。 请根据以上材料,以“An Exciting Space Trip”为题写一篇文章,描述一下你的火星之旅。
注意:1.词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adj.很好的,了不起的
2. v.尖声大叫
3. 航天飞机
答案 1.awesome 2.scream 3.the space
shuttle
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分: 介绍在火星上的活动
(1)We (乘航天飞机) to Mars.
(2)On Mars we found a lot of things (与……不同) things on earth.
(3)We (邀请了许多外星人) to our party.
(4)The party (被举行) in our space shuttle.
(5)Their songs (非常棒).
(6)All of us (尖叫).
第二部分:描述个人感受
(7)The trip was very interesting and I hope (我能去火星旅行) again soon.
答案 (1)took the space shuttle (2)different from (3)invited many aliens (4)was held (5)were awesome (6)screamed (7)I can travel to Mars
2.句式升级
(8)将句(1)和句(2)合并为含有“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句的主从复合句
(9)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有过去分词作定语的句子
(10)用so...that...结构合并句(5)和句(6)
答案 (8)We took the space shuttle to Mars, on which we found a lot of things different from things on earth.
(9)We invited many aliens to our party held in our space shuttle.
(10)Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed.
连句成篇
An Exciting Space Trip
It is the year of 2050. Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago. We took the space shuttle to Mars, on which we found a lot of things different from things on earth. On arrival, we invited many aliens to our party held in our space shuttle. They danced and sang together with us. Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed. Finally, we made phone calls with aliens.
We all had a good time on Mars. The trip was very interesting and I hope I can travel to Mars again soon.
写作积累
描写太空生活的增分佳句
1.开头:引出下文
①I would like to share my experiences with people on Earth.我想和地球上的人分享我的经历。
②I m honored to have a chance to live in space, and the following are what I want to share with you. 我很荣幸有机会在太空生活,以下是我想与你分享的。
2.主体:介绍在太空的活动
①Every day in space, I experienced amazing and unexpected things.在太空中,我每天都体验到令人惊叹的和令人意想不到的事情。
②My favorite thing is taking pictures of the Earth.我最喜欢做的事情是给地球拍照。
③There being no gravity in space, the most straightforward daily tasks on earth can be very difficult in space.由于太空中没有重力,地球上最简单的日常工作在太空中都可能会非常困难。
④After getting up, I began to have breakfast,which consisted of some bread and a bag of fruit juice.起床后,我开始吃早餐。早餐包括一些面包和一袋果汁。
⑤Having worked for two hours,I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles healthy.工作了两个小时后,我需要锻炼一段时间来保持肌肉健康。
⑥Astronauts bones and muscles can become weak in space. 在太空中,宇航员的骨骼和肌肉会变得脆弱。
⑦In order to stay fit, I have to exercise on a regular basis. 为了保持健康,我必须有规律地锻炼。
3.结尾:描述个人感受
①Life in space is wonderful and challenging!太空生活真是奇妙又有挑战性!
②I believe several decades later, people can live in space.我相信几十年后,人们就可以在太空生活了。
③Little as/though we know about the universe, the development of science and technology will make it possible for us to live a short time in the universe. 尽管我们对宇宙所知甚少,但科技的发展有可能会让我们在宇宙中生活一小段时间。
④Now that the world is still at the very beginning of its voyage in space, there are a lot of things waiting for us to get the hang of. 既然这个世界依然处于航天的初级阶段,那么仍有很多事情有待我们掌握。
⑤Although I was living an uncomfortable life in space, I appreciated having the chance.虽然在太空生活很不舒服,但是我很感激有这样的机会。
实战演练
假如你是李华,你有幸参加了一个太空旅行项目,已经在太空生活了几天。请你用英语写一篇短文,向地球上的朋友们简单介绍一下你在太空第一天的生活场景,要包括吃饭、锻炼以及睡觉等几个方面。
注意:1.词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
I m honored to have a chance to live in space, and the followings are what I want to share with you.
After getting up, I had some bread and fruit juice for breakfast. There being no gravity, I had to fetch a straw to drink the juice; otherwise it would have floated around in the spacecraft. I worked for several hours and took some exercise. I tied my feet to a special machine so that I wouldn t float away while working out. When it was time to go to bed, I went into a small cupboard, got into a sleeping bag and tied it to the wall. I thought I must have looked funny.
Living in space is rather difficult but amusing. I enjoy it very much.
1.重点词汇
①otherwise adv.否则
②spacecraft n.宇宙飞船
③float away 飘走
④work out 锻炼
⑤amusing adj.有趣的,逗人笑的
2.亮点句型
①There being no gravity, I had to fetch a straw to drink the juice; otherwise it would have floated around in the spacecraft.(“There being no gravity”为独立主格结构,作原因状语;otherwise后使用了虚拟语气,表示对过去事实的虚拟)由于没有重力,我必须拿一根吸管喝果汁,否则果汁会在宇宙飞船里四处漂浮。
②I tied my feet to a special machine so that I wouldn t float away while working out.(so that引导目的状语从句;“while working out”为while引导的状语从句的省略形式)我把脚绑在一个特殊的机器上,这样我锻炼的时候就不会飘走。
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