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2025外研版高中英语选择性必修第四册
Part 4 Writing
关于非现金支付的文章
写作题目
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jenny正在做一份关于中国的移动支付(mobile payment)的问卷调查,你是她的重点采访对象,请你给她写封信,内容包括:
1.你或身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况;
2.移动支付带来的好处;
3.你的看法。
参考词汇:微信WeChat;支付宝Alipay; 二维码QR code
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
How is your survey on mobile payment going
I hope my explanation can be of some help to you. Wish you good luck.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.(女士)钱包
2. v.购买
3. adj.传统的;常规的
4. 利用
答案 1.purse 2.purchase 3.conventional 4.take advantage of
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分:自己和身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况
(1)Nowadays, most of us Chinese are used to scanning QR codes to pay for (我们买的任何东西), which is more convenient than conventional payment methods.
第二部分:移动支付带来的好处
(2) With the widespread use of mobile payment, (我们不需要带着) a purse or cash at all. (there be句型)
(3) We will never worry about getting fake notes or having to (数零钱).
(4)Mobile payment (已大大改变了) people s life in China.
第三部分:个人观点表达
(5) Personally, I think mobile payment (应该被鼓励).
(6)It has won over consumers (以它的方便).
答案 (1)whatever we purchase (2)there is no need for us to carry (3)count change (4)has greatly changed (5)should be encouraged (6)with its convenience
2.句式升级
(7)用倒装句改写句(3)
答案 (7) Never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.
连句成篇
Dear Jenny,
How is your survey on mobile payment going I m glad I can help with it.
Nowadays, most of us Chinese are used to scanning QR codes to pay for whatever we purchase,which is more convenient than conventional payment methods.
With the widespread use of mobile payment, there is no need for us to carry a purse or cash at all. Besides, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. In short, mobile payment has greatly changed people s life in China.
Personally, I think mobile payment should be encouraged. It has won over consumers with its convenience.
I hope my explanation can be of some help to you. Wish you good luck.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
写作积累
1.开头:介绍日常生活中使用移动支付的情况
①In China, mobile payment is almost popular everywhere. Even small business can be finished in this way. 在中国,移动支付几乎在任何地方都很受欢迎。即使是小生意也可以用这种方式完成。
②Nowadays, non-cash payment is becoming increasingly popular, with fewer and fewer people using cash. 如今,非现金支付变得越来越受欢迎,使用现金的人越来越少。
③Recently, it seems that shopping online has become a trend. 最近,网上购物似乎已经成为一种趋势。
2.主体:说明移动支付的优缺点
①Although non-cash payment has brought convenience to our life, there are still some problems.尽管非现金支付给我们的生活带来了便捷,但是也存在一些问题。
②As you know, there are both advantages and disadvantages of non-cash payment. 正如你所知,非现金支付既有优点也有缺点。
③Mobile payment can easily lead to over consumption.移动支付容易导致过度消费。
④It is very convenient to pay by credit card. 用信用卡付款很方便。
⑤However, every coin has two sides. Paying by credit card also has disadvantages. 然而,事物都有两面性。用信用卡支付也有缺点。
3.结尾:发表个人看法
①In a word, we should make the best of its advantages and meanwhile try to avoid its disadvantages. 总之,我们应该充分利用它的优点,同时尽量避开它的不利因素。
②Only in this way can we make better use of it. 只有这样,我们才能更好地利用它。
实战演练
(2023江苏溧阳期中)
假定你是李华,某英文报社正在就“刷脸支付(face-scanning payment)的利弊”这一话题进行征文。请用英语写一篇短文并投稿,内容包括:
1.分析利弊;
2.展望前景。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Nowadays, face-scanning payment is very popular among customers, but it has both advantages and disadvantages.
As for its advantages, first, the payment can be completed quickly, thus avoiding long-time waiting in line. Second, customers don t have to carry a bank card, which makes payment more convenient. When it comes to its disadvantages, the most worrying thing is that face recognition hasn t reached 100% accuracy, which might lead to payment risks. In addition, customers personal information may be revealed illegally.
Imperfect as it is, I believe with the improvement of face recognition technology, its popularity is expected to continue to grow in the future.
1.重点词汇
①recognition n.识别;承认 ②accuracy n.精确(性)
③reveal v.泄露 ④imperfect adj.有缺陷的,不完美的
2.亮点句型
①When it comes to its disadvantages, the most worrying thing is that face recognition hasn t reached 100% accuracy, which might lead to payment risks. (When it comes to...为固定结构,意为“当谈到……时”;that引导表语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句)说到它的缺点,最令人担忧的是人脸识别还没有达到100%的准确性,这可能会导致支付风险。
②Imperfect as it is, I believe with the improvement of face recognition technology, its popularity is expected to continue to grow in the future.(as引导让步状语从句,从句使用倒装语序)虽然它还不完美,但我相信随着人脸识别技术的改善,未来刷脸支付会变得越来越受欢迎。
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