浙江苍南县2016高考英语短文改错练习及答案
【2015·四川】
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Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
2015年四川卷 【答案】与【解析】
试题分词：文章主要通过一封求助信 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，写出了写信人的困扰。作者交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，他想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。
1．【答案】在第一句中的want后加 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to【解析】want意为“想要”时后面必须接动词不定式作宾语，不能和动词原形连用。第一段：want后加to want to do为固定搭配，故在want后加to。加上to 考查动词want的用法，want用不定式担当状语，故加上to。句意为：我真地很想和你分享一下我经历的问题。
2．【答案】第二句的tell→tol ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d【解析】根据句子的时间状语last time可知谓语动词应该用过去式。第二段第一句：tell→told根据时间状语last time可知，本句时态应为一般过去时，故将tell改为told。tell→told 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成told.句意为：正如我上次告诉你的那样。
3．【答案】第二句的friend→ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )friends【解析】three后接可数复数名词。第二段第一句：friend→friends句中three表示复数概念，后面的名词应为复数形式，故将friend改为friends。考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意为：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。
4．【答案】第四句的sing→sin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ging【解析】spend sb+时间或钱+doing sth．花费某人时间或钱做某事。第二段第三句：sing→singing spend some time(in)doing sth．为固定搭配，故将sing改为singing。考查动名词担当宾语。本句考查句型spend （in）doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。
5．【答案】第五句的many→mu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ch【解析】many表示可数概念或用来修饰复数可数名词，但是此处cost的宾语应该是钱，而钱是不可数的，所以应该用much指代“很多钱”。第二段第四句：many→much much在此处为代词。表示消费量，为不可数概念，而many为可数概念，故将many改为much。考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意为：那真的花费很多。
6．【答案】第七句的so ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )→but【解析】so意为“因此”，表结果，显然不合逻辑，因此应该用but表示前后两部分是转折关系。第二段第六句：so→but根据“我不想再去了”和“我害怕失去他们的友谊”可知，此处应为转折关系，故将so改为but。考查连词。上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。
7．【答案】第八句的How ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )→What【解析】how不能作宾语，因此应该改为what来作动词do的宾语。第二段第七句：How→What在此句中，特殊疑问词充当第二个do的宾语，故将How改为What。考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大写。
8．【答案】第九句的are→we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )re【解析】根据would you talk to him可知，本句是一个含有if条件句的虚拟语气。表示与现在或将来事实相反时从句动词应该用过去式。第二段第八句：are→were条件从句与现在事实相反，谓语动词使用过去式，故将are改为were。查虚拟语气。根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。句意为：如果你是我,…。
9．【答案】第九句的him→the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m【解析】本题属于代词的指代不明。应该将him改为them这样才与前文的their一致，指代前文的朋友。第二段第八句：him→them根据上文可知，这里指作者的三个新朋友，此处代词指代错误，故将him改为them。考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them而非him。句意为：你会和他们说吗？
10．【答案】第十句去掉help后的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )with【解析】help为及物动词直接加宾语。第三段：去掉with help为及物动词，与me构成动宾结构，因此，with在此处多余，故去掉with。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意为：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。考查动词。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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hold
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短文改错
As students, we have classes from early morning
till late afte ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rnoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break 76. _____
between class is definitely important, even necessary. 77. _____
Otherwise we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) may feel both physically or mentally tired. 78. ______
During the ten-minute break we did something to get 79. ______
rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, 80. ______
instead of getting e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ven tired. So don’t do anything that 81. _______
will make you too e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )xcited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. 82. ______
I usually do some s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )imple exercises. Sometime I have a free chat 83. ______
with my classmat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )es or just take a walk during the break. 84. ______
When the new class begins, I feel freshly again. 85. ______
【参考答案】
take---taking. 77.class—classes. 78.or—and.
79. did—do. 80. real---a real
81. tired—more tired. 82. pleased—pleasing.
83. Sometime—Sometimes.
84. 正确。 85. freshly---fresh.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Best,
Carol
参考答案
短文改错:
what-----how
anything----everything
find----found
on second-----on the second
friend----friends
on----with
warmly----warm
to stop----stop
mine----my
for-----so浙江苍南县2016高考英语短文改错演练及答案
短文改错
It is bad manners ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in the classroom to look for what our 1. _______
neighbor had writte ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n, or try to see what mark he has received 2. _______
without being permi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tted. It is good manners for them to help 3. _______
each other ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )if we have the same desire and the teacher allows to it. 4. _______
In examinations a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd in certain kinds of written work, it is dishonest 5. _______
and foolishly t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o help or to ask help from others. When one student 6. _______
does so, much l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )arger values are destroying. One may not agree 7. _______
to examination syste ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m, but at present it is basically the only 8. _______
measure tha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t the teacher and the rest of the world can depend to 9. _______
decide if ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )or not each of us meets the requirement. 10. _______
答案及解析
1. for改为at。在教室看邻座所写的是不礼貌的， look for为寻找， 通常指失去的找回来。
2. had改为has。此处主从时态应一致。
3. them改为us。考查代词一致。由本句后文“if we have...”可判断。
4. 删除to。考查动词allow为及物动词， 后面的介词to应删去。
5. 此行无错误。
6. foolishly改为foolish。and 连接的两个形容词在形式上应该保持一致。
7. destroying改为destroyed。考查动词语态，“much larger values”应被摧毁。
8. examination sy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )stem之前添加the。“examination system”此处特指下文中的“the only measure”。
9. depend后添加on。 “depend on”为固定短语， 指依赖、 依靠。
10. if 改为whether。考查if和whether在表“是否”时用法的区别。if不能与or not连用。
短文改错
Now I have taken mo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )re than ten years at school. As 63. ________
a child，I regarde ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d my school a beautiful garden. I 64. ________
went to school happily and excitedly with a small bag.
Time flew very fast. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Now I’m studying at a senior 65. ________
middle school. Eve ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ry day morning I go to school early. 66. ________
In the evening， I d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o a lot of exercises， just like a farmer 67. ________
working hard， e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )xpect a good harvest. During breaks 68. ________
between class， I of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ten go out to enjoy myself. I’m 69. ________
sure I’ll never forge ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t wonderful time I spent at school. 70. ________
【参考答案】63.taken→been 64.school后加as
65.flew→flies 66.去掉day
67.√ 68. expect→expecting 69. class→classes 70. wonderful后加the
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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I remember my grandf ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard
that turned from black ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself
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scared my classmate ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s away during they came over to play or do homework with me.
However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
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hold
old songs. I was ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me
passed
now.
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that turned fr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )om black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself
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短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右
边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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far as we conc ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )erned, the buildings would be more beautiful 67_________
if the school co ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uld be decorated. We students thought the school 68_________
looks like a desert a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd the concrete walls like the grey sky in 69_________
a rainy day. We wou ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ld be much happier and are able to study 70_________
better if the wal ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_________
photos and paint ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ings, that could certainly broaden our horizons 72_________
and enrich our live ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s. Original art work are too expensive, but 73_________
unless we buy art ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) posters, the cost will be low. Using only a 74_________
little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_________
参考答案、、短文改错
66. happily→happy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think
69. in→on 70 去are或are→be 71.正确 72.that→which
73.work→works 74. unless→if 75. it→we
（***）
Smoking which is a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) widespread habit even among school children. 76.
The number of young ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) smokers are increasing. It is reported that 77.
over two-fif ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )th of the students in a certain school smoke, and 78.
some of whom even ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) steal money to buy cigarettes. This is terrible. 79.
As we al ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l know, smoking is harmful to our health. So it's 80.
even harmful to m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )iddle school students for it does great harm not 81.
only to their he ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )alth but also for their mind. Middle school students 82.
are future builde ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rs of the country. They should spend their time 83.
learning usef ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ul knowledges. So it's really time that these young 84.
smokers made up their minds give up smoking. 85.
【参考答案】(五)
76．去掉which 77.are → is
78. two- fifth → two-fifths
79. whom → them 80.So → But
81. ∧harmful → more 82.for → to
83. √ 84.knowledges → knowledge 85. minds ∧ → to
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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参考答案短文改错
1．farmer改为farmer,s
2． 去掉1965前面的in
3． an air force base。
4． 把hardly改为hard
5．把because改为so
6．在chosen后加as
7． manned
8． flew
9． 把circle改为circles
10． 在have后面加been浙江苍南县2016高考英语短文改错联练题及答案
短文改错
At first I was not quite willing to sit down and
watched the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )90-minute football match. Usually I just 1. _______
checked the results ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) because I thought that was dull 2. _______
to watch a game in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) which players kicked a ball each 3. _______
other. Theref ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ore, my father loves football. During the 4. _______
World Cup in 2002, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )my dad stays up late just to watch 5. _______
his favorit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e sport. Seeing his strong interest in this 6. _______
game of 22 men ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )run after a ball, I decided to sit down 7. _______
to watch the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )game. I found the game excited, and my 8. _______
dad explained f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )or the rules. We shared our joy. Football 9. _______
is not too badly as ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )long as I watch it with my dad! 10. _______
答案及解析
1. watched改 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )为watch。“and”连接两个并列的不定式“to sit down”和“(to)watch”， 所以要用动词原形。
2. that改为it。it作形式主语， “that”不行。
3. each之前添加to。“把球互相踢来踢去”， 要在“kick a ball”后加上介词to。
4. Therefore改为How ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ever。由上下文可知“therefore(因此)”与句义不符， 应改为 “however(然而)”。
5. stays改为stayed。考查时态一致， 时间状语“in 2002”， 应用一般过去时。
6. 此行无错误。
7. run改为running。running为现在分词作定语， 修饰“22 men”， 相当于定语从句“who run”。
8. excited改为exciting。要用“exciting”修饰“the game”， 表示
“令人兴奋的”， “excited”用来修饰人。
9. 删除for。“explain”是及物动词， 直接跟宾语， 无须加介词。
10. badly改为bad。be动词后用形容词作表语， 不能用副词。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均公限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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punish me
61. 【答案】difficulty--- difficult
62. 【答案】hardly--- hard。
63. 【答案】asking--- asked.
64. 【答案】第二个to去掉。
65. 【答案】think--- thinking.
66. 【答案】all---both.
【答案】same前加the.
【答案】tests--- test.
【答案】so---or.
70. 【答案】does---did.
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is the most info ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rmal meal of the day. If you are a friend 77_________
of the family, y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ou may drop for tea without 78_________
been invited. Very of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ten it is not served at a table. 79_________
The member and vi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sitors take tea in the sitting room. 80__________
Each person had a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cup and saucer, a spoon and a 81 __________
small plate fo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r bread-and-butter and cake. On the way, 82___________
do not help ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )you to cake first; bread-and butter first, 83__________
then cake if there i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s any. Other piece of advice is: do not put 84__________
more than one piec ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e of bread or cake at same time. 85___________
【参考答案】
76, or----and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 77.right 78.drop ----drop in 79.been---being
80.member----members ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 81.had----has 82.On ----By 83.you---yourself
84.Other---Another 85.at ---at the
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
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参考答案
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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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答案解析******短文改错
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短文改错
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. _______
describe myself ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. _______
it seems always dif ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ficult for me to do things well as 3. _______
them. I’m sure ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )they will laugh to me and see me as 4. _______
a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. _______
Besides, I have f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ew friends. I don’t know that they 6. _______
don’t like to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. _______
very well in cla ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ss, but after class we become stranger at 8. _______
once. I am ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 9. _______
seem to work. Can yo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )u tell me about what I should do 10. _______
Yours,
Xiao Wei
答案及解析
1. of改为from。of表示所属意义， 此处应为“来自一个小城镇”。
2. quietly改为
quiet。describe后接名词或 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )代词+ as +名词或形容词， 其中as +名词或形容词作宾语补足语， 表示“把…描写成什么/什么样子”。
3. well前加as。as well as“跟…(做得)一样好”。
4. to改为at。laugh to. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )..意为“对…大笑”。laugh at...意为“嘲笑”， 有明显的、 有意的敌意的含义， 根据后文and see me as a fool， 故应用laugh at才对。
5. 此行无错误。
6. that改为why。that引导宾语从句， 本身无意义， 只起连接作用。
7. talked改为talk。整篇文章叙述的都是现在的情况。改为现在时， 使其与上下文一致。
8. stranger改为strangers。与句子主语we一致。
9. since改为but。根据上下文， 前后句之间为转折关系。
10. 删除about。tell的结构为 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )：tell sb. sth. “告诉某人某事”， 表示直接意义； tell sb. about sth. “告诉某人有关某事的某些内容”， 表示间接意义。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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1.【答案】of---去掉
2. 【答案】have—having
3. 【答案】that—which
4. 【答案】becomes—became
5. 【答案】在day前加the
6. 【答案】interesting---interestingly
7. 【答案】by---with/to
8. 【答案】drank---drunk
9. 【答案】cup—cups
【答案】grow-growth
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第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
I am worker at the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tap water company. I find that 76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about 77._____________
health .If the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____________
and muddy ,t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he telephone will ring again and again. 79.____________
Fortunately, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) people do not pay equal attention to the 80.____________
protection of water re ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sources .For the sake of our 81.____________
health ,we should t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ake good care our water resources 82.____________
and environment .There ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) is a saying “whether we do 83.____________
not careful p ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rotect our environment the last drops 84.____________
of water we w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ill see them will be our own tears.” 85.____________
【参考答案】
I am ∧worker at the ta ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )p water company. I find that 76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____
health .If the tap wa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ter appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_
and muddy ,the teleph ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )one will ring again and again. 79._____or_____
Fortunately, people d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_
protection of wate ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____
health ,we should ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )take good care∧ our water resources 82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____
not careful p ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rotect our environment the last drops 84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them
短文改错
We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________
and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________
take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________
There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________
such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________
However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________
every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________
that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________
答案与解析：
1．healthy→health 这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。
2．by→on/upon depend on/upon是固定搭配。
3．help→helps 这句话的主语 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )是动名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。
4．but→and feel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。
5．去掉them 这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。
6．swim→swimming 应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。
7．去掉in every day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。
8．giving→given 这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。
9．take前加to 此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。
10．√
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参考答案：
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but
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his
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Increase浙江苍南县2016高考英语短文改错联练及答案
短文改错
There are advantage for students to work while 1. _______
studying at school. One of them was that 2. _______
they can earn money. For the most part, 3. _______
students working to earn money for their own 4. _______
use. Earning their own money allow them 5. _______
to spend on anything as if they please. 6. _______
They would have to ask their parents for 7. _______
money or for permission to do things by 8. _______
the money. Some students may also to save 9. _______
up for our college or future use. 10. _______
答案及解析
1. advantage改为advantages。应使用可数名词的复数形式。
2. was改为is。时态和整篇文章的时态不一致。
3. 此行无错误。
4. working改为work。此句缺少谓语动词。
5. allow改为allows。主谓不一致， 动名词做主语谓语用单数。
6. 删除if。此处please作不及物动词， 意为“喜欢， 想要”， as引导定语从句， 修饰先行词anything。
7. would 后添加not。上下文逻辑有误。
8. by改为with。by表示“使用”时， 其后不能使用定冠词the， 故改为with。
9. 去掉to。may为情态动词， 其后应使用动词原形。
10. our改为their。代词的指代不一致， 指代第三人称复数形式的物主代词应为their。
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
（第二段）第一句go→went。
第二句ours→our。
第三句so去掉。
第四句Before→After。
第四句impatiently→impatient。
第五句中and→but。
第六句were→was。
第六句中and ∧fish-a。
第七句minute→minutes。
第八句Felt→Feeling。
短文改错
I took part in a geo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )graphy research study group in last term. Our 76 ________
topic was environme ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ntal pollution and protection. We took a variety 77 ________
of pictures showed th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e present pollution conditions of our city. To 78 ________
our surprised, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 79 ________
surroundings. So ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )me people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 80 ________
some cars give off har ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )mful gases, and waste water is poured in 81 ________
rivers by some fa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ctories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 82 ________
their ways through dus ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ty winds as a result of pollution. Through 83 ________
our research, we come ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to know what everybody must pay attention 84 ________
to our environment a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd some measures should be taken to protect. 85 ________
【参考答案】76. 去掉第二个in. 77. 正确.
78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.
79. surprised—surprise. 80. 去掉the 81. in---into 82. had---have.
83. ways—way 84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.
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There is a teacher who ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________
was in my old days wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )enever I was in the middle school and I 77.________
once had lots ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) of teachers who were very strict to us except 78.________
one female who was you ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________
It is very hard of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________
her own personality th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________
us to elect our monito ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________
an outing. She didn’t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) get angry even if any of them was late for 83.________
school. It was n ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ot long until most of us behaved very well 84.________
because we did f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ind her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________
【参考答案】76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when
78. to → with 79. well ∧ as
80. of → for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them → us
84. until → before 85. can → could
短文改错专项训练
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼） ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Li Ming, who has been working as postman for
1．________
two years, always wears a suit of green uniforms.
2．________
He worked with care as well as with effort. He
3．________
serves for the people heart and soul. Every day he
4．________
gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines.
5．________
He is so careful and he has never been wrong.
6．________
One day he had to send a dead letter and it happened
7．________
to be raining hardly outside. But he set out immediately．
8．________
He had asked nearly everybody in the district after
9．________
he tried to hand the letter to the right person.
10．________
参考答案
1．postman→ ∧ a postman
2．uniforms → uniform
3．worked→works
4．for（删去）
5．or→and
6．and→that
7．√
8．hardly→hard
9．after→before
10．tried→managed
短文改错
I’m very sorry ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle’s front tyre（轮胎）flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didn’t have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. That’s how I was late for school.
Please don’t worry w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ith my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.
Yours,
Wang Hui
参考答案：
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m very sorry to ha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in
lessons usual
the morning, but when ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I was ready to leave I find my bicycle’s front tyre (轮胎) flat. I wanted to
found
take ∧ bus or taxi to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) school, and I didn’t have any money with me. I had to look for a place
a but
along the street to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops ∧
repaired that / which
were open in the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way.
That’s how I was late for school.
why
Please don’t worry ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help
about / over them
if necessary.
Yours,
Wang Hui
