【2025年中考英语一轮教材复习课件】写作话题2 家庭、朋友与周围的人复习课件【福建中考备考实用】

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福建中考英语教材基础过关
2025年中考英语一轮教材复习
写作话题 2 家庭、朋友与周围的人
高分词汇
提分金句
谚语名言
1.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
2.A good neighbor is better than a brother far away.远亲不如近邻。
必备句型
1.It's necessary for us to help our parents…
2.On weekends I like…with my friends.
3.Be ready to…when…
4.Whenever I have problems, they…
开头句
1.我们时不时地被身边的人和事感动。
From time to time, we are moved _________________________ around us.
by the people and things
2.我爷爷现在七十多岁了。他是一位善良热心的老人。
My grandfather is ____________________.He is a kind and _____________
old man.
in his seventies now
warm-hearted
3.我的语文老师是我最敬佩的人之一。
My Chinese teacher is one of the people _______________.
I admire most
中间句
1.他很外向，并且非常受欢迎。
He is __________________________.
very outgoing and popular
2.他喜欢讲笑话，总是逗我们笑。
He likes _______________________________________.
telling jokes and always makes us laugh
3.她总是帮我学英语。
She often __________________________.
helps me with my English
结尾句
1.作为一名学生，我应该向他们学习，尽力帮助其他人。
As a student, I should learn from them and __________________.
try to help others
2.感谢你为我所做的一切。
Thank you for ________________________________.
everything you have done for me
话题写作
俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、
健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上,你们开展了一次以 “What can we do
to make home a happier place ”（审主题：如何使家庭更幸福）为主题的讨
论，同学们都把自己的想法写在了卡片上。假如你是王平，请结合卡片信息，
用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿，谈谈你和同学们的看法。
（审人称：第一人称为主 审时态：一般现在时为主）词数80左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Editor,
I'm Wang Ping from Class 2, Grade 9.Recently, our class had a
discussion about what we can do to make our home a happier place in our
English class.Here are some of our ideas.
_________________________________________________________
【构思】
文章可分三段：第一段引出话题；第二段介绍看法；第三段作出总结。
【写句】
把思维导图中提炼出来的内容要点写成句子。
1.We can spend more time with our family.
2.We can share happiness and worries with each other.
3.Remembering our family's birthdays is important.
4.We can keep our homes clean and tidy.
5.Home is the place where we feel most comfortable and relaxed.
【成篇】
用恰当的连接词将以上写成的句子连起来，适当增加细节以使上下文衔
接更自然，再使用一些亮点句式，以提升文章的档次，最终形成佳作。
Dear Editor,. .
I'm Wang Ping from Class 2, Grade 9.Recently, our class had a
discussion about what we can do to make our home a happier place in
our English class.Here are some of our ideas.
First of all, we can spend more time with our family.We can have
meals together, watch movies, or simply have a conversation.This can
strengthen our relationships.What's more, we can share happiness and
worries with each other.When our family are upset, we can cheer them
up.In addition, remembering our family's birthdays is also important.By
preparing gifts, we can show much love for them.Finally, we can keep
our homes clean and tidy, which can reduce stress and create a sense
of calm.
Home is where the heart is.It is the place where we feel most
comfortable and relaxed.When we make our home a happier place, we
will feel much happier.
【点拨】
1.使用First of all, What's more, In addition等短语，使文章表达更流畅，逻
辑更清晰。
2.使用share sth.with sb., cheer sb.up等固定搭配，使语言表达更丰富，体现
出扎实的语言功底。
3.使用时间状语从句（When…）、定语从句（where…）等句型，使文章的
表现力更强，提升了文章的档次。
实战演练
日前某校进行了主题为“有压力向谁说”的问卷调查（结果如图），请根
据下面的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你对这次调查的感受。词数80左右。
Whom do you like to talk to about your stress Why parents, give advice, friends, the same
age, ...
What is your advice on how to deal with stress face stress bravely, listen to music,
believe in ourselves, ...
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
When teens have stress, they will talk to different people about their
stress.Here are the results about our survey.____________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Thirty-five percent of the
students will talk to their teachers about their stress.And forty percent
of the students will talk to their friends.Only fifteen percent of the
students talk to their parents and ten percent of the students talk to
nobody.For me, I like to tell my friends about the pressure, because we
are all the same age.They sometimes have the same feeling as me.But
as students, we should learn to deal with stress properly.
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
First of all, we should face stress bravely.Stress is everywhere in
our daily life, so we should try our best to deal with it.Secondly, we
can listen to light music or do some sports, which can make us feel
relaxed.Finally, believe in ourselves.We can overcome any trouble by
ourselves or with the help of others.