【2025年中考英语一轮教材复习课件】写作话题3 居住环境复习课件【福建中考备考实用】

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福建中考英语教材基础过关
2025年中考英语一轮教材复习
写作话题 3 居住环境
高分词汇
提分金句
谚语名言
1.East or west, home is best.金窝银窝，不如自己的草窝。
2.All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。
3.Every coin has two sides.凡事都有两面性。
必备句型
1.…is located in/lies in…
2.…covers an area of…
3.…is my favorite place in my neighborhood.
4.…is known/famous for…
5.I'd like to invite you to…for a visit.
6.It is on the left of/next to…
7.Behind/In front of…, there is…
8.…used to be…, but now…
9.Opposite the…stands…
10.It is very convenient for…to come to…
开头句
1.我想介绍我的家乡……给你们。
I'd like to _______________________ … to you.
introduce my hometown
2.……是一座拥有超过……年历史的美丽城市。
… is a beautiful city ____________________________ … years.
with a history of more than
3.……是我的家乡，我在这里出生和长大。
… is my hometown where I was born and _________.
grew up
中间句
1.如果你来我的家乡，我建议你去……
_____________________________, I advise you to go to…
If you come to my hometown
2.为了使我们的社区变得更漂亮,我们帮忙在社区里种了一些树和花。
We help to ____________________________ in our community in order to
make it more beautiful.
plant some trees and flowers
结尾句
1.任何人来……一定会玩得很开心。
Anyone coming to… is sure to __________________.
have a good time
2.我希望你们在……旅行愉快。
I hope ____________________________…
you will have a good trip in
话题写作
随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大的变化。请根据以下提示，
以“Great Changes Around Me（审主题：周围事物的变化 审人称：以第三人
称为主）”为题，写一篇短文。词数80左右。
写作要点：
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Great Changes Around Me
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【构思】
文章可分三段:第一段介绍周围事物过去的样子；第二段介绍周围事物
现在的样子；第三段谈论个人感受。
【写句】
把思维导图中提炼出来的内容要点写成句子。
1.The roads used to be narrow and crowded.
2.The houses were old and small.
3.The rivers were polluted badly.
4.The roads are wide and clean.It's really convenient for people to go out.
5.Lots of tall buildings have been built.
6.The sky is blue and the cloud is white.
7.My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees and colorful
flowers.
8.Our life will become better and better!
【成篇】
用恰当的连接词将以上写成的句子连起来，适当增加细节以使上下文衔
接更自然，再使用一些亮点句式，以提升文章的档次，最终形成佳作。
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around
me.The roads used to be narrow and crowded.The houses were old and
small.The air wasn't fresh enough.Sometimes, there was terrible
smell.The rivers were polluted badly and there was rubbish in them.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean.It's really convenient for
people to go out.Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city.Most
of us have moved to beautiful big houses.The sky is blue and the cloud
is white.My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees and
colorful flowers.
Our country is becoming richer and stronger.We live a happier
life.I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!
【点拨】
1.使用in the past few years, nowadays, as time goes on等表示时间的单词
和短语，使文章条理更清晰。
2.使用take place, used to be, better and better等短语，使语言表达更丰富。
3.使用there be句型、It is+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.句型、宾语从句等，提升了
文章档次。
实战演练
时光荏苒，新一阶段的学
习生活即将开启。对于未来，
同学们期待中又有些许担忧。
英语课上，大家就新学期是否
住校这个问题展开了讨论，请
根据课代表整理出的结构图提
示，结合自己的看法，以“Are you going to live in the school ”为题写一篇
短文，在下一堂课上进行分享。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：dormitory（n.宿舍）
Are you going to live in the school
A new term is coming.Are you going to live in the school dormitory
I think there are advantages and disadvantages.
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First of all, it can help us save time.We don't need to waste time
on the road.Living in the school dormitory can make us focus more on
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our studies.Secondly, living in the school dormitory can make us learn
to be independent and manage ourselves better.At the same time, when
we have questions, we can communicate with our teachers or classmates
in time.However, living in the school dormitory can lead to loss of
private space and our sleep can be easily affected.Besides, there are no
family members to take care of us.If we have something on our mind,
we can't communicate with our parents in time.
I choose to live in the school dormitory, because it can not only
develop my independence, but also bring me closer to my classmates.