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福建中考英语教材基础过关
2025年中考英语一轮教材复习
写作话题 5 学校生活
高分词汇
提分金句
谚语名言
1.The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
2.Knowledge starts with practice.实践出真知。
3.Pride goes before, and shame comes after.骄傲使人落后。
必备句型
1.I'm glad to tell you something about my...
2.I do well in/am good at...
3.With the help of..., I made progress in...
4.There are...classes in the morning/afternoon.
5.In short, we've learned much through...
开头句
1.很高兴可以向你们介绍我的学校。
It is my pleasure to ___________________________.
introduce my school to you
2.这些天我们在谈论如何过上更好的学校生活。这是我的一些建议。
These days we are talking about _______________________________.Here
are some of my suggestions.
how to have a better school life
3.作为一名学生,我想跟你们分享我在学校的经历。
As a student, I'd like to _______________________________________.
share my experiences in school with you
中间句
1.一个大图书馆坐落在我们学校的中心。它拥有大量藏书。
A big library _________________________________.It holds a large number
of books.
stands in the center of our school
2.我们学校经常组织一些有趣的课外活动,这些活动会让我们的校园生活丰
富多彩。
Our school often organizes some interesting after-school activities which
________________________________.
can make our school life colorful
结尾句
1.作为学生,我们必须尊重我们的老师,礼貌待人。
As students, we must respect our teachers and ___________________.
be polite to others
2.让我们尽力把我们的学校变得更漂亮。
Let's _______________ make our school more beautiful.
try our best to
话题写作
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总
词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Henry,
I'm glad that you're interested in our school study tour last Friday.____
Yours,
Li Hua
【构思】
文章可分四段:第一段引出话题;第二段介绍活动过程;第三段说明感
想;第四段表达祝愿。
【写句】
把思维导图中提炼出来的内容要点写成句子。
1.Let me tell you something about it.
2.We learned about the history of the Long March.
3.We listened to the stories of the Red Army.
4.We enjoyed the Chinese art of paper cutting.We also watched local opera
performances.
5.The tour deepens our love for our country and enriches our understanding
of traditional Chinese art.
【成篇】
用恰当的连接词将以上写成的句子连起来,适当增加细节以使上下文衔
接更自然,再使用一些亮点句式,以提升文章的档次,最终形成佳作。
Dear Henry,
I'm glad that you're interested in our school study tour last
Friday.Let me tell you something about it.
In the morning, we visited the History Museum.We learned about
the history of the Long March.Then we listened to the stories of the
Red Army, which greatly touched us.After lunch, we went to the Folk
Culture Center, where we enjoyed the Chinese art of paper cutting.We
also watched local opera performances that are educational.
The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also
enriches our understanding of traditional Chinese art!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【点拨】
1.使用then, after lunch等衔接词,使文章更加连贯,更加有逻辑性。
2.使用“not only...but also...”结构和which及where引导的非限制性定语从句,
使文章表达更高级,句式更多样化。
实战演练
你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向
学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你所设计
的绿色图书馆。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library.___________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
It will be like a big tree.The
wall will be made of recyclable plastic.The roof will be made of glass.I
will use old clothes to make beautiful flowers and hang them under the
roof.Besides, there will be different kinds of real flowers on each
floor.And the sun will provide enough light and energy.
______________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
In the library, we can read all kinds of books and magazines, surf the Internet, watch stories with VR headsets and share our ideas.
It will be a great library.We can learn and enjoy ourselves there.