通用版 2025年福建中考英语一轮教材复习课件 写作话题6 健康与安全

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福建中考英语教材基础过关
2025年中考英语一轮教材复习
写作话题 6 健康与安全
高分词汇
提分金句
谚语名言
1.Good health is over wealth.健康是最大的财富。
2.Happiness lies first of all in health.幸福首先在于健康。
3.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。
必备句型
1.It is necessary/important for us to...
2.We should/had better...to stay healthy/fit.
3.Everyone should say no to... 4.If you feel/are..., do/run/eat...
5....can be good for our health.
6. ...is/are playing a more and more important role in...
开头句
1.健康的食物能给我们提供能量，帮助我们强健体格。
Healthy food can give us energy and ___________________________.
help us build up our bodies
2.我们每个人都应该保持健康，那是我们活动的基础。
______________________________, which is the foundation of our activities.
Each of us should stay healthy
中间句
1.为了使我们的身体强壮健康，我们有必要做运动。
It's necessary for us ______________ to make our bodies strong and
healthy.
to do exercise
2.我们应该控制玩电脑游戏的时间。
We are supposed to ___________________ playing computer games.
control the time of
结尾句
遵照这些方法，我一定能保护自己免受伤害。
Following these ways, I'll surely be able to ___________________________
____.
protect myself from being hurt
话题写作
假定你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六（审时态：一般将来时为
主）组织主题为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请
你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。（审主题：“健康
你和我”志愿服务活动 审人称：第三人称为主）词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._______
_______
Yours,
Li Hua
【构思】
文章可分三段:第一段说明此邮件的意图；第二段介绍活动的具体安排；
第三段介绍活动的目的并表达期待。
【写句】
把思维导图中提炼出来的内容要点写成句子。
1.Let me introduce something about the activity to you.
2.The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”.
3.It will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday.
4.It will be held in the Sports Center.
5.There will be a show.
6.The “Healthy You and Me” speech competition will be held.
7.The main purpose is to increase students' interest in sports.
8.I am looking forward to your reply!
【成篇】
用恰当的连接词将以上写成的句子连起来，并适当增加细节以使上下文
衔接更自然，再使用一些亮点句式，以提高文章的档次，最终形成佳作。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
Let me introduce something about the activity to you.
The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be
held from 8:30 a.m.to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday.It will be held in the
Sports Center.There are many interesting activities.First, there will be a
show.It will be held in our school hall.Second, the “Healthy You and
Me” speech competition will be held, too. If you want to take part,
please let me know before this Friday.There will be different kinds of
after-school exercise classes, such as football classes, basketball classes
and tennis classes.You can choose the one you like.
The main purpose is to increase students' interest in sports, and
encourage them to take exercise actively.I am looking forward to your
reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【点拨】
1.使用first, second等连接性词语,使文章条理更清晰。
2.使用introduce sth.to sb., such as, encourage sb.to do sth., look forward to
等短语，使语言表达更丰富。
3.使用祈使句（Let...）、条件状语从句（If...）等句型，提升了文章档次。
实战演练
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困
扰：自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请
你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对该问题的见解。词数80左
右。
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than other girls since I was little.For a long time,
this really troubled me.I feel more worried because I will start my senior
high school life soon! I am afraid that the students in the new school will
laugh at me because I am “big”.I decide to look more beautiful, so I want to lose weight by dieting.What do you think of my plan Can you give me some advice
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Amy
参考词汇:inner beauty内在美
注意事项：
1.回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to
lose weight by dieting.
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
I don't think it is a good idea.First, don't worry about your
size.You are still growing up and it's normal to be a little bigger.Second,
__________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
losing weight by dieting is harmful to your health.You can do exercise
for 40 minutes every day, such as running and swimming.Doing sports
can help you keep in shape.Besides, it's quite impolite to laugh at
others just because of their appearance.And the most important is the
inner beauty.You are lovely.Be confident about yourself.
I hope my advice can be helpful to you.