【2025年中考英语一轮教材复习课件】写作话题9 情感与情绪复习课件【福建中考备考实用】

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福建中考英语教材基础过关
2025年中考英语一轮教材复习
写作话题9 情感与情绪
高分词汇
提分金句
谚语名言
1.Every cloud has a silver lining（内衬）.黑暗中总有一线光明。
2.A good word is warm in winter, but a bad word hurts in June.良言一句
三冬暖，恶语伤人六月寒。
必备句型
1.I once had a/an…experience.
2.I decided to…bravely.
3.I was worried that…
4.I still remember the day when…
开头句
1.我想谈谈今天发生的那件事。
I'd like __________________________________________.
to talk about the thing that happened today
2.在晴朗的/下雨的/多云的一天，我在街上遇到了一个朋友。
____________________________, I met a friend on the street.
On a sunny/rainy/cloudy day
3.现在我想和你分享一些有趣的事情。
Now I want ________________________________________.
to share some interesting things with you
中间句
1.我的老师鼓励我，并给了我一些有用的建议。
My teacher encouraged me and ___________________________.
gave me some useful advice
2.当我做错事的时候，我最好的朋友总是直接告诉我。
My best friend always tells me directly ___________________________.
when I do something wrong
3.听音乐和读书总是让我感到放松。
Listening to music and reading books always _____________________.
make me feel relaxed
结尾句
1.谢谢你为我所做的一切。
Thank you ____________________________________.
for everything you have done for me
2.对我们来说，学会感恩很重要。
It's very important _____________________________.
for us to learn to be thankful
3.这是一次如此有意义的经历，我永远不会忘记。
It's such ________________________ that I will never forget it.
a meaningful experience
4.无论生活有多艰难，我都不会放弃我的梦想。
No matter how ____________, ___________________________.
hard life is
I won't give up my dreams
话题写作
有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English
Corner将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem（审主题：控制
愤怒，解决问题）”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制
愤怒，（审人称：第一人称为主）成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的
感悟。词数80左右。
要点如下：
1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）
（要点1：有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的经历 审时态：一般过去时）；
2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）（要点2：你的感悟
审时态：一般现在时）；
3.……
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有要点信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总
词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem
better ____________________________
Thanks for listening.
【构思】
文章可分三段：第一段讲述自己有效控制愤怒并解决问题的经历；第二
段分享感悟;第三段结尾。
【写句】
把思维导图中提炼出来的内容要点写成句子。
1.I was once so angry with my best friend. 2.I decided to have a talk
with him.
3.We became best friends again. 4.When you're angry, take a deep breath.
5.Think carefully about the problem. 6.Communicate properly and find a
way out.
【成篇】
用恰当的连接词将以上写成的句子连起来，适当增加细节以使上下文衔
接更自然，再使用一些句式结构，以提升文章的档次，最终形成佳作。
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better
I was once so angry with my best friend because I heard he spoke ill
of me.I shouted at him.However, it didn't make me feel better.“Anger
doesn't help.” The words rang in my head.Then I calmed down.I
decided to have a talk with him.So I did.In the end, we found out
what had really happened, said sorry to each other and became best
friends again.
Anger hurts.When you're angry, take a deep breath to clear your
mind.When anger dies down, think carefully about the problem.When
you're ready to talk, communicate properly and find a way out.
Thanks for listening.
【点拨】
1.使用however, then, in the end等连接性词语，使文章表达更流畅，逻辑更
清晰。
2.使用be angry with, shout at, calm down等固定搭配，使语言表达更丰富。
3.使用宾语从句（what had really happened）、状语从句（because…，
when...）等句型，提升了文章的档次。
实战演练
为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，你校“阳光心理驿站”的老师以“我发
现自己真的很好”为主题，对1 127名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目
的统计结果。请你结合下图信息，以“I Find Myself Really Good”为题，用
英语写一篇短文。词数80左右。
内容包括：
1.简要说明上图内容；
2.从图中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积
极的影响。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find
Myself Really Good”.Here are the results.______________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
86 percent of the students
believe they can see the world with a kind eye, while 53 percent
consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don't like to
complain.
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
As for me, I find myself really positive.Last month, I was chosen
to play a role in an English show.It was difficult for me to memorize
the lines in a short time.However, I regarded it as a challenge, which
was also a good chance to improve my English.So I made an effort to
practice.Finally, I made it and received high praise.In fact, it is my
positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.