介绍人物
1.介绍邓小平
Grandpa Deng Xiaoping is one of the greatest leaders in the history of China.
Grandpa Deng was born in Guangan, Sichuan. In 1920,he left his hometown and went to study in France. At that time, he was only 16 years old. In his early years, he fought in the War of Resistance against Japan (抗日战争)and the War of Liberation(解放战争).
In 1978, he put forward the reform and opening-up policy(改革开放政策) to the outside world. From then on, the Chinese people began to learn from other countries. In the 1980s, with his help, Hong Kong and Macao returned to the motherland.
In my opinion, Grandpa Deng is a great mind. We will remember him forever!
2.介绍爱因斯坦
Albert Einstein is considered as the greatest scientist of the 20th century.
Einstein was born on March 14th, 1879, in Germany. As a boy, he was slow to learn to talk, but later in his childhood he showed great curiosity about nature and strong ability to solve difficult mathematical problems.
At the age of 16, he went to university. His favorite hobby was playing the violin and he could play it very well. Besides, he had a great sense of humor.
His dream to become a scientist came true at last. One of his famous theories which is known as theory of relativity has greatly influenced science in many fields.
3.介绍卡罗琳赫歇尔
Caroline Herschel is a great astronomer. She was born in 1750 and died in 1848.
She was born into a musical family. However, she showed great interest in astronomy. To get knowledge about astronomy, she often helped her brother make observations and take notes. She got lots of knowledge about astronomy. In 1786, she discovered the first comet, making her the first female astronomer to discover a comet. In her whole life, she discovered eight comets in total.
She is considered as one of the most famous astronomers in the world.
4. 介绍爱迪生
Thomas Edison is one of the greatest inventors in the world. He was born in 1847 and died in 1931.
When he was a little boy, he was curious about many things. One day, Edison saw a hen hatching chickens. He thought it was amazing. He also wanted to have a try. Then he ran to the straw shed and made himself lie on some eggs. He didn’t move and waited for a long time.
However, he didn’t hatch any chickens. His father saw this and told him it is impossible for human beings to hatch chickens. Edison asked his father, “Why can hens hatch chickens, but I can’t ”
Little Edison is really a lovely boy.(双语报第4期)
建议类话题写作
5.询问学习外语的建议
假设你叫李华,你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。
注意:1.回信需要包括全部要点; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 3.字数80左右。
參考范文:
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad that you'll come to China . I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. Firstly, it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. What's more, you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.
Above all, you should be confident in yourself and don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty. I'm sure you will succeed through your hard work.
Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
6.对考试作弊现象的建议
目前,学生考试作弊现象严重,请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。
原因:1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴
看法与建议:1、作弊有害;2、要做人诚实,学习发奋;3、学校应减少考试。
要求:1、字数80-100;2、围绕要点可适当发挥;3、文章开头已给出,不计入总字数。
參考范文:
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations.
There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they don’t have enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students do so to make their teachers and parents happy.
In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study by ourselves.
7.对学习提出建议
假如你叫Zhang Fang,是美国中学生Lucy的笔友,你收到了她的电子邮件。在邮件中她表达了不喜欢英语和历史科目,因为要记的东西太多又乏味,上课经常想睡觉,考试也考不好,期末考试就要来了,不知道该怎么办。针对她的困惑,谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,并表达对她的祝愿。
Dear Lucy,
I’m very happy to hear from you. Don’t worry too much. Many students have the same problem as you. I think it’s very common for students to dislike memorizing. But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think. If you try the following things, you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again. Here’s my advice.
First, you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons. It can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. Second, you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers’ questions. It can help you understand better and memorize more quickly. What’s more, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. If you still feel unhappy, you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help.
I really hope my advice can help you out and get ‘A’ in English and history exams. Keep trying, I believe you will enjoy the school life and make great progress in your study.
Yours,
Zhang Fang
8. 对生活提出建议
假如你是韩梅,你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,邮件中告诉你,最近妈妈总是对她说过马路要小心,要多穿衣服,在学校表现得好不好,这些都让她很苦恼。给她写一封回信。与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语:listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. I‘m sure your mum loves you very much. Maybe it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you’re thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Han Mei
9. 对怎样缓解学习压力放松自己提出建议
中考即将来临,学生们学习时间长、压力大,专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。为此,不同的同学有不同的放松方式,有的爱看电视,有的听音乐,有的做运动…请你谈谈你通过哪些方式放松自己并说说原因,谈谈你的感受。
The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. In order to make a success in the exam I think it’s high time for us to relax a little. Or we’ll be too nervous to work well in the exam.
In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to some of our hobbies, different students have different ways --- Some watch TV, some listen to music… But for me , I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after class.
In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. I think it’s really helpful to both my health and my study. I hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed. I wish you all every success in the coming examination!
10. 对不爱锻炼的同学提出建议
假如你叫李飞,是学校“校园英语报”的编辑。你收到你同学张丽的姐姐的来信。姐姐在信中说张丽在业余时间看电视看书,不喜欢锻炼,希望你能写信给张丽告诉她锻炼的重要性并提一些建议。请根据这位姐姐的要求,给张丽写一封回信。
Dear Zhang Li,
Your sister is worried about you very much. Because you don’t take any exercise in spare time. I think health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. So you should go out instead of staying at home. There are many kinds of sports you can do, such as running, swimming and ball games.
Just remember “Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away.” Good luck!
Yours,
Li Fei
11. 为了节能环保方便出行,提高生活质量,深圳市政府近年来在很多地段为市民免费提供自行车服务,但部分市民对此了解不够。加入你是一位志愿者,周日上午,你来到莲花山公园对市民进行借车宣传。请根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。
提示:1. 深圳市民可以在很多地方免费借自行车,非常方便;
2. 如果借用自行车,请注意爱惜,及时归还;
3. 希望大家多骑车出行…(请至少列出骑车出行的两点好处)
要求:1. 演讲稿必须包括以上提示,可适当发挥;
2. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数80左右,文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。
参考词汇:resident,convenient,low-carbon, advantage
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
May I have your attention, please I’m glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Shenzhen.
I have some good news for our residents in Shenzhen. Do you want to live a low-carbon life Now it is convenient for us to use bikes for free in many places in Shenzhen. If you borrow a bike, remember to take care of it and return it in time.
Riding bikes has several advantages. For example, it can not only help you keep healthy, but also save your money. Besides, it saves gas and makes little pollution. Why not have a try
Thank you for your listening. Have a nice weekend.
人人都希望自己健康强壮,那么你知道如何保持健康吗?
假如你是Jason,是Great Hill Middle School的一名学生,请你根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文,给出自己的建议。
健康小贴士:
1.坚持锻炼;2.注意饮食;3.睡眠充足;4. ……(自行补充一点)。
要求:80词左右,可适当发挥(文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。
As we all know, it is very important to keep healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy Now, I will give you some tips.
First of all, I think it is necessary to take exercise. Taking exercise every day helps us build a strong body. What’s more, try to eat in a healthy way. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. As we know, one apple a day keeps the doctor away. Too much junk food and meat can be bad for your health. In addition, sleeping is also very important to your health. You should sleep for at least eight hours a day. Last but not least, it’s a good choice to learn to relax when you feel very tired. You can listen to music or chat with your friends.
If you stick to the advice above, you will be healthy and happy.
文章点评:
1. 文章要点清晰,行文流畅。文章总分总的结构以及连接词First of all, what’s more, in addition, last but not least 的使用使得文章结构层次分明。在给出的四点建议里,都是连接词+主旨句+细节的结构,也展现了逻辑清晰,层次分明。
2. 句型多样性,it is +adj+(for sb) to do sth, it is +n+to do sth, 祈使句,条件句等句型的使用避免了句式的单一性。
3. 短语keep healthy, take exercise, remember to do, be bad for, stick to 为文章增添色彩。
观点讨论类
上周,你们班就学生的作业量问题召开了一次主题班会,大家进行了激烈的讨论;多少同学认为作业多有利于学习,而部分同学则认为作业多不利于成长。大家的意见不一,你的看法如何?请根据所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文。
多数同学 能够复习所学知识:可以锻炼解题思维;可以防止学生花过多时间在电脑游戏上。
部分同学 浪费大量时间;没有足够时间休息;做不了自己喜欢做的事。
你的看法 至少两点
要求:1.可以适当增加细节,要求意思连贯,语句通顺;
2.字数80词左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入字数。
Last week, our class held a class meeting. During the meeting, all the students talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not. Different students have different ideas. The following are the results.
Many students thought that doing too much homework was useful. They thought students could review what they have learned by doing a lot of homework. It could also help to develop students’ minds and stop them from playing computer games all the time.
But a few students thought that too much homework was useless. In their view, doing much homework took a lot of time and thus students could not have a good rest. What’s worse, they could not do the things they like.
From my point of view, doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful. It is a good way for the students to check out whether they master the knowledge they’ve learnt.
本次考试按照今年中考标准阅卷,高标准严要求。
以下是本次考试作文阅卷的评分标准和要求:
1.卷面书写(1分,卷面整洁,无涂写,字体工整美观)
2.要点(12分)(备注:其中要点是9分,3分是语法拼写标点符
号错误,0.5扣起,同类错误不重复扣分)
3.其他2分(逻辑性,词和句多样性,连接词。0.5分扣起。)
4.最高分设定为14.5分,14分以上的标准是卷面整洁,书写工整,无涂写,无语法、拼写和标点错误,逻辑清晰,连接词使用较好,有靓词好句。)
14.如今养宠物的人越来越多了,而猫和狗是最受欢迎的两大宠物。有时候走在路上,经常会看到一个有趣的现象:狗狗或猫身上会穿着各种衣服。有人认为给宠物穿衣服不仅会让它们变得时尚,而且还保暖。但是也有人认为,给宠物穿衣服对它们不好。那到底该不该给宠物穿衣服呢?请以“should people dress their pets in clothes ”为题,写一篇英语作文,表明你的观点。
Should people put clothes on their pets (1)
Nowadays, many people in the city are raising pets. But they don’t know whether they should dress their pets or not. As for me, I hold the opinion that it’s better for pets to wear clothes than be “naked”.
First of all, putting clothes on pets can help protect them. When they take their pets for a walk, clothes can prevent them from catching diseases and keep them healthy. In addition, dressing pets in clothes can save people the time it takes to groom their pets and keep them clean. They can have more time to do other things.
To summarize, dressing pets in clothes has a lot of advantages. Let’s dress our pets in clean and comfortable clothes together.
技巧点拨:这是一篇议论文,要求学生按照议论文结构进行写作。
论点一定要鲜明,论证需要围绕论点展开,逻辑清楚,合情合理。
第一段提出自己的观点——支持或反对。(现象+论点)
第二段对观点进行论证。(论证,最好举例)
第三段进行适当的总结,并提出倡议。
写作过程中,要注意句式的表达,过渡词句的应用,以增强文章的细腻度,流畅度和精炼度。
Should people put clothes on their pets (2)
The issue of whether people should dress their pets in clothes or not has become a hot topic recently. Of course, people have different ideas about this. My opinion is that we shouldn’t put clothes on our pets.
To begin with, dressing pets in clothes can make them feel uncomfortable. People sometimes feel uncomfortable when they wear certain clothing, and so do pets. Pets already have fur to protect themselves—it is their natural “clothing”. It’s not necessary to put extra clothes on pets. Besides, pets might feel a bit hot at times when people dress pets in clothes, such as during the summer or after exercising a lot. They will not like feeling this way.
If you love your pets, don’t dress them in clothes. Try to understand their real needs.
名著介绍
15.假如你是Mary,你们的英语老师要求你们写一篇文章,简单地介绍一下《傲慢与偏见》(Pride and Prejudice)这本小说。请根据以下的内容提示,写一篇文章,80词左右,可适当发挥。
1.作者:Jane Austen,生于1775 年,卒于1817年,英国著名女作家,以描绘日常平凡生活中的普通人物而著名。
2.出版时间:1813年出版,是Jane Austen的代表作品(masterpiece)。这部小说被认为是Jane Austen最有趣的作品之一。
3.小说概要:Jane Austen在这部小说中通过Bennet五个女儿对待婚姻(marriage)不同的处理方式,表现出少女们对婚姻的不同态度。
Pride and Prejudice is a famous novel written by Jane Austen who was a well-known British woman writer. She was born in 1775 and died in 1817. She was famous for her skills in describing ordinary people and their life.
Pride and Prejudice came out in 1813. And it was the masterpiece of Jane Austen. This novel is thought of as one of the most interesting works by Jane Austen.
In this novel, Jane Austen described different ways of Bennet’s five daughters in dealing with their marriages, which clearly showed the different attitudes towards marriage of the young girls.
注:简单的作文,要注意在不遗漏信息的前提下整合信息,写出2-3句复合句。
人际交往
16. 礼物表达了人与人之间真挚的情感和良好的祝福,你曾经送出过的最有意义的礼物是什么?请你以“The Gift I Have Given”为题写一篇英语短文,叙述自己送出的最美好的礼物。
写作要点:1. Whom did you give it to
2. Why did you give it to him or her
3. What made it a great gift
写作要求:1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
2. 切合题意,内容完整,表达清楚,可适当发挥;
The Best Gift I Have Given
I think the best gift should be valuable instead of being expensive. The important thing is to do it.
When my mother was 43 years old, I planned to buy a gift for her. But on the morning of her birthday, I found she was a little uncomfortable while she was preparing breakfast for me. I knew she was ill. So I let her rest in bed at once and looked after carefully until she fell asleep.
Then I looked through some information on the Internet, because I wanted to cook breakfast for her. At last, I successfully cooked some rice. When I woke my mother up, she saw the rice and smiled. I said, “It took me an hour to cook it. Maybe it is not delicious enough, but I made with love.”
After that, I know if you put your heart into it, the gift is valuable.
个人安全
17.假如你是王伟,你的英国笔友David发邮件问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
1.家庭安全:小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗;
2.游泳安全:
不独自去游泳,不去河里,湖里游泳;
3.交通安全:过马路要当心,不在马路上玩耍。
注意:1.80-100词2.不要逐字翻译,可以适当发挥
Dear David,
Glad to receive your email.Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow.Let me tell something about them.
Firstly,we have been reminded to be careful with fire and electricity.There are so many terrible accidents around us that we can never be careless.Also,we should always remember to shut the doors and windows before leaving our house.Even if it's really hot during the summer holidays,we mustn't have a swim in rivers or ponds by
ourselves without our parents' permission.What's more,once we are in the street,traffic rules should be obeyed all the time.For example,never play on the road.Besides,always follow the traffic lights.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.Have a good summer holiday!
Yours
Wang Wei.
个人成长
18.当前,全省各学校正在开展~好书伴我成长”的活动。请你根据活动主题并结合下面表格所给的信息,以"Growing up with good books"为题,用英语写一封倡议书,向全校同学发出倡议,不少于80词。
要点:
1.读书的益处获取知识,增长见识,使人快乐
2.存在的现象听音乐、看电视、上网,占用了大部分业余时间
3.发出倡议多读书,读经典好书;向世界传播中国传统文化;让读书成为我们生活的一部分
Growing up with good books
Dear my friends,
Reading is very important.We can get knowledge through reading.It can not only broaden our horizon,but also bring us happiness.Our study can be improved if we read more good books.The more we read,the more we will learn and the brighter our future will become.
However,some students spend much time in listening to music,watching TV or surfing the Internet.It takes up most of their spare time.So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books,especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let's start reading now.And let it become a part of our life!