申请自荐信
一、考题导入
假定你是李华,从网上得知某国外野生动物保护组织正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员,请写一封邮件申请加入,内容包括: 1.写信目的;2.申请条件;3.表达期待;
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
分析:1. 体裁: 申请自荐信 ——求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等
2. 人称: 第一人称 3. 话题:申请做一名___ 4. 时态:一般现在/将来时
5. 谋篇布局:para.1 自我介绍+写信目的+过渡句
para.2 优势+总结句
para.3 表达期待
话题词汇
1. apply for the position/job 申请该职位/工作 apply to do sth.申请做某事
2. recruit volunteers 招募志愿者
3. major in主修……专业
4. be expert in 擅长于
5. patience n.耐心
6. knowledge n.知识
7. enthusiastic adj.热情的
8. take part in 参加
9. be familiar with 熟悉…
10.obtain the precious opportunity 获得这个珍贵的机会
11.be capable of doing sth.有能力做... enable me to do sth. 使我能够做某事
12.have experience in doing sth/be experienced in... 在做……上有经验
13. I am fully convinced that 我确信
14. be qualified/ suitable /fit for 胜任
15. have a good command of 熟练掌握
16. take my application into consideration / account 考虑我的申请
核心句式 (结合谋篇布局)
para.1自我介绍+写信目的+过渡句
1. 自我介绍
I am Li Hua, who is an exchange student(留学生)from China.
I am ..., chairman of the students’ union(学生会主席) in ...school.
I am ...,a student from Class 1 Grade 1(一年一班) in... high school.
2. 写信目的
Knowing that you're recruiting volunteers for ......, I'm writing to apply for the position.
我写信给你是为了应聘...
I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain the precious opportunity to....
我写信给你是希望我可以获得……的宝贵机会。
Learning that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition, I can't wait to apply for the position. 得知即将到来的中国画展需要志愿者,我迫不及待地申请这个职位。
3. 过渡句
The following are some of my advantages for the job. 以下是我的优势。
The reasons can be listed as follows. 理由列举如下。
I am fully convinced that I am qualified/ suitable /fit for the job for the following reasons. 我确信我能胜任,原因如下。
para.2 优势+总结句
1. 优势
英语能力
亮点句式——With a good command of … , I have no difficulty doing …
I have a good command of … , which enables me to do …
I have a good command of … , enabling me to do …
I have a good command of English, enabling me to communicate with others smoothly.
我精通英语,这使我可以与他人顺利沟通。
First and foremost, I speak English fluently, which allows me to communicate with visitors without any difficulty. 首先,我能说一口流利的英语,这使我与来访者毫无困难地交流。
个性特征
I am outgoing and optimistic, which makes it easy for me to get on well with others.
我性格开朗,乐观,这使我很容易与他人相处。
Not only am I sociable, but also I am responsible, which will contribute to my participation in all kinds of activities. 我不仅善于交际,而且乐于承担责任,所以我积极地参与各种活动。
With responsibility and patience, I'll show passionate enthusiasm toward this job.
我有责任心和耐心,我将用满腔热忱对待这份工作。
相关经验
My previous volunteering experience will qualify me for the position.
我以前做志愿者的经验使我能胜任这个职务。
I have relevant working experience. 我有相关的工作经验。
I have acquired a good knowledge of traditional paintings, which enables me to offer visitors detailed explanations on Chinese paintings.
我对传统绘画有很好的了解,这使我能够为参观者详细地讲解中国画。
2. 总结句
Therefore, I believe I am the right person for the job.
我相信我就是适合这份工作的人。
I believe I am fit for the job. = I believe I am qualified for the job.
我相信我能胜任这份工作。
para.3 表达期待
联系方式(视情况加入)
If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at +号码.
I can visit your office at any time for a talk or test.我可以在任何时间拜访您的办公室进行谈话或测试。
结尾句
I sincerely hope that you will take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply. 我诚挚希望你能考虑我的申请。期待你的早日答复。
If offered the opportunity to be a volunteer, I will do it well and live up to your expectations.
如果有机会成为一名志愿者,我会把它做好,不辜负你们的期望。
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。
申请信 模板(建议联系题目,让叙述更具体)
Dear Sir/Madam,
①自我介绍I am Li Hua, .... ②写信目的Learning that volunteers are needed for the (coming)+活动名, I can't wait to apply for the position. ③过渡句The reasons can be listed as follows.
④优势First and foremost首先, ...What’s more此外,....Finally/ Last but not least最后但同样重要的是, ... ⑤总结句Therefore, I believe I am the right person for the job.
⑥表达期待I sincerely hope that you will take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【练习】假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举报中国画展Chinese painting exhibition。
请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的; 2.个人优势; 3.能做的事情;