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题型过关第6讲 书面表达
书面表达的方法和技巧
英语作文是通过书面表达的形式对考生在初中阶段英语学习的综合能力考查。包括单词拼写、短语使用、句子结构以及布局谋篇等方面。注意语句连贯性
(1)结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，“观点——要点——总结”
审题，紧扣中心，首尾段写出中心句子以达到收尾呼应。
第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话
第二段：分2-3点说为什么
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。可以提出希望和建议等。
(2)要点：文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以文章的第二段的要点，要做到全围绕中心，再适当拓展每个点的内容。不要逐字逐句翻译，要避生就熟，尽量用最熟悉最有握的短语句型要点表达出来。
(3)逻辑：最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词放在句首打逗号。
递进：first ofall(首先)， what's more(还有)/in addition(还有)，Last but not least(最后
总结：in a word, all in all, generally speaking
转折：However，On the contrary(相反)，but，Although + clause(从句不与 but 连用Despite/In spite of +n/doing (尽管..但是..)
提出建议：in my opinion =as far as I am concerned/know.
举例：for example， such as+名/宾/动ing，and so on(等等).
用来陈述正反方的不同观点(一般用于议论文章中)：
On the one hand... On the other hand... (一方面，又一方面)；
Some.., while others... （一些人认为.而另一些人认为..）
Everything has two sides...(事物都具有两面性)；
some people hold the view that ..while the others prefer the view that. (一些人坚持这种观而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点)
表因果关系的：
Because(不与so连用)，As(由于，因为)，So, Therefore(因此As a result(结果)，thanks to(多亏)，because of/as a result of(由于)，without, with the heof...(在…的帮助下)
(4)语法：注意单词的使拼写，时态，语态，主谓一致等。
(5)亮点：多用学过的或自己积累的高级词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力1绝招。因此多积累词汇和短语，成绩较好的可尝试写较复杂的从句。
1．假如你是李华，在学校公告栏里看到一则学校英语俱乐部招聘英语节目主持人 (host for the school English festival) 的启示，你想申请该工作。请根据招聘内容写一封英语自荐信。
注意：
1. 信件必须涵盖招聘启示中提及的内容，可适当发挥；
2. 首句已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名与学校。
4. 词数 100词左右。
Host Wanted A host is needed for the coming school English festival. If you are good at spoken English, planning party games and want to do something for the festival, please join us! Make sure you are free this weekend to prepare for the festival. Please email us at English club @. Wait ng for your reply.
Dear sir,
After reading the notice, I know you need a host for the school English festival. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．为宣传温州，吸引大量外国游客到温州旅游，我市开展了City Tour打卡活动。假如你是该活动中的双语解说员，请根据Smith先生的信息，写一封100词左右的英语邮件，为他规划一份合理的温州一日游安排，为他选择便捷的出行方式、特色打卡点和经典美食。
One-day City Tour in Wenzhou
Transportation □Bike
□Bus
□Car
________
Beautiful sights □Yangdang Mountain
□Jiangxin Isle
□Yuhai Tower
________
Delicious food □Fish ball
□Wenzhou songgao
________
Information about the Smith Age: about forty From: America Hobbies: Climbing, learning about history, taking photos .
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Smith,
Welcome to Wenzhou, a beautiful city in the southeast of Zhejiang.
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你学校的校报“英语专栏”将要就同学们使用APP学习英语的利与弊展开讨论，请你用英语写一篇短文表达自己的观点。
要求：
1. 80-120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Advantages rich learning resources…can be easily saved… help remember English words…improve English listening… be convenient (方便) for sb to use…
Disadvantages be harmful to eyesight (视力)…
My opinion In my opinion/I think…if it is necessary…limit the time…
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4．If you are Simon, you want to join your school’s Dram a Club and you should write an application letter to its director, Ms He. The letter should include all the information below:
1. Tell the reason why you want to join this club.
2. Introduce one star you like best. Tell in which parts he or she can influence you and what you can learn from him or her.
3. Tell something about your goal(s) and plan(s) if you can become a member of it.
注意事项：
1. 申请信要符合情境、语句通顺、意思连贯，第三点的目标和计划要分开写明；
2. 词数在 100个左右；
3. 信件不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息；
4. 信件的首尾已经给出，回信必须写在答卷指定位置。
Dear director,
I am writing to you to apply to our school’s drama club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Simon
5．眼睛是心灵的窗户。但据国家统计,早在2018年全国儿童青少年总体近视率已达53.6%。如何保护视力已成为大家共同关注的话题，请根据以下信息表写一篇英语作文。
The fact More and more teenagers become short-sighted.
Ways to protect eyesight Less screen time; do eye exercises; play outside.
提示：
(1) What is the fact of teenagers’ eyesight
(2) How should teenagers protect their eyesight
注意：
1. 短文须包括表格中的全部信息和提示中白个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 80个单词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to protect our eyesight
More and more teenagers become short-sight.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．学校创办的英文专刊正以“How Much do You Know about Earthquake”为题征集稿件，请围绕以下视角写一篇稿件投稿。
要点：
1．在2023年12月18日，甘肃发生了一场大的地震，很多人无家可归；
2．地震经常发生在板块活跃的区域，主要是由板块之间的运动造成的；
3．地震很难预测，但也有一些信号，比如动物行为异常，水位变化等；
4．地震的破坏性很大，会造成建筑物倒塌、人员伤亡、财物损失等情况；
5．我们平时要多了解关于地震的相关知识，降低地震带来的破坏性。
提示：
板块运动：plate【C】 水位：water level 降低：lower 【V.】
破坏性：destructiveness【U】
要求：1）所写内容必须包括要点中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。
2）词数80词左右，不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
How Much do You Know about Earthquake
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．现在，越来越多的城市家庭饲养宠物尤其是狗，有些人甚至把狗当成他们最亲密的孩子。这些狗在给人们带来欢乐的同时也引发了很多问题。2023年10月16日，四川成都狗咬人事件再次引发网友热议。针对是否养狗大家各持己见。请根据下表谈谈养狗的利弊，说说你的观点及理由，并提出一些有针对性的建议。
Advantages Disadvantages
1. 看家护院 2. 陪伴 (accompany) 老人，减少孤独 3. …… 1. 破坏城市环境 2. 咬 (bite) 人，危害人们的健康 3. ……
You opinions and suggestions: ……
要求：
1. 包含表中所列信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数100词左右；文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
At present, more and more families are keeping pets, especially dogs.
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8．2023年12月18日晚，甘肃积石山发生了6.2级地震，该地震给人民生命和财产造成了巨大的损失，在地震中如何保护自己变得尤为重要，以“How to Protect Ourselves during an earthquake”为题，根据图中提示写一篇80词左右的文章。
Keep calm go to an open area
Get under a hard chair or bed __________ stay away from buildings
要求：1.包含图片中提示的所有写作要点， 可适当发挥。
2.条理清楚，行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名等信息。
How to Protect Ourselves During an Earthquake
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9．我们只有一个地球，珍爱地球，人与自然和谐共生已成为共识。下周五你校将举办一年一度的“绿色行动”(Green action)活动，你的朋友 Tony也想参加，请你根据所给提示向你的朋友介绍本次活动概况以及活动意义，并对你的朋友 Tony发出诚挚的邀请。
提示：
1.活动时间：下周五
2.活动地点：湿地公园 (Wetland Park)
3.活动内容：植树，环保海报展览，废物利用竞赛，……
注意：
1.短文须包含以上所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数80-100 (短文首尾句已为你写好， 不计入总词数)
参考词汇： poster (n. 海报)
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Lihua
10．你们学校正在进行“文明学生”的评选活动，请你根据下图提示，写一篇短文，谈谈如何做一个懂礼仪的中学生。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：
1. 表达中必须包含所给的要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数100个左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
4. 书写认真，卷面干净。
文 明 学 生
在家 1. 对父母有礼貌 2. 做一些家务 3. 当邻居有困难时，我们应该尽力帮助他们解决问题
在学校 1. 尊敬老师 2. 和同学团结友爱，不吵架、不打架 3. 和同学在学习上互相帮助 4. 保持教室、餐厅、校园等地方干净卫生 5. 不抽烟、不喝酒、不打牌
在公共场所 1. 遵守交通规则 2. 不插队、不喧哗 3. 吃饭时，遵守餐桌礼仪
Nowadays, all of us are talking about how to be students with good manners in our school. In my opinion,
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题型过关第6讲 书面表达
书面表达的方法和技巧
英语作文是通过书面表达的形式对考生在初中阶段英语学习的综合能力考查。包括单词拼写、短语使用、句子结构以及布局谋篇等方面。注意语句连贯性
(1)结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，“观点——要点——总结”
审题，紧扣中心，首尾段写出中心句子以达到收尾呼应。
第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话
第二段：分2-3点说为什么
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。可以提出希望和建议等。
(2)要点：文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以文章的第二段的要点，要做到全围绕中心，再适当拓展每个点的内容。不要逐字逐句翻译，要避生就熟，尽量用最熟悉最有握的短语句型要点表达出来。
(3)逻辑：最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词放在句首打逗号。
递进：first ofall(首先)， what's more(还有)/in addition(还有)，Last but not least(最后
总结：in a word, all in all, generally speaking
转折：However，On the contrary(相反)，but，Although + clause(从句不与 but 连用Despite/In spite of +n/doing (尽管..但是..)
提出建议：in my opinion =as far as I am concerned/know.
举例：for example， such as+名/宾/动ing，and so on(等等).
用来陈述正反方的不同观点(一般用于议论文章中)：
On the one hand... On the other hand... (一方面，又一方面)；
Some.., while others... （一些人认为.而另一些人认为..）
Everything has two sides...(事物都具有两面性)；
some people hold the view that ..while the others prefer the view that. (一些人坚持这种观而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点)
表因果关系的：
Because(不与so连用)，As(由于，因为)，So, Therefore(因此As a result(结果)，thanks to(多亏)，because of/as a result of(由于)，without, with the heof...(在…的帮助下)
(4)语法：注意单词的使拼写，时态，语态，主谓一致等。
(5)亮点：多用学过的或自己积累的高级词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力1绝招。因此多积累词汇和短语，成绩较好的可尝试写较复杂的从句。
1．假如你是李华，在学校公告栏里看到一则学校英语俱乐部招聘英语节目主持人 (host for the school English festival) 的启示，你想申请该工作。请根据招聘内容写一封英语自荐信。
注意：
1. 信件必须涵盖招聘启示中提及的内容，可适当发挥；
2. 首句已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名与学校。
4. 词数 100词左右。
Host Wanted A host is needed for the coming school English festival. If you are good at spoken English, planning party games and want to do something for the festival, please join us! Make sure you are free this weekend to prepare for the festival. Please email us at English club @. Wait ng for your reply.
Dear sir,
After reading the notice, I know you need a host for the school English festival. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．为宣传温州，吸引大量外国游客到温州旅游，我市开展了City Tour打卡活动。假如你是该活动中的双语解说员，请根据Smith先生的信息，写一封100词左右的英语邮件，为他规划一份合理的温州一日游安排，为他选择便捷的出行方式、特色打卡点和经典美食。
One-day City Tour in Wenzhou
Transportation □Bike
□Bus
□Car
________
Beautiful sights □Yangdang Mountain
□Jiangxin Isle
□Yuhai Tower
________
Delicious food □Fish ball
□Wenzhou songgao
________
Information about the Smith Age: about forty From: America Hobbies: Climbing, learning about history, taking photos .
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Smith,
Welcome to Wenzhou, a beautiful city in the southeast of Zhejiang.
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你学校的校报“英语专栏”将要就同学们使用APP学习英语的利与弊展开讨论，请你用英语写一篇短文表达自己的观点。
要求：
1. 80-120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Advantages rich learning resources…can be easily saved… help remember English words…improve English listening… be convenient (方便) for sb to use…
Disadvantages be harmful to eyesight (视力)…
My opinion In my opinion/I think…if it is necessary…limit the time…
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．If you are Simon, you want to join your school’s Dram a Club and you should write an application letter to its director, Ms He. The letter should include all the information below:
1. Tell the reason why you want to join this club.
2. Introduce one star you like best. Tell in which parts he or she can influence you and what you can learn from him or her.
3. Tell something about your goal(s) and plan(s) if you can become a member of it.
注意事项：
1. 申请信要符合情境、语句通顺、意思连贯，第三点的目标和计划要分开写明；
2. 词数在 100个左右；
3. 信件不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息；
4. 信件的首尾已经给出，回信必须写在答卷指定位置。
Dear director,
I am writing to you to apply to our school’s drama club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Simon
5．眼睛是心灵的窗户。但据国家统计,早在2018年全国儿童青少年总体近视率已达53.6%。如何保护视力已成为大家共同关注的话题，请根据以下信息表写一篇英语作文。
The fact More and more teenagers become short-sighted.
Ways to protect eyesight Less screen time; do eye exercises; play outside.
提示：
(1) What is the fact of teenagers’ eyesight
(2) How should teenagers protect their eyesight
注意：
1. 短文须包括表格中的全部信息和提示中白个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 80个单词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to protect our eyesight
More and more teenagers become short-sight.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．学校创办的英文专刊正以“How Much do You Know about Earthquake”为题征集稿件，请围绕以下视角写一篇稿件投稿。
要点：
1．在2023年12月18日，甘肃发生了一场大的地震，很多人无家可归；
2．地震经常发生在板块活跃的区域，主要是由板块之间的运动造成的；
3．地震很难预测，但也有一些信号，比如动物行为异常，水位变化等；
4．地震的破坏性很大，会造成建筑物倒塌、人员伤亡、财物损失等情况；
5．我们平时要多了解关于地震的相关知识，降低地震带来的破坏性。
提示：
板块运动：plate【C】 水位：water level 降低：lower 【V.】
破坏性：destructiveness【U】
要求：1）所写内容必须包括要点中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。
2）词数80词左右，不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
How Much do You Know about Earthquake
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．现在，越来越多的城市家庭饲养宠物尤其是狗，有些人甚至把狗当成他们最亲密的孩子。这些狗在给人们带来欢乐的同时也引发了很多问题。2023年10月16日，四川成都狗咬人事件再次引发网友热议。针对是否养狗大家各持己见。请根据下表谈谈养狗的利弊，说说你的观点及理由，并提出一些有针对性的建议。
Advantages Disadvantages
1. 看家护院 2. 陪伴 (accompany) 老人，减少孤独 3. …… 1. 破坏城市环境 2. 咬 (bite) 人，危害人们的健康 3. ……
You opinions and suggestions: ……
要求：
1. 包含表中所列信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数100词左右；文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
At present, more and more families are keeping pets, especially dogs.
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8．2023年12月18日晚，甘肃积石山发生了6.2级地震，该地震给人民生命和财产造成了巨大的损失，在地震中如何保护自己变得尤为重要，以“How to Protect Ourselves during an earthquake”为题，根据图中提示写一篇80词左右的文章。
Keep calm go to an open area
Get under a hard chair or bed __________ stay away from buildings
要求：1.包含图片中提示的所有写作要点， 可适当发挥。
2.条理清楚，行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名等信息。
How to Protect Ourselves During an Earthquake
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9．我们只有一个地球，珍爱地球，人与自然和谐共生已成为共识。下周五你校将举办一年一度的“绿色行动”(Green action)活动，你的朋友 Tony也想参加，请你根据所给提示向你的朋友介绍本次活动概况以及活动意义，并对你的朋友 Tony发出诚挚的邀请。
提示：
1.活动时间：下周五
2.活动地点：湿地公园 (Wetland Park)
3.活动内容：植树，环保海报展览，废物利用竞赛，……
注意：
1.短文须包含以上所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数80-100 (短文首尾句已为你写好， 不计入总词数)
参考词汇： poster (n. 海报)
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Lihua
10．你们学校正在进行“文明学生”的评选活动，请你根据下图提示，写一篇短文，谈谈如何做一个懂礼仪的中学生。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：
1. 表达中必须包含所给的要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数100个左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
4. 书写认真，卷面干净。
文 明 学 生
在家 1. 对父母有礼貌 2. 做一些家务 3. 当邻居有困难时，我们应该尽力帮助他们解决问题
在学校 1. 尊敬老师 2. 和同学团结友爱，不吵架、不打架 3. 和同学在学习上互相帮助 4. 保持教室、餐厅、校园等地方干净卫生 5. 不抽烟、不喝酒、不打牌
在公共场所 1. 遵守交通规则 2. 不插队、不喧哗 3. 吃饭时，遵守餐桌礼仪
Nowadays, all of us are talking about how to be students with good manners in our school. In my opinion,
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1．例文
Dear sir,
After reading the notice, I know you need a host for the school English festival.
I am in Grade 9 and would like to apply for the position. Since my time in junior school, I have been interested in English and have done quite well in it. I am confident in my spoken English, as I have taken part in many English debates and presentations. These experiences have greatly improved my ability to communicate effectively and engage with audiences. I believe I will be a qualified English host.
Additionally, I have lots of experience in planning and organising various activities, including interactive games, which I believe would add excitement to the festival. I am available this weekend for preparations. I am also eager to contribute to making the event a success.
Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to bring energy and enthusiasm to the wonderful festival!
Sincerely,
LiHua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点和开头部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达自己的写信目的——推荐自己担任主持人；
第二步，具体介绍自己在英语方面的兴趣和能力，以及在活动策划和组织方面的经验；
第三步，书写结束语，感谢对方考虑自己的申请，并期待有机会为节日带来活力和热情。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②effectively有效地
③engage with与……互动
④additionally此外
⑤contribute to促成
⑥opportunity机会
[高分句型]
① I am confident in my spoken English, as I have taken part in many English debates and presentations. (原因状语从句)
② I believe I will be a qualified English host. (宾语从句)
2．例文
Dear Smith.
Welcome to Wenzhou, a beautiful city in the southeast of Zhejiang. I’d like to advise you to take CRH to Yandang Mountain, It’s perfect for a day trip in Wenzhou. It’s famous for its amazing rocks and tall mountains, which is suitable for climbing. It’s so beautiful here that you’ll want to take lots of pictures! What’s more, you can learn more about the local culture and history here. Many famous poets and travelers have visited and wrote beautiful poems about Yandang. You can still see their handwriting on the rocks! At nights, it will be enjoyable to enjoy the delicious local food near the island, like fish ball and lantern cake.
Come and experience the wonders of Wenzhou. I’m sure you’ll have an unforgettable time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇书信作文；
②时态：文章主要运用一般现在时；
③提示：围绕向外国友人介绍温州展开，涵盖了推荐的交通方式、景点特色、文化内涵以及美食体验等要点，不遗漏关键信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明欢迎Smith来到温州，并直截了当地推荐其乘坐CRH前往雁荡山游玩，引出下文对雁荡山的介绍，奠定旅游推荐的基调。
第二步，详细介绍旅游亮点，雁荡山的自然风光，历史悠久，诗人墨客留下诸多诗作，展现深厚文化底蕴；最后提及当地美食，列举鱼丸、灯盏糕等，说明夜晚享受美食的惬意，多方位展现雁荡山的魅力。
第三步，热情邀约，向Smith发出诚挚邀请，总结强调温州之旅会令人难忘。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而著名
②enjoyable令人愉快的
[高分句型]
“It’s so beautiful here that you’ll want to take lots of pictures! (so…that…引导结构状语从句)
3．例文
In recent years, more and more students are using apps to learn English. There are both advantages and disadvantages to this way of learning.
First, there are many rich-learning resources in App and they can be easily stored. Second, App can help kids remember English words and improve their English listening, speaking, reading and so on. Third, App is convenient for students to use at school or at home. Every coin has two sides. Students may spend too much time on them. What’s worse, it’s harmful to their eyesight. It can easily cause nearsighted.
In my opinion, using apps to learn English can be a useful tool, but it should not be the only way. If they do use apps, they should be careful to choose reliable ones and limit the time they spend using them to protect their eyesight. But I’m sure App is good for us if we use them properly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍同学们使用APP学习英语的情况；
第二步，介绍同学们使用APP学习英语的利与弊；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
②be careful to do sth.小心做某事
③be good for有益于
[高分句型]
①There are both advantages and disadvantages to this way of learning. (there be句型)
②If they do use apps, they should be careful to choose reliable ones and limit the time they spend using them to protect their eyesight. (if引导的条件状语从句)
4．例文
Dear director,
I am writing to you to apply to our school’s drama club. I like to act and perform on stage. Drama has always been my favorite activity because it helps me express emotions and creativity. My favorite star is Zhao Liying. I admire her not only for her talent but also for her hard work. Her dedication and passion inspire a lot.
If I can join this club, my first goal is to improve my acting skills and enhance my self-confidence in public performances. I plan to attend all practices and participate in every show. I will learn from my teachers to grow as a performer. I am eager to contribute my energy to this club. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours truly,
Simon
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信形式的英语申请信；
②时态：应用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：需要严格按照题目的要求，涵盖"申请理由"、“最喜欢的明星及其影响”、“目标和计划”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明申请目的，表达对学校戏剧社团的兴趣；
第二步，介绍喜欢的明星及其对自己的影响，突显榜样的力量并联系个人成长；
第三步，说明加入后的目标和计划，展现积极进取的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不仅……而且……
②contribute...to...为……做出贡献
③apply to申请
[高分句型]
①If I can join this club, my first goal is to improve my acting skills and enhance my self-confidence in public performances.（If引导的条件状语从句）
②Drama has always been my favorite activity because it helps me express emotions and creativity.（because引导的原因状语从句）
5．
How to protect our eyesight
More and more teenagers become short-sigh. 53.6% of the students wear glasses. And it’s not difficult to find the causes to this phenomenon.
Long time of studying in the classroom with no time to refresh our eyesight is one of the causes. I think poor light is also the cause because our eyes easily get tired in the poor light. In addition, lack of sleep also contributes to this result.
As far as I am concerned, measures should be taken to protect our eyesight. Firstly, students should be given more time to play outside to refresh ourselves. Secondly, we should reduce our screen time. Thirdly, doing eye exercises regularly every day is a great necessity. Besides, enough sleep also contributes to the improvement.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍事实情况、原因和具体做法。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①poor light光线不足
②get tired变得疲倦
③contribute to促使……
④take measures采取措施
[高分句型]
①I think poor light is also the cause because our eyes easily get tired in the poor light. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②And it’s not difficult to find the causes to this phenomenon. (it作形式主语)
6．例文
How Much do You Know about Earthquake
On December 18th, 2023, a devastating earthquake struck Gansu, leaving many homeless and in despair. Earthquakes happen when the ground shakes because of the movement of the earth’s plates. These plates are always moving, but sometimes they move a lot and cause earthquakes.
It’s not easy to predict when an earthquake will happen, but there are some signs. Animals might act strangely, and water levels might change. Earthquakes can be very destructive. They can make buildings fall down, hurt people, and cause people to lose their things.
We should learn about earthquakes so we can be safer. Knowing about how plates move and what signs to look for can help us get ready. Let’s learn more about earthquakes to reduce their harm.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，通过甘肃地震，引入话题；
第二步，具体介绍地震产生的原因，发生时候可能出现的现象以及产生的后果；
第三步，呼吁多学习地震相关知识和安全措施。
[亮点词汇]
①devastating 毁灭性的
②homeless无家可归的
③in despair在绝望中
④movement移动，活动
⑤predict预测
⑥destructive破坏性的
[高分句型]
①Earthquakes happen when the ground shakes because of the movement of the earth’s plates. (时间状语从句)
7．例文
At present, more and more families are keeping pets, especially dogs. Recently, we have had a discussion on the advantages and disadvantages of keeping dogs. Different people have different points of view.
Some people agree with the idea. First, dogs can guard their yards and protect them. Second, dogs can accompany the old and keep them from feeling lonely. What’s more, they can help develop a sense of responsibility. However, other people are in disagreement. For one thing, dogs are not easy to take care of. For another, they pollute the environment and bring some diseases. Moreover, some dogs even bite people, being a threat to people’s health.
From my point of view, I think we can keep dogs, because they are our friends and bring us a lot of fun. But at the same time, we should teach them how to behave properly on streets and have them checked regularly to prevent any diseases.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇议论文，围绕养宠物狗的利弊及个人观点展开论述；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：紧扣养宠物狗的利弊讨论，从正反两方面观点出发，如狗看家护院、陪伴老人、培养责任感以及难照料、污染环境、伤人等要点，并且最后表明自身立场，全面回应主题。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明当下社会背景，越来越多的家庭饲养宠物狗，以此引出后续关于养宠物狗的讨论话题；
第二步，详细阐述不同人群对于养宠物狗的观点。正方观点，先是指出狗能护院，保障家庭安全；陪伴老人，使其免于孤独；有助于培养责任感，从多个角度支撑养狗的益处。反方观点，不易照料，日常养护难题，污染环境、传播疾病，咬人，威胁健康，全方位地呈现反对养狗的缘由；
第三步，表明自身观点，首先说明支持养狗，因为视其为朋友且能带来乐趣；同时强调，要教导狗文明出行、定期体检预防疾病，提出解决措施，平衡利弊，总结个人对养宠物狗的综合性看法，使论述逻辑严密，观点成熟。
[亮点词汇]
①guard守卫，守护
②accompany陪伴
③prevent预防
[高分句型]
①For one thing, dogs are not easy to take care of. For another, they pollute the environment and bring some diseases. (For one thing... For another...列举)
②Moreover, some dogs even bite people, being a threat to people’s health. (现在分词短语作伴随状语)
8．例文：
How to Protect Ourselves During an Earthquake
Life is not easy. As a student, we should learn how to protect ourselves during an earthquake.
When an earthquake happens, first we should calm down, which is the most important. Secoond, try your best to go to an open area as quickly as possible. Third, hide beneath our desks with our schoolbags on our heads if we are in class. That can keep us a little safer. Be sure not to jump off the building. At last, if we are on the playground, do not move and stay away from buildings.
When we are faced with natural disasters, individual power is tiny. Only by uniting can we overcome the difficulties. These are my suggestions. Keep them in mind and maybe some day we can survive in case of an earthquake.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出作文话题；
第二步，具体介绍如何在地震中保护自己；
第三步，呼吁人们互相帮助，学习安全措施。
[亮点词汇]
①calm down冷静
②at last最后
③be faced with面临
[高分句型]
①When an earthquake happens, first we should calm down, which is the most important.（定语从句）
②At last, if we are on the playground, do not move and stay away from buildings.（条件状语从句）
9．例文
Dear Tony,
I’m writing to share with you that our school is organizing its annual “Green Action” event next Friday, and I hope you can join us. The event will take place at the Wetland Park. We’ll start the day by planting trees, which is a fantastic way to learn about the importance of green spaces. Besides, there will be a display of posters made by students, promoting sustainable living. At last, an interesting contest will be held where participants will showcase their ability to turn waste into something useful. It’s an opportunity for us to come together, learn, and take action to protect our environment. Looking forward to seeing you there!
Yours,
Lihua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示：写作时注意围绕所给提示展开描述，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动举办的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍活动的具体内容和意义；
第三步，诚挚地邀请好友参加。
[亮点词汇]
①share with...... 和……分享
②take action 采取行动
③look forward to doing 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to share with you that our school is organizing its annual “Green Action” event next Friday, and I hope you can join us.(that引导的宾语从句和and连接的并列句)
②At last, an interesting contest will be held where participants will showcase their ability to turn waste into something useful.(where引导的定语从句)
10．例文
Nowadays, all of us are talking about how to be students with good manners in our school. In my opinion, we should be polite to our parents and do some housework at home. When the neighbors are in trouble, we should try our best to help them with the problems.
At school, we should respect the teachers. We should be friendly with our classmates. We can’t argue or fight with them. And we should help each other with study. We should keep the classroom, the dinning hall, the school clean. We can’t smoke, drink wine, or play cards. In public places, we should always obey traffic rules. Remember not to push in before others or speak loudly in public. When we have dinner outside, we should follow the good table manners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述如何在家做文明学生；
第二步，阐述在学校和在公共场所如何表现得体。
[亮点词汇]
①be in trouble陷入麻烦
②help each other互相帮助
③be friendly with对……友好
[高分句型]
①When we have dinner outside, we should follow the good table manners.（时间状语从句）
②Remember not to push in before others or speak loudly in public.（祈使句）
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