【期末写作指导课件】单元作文解题指导课件（写作框架+作文范文）【人教八上英语】

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【期末复习】
人教新目标版八年级上册
单元作文解题指导课件（写作框架+作文范文）
旅行日记
度假经历
假期评价
Holiday and vacations
名胜古迹
拓展话题
点明主题
感受愿望
详述经历
First, we.. . The next day, we...
提出话题
Last summer, I went to Beijing on vacation with my...
升华主题
We had a great time...
I hope to visit it again.
上周日你去郊游了。请根据下面的提示写一篇题为"A Pleasant Trip"的短文。
词数80左右。
提示:1.时间:上周日2.参加者:你和... 3.地点:西山公园4.交通方式:骑自行车5.活动:爬山、野餐、玩游戏... 6.感受...
A Pleasant Trip
Last Sunday,I went on a trip with my classmates to the West Hill Park.
At 7:00 a.m.,we met in front of my house and went to the West Hill Park by bike.On the way to the park,we felt so excited that we sang happily.When we arrived there,we started to climb the hill together.My legs were so tired that I wanted to stop.My classmates told me to keep going,so I went on.It took us about an hour to get to the top.We had a picnic on the top.After that,we played games.We danced under a big tree and told stories to each other.We didn't go back until 4:00 p.m.
We were tired but happy.What a pleasant trip it was!
【写作训练】
日常习惯
活动方式
习惯评价
Free time activities
活动频率
拓展话题
早起的好处
得出结论
详细叙述
First, it is. .. Second, it helps us...Third, it gives us...
提出话题
Early rising is good for us in many ways.
升华主题
It's important for us...
某校刊英文专栏征集有关青少年健康话题的文章,请以 "How to Keep Healthy"为题写一篇短文。
要求:必须包括图示的1~3项内容,可适当发挥,词数80左右。
How to Keep Healthy
Everyone wants to be healthy.
Firstly,I think a good eating habit is very important.We should eat lots of vegetables and fruit.We shouldn't eat too much junk food.Drinking milk is also good for our health.Secondly,we should have enough sleep.Usually we need at least eight hours' sleep every night.Thirdly,we need to exercise,such as walking,running and playing ball games.Exercise is good for the mind and the body.Of course,there are many other ways to keep healthy.
All in all,I think having good habits is the most important.
【写作训练】
内在品质描述
外貌描述
外貌比较
Personality
内部品质比较
拓展话题
介绍自己及好友
自己的观点
介绍两人的异同点
In some ways,we are the same...
But in other ways,we are different...
提出话题
My name is...,...is my best friend.
升华主题
Agood friend is...
You’d don’t need a lot of them...
I love my mother and my Chinese teacher very much.In some ways,they are the same,and in some ways,they are different.
They both have long straight hair.And they're both friendly and outgoing.My mother likes singing and dancing,and my Chinese teacher likes them,too.As for the differences,my mother is tall,but my Chinese teacher is short.My Chinese teacher is funnier than my mother.I love her class very much.About the hobby,my mother likes playing ping-pong while my Chinese teacher likes going swimming.
All in all,my mother and my Chinese teacher both love me,so I love them,too.
根据下表信息用英语写一篇文章,词数100左右,内容包含表格中所有信息。
Items Mother Chinese teacher
Differences Tall Short
Funny Funnier
Play ping-pong Go swimming
Similarities Long straight hair Friendly Like singing and dancing 【写作训练】
公共场所评价
公共场所种类
公共场所文化
Public places
公共场所比较
拓展话题
总写所学科目
总结观点
继续努力
喜欢或不喜欢的科目及原因
And...but...because....
I want to be a...
提出话题
I like all the subjects, but my favorite subject is...
升华主题
These are my favorites.what about your
【写作训练】
Here are the results of a survey about the best places in Sichuan.
First,No.1 Middle school is the best with the best teachers and the most beautiful surroundings. Second,Town Cinema is famous for its biggest screen and the most comfortable seats. Next, Huaxing Clothing Store is popular with people,because clothes there have the best quality and the most popular style.Last,hospitals are important and necessary for a city.Li Huili Hospital has the friendliest service but is not expensive at all!
All in all,I love my hometown.How about you
四川省将举办一次以"最美家乡"为主题的征文比赛,请根据下表提示,适当展 开联想。
Places Names Reasons
Middle School No.1 Middle School the best teachers,the most beautiful...
Movie Theater Town cinema the biggest screen,the most comfortable seats
Clothing Store Huaxing Clothing Store the best quality,the most popular...
Hospital Li Huili Hospital the friendliest service,not expensive
要求:1.词数80左右;
2.要点完整,层次清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯,可适当发挥;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Here are the results of a survey about the best places in Sichuan.
娱乐历史
娱乐类型
娱乐计划
Entertainment
娱乐评价
拓展话题
列举电视节目
呼应主题
紧扣主题，表明自己最喜欢的节目及原因
I like...because..
I think..
Every night I...
提出话题
There are ..
my favorite is...
升华主题
If you..
I’m sure...
下面是戴安娜(Diana)一家对不同电视节目的看法。请你根据表格内容及所给提示,写一篇词数80左右的英语短文,介绍一下戴安娜一家对这些电视节目的态度。
Diana's family like different kinds of TV shows.Diana doesn't mind sitcoms.Her father doesn't like them,but her mother loves them.Diana can't stand action movies,and her mother can't,either.But her father likes them.Diana likes sports shows.Her father doesn't mind them,but her mother doesn't like them.Diana loves soap operas,but her father can't stand them.Her mother doesn't mind them.Diana also loves talk shows.Her father doesn't mind them,and her mother likes them.
【写作训练】
How
What
Where
Life goals
When
拓展话题
开篇点明梦想
表明决心，为梦想而努力奋斗
阐述原因，以及怎么做、何时做
I want to be... because...
提出话题
I want to be...when I grow up.
升华主题
I think I can make it if I do all my best!
在新年即将到来之际,同学们畅谈了自己的新年计划。假设你是托比(Toby),
请你根据下面表格中的信息,就几位同学的新年计划写一篇词数60~80的小短文,做一下介绍。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Pleasant Trip
Last Sunday,I went on a trip with my classmates to the West Hill Park.
At 7:00 a.m.we met in front of my house and went to the West Hill Park by bike.On the way to the park,we felt so excited that we sang happily.When we arrived there,we started to climb the hill together.My legs were so tired that I wanted to stop.My classmates told me to keep going,so I went on.It took us about an hour to get to the top.We had a picnic on the top.After that,we played games.We danced under a big tree and told stories to each other.We didn't go back until 4:00 p.m.
We were tired but happy.What a pleasant trip it was!
【写作训练】
Names New Year's resolutions How are they going to do it
Toby get good grades study hard and do homework
Kay learn to play the piano take piano lessons
Ted make a basketball team practice and join a club
Sandy lose weight eat healthy food and take more exercise
工作预测
环境预测
交通预测
Life in the future
科技预测
拓展话题
总写未来生活
表明自己的观点
具体介绍未来生活有哪些不同
Changes will take place...
提出话题
Life in 50 years will be quite different from...
升华主题
I (don't) like that kind of life.
假如你们班下周将召开一次班会,主题是"22世纪的生活"。请你根据以下提示,写一篇词数80左右的发言稿。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
提示:1.人口迅速增长;
2.工作时间缩短,娱乐和旅游时间将更充裕;3.机器人做工,很多人面临失业...
Life in the 22nd Century
Life in the 22nd century will be different from life in the 21st century,because changes
Life in the 22nd Century
Life in the 22nd century will be different from life in the 21st century,because changes will take place in the new century.But what will the changes be
The population is growing fast.There will be more and more people in the world and most of them will live longer than before.People will work fewer hours than they do in the 2lst century, and they will have more free time for doing sports,watching TV and traveling. More people will go to other countries for holidays.Work in the future will be different,too. Dangerous and hard work will be done by robots.Because of this,there will not be enough work for people to do and many of them will be out of work.This will be a problem.
What do you think about it
【写作训练】
制作工具
制作原料
制作步骤
Food-making
饮食习俗
拓展话题
制作什么食物
享受食物
分步骤介绍具体制作过程
First...Next...Then...After that... Finally..
提出话题
Do you want to learn to make...
升华主题
When it’s ready,you can enjoy it now.
假如你叫汤姆(Tom),请根据以下邮件内容及所给信息,给王刚回一封电子邮件。
Dear Tom,
How are you
I'm writing to ask you something about cooking.My good friends want to spend this weekend with me.I want to make fruit salad.Can you help me Please tell me what I need and what I should do.
I hope to hear from you as soon as possible
Yours,
Wang Gang
水果沙拉制作过程:
原 料:4根香蕉、3个苹果、半个西瓜或者其他水果、蜂蜜、奶酪
步骤:1.全部切碎放在碗里面;
2.加蜂蜜和奶酪;
3.搅拌均匀。
要求:用上first,next,then,finally等表示过程的词;词数100左右。
【写作训练】
Dear Wang Gang,
I'm glad to hear from you.You want to like fruit salad.You need four bananas, apples and a half watermelon or other fruit,and you also need some honey and yogurt.
First,wash and cut up all the fruit,and put it into a bowl.Next,add two spoons of honey and a cup of yogurt to the fruit.Then,mix up everything. Finally, serve the fruit salad and enjoy it with your friends.
I hope it's helpful to you.
Yours,
Tom
授受邀请
制作请柬
制作日历
Party invitations
拒绝邀请
拓展话题
对邀请表示感谢
祝福对方
委婉地拒绝并说明原因
I'd love to go but I can't.
I have to... I am going to...
提出话题
Thanks a lot for inviting me to your...
升华主题
I hope you can have a good time.
罗伯特(Robert) 邀请本(Ben) 下周六到他家去玩,但本那一天很忙,不能赴约。假如你是本,请根据以下图片提示,给罗伯特写一封信,说明你不能赴约的原因。
要 求: 内容具体,语意完整,格式正确;词数8 0左右。
上午:写作业 下午:踢足球 晚上:看电影
Dear Robert,
Thank you for your invitation.I'm sorry I can't visit you next Saturday.I'll be busy that day.In the morning,I have to do my homework.I have too much homework.In the afternoon,I will play soccer with my friends.In the evening,I am going to the movies.I think the movie is interesting and exciting.I can't miss it.Can you come to the movies with me next Saturday evening It'll be fun.
Yours,
Ben
【写作训练】
条件与结果
快乐与忧愁
方法与策略
Make decisions
问题与建议
拓展话题
假如...
表达祝愿
将要做的事
I will also...On the one hand,
On the other hand, I...
提出话题
If I.. I will...
升华主题
I just hope I can do something to make the world better.
假如你有很多钱,你可以用这些钱来做三件事情,你将会做些什么呢 请以"If I Have a Lot of Money"为题写一篇短文。
要求:想象合理,词数80左右。
If I Have a Lot of Money
If I Have a Lot of Money
If I have a lot of money,I'll buy a big house for my parents.I hope they can live a more comfortable life.
If I have a lot of money,I will plant more trees and flowers in my city.On the one hand,they can make our city more beautiful.On the other hand,they can improve our environment.
If I have a lot of money,I will give some to charities and help those poor children who can't go to school.Ill be very happy when I see them studying in bright classrooms.
【写作训练】
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