Environmental Protection单元话题微写作 Name:
以下是关于环保类读后续写的分步写作指导:
明确故事背景:了解故事发生的时间、地点、人物以及他们与环保主题的初始关联。例如,故事可能发生在一个被污染的小镇,主人公是一群热爱家乡的学生;或者是在一片即将被砍伐的森林,主角是护林员等。
梳理情节线索:确定已有的关键事件,如主人公发现了某种严重的环境问题,像河流被污染鱼儿大量死亡、野生动物栖息地因城市扩张而遭破坏等;同时留意人物的情感态度,他们可能一开始是震惊、愤怒,或者是无奈,这些情绪将推动后续情节发展。
确定续写方向与主题深化。如果前文是孩子们发现家乡河流污染,那么后续可以写他们决定组织起来,向社区宣传环保知识,发起清理河流行动;若主角是科学家,发现森林生态失衡,后续就可写他如何寻找解决办法,联合各方力量开展生态修复工程。
主题上要进一步升华,不仅仅停留在解决表面环境问题,可探讨人与自然和谐共生的深层意义,如人们在环保过程中心灵得到净化,重新认识到大自然的价值,从而改变生活方式,长久守护家园等。
规划段落结构
第一段:开头要自然承接上文,比如使用过渡性语句 “He/She/They decided to take action immediately after seeing...”(他 / 她 / 他们在看到…… 之后决定立即采取行动),延续故事的紧张感与连贯性。
描述主人公为环保采取的具体初步行动,如成立环保小组,制定初步计划,包括分工、行动时间和地点等。例如:“Tom and his friends quickly gathered in the schoolyard and formed an environmental protection group. Tom, being good at public speaking, took on the role of spokesperson to spread the word. Meanwhile, Lucy, with her artistic skills, was tasked with designing eye-catching posters to attract more people's attention.”(汤姆和他的朋友们迅速在校园里集合,成立了一个环保小组。汤姆擅长演讲,便担当起发言人的角色去宣传;与此同时,有着艺术才能的露西负责设计醒目的海报,吸引更多人的关注。)
展现人物在行动过程中的心理变化,从最初的担忧、焦虑转向充满干劲与希望,为下一段深入行动铺垫,如:“With every step they took, their confidence grew, knowing that they were making a difference for their beloved environment.”(随着他们一步步前行,他们的信心也在增长,因为他们知道自己正在为心爱的环境做出改变。)
第二段:开头承接第一段结尾的积极氛围,进一步推进情节,可以写行动遇到的困难,如资金短缺、部分居民不配合等,增加故事的曲折性:“However, just as things were starting to look up, they encountered a major setback. The local factory, which was one of the main polluters, was reluctant to make changes due to high costs.”(然而,就在情况开始好转之际,他们遇到了一个重大挫折。当地一家作为主要污染源之一的工厂,由于成本高昂,不愿做出改变。)
描述主人公如何克服困难,体现他们的坚韧与智慧,这是展现人物性格、深化主题的关键环节,比如:“Undeterred, the group launched a public campaign, appealing to the factory owners' sense of social responsibility. They also organized a boycott of the factory's products until changes were made.”(小组毫不气馁,发起了一场公开运动,呼吁工厂主的社会责任感。他们还组织了对该工厂产品的抵制活动,直到工厂做出改变。)
结尾要收束整个故事,达成环保目标,营造美好愿景,让读者感受到环保行动的力量与希望,如:“In the end, through their combined efforts, the river was restored to its former clarity, the fish returned, and the community came together to protect their environment for good. The children's dreams of a clean and green world had finally come true.”(最后,通过他们的共同努力,河流恢复了往日的清澈,鱼儿回来了,社区也团结起来永久地...
Appreciate and Review:(山东省青岛市2022-2023学年高三下学期一模英语试题)
两姐妹海滩捡垃圾
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“So many plastic bags around! The beach is dirty and messy! It’s so terrible! We have lost the clean and beautiful beach. Can’t we do something to get it back ” Melati said heartily. Isabel felt a bit puzzled at what to do, but she also had a strong desire to do something. Picturing a beach as fascinating as before in mind, the pair jumped with joy.
They talked a lot, anxious to know how Dad and Mom would respond to their ideas. That night when the family sat by the dinner table, the sisters eagerly got their ideas across. While Mom and Dad listened to the girls carefully, their eyes shone. “How amazing that would be! We are so proud of you!” Dad exclaimed. Mom came up, gave them a thumb up and hugged the sisters.
Para 1: Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away.
Para 2 One month later, Melati received a call from the local newspaper.
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Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away. With the help of their parents, the sisters started an activity named "Bye Bye Plastic Bags". Designing posters, printing leaflets, they hoped to remind people of the previous fascinating beach and stop them from littering(v. 扔垃圾). Initially, it seemed like no one was listening. However, the sisters refused to give up. Days turned into weeks and the activity gradually gathered momentum(势头). More and more people in their community started to join in.
梅拉蒂和伊莎贝尔决定立刻产生积极的影响。在父母的帮助下,姐妹俩发起了一项名为 “再见,塑料袋” 的活动。她们设计海报、印制传单,希望能让人们想起昔日迷人的海滩,并阻止人们乱扔垃圾。起初,似乎没人理会。然而,姐妹俩拒绝放弃。日子一天天过去,几周时间过去了,这项活动逐渐有了声势。她们社区里越来越多的人开始加入进来。
One month later, Melati received a call from the local newspaper. The editor was excited to tell her that their activity had gone viral on social media. People from over the world devoted themselves to "Bye Bye Plastic Bags" activity. As a result, more beaches were cleaned and got their fascinating scenery back. Melati and Isabel could hardly believe that their small action did make a difference. What they initially wanted was just a cleaner beach, but what they got might be a cleaner earth.
一个月后,梅拉蒂接到了当地报社打来的电话。编辑兴奋地告诉她,她们的活动在社交媒体上迅速走红。来自世界各地的人们都投身到 “再见,塑料袋” 这项活动中。结果,更多的海滩得到了清理,又恢复了迷人的景色。梅拉蒂和伊莎贝尔几乎不敢相信,她们小小的行动竟然产生了影响。她们最初想要的只是一个更干净的海滩,但最终收获的可能是一个更清洁的地球。
Exercise(拉布拉多海边捡垃圾):
Everyone in the seaside town knows that Fliss has a special bond with her dog Molly. They work together, live together, and play together. The Labrador is literally at Fliss’s side all the time. If a person spent this much time with a friend, they would probably have fallen out by now, but the bond between Molly and her owner just gets stronger over time.
Fliss grew up in a city. In 2017, she moved to the seaside where she opened a bath and skincare shop. Upon arrival, she couldn’t believe how much litter was left “senselessly” on the beach. In fact, she was shocked by the “unavoidable” amount of litter she found while taking Molly for walks. Being a person who cares a lot about her surroundings, Fliss decided that she had to do something about it before the tide carried the litter into the sea, threatening marine life.
One day, while collecting litter on the beach, Fliss saw Molly running towards her with an empty water bottle in her mouth. As Molly drew near, she dropped the bottle at Fliss’s feet and set out to find other waste. This gave Fliss an idea: what if she could train Molly to find all those plastic bottles and bags, and make good use of them
The training started and Fliss was surprised at how fast Molly learned. Before long, the clever girl would venture to the seaside on her own and come home with her “prize”. She had soon filled Fliss’s house with pieces of rubbish from the local beach. At one point, Fliss’s garage was 60% filled with beach litter waiting to be distributed to local artists for use in their artworks.
When Fliss heard paws on the door the other day, she went to greet her good girl as usual. To her surprise, she saw Molly carrying a small plastic purse in her mouth. Fliss opened the purse and gasped (倒抽气). Inside was a passport, several credit cards, and a bunch of keys.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式作答。
Fliss immediately took the purse to the local police station. ______________________________
When the joumalist came, the two were on the beach. ________________________________
Possible version for paragraphy 1:
Fliss immediately took the purse to the local police station with Molly. She explained how Molly had found the purse and the police officers were amazed by Molly's cleverness.Shortly afterwards, the officers managed to track down the owner, who was a jounalist on vacation and had accidentally dropped the purse on the beach. Overwhelmed with gratitude when the police returned the lost items, the owner kept thanking Fliss and Molly for their honesty and kindness. Moreover, he extended sincere requirement to interview Fliss. Without hesitation, Fliss made an appointment with him.
弗利斯立刻带着莫莉前往当地警察局。她解释了莫莉是如何在海滩上发现钱包的,警察们对莫莉的发现感到惊讶,并称赞她聪明。不久之后,警察设法找到了失主,失主是一位记者,他在这个海滨小镇度假时不小心弄丢了钱包。当警察归还失物时,失主感激万分,不停地感谢弗利斯和莫莉的诚实和善良。此外,他真诚地请求采访弗利斯。弗利斯毫不犹豫地与他约好了时间。
Possible version for paragraphy 2:
When the journalist came, they two were on the beach. Fliss told the journalist it was on the way to collecting litterthat Molly had found the purse. Hearing this, Molly stopped, wagging hertail as if she understood the whole situation. Having learned about the whole story, especially Molly's extraordinary skill, the journalist felt a strong sense of duty arising---If a dog could care for the environment,why not people The camera clicked, capturing the scene of a dog who had become a symbol of environmental change. Fliss smiled, knowing that their journey was far from over, but the impact they had made would resonate far and wide.
记者到来时,他们俩正在海滩上。弗利斯告诉记者,莫莉是在去捡垃圾的路上发现这个钱包的。听到这话,莫莉停了下来,摇着尾巴,好像它明白整个情况似的。了解了整个故事,尤其是莫莉的非凡技能后,记者涌起了强烈的责任感 —— 如果一只狗都能关心环境,为什么人不行呢?相机咔嚓作响,拍下了这只已成为环境变化象征的狗的场景。弗利斯微笑着,知道她们的征程远未结束,但她们所产生的影响将深远地回荡。
原文链接--
Labrador Molly becomes 'celebrity' in seaside town thanks to her unique talent
A determined dog has become famous for picking up litter on her local beach with its proud owner Fliss
A littler-picking labrador has proved she's a true retriever after collecting 250,000 pieces of rubbish from her local beach.
Pooch Molly has developed such a special bond with owner Fliss she has been able to train her to find plastic bottles, ropes, spades, buckets, and toys. And the inseparable duo have become famous in Scarborough for their ongoing efforts cleaning up the coastline 365 days a year.
Hailing her furry friend, Fliss, 35, said: "I can’t take credit for her great work, she’s the best dog and it’s really just the way she is."She’s my best bud, we work together, live together, play together, she’s at my side literally all the time. If I spent this much time with a human we would have fallen out by now, but the bond between a dog and their owner just gets stronger over time.
"She’s super chilled, always up for an adventure and has to say hello to every single person and dog she meets. Molly is just a brilliant dog, I often wonder how I got so lucky, she has a beautiful, happy soul and has changed my life for the better.
"The funny thing is she still doesn’t know the difference between an empty discarded bottle and a bottle that is still full which has led to some interesting situations. "She’ll sometimes come back to me with a full bottle and I’ll look across the beach and there’ll be a confused person wondering why this dog has just stolen their drink. "Her intentions are good though, and she’s just trying to do the right thing. Thankfully no one ever gets angry because she’s so cute!"
Fliss said Molly picks up so many pieces of litter every day, the items have started to take over her home and workplace. She explained: "I could probably fill a wheelie bin every week or two with what we collect. At one point my garage was probably 60% filled with beach litter waiting to be distributed to local artists for use in artwork/sculptures etc.
"I also save any buckets/spades/beach toys that can be reused, and let tourists borrow them for the day - so my shop also has a couple of hundred of these which takes up quite a bit of space."Fliss has shared her inspiring story as part of IAMS' latest campaign celebrating the magic of pets and the individuality of each animal. She said Molly loves tucking into her breakfast bowl before a busy day doing her extra special job for the community. "It's so important to give dogs a healthy, nutritious and balanced diet, which will keep them going all day!" she told us.
"Molly needs it when she's up and down the beach - the exercise is great for her as well."
IAMS champion the joy of your pet’s healthy vitality. It's not simply visible health or your dog’s happiness; it is a powerful combination of the two together. And that’s why IAMS want to help the nation’s pets live healthy, active and happy lives through the expert nutrition they truly enjoy. No compromise.
Fliss moved to the seaside in 2017 where she opened a bath and skincare shop - but she couldn’t believe how much litter she found left "senselessly" on the beach and said she was shocked and appalled by the “unavoidable” amount of litter she found while taking Molly for walksShe added: "Molly's such a good girl and she’s never had any issues unless she spots a tennis ball - tennis balls take precedence over everything."It’s particularly alarming on the beach because people will drop rubbish in the sand, and then it’s a battle against the tides to beat them to it.
"Once the tide comes in the litter is gone and will make its way into the sea and threaten our marine life."If you’re a business here, who relies on people coming to the beach, I think you’ve got a responsibility to protect it." "We get stopped all the time by people who think it’s adorable that she’s cleaning. She gets so much attention and she loves it, she knows she’s a bit of a star. "Unfortunately Molly can’t clean the beach on her own, but she’s trying."We want to get people involved or at least make them think twice before disposing of their litter so carelessly.
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(2024·江苏苏北二模)每年的3月22日是“世界水日”(World Water Day),上周日上午你校学生会组织部分青年志愿者走上街头开展公益宣传活动。假定你是李华,请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动内容;3.活动反响。
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A Youth Volunteer Activity Celebrating World Water Day
World Water Day falls on March 22 every year. Last Sunday,some young student volunteers,organized by the Student Union,took to the streets to celebrate and advertise World Water Day.
Firstly,they handed out leaflets to the citizens to lecture about World Water Day. Later,public speeches about the importance of protecting water resources were given by some volunteers.
This activity turned out to be a huge success.Not only did these activities arouse people’s great interest in World Water Day,but also they raised their awareness of water resources protection.
练习:单元话题作文(倡议书——创建绿色和谐校园)
1.根据提示,利用本单元所学知识完成作文
①我们都渴望生活在一个绿色和谐的校园里。(starving,harmonious)
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②我们学校正在开展一项运动来唤起学生的低碳生活意识。(campaign,carbon)
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③毫无疑问,我们学生应该为建设美丽的校园贡献自己的一份力。(contribute to,there is no/little doubt that)
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④在食堂时,排队买食物是有礼貌的,我们不应该容忍浪费食物。(tolerate,it作形式主语)
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⑤为了保持校园整洁,不随地乱扔垃圾或随地吐痰,否则会造成校园脏乱。(lead to/contribute to,不定式作状语,非限制性定语从句)
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⑥我们应该对不同种类的垃圾进行分类,以减少污染。(garbage)
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①我们都渴望生活在一个绿色和谐的校园里。(starving,harmonious)
We are all starving to live in a green and harmonious campus.
②我们学校正在开展一项运动来唤起学生的低碳生活意识。(campaign,carbon)
Our school is launching a campaign to arouse students’ awareness of living a low carbon life.
③毫无疑问,我们学生应该为建设美丽的校园贡献自己的一份力。(contribute to,there is no/little doubt that)
There is no/little doubt that we students should do our bit to contribute to a beautiful campus.
④在食堂时,排队买食物是有礼貌的,我们不应该容忍浪费食物。(tolerate,it作形式主语)
While in the canteen,it’s good manners to queue up for food and we should never tolerate wasting food.
⑤为了保持校园整洁,不随地乱扔垃圾或随地吐痰,否则会造成校园脏乱。(lead to/contribute to,不定式作状语,非限制性定语从句),
To keep a clean campus,never litter anywhere or spit around,which will otherwise lead to/contribute to a messy campus.
⑥我们应该对不同种类的垃圾进行分类,以减少污染。(garbage)
We should classify different kinds of garbage to reduce pollution.