课件27张PPT。Study skillsA Good ReadWho do you think is a successful writer?I was free.
I went to visit the capital city.
I stepped carefully over the city wall.
I walked slowly through the two main streets.
It used to be a busy city.
There were lots of people and shops.
Today the streets were empty.
Where were they? They were watching me through the window.After I was free,I went to visit the capital city.
I stepped carefully over the city wall and walked slowly through the two main streets.
It used to be a busy city. There were lots of people and shops.but today the streets were empty. Where were they?In fact, they were watching me through the window.
Which onemakes you think betterTo improve our writing, we can have different ways to connect the ideas in it.
Transitions between ideastransitional words and phrases 连接词Usage 作用1.To show time 表时间
2.To show sequence文章中事件发生的时空顺序
3.To add more information表添加信息(并列,递进等)
4.To give an example表举例,解释说明
5.To show cause and effect表因果
6.To emphasize表强调
7.To compare or contrast文章意义的转折或对比To show timeTo show sequenceTo add more informationTo give an exampleTo show cause and effectTo emphasizeTo compare or contrastTransitional words and phrasesbefore, after,
while, when
at first, soon, later, …表时间First, second, next, then, finally…at last表顺序and, and then ,
also, too, either,
again,
moreover…not only…but also添加信息,(并列,递进等)for example, such asand so on举例说明 To show cause and effectbecause, since(既然), as(由于), so
as a result…Therefore
because of表因果 To emphasizenever, in fact…even表强调 To compare or contraston the one hand…on the other hand,
otherwise, but, however, while, …though,
although对比或转折Mr Chen: It’s really nice to have a beautiful modern town. _________, most of my old friends have moved away.Now I feel a bit lonely from time to time. _________, it’s good to see the amazing changes in the town.HoweverAnywayTo summarize表总结in a wordWe _________arrived at the park. All of us couldn’t wait to get off the bus. _______the whole world was there in front of us! finallySoonLast month, he thought the living room in his house was boring, _______he painted it blue.His mother said, “Stop it.” _______he kept on painting. Now the living room has ____________blue walls ____________a blue ceiling and floor. _________his cat is blue now!soButnot onlybut alsoEvenLet’s make some sandwiches.Look at me.
_______, pick a piece of bread. _______put some tomato sauce on it. ______, we can put some ham and vegetables on it.
_________,put another piece of bread on the top of it. Finished.
FirstThen NextAt lastSadly, giant pandas face serious problems in the wild. ____________, it is very difficult for pandas to have babies, ______many baby pandas die_________they are very young. ______, giant pandas live mainly on a special kind of bamboo. _________, the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. _____________, pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat.For exampleandwhenAlsoHoweverAs a resultSome people want to make the wetlands smaller in order to have more space for farms and buildings. This will lead to less and less space for wildlife. ________, fishermen keep fishing there.__________, the birds do not have enough food to eat.MoreoverAs a resultI was sleeping_______the earthquake started. __________, I felt a slight shake. ________I heard a loud noise like thunder.whenAt firstThenI like novels. I enjoy reading the books of Robert Louis Stevenson ___________I find them really exciting. ___________, Treasure Island tells the story of a young boy who sailed the sea to look for hidden treasure.
Jim, the main character in the book, is very brave. His story gave me a lot of confidence.becauseFor example_________reading the book, I am not as shy as I used to be _______ I am willing to try new things. I ________want to travel and have exciting experiences in the future. ___________, I have decided to write my own stories. Maybe I can become a writer_________I am older!AfterandalsoMoreoverwhen When I drove to work yesterday morning, I hit the wall. In fact, I didn’t hurt myself. But my car had some problems. I felt very sad, so I told myself to be more careful next time.My
storyGood stories always come from everyday life!Just you!TipTo improve your English, my advice is to write something in English everyday.
Transitional words and phrases can make your article beautiful.
But don’t use them everywhere.Improve your articles after class
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