八上Unit1话题写作指导
描述我最喜爱的运动项目My Favorite Sport
写作任务
假设你是李华,请以“My Favorite Sport”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文。要求如下:
1. 你今年14岁,最喜欢的运动是游泳;
2. 你每周游泳两次,每次游一小时;
3. 你认为游泳能使你的心肺健康,并且是保持健康的好方法;
4. 你最喜欢的运动员是孙杨,将来,你也想成为像他那样的运动员。
题型分析
该作文是一篇说明文,介绍自己最喜欢的运动。故用一般现在时。
思路点拨
本文可以分为三段来写,提示词仅供参考:
1. 第一段介绍自己的基本信息,姓名,年龄及最喜欢的运动;
My favorite sport is…
I like doing sports, but I like…best.
2. 第二段介绍自己游泳的频次,以及游泳的好处,可适当补充;
help to keep…healthy;
be good for; a good way to
3. 介绍自己最喜欢的运动员,表达对将来的期许。
My favorite player is…
I hope…;I'm going to be…
grow up; in the future
范文参考
I'm Li Hua. I'm fourteen years old. I like doing sports, but my favorite sport is swimming.
I often go swimming with my best friend. I swim twice a week. I think swimming can help to keep my heart and lungs healthy. It's also a good way to keep fit.
My favorite player is Sun Yang. He is a famous swimming player. He is cool. I am going to be a player like him in the future.
School Sports Meet
写作任务
请根据以下提示材料,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
1. 假如你是李华。你的学校将于下周举行运动会;
2. 你们将会带上运动衣、运动鞋;
3. 举例几个参加运动会的同学以及他们的优势项目;
4. 其他同学会去为你们加油;
5. 表达你对运动会的祝愿、期许。
题型分析
该作文是一篇记叙文。应用第一人称和第三人称。该文的主要时态为一般将来时。
思路点拨
本文可以分为三段来写,提示词仅供参考:
1. 第一段交代事件,及准备工作;
There is going to be…;
take; look forward to; be excited about
2. 第二段介绍参加运动会的同学,及所参加项目,可拓展;
take part in; will be in;
be good at; try/do one's best;
first time to…;cheer…on
3. 表达对运动会的期许,希望自己班能赢。
I'm sure… I hope…
范文参考
There is going to be a school sports meet next week. We will take our sports clothes and sports shoes. Everyone is excited about it. / Everyone is looking forward to it.
Jim is good at running. He will take part in the boys' 800-meter race. Lin Yu doesn't like running, but she likes jumping. So she will be in the long jump and the high jump. Mary is going to be in the relay race. It's her first time to take part in the sports meet. She will do her best. I'm preparing for the girls' 400-meter race. I won't lose. Other classmates will come to cheer us on.
I'm sure the sports meet will be exciting, and I hope our class will win.
写一篇关于校运会的日记
写作任务
请根据以下提示材料,写一篇不少于80词的日记。
1. 你们学校上周举办了运动会,每个人都很激动,因为你们班赢了;
2. 介绍你同学及你自己参加比赛的情况;
3. 你更爱运动了,并希望有一天能参加奥运会。
题型分析
该作文为日记体裁,要注意格式。且时态主要为一般过去时,个别句子会用到一般现在时或一般将来时,要注意把握。
思路点拨
1. 日记格式,要在第一行写明日期,天气;
2. 第一段可交代基本信息,运动会的举办,赢得了第一名;
hold a sports meet; win first place;
3. 第二段可介绍一下你同学,你自己参加运动会的具体情况;
run fast; do well in;
cross the finish line;
be sorry that; do better
4. 第三段表达你更加热爱运动了,并期待有一天能参加奥运会。
some day; in the future;
can; be able to
范文参考
Friday, November 1st Sunny
Our school held a sports meet last week. Everyone in our class felt excited because we won first place.
Lin Yu did well in the high jump and she won. Jim ran very fast and he was the first to cross the finish line. We are sorry that we did badly in the relay race because one of our classmates fell down. We are sure we'll do better next time.
I took part in the boys' 400-meter race. I did my best and won the first prize. Now I love sports more. I will practice more and I hope some day I can take part in the Olympic Games.