八下Unit7话题写作指导
写作任务
假设你是李华,你和同学们了解到,在偏远地区,许多孩子的学习、生活条件仍然很艰苦。为此,你们计划于周天下午在操场上举办一场慈善义卖会(charity sale),进行募捐。请你写一篇发言稿,介绍此次慈善义卖会的安排情况并呼吁大家加入。要求:1. 包含提示内容,语句通顺;2. 80词左右。
提示:1. 慈善义卖会举办的时间、地点、目的;
2. 慈善义卖会的具体活动内容、意义;
3. 对活动的期待、愿景。
题型分析
该任务要求写一篇发言稿。通常用一般现在时及第一人称书写。
思路点拨
本文可以分为两段来陈述:
1. 第一段可陈述活动的目的、事由及活动的意义;
2. 第二段描述一下对活动的期待、愿景。
范文参考
We will hold a charity sale on the playground this Sunday afternoon. We are going to sell many kinds of things in order to raise money for the children in poor areas. If you would like to help them, please join us. I think helping others can make us happy. What's more,we may make new friends duing the activity.
We're looking forward to your coming! Let's make the charity sale a big success.
写作任务
假设你是李华,你的笔友Sam即将来中国旅行。他想了解中餐礼仪。请你根据表格内容,给他写一封信,介绍中国的一些餐桌礼仪。要求:80词左右。作文要包含以下要点,并适当拓展。
要求:1. 包含表格内容,告诉对方该做的和不该做的;
2. 不少于80词。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
题型分析
该写作任务,要求给自己的美国笔友写一封电子邮件,故要注意信件的格式。这篇文章应用第二人称(结合第一人称)来写,叙述的是中餐礼仪,所以应用一般现在时。
思路点拨
本文可以分为三段来写,提示词仅供参考:
1. 第一段已给出,我们可以另起第二段开始写。
2. 第二段写具体的中餐礼仪,注意分要点写,适当使用连词,以使行文流畅,逻辑清晰:
First…
What's more…
Besides…
It's polite (impolite) to do sth.
If…
3. 最后一段为结语。
I'm looking forward to meeting you.
范文参考
Dear Sam,
You must be excited about coming to China soon ! As you know, Chinese culture is totally different from that in America. Let me give you some advice about Chinese table manners.
First, you should be on time if you are invited to have dinner with a Chinese family. Respecting the elderly is a traditional Chinese virtue, so remember to let the elders eat first. What's more, you had better pick up your bowl of rice when eating. It's considered to be polite. Otherwise, you shouldn't stick your chopsticks into the rice. It's also impolite to point at anyone with chopsticks. Besides, you had better not speak loudly while eating. If you can't remember these rules, just do as other people do.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作任务
如今,不少中学生都爱在正餐时间吃汉堡、薯条等快餐。这类食物多吃,对健康有害。请根据下列提示内容,以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,谈谈你对健康饮食的看法。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
1. 经常吃快餐对健康有害,中学生要健康饮食;
2. 健康饮食的几个要素:适量、适时、规律;
3. 呼吁大家要注意饮食健康。
题型分析
该作文是一篇议论文,应用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。
思路点拨
本文可以分为三段来写,提示词仅供参考:
1. 第一段接着已给出的现状描述,抛出问题,为下文做铺垫;
But eating too much … is unhealthy.
So how do we eat healthily?
2. 第二段写具体的建议,如何保证饮食健康;
First…Second…What's more…Finally
3. 第三段进行总结,呼吁大家要注意饮食健康。
In a word…/ In short…
It's important for us to…
范文参考
Nowadays, many students like eating fast food, such as hamburgers and French fries. But eating too much fast food is bad for our health. So how do we eat healthily
First, we should eat healthy food. We had better eat more vegetables and fruit. Second, we had better have enough food, never too much or too little. What's more, it's necessary for us to eat regularly. As we know, a good breakfast will help us study better. But it's said that some students don't eat breakfast. It's really bad for their health.
In a word, we should have a balanced diet and regular meals. I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way.