八下Unit 6 Enjoying Cycling 话题写作指导

八下Unit6话题写作指导
写作任务
假设你是李华，上周末你和父母去厦门度假。请根据表格信息，以My trip to Xiamen为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，回顾一下你们的旅行经历。要求：开头已给出，不计入词数。
题型分析
该写作是一篇游记。时态通常用一般过去在时，描述感受时可用一般现在时；常用第一人称。
思路点拨
本文可以分为三段来写：
1. 第一段紧接着已给句子，交代如何到达厦门，可描述一下当时的天气情况；
2. 第二段着重写在厦门所游览的景点、做了什么；
3. 第三段写印象，感受。
范文参考
My trip to Xiamen
I had a two-day trip to Xiamen with my parents last weekend. We went there by train. The weather was really nice.
We visited many places, such as Xiamen University and Horticulture Expo Garden. Everything was as beautiful as I imagined. We also went to the museum by subway. There we learnt a lot about Xiamen. What's more, we took the ferryboat to Gulang Island. There were many kinds of delicious food on the island. After dinner, we walked along the beach and enjoyed the soft sand and the blue sea. We took a lot of photos and had a good time.
Xiamen is a fantastic city. The seafood is wonderful. The local people is very friendly. I hope one day I can visit there again.引申
写作任务
“五一”劳动节就要来了，你打算和好朋友去上海旅游。请根据思维导图，写一篇短文介词此次旅行计划。要求：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入词数。
题型分析
该写作主要是写未来的旅行计划，故时态通常用一般将来时，描述当下心情时可用一般现在时；常用第一人称。
思路点拨
本文可以分为两段来写，提示词仅供参考：
1. 第一段紧接着已给句子，结合思维导图，写旅行计划；
plan to…；be going to…；decide to…
2. 第二段写对这次旅行的期待、心情。
have fun; can't wait to
范文参考
I'm very excited because May Day is coming. I'm going on a three-day visit to Shanghai with my good friend. We will go there by plane. We are going to visit the Disneyland. I'd like to take some photos with Mickey Mouse. We also plan to visit the museum and the Oriental Pearl Tower. When the night falls, we can take a ship to travel around Huangpu River. After that, we decide to do some shopping. There are many kinds of food in Shanghai, we can enjoy the local food and buy some for our friends.
I think we will have fun in Shanghai. We can't wait to go there.
写作任务
假如你是李华，你的笔友Ben计划来你的家乡——一个福建东部的海滨小城旅行。你建议他骑自行车游城。请结合以下内容，写一封信向他介绍自行车旅行的好处，以及骑车时该如何保证安全。要求：80词左右。作文要包含以下要点，并适当拓展。
1. 自行车方便好停，不拥挤；
2. 自行车环保，不导致空气污染；
3. 骑车时要戴头盔，靠右行驶；
4. 遵守交规，注意安全。
题型分析
该写作任务，要求叙述骑行的优点，另一方面，还要阐述交通安全事项。应用一般现在时写作。
思路点拨
本文可以分为四段来写，提示词仅供参考：
1. 第一段接着已给句子，简单介绍自己的家乡：
lie in
be famous for
2. 第二段写骑行的优势：
It's better to…
You don't need to…
What's more,
3. 第三段写骑行时应注意的事项,并总结：
pay attention to
it's necessary to
in a word
4. 最后一段为书信结语。
I'm looking forward to meeting you.
范文参考
Dear Ben,
I'm really excited to know that you will come to my hometown for your holiday. My hometown lies in the east of Fujian. It's famous for its beach.
My hometown is not very big, and the buses are often crowded with passengers. So it's better to travel by bike. You don't need to worry about the parking lot because a bicycle is easy to park. What's more, it's good for environment and does not cause air pollution.
But when you ride a bike on the road, you should pay attention to the traffic around you. It's necessary to wear a helmet. It can protect your head. Remember to ride on the right side of the road. In a word, the most important way to keep safe is that you must obey the traffic rules and be careful.
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hu
写作任务
随着生活质量的提高，越来越多的家庭都拥有了小汽车。在汽车给生活带来便利的同时，交通事故的发生也越来越频繁。那我们要注意哪些问题，如何保证自身的安全呢？根据下列材料，写一篇80词左右的短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
1. 不在马路上玩耍，走人行道（sidewalk）；
2. 遵守交规，看清信号灯；
3. 骑行要戴好头盔，靠右行驶；
4. 其它建议。
题型分析
该作文是一篇提纲作文，写作思路清晰。通常用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。
思路点拨
本文可以分为三段来写，提示词仅供参考：
1. 第一段接着已给出的现状描述，抛出问题，为下文做铺垫；
How do we keep safe…？
What should we do to keep safe…？
2. 第二段写具体的建议，在路上要注意的事项；
First…Second…What's more…Finally
3. 第三段进行总结，呼吁大家遵守交规。
In a word…
If we obey the traffic rules, we can…
范文参考
Now there are more and more vehicles on the road, so the traffic accidents happen more often. As students, how do we keep safe on the way to school or home
First, we mustn't play on the road. It's quite dangerous. Second, we should walk on the sidewalk and pay attention to the traffic lights. Never run the red light. What's more, we should wear helmets when riding. If we ride at night, we had better wear light-colored clothes. We should remember to ride on the right-hand side of the road.
In a word, if we are careful and obey the traffic rules, we can keep safe.