八上Unit 3 Our Hobbies话题写作指导

八上Unit3话题写作指导
描述兴趣爱好
写作任务
不同的人有不同的兴趣爱好。爱好可以是单一的，也可以是多元的。它还会随着时间，甚至随着季节的变化而变化。假设你是李华，请根据表格的提示，介绍一下你和朋友们现在及过去的兴趣爱好。不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
题型分析
该篇体裁为记叙文，要求根据表格的内容，写自己和两位朋友过去及现在的兴趣爱好。写作时要注意不同人称的转化，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
思路点拨
1. 根据表格提示，可知本文主要从“过去”和“现在”两个方面来写。这里要注意不同时态的转换，也要注意使用过渡词汇，避免单调乏味。
used to do sth. (过去)
be interested in, be fond of, like/enjoy/love/prefer…
as for me, but, however…
2. 可根据表内所列爱好进行拓展，如某爱好带来了什么益处，使自己收获了什么。这样可以彰显文章层次，也使内容更加丰富。
3. 结尾可以进行总结点题。如：爱好能使我们的生活更美好；爱好给我们带来快乐与安慰。
Hobbies make our life colorful and interesting.
Hobbies bring us happiness and comfort.
范文参考
Different people have different hobbies. We students also have our own hobbies, and they can change with time. As for me, I used to collect stamps. But now I like reading books. Good books bring me peace of mind, and I can learn a lot from them. Jane and Mike are my good friends. Jane used to like watching movies at home or at the movie theater. Now she is interested in playing the violin. She thinks violin music is wonderful. Mike used to play computer games. Then his parents advised him to do some outdoor activities. Now he is fond of playing basketball. It is great fun for him.
Hobbies make our life colorful and interesting.
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介绍一位音乐家
写作任务
郎朗（Lang Lang）是一位享誉中外的钢琴演奏家，甚至被西方媒体赞誉为“中国的莫扎特”。请根据以下提示，以“Lang Lang——A Famous Musician”为题，向大家简要地介绍一下这位著名的音乐家。不少于80词。
1. 郎朗是世界著名的音乐家之一。他于1982年6月14日出生于辽宁省沈阳市。他不怎么创作曲子，但却极其擅长演奏钢琴。
2. 两岁时，由于一部动画片《猫和老鼠》（cartoon: Tom and Jerry），郎朗对钢琴产生了浓厚的兴趣，并于三岁正式学习钢琴。五岁时第一次参加钢琴比赛，就获得了第一名。1996年，他去美国继续学习(continue his study)。2005年，他被邀请至白宫(White House)开演奏会。
3. 他的成功离不开他的努力以及永不言弃。我们可以从他身上学到很多。
题型分析
该篇为人物介绍。一般用第三人称，主要时态为一般过去时及一般现在时。难度较之前的写作任务，略有提升。
思路点拨
根据材料提示，本文可以分为三段来写。
1. 第一段介绍郎朗的基本情况；
one of，be good at，do well in
2. 第二段按照时间线，简要介绍郎朗学习钢琴的经历；
Because of a cartoon, he became/was interested in…
When he was… at the age of…
It was his first time to…
be invited to the White House to… 被邀请至白宫……
3. 第三段进行总结，我们可以从他身上学习到很多。
work hard, never give up, learn a lot from him
范文参考
Lang Lang is one of famous musicians in the world today. He was born on June 14th, 1982 in Shenyang, Liaoning. He is not good at writing music, but he does well in playing the piano.
Because of a cartoon called Tom and Jerry, he was interested in piano. After one year when he was three, he began to learn to play it. He took part in a piano competition at the age of five. It was his first time to join in the competition and he got the first prize. In 1996, he went to America to continue his study. In 2005, he was invited to the White House to give a concert.
Lang Lang always works hard and never gives up. We can learn a lot from him.
共130词，也可根据具体情况改成“My Favorite Musician”
用过去进行时进行写作
写作任务
假设你是李华，上星期六，你度过了充实的一天。请根据下面表格，介绍自己一天的活动。不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
题型分析
该篇体裁为记叙文，要求介绍自己在过去的一天所做的事情。写作时应使用第一人称，主要时态为过去进行时和一般过去时。
思路点拨
本文写作时要将表内所有的提示都用上，并进行适当发挥，增加一些过渡性的句子，使文章更加流畅。注意过去进行时的结构为 was/were+动词的现在分词形式。
范文参考
I had a busy day last Saturday. I got up at 7:00 a.m. and then I had a breakfast with my parents. From 7:30 a.m. to 9:00 a.m., I was reading a book. From 9:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m., I was doing my homework. And I was having a rest from 1:00 p.m. to 2:00 p.m. From 2:30 to 4:30 in the afternoon, I was playing soccer with my friends on the school playground. We were very happy. From 7:30 p.m. to 9:00 p.m., I was watching a movie. It was an interesting movie and I wanted to watch it again. I went to bed at 9:30 p.m.
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