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2025人教版高中英语选择性必修第四册
Part 4 Writing
关于分享、援助的写作
写作题目
假设你是新华中学的李华,将参加主题为“China's aid to other countries”的演讲比赛,请撰写一份演讲稿,内容主要包括:
1.2014年埃博拉疫情在西非暴发期间,中国向遭受疫情的国家伸出援助之手;
2.提供医疗用品;
3.加强医疗方面的合作——中国不仅分享了治疗方法,还向一些国家派遣了医疗队。
参考词汇:埃博拉疫情Ebola pandemic;医疗用品medical supplies
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School.
Thanks for listening!
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.特权;荣幸
2. vt.值得;应得;应受
3. 转达给……
4. 但愿
答案 1.privilege 2.deserve 3.relay to
4.pray that
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:点明演讲的主题
(1) (我很荣幸) to give a speech here.
(2)My topic is “ (中国对其他国家的援助)”.
第二段:演讲的主要内容——中国对其他国家的帮助
(3)China (努力援助) the countries suffering from the epidemic.
(4)To begin with, China (自愿提供) a large quantity of medical supplies for them.
(5) (除此之外), China strengthened medical cooperation with them.
(6)China not only (分享了治疗这种疾病的方法), but it also sent medical teams to some West African countries.
第三段:总结
(7) I want to (转达给你们) that China (值得尊敬) of the whole world.
答案 (1)It is my great privilege (2)China's aid to other countries (3)made an effort to aid
(4)volunteered to provide (5)In addition
(6)shared the ways to treat the disease (7)relay to you;deserves the respect
2.句式升级
(8)将句(6)改为not only放在句首的倒装句
答案 (8)Not only did China share the ways to treat the disease, but it also sent medical teams to some West African countries.
连句成篇
Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. It is my great privilege to give a speech here. My topic is “China's aid to other countries”.
In 2014, during the outbreak of the Ebola pandemic in West Africa, China made an effort to aid the countries suffering from the epidemic. To begin with, China volunteered to provide a large quantity of medical supplies for them. In addition, China strengthened medical cooperation with them. Not only did China share the ways to treat the disease, but it also sent medical teams to some West African countries.
Today, I want to relay to you that China deserves the respect of the whole world. I pray that the whole world would overcome the Ebola virus forever.
Thanks for listening!
写作积累
演讲稿增分词句
提分短语
on behalf of代表
deliver/make a speech做演讲
be glad to do sth./be happy to do sth.很高兴做某事
be aimed at...旨在……,目的是……
be of great use非常有用
strengthen friendship加深友谊
broaden our horizons/minds开阔我们的视野/眼界
call on sb. to do sth./appeal to sb. to do sth.呼吁某人做某事
share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
as the saying goes俗话说
with the coming of.../with...approaching随着……的到来
play an important role in...在……中起着重要的作用
overcome difficulties克服困难
positive attitude积极的心态
in summary总之
引人注目开头句
1.My name is...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this speech. I shall be speaking about...我的名字是……今天我很高兴有机会发表这次演讲。我要谈的是……
2.It is a great honour/privilege for me to share with you my opinions on...我很荣幸能与大家分享我对……的看法。
3.I'm greatly honored to speak here on behalf of...I'm going to talk about...我非常荣幸能代表……在这里发言。我要谈谈……
4.I would like to concentrate on the problem of...我想重点讲一下……的问题。
5.I am extremely thrilled to deliver a speech on behalf of...我很激动代表……发言。
亮点出彩中间句
1.I'm going to be speaking about something that is vitally important to all of us.我要讲的内容对我们所有人都至关重要。
2.What really matters/counts is...真正重要的是……
3.Above all/Most important of all, you should take...seriously and...最重要的是,你应该认真对待……,并……
4.I want to remind you that... 我想提醒你……
5.Devotion is a natural flush of love.奉献是自然流露出来的爱。
6.When it comes to high school study, it is commonly believed that stress is the first thing that comes to mind. 当谈到高中学习的时候,人们通常认为压力是我们想到的第一件事情。
7.If you have any questions, I will be pleased to answer them at the end of the lecture.如果你们有任何问题,我很高兴在演讲结束时回答。
韵味无穷结尾句
1.I hope I have made myself understood.我希望我所说的大家都听明白了。
2.That's all I want to say about this point.关于这一点,我只想说这些。
3.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak here.衷心感谢你们给我这个机会在这里发言。
4.In a word/In short, I firmly believe that only if we take immediate action can the campus environment become better.总之,我坚信只有我们立刻采取行动,校园环境才能变得更好。
5.I do hope what is mentioned above can be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening.我真的希望上面讲到的能对你们有帮助!谢谢聆听。
6.Today is a significant day, and it will remain in my memory forever.今天是很重要的一天,它将永远珍藏在我的记忆里。
7.Let me conclude my speech with the following comments.让我用下面几句评论结束我的演讲。
实战演练
你校正在举办英语周活动,你准备参加以“Sharing”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结合一个事例写一篇演讲稿,谈谈“Sharing”的作用。演讲稿应包含下列要点:
1.有关“Sharing”的一个事例;
2.你的感悟。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
Thanks for your attention!
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! It's a great privilege to be here and share something with you.
I still remember how depressed I was after the midterm examination in Senior One, when I had hoped to be still among the best as in junior high school. At that time, my best friend shared her motto with me, “There is always a road ahead.” Amazingly, my heart was filled with warmth I had never sensed before.
Sharing is part of beauty. Just as a proverb goes, “A shared joy is a double joy;a shared sorrow is half a sorrow.”As for me, by sharing, I live a happier life.
Thanks for your attention!
1.重点词汇
①privilege n.荣幸;特权 ②depressed adj.沮丧的;意志消沉的 ③be filled with充满 ④sense v.感觉到;觉察到 ⑤double adj.两倍的
2.亮点句型
I still remember how depressed I was after the midterm examination in Senior One, when I had hoped to be still among the best as in junior high school.(how引导remember后的宾语从句;when引导非限制性定语从句)我还记得高中一年级期中考试后我是多么沮丧,当时我希望自己还能像在初中时一样名列前茅。
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