续写动作描写必背公式
分解动作,构成动作链的公式: 主语+谓语1,谓语2 and 谓语3
Eg: He clenched his fists, stormed out of the room, and slammed the door.
他握紧拳头,冲出房间,砰地关上门。
He struggled to his feet, dusted the jacket and made his way to an empty seat.
他挣扎着站起来,掸了掸夹克上的灰尘,走到一个空座位前。
I gently ________ him, _______ a hand on his shoulder, and asked with concern what was wrong.
我轻轻地走向他,将一只手搭在他肩膀上,关切地问他怎么啦。
I ________ into my pocket, _______ out some coins, and gently ______ them in the beggar’s palm.
我伸进口袋,掏出几个硬币,轻轻放在乞丐手中。
I held my score sheet up high, ________ my way to Dad, and proudly ________ it to him.
我高举着成绩单,雀跃着来到爸爸身边,自豪地递给他看。
I _______ my throat, __________________, and _______ onto the stage.
我清了清嗓子,深吸一口气,然后走上舞台。
He ________, _______ his head in disbelief, and dismissed the proposal.
他皱起眉头,怀疑地摇摇头,驳回了这个提议。
The runners ______ their knees, ______ forward, and _______ forward with the sound of the starting gun.
跑步者屈膝、前倾,随着发令枪响奋力向前一跃。
多角度刻画,围绕中心动作构造出饱满的动作面的3套公式
公式1: 非谓(心理/神态/语言/次要动作), 主语+谓语(中心动作)
She waved to me, ________(wear) a shining smile on her face.
她向我挥手,脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
I lowered my head in shame, ________(hope) that nobody noticed me.
我羞愧地低下头,希望没人注意到我。
He ducked his head, ________(try) to hold back the tears in his eyes.
他低下头,试图忍住眼中的泪水。
She reached out for my hands, _________(whisper) words of comfort.
她握住我的手,轻声安慰我。
I threw myself into my mom’s arms, ________(hug) her tightly.
我投向妈妈的怀抱,紧紧地抱着她。
________(seize) by fear, I couldn’t help trembling all over.
被恐惧席卷,我不禁浑身颤抖。
________(tear) by anxiety, he paced restlessly back and forth.
他焦躁不安地来回踱步。
________(touch) deeply, I couldn’t help shedding tears of joy.
深深地感动到,我不禁流下了开心的泪水。
________ (lose) in thought, she sat in silence for a while.
她静静地坐了一会儿,陷入沉思。
公式2:主语+谓语,肢体/面部/心+非谓
公式3:主语+谓语, with+肢体/面部/心+非谓
He knelt down and broke down in tears, (with) his face _______(bury) in hands.
他跪了下来,双手掩面,失声痛哭。
As we hugged Ruth goodbye, she said nothing, (with) her eyes ________(glisten) with tears.
我们和 Ruth 拥抱告别时,她什么都没说,眼里闪着泪光。
(With) tears ________(well) up, he thanked the police in a choked voice.
他热泪盈眶,哽咽着声音感谢警方。
(With) palms _________(sweat) and knees _________(tremble), I stepped onto the stage.
手掌发汗,膝盖颤抖,我站上舞台。
She froze for a moment, (with) her eyes ________(widen) in disbelief.
她愣了一下,眼睛不可置信地睁得大大的。
He raced to the bus stop, (with) his heart __________(pound) wildly.
他飞快地跑到公共汽车站, 心怦怦猛跳。
He nodded, (with) a bright smile ________ (spread) across his face.
他点点头,灿烂的笑容在脸上舒展开来。
(With) my mind _______ (go) blank, I was at a loss what to do.
大脑一片空白,我不知所措。
根据以上基础公式,试一试拼接成更复杂的句式吧!
1.被老师的话鼓舞,Lucy举起了手,低声说(whisper),“我想试试。”
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2.察觉到男孩眼中的失落,我弯下腰,紧紧地拥抱他,轻声安慰。
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3.耷拉着(droop)头,他靠在(lean against)树上,反思之前发生的一切。
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4.他仍然喘着气(gasp),喊道:“我做到了!”,脸上又露出了以往灿烂的笑容。
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5.珍妮手里拿着项链(necklace),抬起嘴唇,泪水开始模糊了(blur)她的视线。
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6.听到这个好消息,他一跃而起,眼睛像钻石一样闪亮。
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