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高考英语话题作文写作指导
写作4大常规评判原则
话题作文(大作文)
写作4大常规评判原则
可以看看现在可以到第几颗星~
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常考类型
What is your ideal house
What do you think is the function of art
Are you enthusiastic about the pursuit of knowledge Why or Why not
Do you like horror stories Why or why not
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常考类型
What is your ideal house
直接问观点类
What do you think is the function of art
Are you enthusiastic about the pursuit of knowledge Why or Why not
观点选择类
Do you like horror stories Why or why not
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常考形式
Why do you think some people choose to work from home
Why did you decide to have higher education
How can universities improve education quality
How can we improve our driving habits for the sake of safety
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常考形式
Why do you think some people choose to work from home
现象分析类
Why did you decide to have higher education
How can universities improve education quality
措施/建议类
How can we improve our driving habits for the sake of safety
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基本步骤
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基本步骤
(1)认真的看题目要求——字数、内容要求;
(2)快速列个提纲;
(3)动笔开写。
看完题目,回到原文,快速略读+扫读,
看能否找到一些论据帮助你列提纲
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(1)严格回答问题中的内容--问题问了什么就一定要回答;
(2)把句子写对--基本语法知识要掌握;
(3)穿插一点高级单词--常用的要记;
(4)学会几个句式变化--常见句型;
(5)一定要有结构段落--总分总。
强势温馨提醒
按照写作套路一定要写,不写一分都没有,
把基本框架和内容写起来,怎么都有分!
1. 注意事项
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(2)把句子写对--基本语法知识要掌握;
1. 注意事项
①一个句子有且只能有一个谓语动词,即主语发出的最主要的动作;
②句子的谓语动词一定要注意人称和时态的一致。
【例】I read a story.
You read a story too.
He/ She/ It reads a story.
They read a story.
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(2)把句子写对--基本语法知识要掌握;
1. 注意事项
②句子的谓语动词一定要注意人称和时态的一致。
时态 例子
一般现在时(常态) I like reading.
一般过去时(过去发生的事情) I read a book yesterday.
一般将来时(将来才要发生的事情) I will read a book tomorrow.
现在进行时(现在正在进行的动作) I am reading a book .
过去进行时(过去正在进行的动作) I was reading a book yesterday afternoon.
现在完成时(从过去发生,动作或状态持续到现在才结束,或者影响还要继续下去) I have read three books till now.
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(2)把句子写对--基本语法知识要掌握;
1. 注意事项
③名词要注意可数和不可数;可数名词要注意单复数:
用到可数名词时,表示单数的话,前面一定要加冠词;
如果不表示可数名词的单数,一定要变复数。
e.g. I read a book yesterday.
I read books yesterday.
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2.如何构思内容?
一般来说,对于所给主题,要么回答是好的,要么是坏的;
构思内容的时候就往好处或者坏处的角度构思。
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2.如何构思内容?
一般来说,对于所给主题,要么回答是好的,要么是坏的;
构思内容的时候就往好处或者坏处的角度构思。
1.想好处的思路:
(1)“以人为本”--身体、精神
对身体:身体强健;塑身养型;感官灵敏;四肢发达等。
对精神:视野扩宽;提高意识;丰富内心世界;生活充实;身心愉悦;内心平静;增进感情;各种能力培养;增强自豪感、自信心、荣誉感等。
(2)“服务社会”--保护环境;节约资源;丰富生活;社会和谐;促进进步等。
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2.想坏处的思路:
(1)“以人为本”--身体、精神
对身体:抵抗力下降,生(疾)病等。
对精神:性格孤僻;失去自豪感、自信心……;内心空虚;玩物丧志等。
(2)“社会”:环境--破坏、污染;公共安全--危险、不和谐;经济--衰退、贫穷
回答为什么,要学会找客观事物的特点来做原因,或者大众所认知的常识和观点。
一般来说,对于所给主题,询问看法时,要么回答是好的,要么是坏的;
构思内容的时候就往好处或者坏处的角度构思。
2.如何构思内容?
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3.结构-总分总
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3.结构-总分总
首段:回答任务,表明观点,引出话题
“小而精”·是什么?
第二段:证明观点/分析利弊/解析观点
“丰富”·为什么?
尾段:强调、升华、总结
“有力”·再次是什么
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3.结构-总分总(举例)
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3.结构-总分总(举例)
开头段:大背景(1句)//(例)一些人喜欢什么,而另一些人喜欢什么(1句)
(如果是选择类话题,则直接翻译题目即可;如果不是选择类,自己创一个选择)//直接点题(1句)。
中间段:整段的开头句(1句)//第一个理由的主题句(1句)/第一个理由的论据(2句)//第二个理由的主题句(1句)/第二个理由的论据(1-2句)。
结尾段:重申观点(1-2句)
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4. 如何衔接得当?
常见逻辑关系词:
(1)因果关系词:
as a consequence(结果);
as a result(结果);
as/because/because of(因为,由于);
for the same reason(为了同样的理由);
for(因为);
hence/therefore(因此);
owing to(由于,因为);
…so that…(以便,所以);
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4. 如何衔接得当?
常见逻辑关系词:
(2)递进关系:
in the first/second/third place;
equally importance; furthermore; and then; following this;
at the same time; what’s more; not only…but also…;
finally; simultaneously(同时地); therefore; accordingly
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4. 如何衔接得当?
常见逻辑关系词:
(3)转折关系:
yet; but; unless; despite that; in spite of; though; although;
although this may be true; even so(即使如此); even though;
however; regardless of
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4. 如何衔接得当?
常见逻辑关系词:
(4)举例关系:
a good example would be; for example/instance; in this case;
in another case; on this occasion; in this situation
(5)总结:
in brief; as I have said; as I have noted; as has been noted;
as is mentioned above; that is to say; in simpler words; in other words;
to put it in another way; to put the point another way
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5. 常用句型
论据句子的几种常见写法
①举例:For example,For instance引出要举的例子。
②假设:When...(当……)由when引导的条件状语从句,来假设一种状态举例。
③原因:The reason is that..., 涉及到写原因的时候,不要用because开头。
④对比:while,比如:以前怎样,而现在怎么;别人怎样,而我怎样等。
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5. 常用句型
需要掌握的写作句型(除了最基本的主谓宾简单句结构以外)
①It is / was+a.+that+句子
It is / was+a.+for sb. to do sth.
②There is / are / was / were / has been / have been+sth.+非谓语动词/从句;
③What引导的主语从句,比如:
a.What we should do is to...我们应该要做的事情是……;
b.What make things worse is that+从句 使事情变得更加糟糕的是……。
④Some believe that+从句,这是最简单的宾语从句
……
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6. 直接问观点型
【示例】What do you think is the function of art
艺术的功能(即好处)
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6. 直接问观点型
【示例】What do you think is the function of art
艺术的功能(即好处)
艺术的功能
以人为本:
服务社会:
①精神方面:激发想象力,丰富人们的精神生活。
论据:(举例或假设)当听音乐的时候,使人内心平静,带来愉悦感,提高审美能力等
③国家:彰显一个国家的文化特性,提升国家的形象和地位。
论据:(举例)欧洲国家文艺复兴
②国家:促进经济发展,提高国家综合实力。
论据:(举例)好莱坞电影业
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6. 直接问观点型
【示例】What do you think is the function of art
艺术的功能(即好处)
开头段:大背景+回答问题,直接点题
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6. 直接问观点型
【示例】What do you think is the function of art
艺术的功能(即好处)
开头段:大背景+回答问题,直接点题
In this age when everything is changing rapidly, arts still play an essential role in people’s daily lives. As far as I am concerned, the function of art is to enrich people’s spiritual life and improve country’s cultural and national identity.
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6. 直接问观点型
【示例】What do you think is the function of art
艺术的功能(即好处)
中间段:开头句+主题句①加论据+主题句②加论据
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6. 直接问观点型
【示例】What do you think is the function of art
艺术的功能(即好处)
Arts can be very important in our life, both to the individuals and to the nation as a whole. On the one hand, arts create beauty and stimulate imagination, and therefore provide enjoyment in an aesthetic way. A beautiful painting or song, for example, can bring a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment for the viewer or audience. On the other hand, art is a perfect embodiment of a country’s cultural and national identity. A good example of this is that those who have ever been to Europe are often amazed at locals’ artistic taste and aesthetic knowledge.
中间段:开头句+主题句①加论据+主题句②加论据
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6. 直接问观点型
【示例】What do you think is the function of art
艺术的功能(即好处)
结尾段:重申观点
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6. 直接问观点型
【示例】What do you think is the function of art
艺术的功能(即好处)
Overall, I think the function of art influences not only on the individuals but also on the whole country.
结尾段:重申观点
【注意】先不管字数多少,但写作的思路是相通的,所以只要动笔写,保证框架,有1-2个观点即完全可达到字数~
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6. 直接问观点型
【示例】What do you think is the function of art
艺术的功能(即好处)
(In this age when everything is changing rapidly, arts still play an essential role in people’s daily lives.) As far as I am concerned, the function of art is to enrich people’s spiritual life and improve country’s cultural and national identity.
(Arts can be very important in our life, both to the individuals and to the nation as a whole.) On the one hand, arts create beauty and stimulate imagination, and therefore provide enjoyment in an aesthetic way. A beautiful painting or song, for example, can bring a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment for the viewer or audience. On the other hand, art is a perfect embodiment of a country’s cultural and national identity. A good example of this is that those who have ever been to Europe are often amazed at locals’ artistic taste and aesthetic knowledge.
Overall, I think the function of art influences not only on the individuals but also on the whole country.
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7. 观点选择类
【示例】Do you agree on changing jobs Why or why not
支持还是反对换工作?
换工作
支持换
反对换
即换工作的好处
即换工作的坏处
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7. 观点选择类
【示例】Do you agree on changing jobs Why or why not
支持还是反对换工作?
支持换工作
以人为本:
服务社会:
①个人:赚取更高的工资
②个人:增加工作经验,体验不同的工作
论据:(原因或结果)提高个人竞争力,全面发展,增加受雇的机会
论据:(原因或结果)提高生活质量,增加生活满足感。
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7. 观点选择类
【示例】Do you agree on changing jobs Why or why not
支持还是反对换工作?
开头段:大背景+不同人的观点+自己支持的观点
People have different expectations for jobs. Some prefer to stay in the same job for the same company while others prefer to try different things and hop from one job to another. In my opinion, I totally agree on trying different jobs.
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7. 观点选择类
【示例】Do you agree on changing jobs Why or why not
支持还是反对换工作?
中间段:开头句+主题句①加论据+主题句②加论据
In my view, there are two reasons to support my opinion. At the most basic level, people find that changing jobs can often bring them the pay rise they expect. Therefore, they can lead better life and improve their living quality. The second reason is that by doing different jobs or careers, people can increase their work experience and eventually become more versatile. This may give them a competitive edge, especially in today’s job market where an all-round employee is always preferred.
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7. 观点选择类
【示例】Do you agree on changing jobs Why or why not
支持还是反对换工作?
结尾段:重申观点
Therefore, in my opinion, it’s advisable to choose to change jobs rather than staying in the same company all the time.
【注意】先不管字数多少但写作的思路是相通的,所以只要动笔写,保证框架,有1-2个观点即完全可达到字数~
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8. 现象分析类
【示例】Why do you think some people choose to work from home
在家工作的好处
以人为本:
服务社会:
为什么在家工作?(即在家工作的好处)
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8. 现象分析类
【示例】Why do you think some people choose to work from home
在家工作的好处
以人为本:
服务社会:
为什么在家工作?(即在家工作的好处)
①充足的时间
②足够的自由
③感觉
②资源
①环境
论据:(举例)节约上下班时间,灵活的上班时间
论据:(举例)穿着自由、工作方式自由
论据:(举例)提升幸福感、生活满足感
论据:不用出门,保护环境
论据:节约办公空间、资源
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8. 现象分析类
【示例】Why do you think some people choose to work from home
为什么在家工作?(即在家工作的好处)
开头段:大背景+描述现象,直接点题
The widespread use of efficient and low-cost communications technology makes working from home a practical reality for many companies and their employees. Such working mode is not only beneficial for employees at home, but also for the environment.
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8. 现象分析类
【示例】Why do you think some people choose to work from home
为什么在家工作?(即在家工作的好处)
中间段:开头句+主题句①加论据+主题句②加论据
My reasons will be explored as below. The telecommuting staff can save significant amounts of travel time and transit costs by being allowed to work in the comforts of home. At home, employees are free to do as they please, like being in shorts and T-shirts and enjoying music. Needless to say, WFH workers, especially women, can as well care for their children or even their pets at the same time. For a society seriously troubled with air pollution and transport problems, WFH could be partly the solution. This advantage is particularly true during the rush hours because the more there is traffic congestion, the more there are emissions of gas from motorized vehicles. Those who choose to work from home is the advocator of protecting the environment.
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8. 现象分析类
【示例】Why do you think some people choose to work from home
为什么在家工作?(即在家工作的好处)
结尾段:重申观点
In a word, the reasons why people choose to work from home are that telework is used not only to help employees enhance balance between work and life but also to achieve reduction in environmental impacts on communities.
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9. 措施/建议类
【示例】How can universities improve education quality
提高大学教育质量
以人为本:
服务社会:
怎样提高大学教育质量(措施或建议)
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9. 措施/建议类
【示例】How can universities improve education quality
提高大学教育质量
以人为本:
服务社会:
怎样提高大学教育质量(措施或建议)
①老师:提高教师报酬和福利待遇,提高教师教学积极性。
②学生:给学生们提供奖学金,提高学生学习积极性,
从而吸引到更多优秀的人才。
①管理
论据:创造更好的教学成果,提升科研成果
论据:学生学习有热情,提升各方面素质
论据:把资金用来组织更多的科研项目,
为学校和社会带来更多的利益。
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9. 措施/建议类
【示例】How can universities improve education quality
怎样提高大学教育质量(措施或建议)
开头段:大背景+直接点题
With the rapid development of society, more and more elites are required for advanced science and technology. So how to improve the quality of higher education becomes an emergency problem for universities.
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9. 措施/建议类
【示例】How can universities improve education quality
怎样提高大学教育质量(措施或建议)
中间段:开头句+主题句①加论据+主题句②加论据
I think universities should take the following methods to improve the quality of education.
Firstly, universities should employ more faculties and purchase more facilities to cope with the increasing population in campus. Only that happens will every student get equal chance to gain knowledge and enjoy campus life. Secondly, universities should hold some international communicating meetings and introduce professors who are talented, knowledgeable and prestigious. I think that will inspire students' creativity, intelligence and imagination which is needed in the college study, then they will contribute more to the university and the society.
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9. 措施/建议类
【示例】How can universities improve education quality
怎样提高大学教育质量(措施或建议)
结尾段:重申观点
Above all, to improve education quality, I think effective measures should be taken as soon as possible.
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10.如何审题--补充
【作文题目举例】
Traditionally, Chinese families would gather at home and have a big dinner on the eve of the Chinese New Year. In recent years, however, many families choose to have the dinner at restaurant. Which do you think is a better choice, and why Write a 200-word expository essay stating your views.
1.名词为主圈出题目关键点;
2.根据理解,得出需要分析的对象;
3. 根据与被分析对象密切相关的表述,得出需要分析的项目。
对象:New Year's Eve dinner年夜饭
项目:at home
at restaurant
观点陈述,不对比
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10.如何审题--补充
at home (原因→at home的好处)
①温馨的氛围
②美味健康
……
at restaurant(原因→at restaurant的好处)
①方便、节省时间
②享受不同的滋味
……
【作文题目举例】
Traditionally, Chinese families would gather at home and have a big dinner on the eve of the Chinese New Year. In recent years, however, many families choose to have the dinner at restaurant. Which do you think is a better choice, and why Write a 200-word expository essay stating your views.
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10.如何审题--补充
【作文题目举例】
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which view do you agree with Write an essay of about 200 words discussing this issue with the title “Are Teachers Necessary in the Process of Learning ”
利弊分析
1.名词为主圈出题目关键点;
2.根据理解,得出需要分析的对象;
3. 根据与被分析对象密切相关的表述,得出需要分析的项目。
对象:学习方式
项目:自学
跟老师学
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10.如何审题--补充
【作文题目举例】
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which view do you agree with Write an essay of about 200 words discussing this issue with the title “Are Teachers Necessary in the Process of Learning ”
利弊分析
跟学(好处and弊端) 自学(好处and弊端)
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11. 模板
【观点陈述型】
In their spare time, some people prefer staying at home enjoying themselves, and some like going out for fun. Which do you prefer Write a 200-word essay to express your opinion.
There is a widespread concern over the issue that _______(某一现象或事物).But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _______ they prefer _______.Others, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. This group of people hold the idea that _______. The two sides have their reasons to support their choice.
People who prefer to _______ because of the following reasons. on the one hand, _______(原因一). On the other hand, _______(原因二). Therefore, there is no doubt that _______.
Those who strongly choose to _______ have cogent reasons for it. The foremost is _______(原因一). Besides, _______(原因二). What’s more, _______(原因三). To sum up, the main cause of _______(某种现象) is due to _______(最主要原因)
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that _______. It is not only because _______(原因一) but also because _______. (原因二)The more _______ the more _______ So we should _______.
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12.如何开展一个段落
一般的段落结构
(1)Topic Sentence(主题句)
(2)Supporting Sentence (支撑句)
(3)Detail Sentence(细节补充句)
(4)Concluding Sentence(总结句)
One English paragraph usually includes the following four parts:
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段落主题句( topic sentence)的特点
At the beginning of the paragraph.(段落第一句)
presenting the main idea of the paragraph. (表明段落的中心思想)
A statement that can be argued – not simply a fact.
(不能是一个无法反驳的事实)
It should not be a specific description.
(描写细节的句子不能作主题句)
Related to the thesis statement.(与主旨句对应)
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判断以下句子能不能成为段落主题句
1. He sent his wife a diamond ring on her birthday.
2. They moved to a new apartment last month.
3. Today more and more women are going out to work.
4. He encountered an old friend yesterday.
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(X)
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①Guilin is an amazing place to visit. ②First, it is a place known for its scenic beauty. ③ You got to see the mountains shaping like camel’s hump. ④Walking around the Li River will bring you the unique beauty of the hill and water. ⑤Also, Guilin offers a range of adventure activities for the visitors. ⑥You can go hang-gliding, do bungy jumps or take a boating trip and other activities for the visitors. ⑦In addition, you get to visit exotic places within the city. ⑧You can explore the caves where lots of stalactite grow or take photos in those folk streets with local people. ⑨These features make Guilin a truly amazing place well worth a visit
主题句:地基
支撑句:钢筋
细节句:水泥
总结句:房顶
段落结构
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①Guilin is an amazing place to visit. ②First, it is a place known for its scenic beauty. ③ You got to see the mountains shaping like camel’s hump. ④Walking around the Li River will bring you the unique beauty of the hill and water. ⑤Also, Guilin offers a range of adventure activities for the visitors. ⑥You can go hang-gliding, do bungy jumps or take a boating trip and other activities for the visitors. ⑦In addition, you get to visit exotic places within the city. ⑧You can explore the caves where lots of stalactite grow or take photos in those folk streets with local people. ⑨These features make Guilin a truly amazing place well worth a visit
主题句:地基
支撑句:钢筋
细节句:水泥
总结句:房顶
段落结构
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【主题句】For another thing, cyber-dating is pretty safe. 【支撑句1】 Firstly, the dating websites have a strict entry condition. 【细节句】If you want to become a user of a dating website, you must submit your personal information and ensure it is true and effective. 【细节句】 Based on that, the website will make a survey on your social background, credit assessment, your financial situation and so on. 【细节句】 If they find some false information, you will not be allowed to use the website. 【支撑句2】 Secondly, the website users have enough time to distinguish whether the person they are chatting is trustworthy or not. 【细节句】 If they notice some people who have some evil motives on the website, they can report to the staff at once.
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Solo trips can help to develop new relationships. For one thing, the solo travelers can meet new companions with common interests. When they are in trouble , they may ask for help from other strange travelers, after that, the travelers may find the local special food or famous sights together along with the new partners. For another thing, the solo travelers have an opportunity to make friends or do business with those people they meet by chance but share the similar value. The travelers may chat with the passengers on a train who work in different industries, such as teachers, students, bankers even workers. They may discuss the politics, the idols , economy and so on and after this wonderful conversation, they may give contact information to each other.
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【主题句】Parents are usually eager to pass on their values to their children. But should children always believe what their parents do 【支撑句1】Maybe different generations need different ways of thinking. 【细节句】When children are young, they believe that their parents are always right. 【细节句】 But when they get older, they realize there are other views. 【支撑句2】Sometimes parents, especially older ones, cannot keep up with rapid social or technological changes. 【细节句】 A student who has friends of all different races and backgrounds at school may find that his or her parents do not really understand or value the digital revolution. 【细节句】 Sometimes kids have to find their own ways to what they believe in.
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However, there are arguments in favor of changing jobs frequently. 【支撑句1】One is that a worker improves his employability. Working in several different jobs often means that the individual has more skills. Such people are seen as more dynamic and versatile. 【支撑句2】Another benefit of changing job frequently is that one never gets stuck in a rut. From my own experience, I got bored when I spent too long in a job. Following this, the quality of my work would suffer. 【支撑句3】I also believe that employers generally don’t tend to greatly reward loyalty or commitment. Increased wages and promotion are often easier to attain by changing jobs.
生词:
frequently
employability就业能力
dynamic有活力的
versatile多才多艺的
rut凹槽
commitment贡献
promotion升职