2025届高考读后续写专题助人类---散落的苹果，汇聚的善意 讲义
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语https://www./soft/49650881.html续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An old and weak woman approached a very busy road intersection(十字路口).She hesitated at the sidewalk's edge, holding a heavy bucket (桶) filled with red apples. The woman aimed to cross the street.
The intersection before her seemed like an impossible challenge. The traffic lights changed with clockwork regularity, and the flow of cars was endless. The old woman knew she had to cross the street to reach her destination, a small store on the other side, where she sold her apples to make ends meet.
As she slowly made her way to the crosswalk, her fingers holding the handle of the bucket, a kind-hearted driver in the first car, recognizing her struggle, stopped well before the sidewalk, allowing her to cross safely. Grateful for this act of kindness, the old woman nodded and offered a weak smile as she slowly moved forward.
A second car, in the neighboring lane (车道), also came to a stop, its driver noticing the old woman's slow progress. The kindness of strangers warmed her heart, and with their help, she moved another step closer to her destination.
However, the third lane was a different story. As the old woman progressed further into the road, a speeding car approached. The driver had not noticed her until the very last moment. With a sudden wave of fear, the old woman's hold on the bucket loosened, and the apples scattered(散落) in all directions.
The car made a sudden stop, and the driver's heart pounded in his chest as he realized how close he had come to a terrible accident.
The old woman stood frozen, her eyes wide with fear. The first two drivers, having seen the near miss, rushed out of their cars to help her.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
第一段:Among the growing traffic buildup, the three drivers began to gather the scattered apples.
第二段:She had nothing but her bucket of apples to offer as a gesture of her appreciation.
一、文章大意
一位年老体弱的妇女提着一桶苹果想要穿过繁忙的十字路口去卖苹果维持生计。第一位司机好心停车让她先过，第二位司机也跟着停下，然而第三位车道的司机因没注意到她而险些撞上，导致苹果散落一地。前两位司机和第三位司机下车帮忙捡苹果，老妇人用苹果表达感激，这个故事展现了陌生人之间的善意与温暖，传递出在平凡生活中人性的光辉时刻能照亮彼此的主题。
二、故事山分析
开场：介绍老妇人在繁忙十字路口前的艰难处境，提着沉重的苹果桶，面对川流不息的车辆，不知如何过马路，引发读者对她命运的担忧，也为后续司机们的行为做铺垫。
发展：第一位司机的善良停车举动带动了第二位司机，老妇人得以缓慢前行，这部分展现了善良行为的传递和老妇人逐渐靠近目的地的过程，情节逐渐推进，让读者感受到一丝温暖。
高潮：第三位司机的突然出现和险些发生的事故使紧张氛围达到顶点，苹果散落一地，老妇人和司机们都陷入惊慌，故事在此处达到紧张的高潮，吸引读者继续关注后续发展。
结局：三位司机共同帮忙捡苹果，老妇人用苹果表达感激，矛盾化解，以温馨的画面结束故事，给读者留下美好的情感体验，也呼应了开头老妇人的艰难处境，完成了一个完整的故事叙事。
三、伏笔及续写中的回应
伏笔：“The old woman knew she had to cross the street to reach her destination, a small store on the other side, where she sold her apples to make ends meet.”
回应：续写中老妇人用苹果向司机们表达感激，因为这些苹果是她维持生计的依靠，而司机们的帮助让她能够继续前往商店售卖，保住了她的经济来源，体现了苹果对于老妇人的重要性以及司机们行为的意义重大。
伏笔：“As she slowly made her way to the crosswalk, her fingers holding the handle of the bucket...”
回应：在事故发生时，“The old woman's hold on the bucket loosened, and the apples scattered in all directions.” 通过对老妇人手和桶的描写，前后呼应，强调了苹果散落这一情节的合理性，也因为苹果的散落引发了后续司机们帮忙捡苹果的情节。
伏笔：“a kind-hearted driver in the first car, recognizing her struggle, stopped well before the sidewalk, allowing her to cross safely.”
回应：续写中第一位司机继续参与到帮助老妇人的行动中，他之前的善良停车行为为他后续积极帮忙捡苹果做了铺垫，表明他是一个始终怀有善意并付诸行动的人，使人物形象更加丰满和连贯。
伏笔：“The kindness of strangers warmed her heart, and with their help, she moved another step closer to her destination.”
回应：即使发生了意外，司机们仍然热心帮忙，这与之前陌生人的 kindness 相呼应，进一步升华了陌生人之间相互帮助的主题，让老妇人感受到即使遭遇困难，依然有温暖存在，也让读者看到善良的延续性。
伏笔：“The car made a sudden stop, and the driver's heart pounded in his chest as he realized how close he had come to a terrible accident.”
回应：这位司机在后续帮忙捡苹果，体现了他内心的愧疚转化为实际行动来弥补过错，从险些酿成大祸到积极帮忙，完成了人物情感和行为的转变，使故事发展更加自然合理。
四、续写要点
第一段：
司机们的行动细节：描述三位司机捡苹果时的动作、神态和语言交流。比如，他们弯腰捡起苹果的姿势，眼神中透露出的焦急与关切，互相提醒着不要遗漏苹果的话语，展现出他们对老妇人的真诚帮助和对苹果的珍视，尽管身处交通拥堵之中，但他们专注于捡苹果这一行为，体现出人性的善良在紧急时刻的闪耀。
周围环境的烘托：可以提及周围车辆的喇叭声、行人的驻足观望等环境描写，与司机们安静专注地捡苹果形成对比，突出司机们行为的难能可贵，也增加了故事的紧张感和真实感，让读者更能感受到这个场景的复杂性和司机们善良行为的突出。
第二段：
老妇人的感激之情：详细描写老妇人表达感激时的表情、动作和语气。她的双手微微颤抖着递出苹果，眼中满是泪水和真诚，声音带着一丝哽咽，向司机们诉说着简单却真挚的感谢话语，让读者深切感受到她内心的感动与温暖，以及对司机们深深的谢意。
司机们的反应与互动：写出司机们接受苹果时的反应，如微笑、点头、轻声安慰老妇人等，体现出他们对老妇人感激之情的理解和接受，也展现出人与人之间这种温暖互动的美好，使故事在温馨和谐的氛围中结束，给读者留下深刻的印象。
五、情感线
故事起始于老妇人的无助与焦虑，面对繁忙的十字路口和沉重的苹果桶，不知如何是好。当第一位司机停车让行时，她心中涌起感激之情，看到了一丝希望，随后第二位司机的跟随停车让她更加感受到陌生人的善意，心情稍显宽慰，继续前行。然而，第三位司机的突然出现和事故发生使她陷入极度的恐惧和绝望之中。但三位司机下车帮忙捡苹果的举动又让她从绝望中走出来，内心被深深的感动和温暖填满，最终转化为对司机们诚挚的感激，这条情感线起伏跌宕，紧密围绕着故事的发展，深刻地反映了人物内心的变化以及善良行为对人心的触动。
六、故事线
老妇人提着苹果桶在繁忙十字路口犹豫，欲过马路去商店卖苹果维持生计。
第一位司机善良停车让老妇人过马路，第二位司机跟着停下。
老妇人在过马路途中，第三位司机因未注意到她而险些撞上，致苹果散落。
三位司机下车帮忙捡苹果，不顾交通拥堵。
老妇人用苹果向司机们表达感激之情。
司机们接受苹果，老妇人继续前往目的地，故事在温馨氛围中结束。
七、主旨升华句（英文）
A single act of kindness can spark a chain reaction, illuminating the darkest corners of our lives.（一个小小的善举可以引发连锁反应，照亮我们生活中最黑暗的角落。）
In the chaos of the world, it is the simple acts of kindness from strangers that remind us of the beauty and warmth of humanity.（在世界的喧嚣中，正是陌生人的简单善举让我们想起人性的美好与温暖。）
Kindness knows no lanes or traffic rules; it is the universal language that binds us together in times of need.（善良不分车道和交通规则；它是在困难时刻将我们联系在一起的通用语言。）
The scattered apples became the seeds of gratitude, sown in the hearts of those who witnessed the power of kindness.（散落的苹果成为了感恩的种子，播撒在那些见证了善良力量的人心中。）
When we extend a helping hand to others, we not only lift them up but also enrich our own souls with the essence of humanity.（当我们向他人伸出援手时，我们不仅帮助了他们，也用人性的本质丰富了自己的灵魂。）
八、写作示范一
Paragraph 1
Among the growing traffic buildup, the three drivers began to gather the scattered apples. The first driver, a middle-aged man with a kind face, knelt down carefully, picking up the apples one by one and placing them gently into the bucket. His eyes were focused, as if each apple was a precious jewel. The second driver, a young woman, rushed around, her hair flying in the wind, calling out to the others to be careful of the oncoming traffic while she scooped up the apples closer to the center of the road. The driver of the speeding car, a young man still visibly shaken, muttered apologies under his breath as he joined in the task, his hands trembling slightly at the thought of what could have happened. Amidst the blaring horns and impatient shouts from other drivers, they formed an unlikely team, united by the common goal of helping the old woman.
Paragraph 2
She had nothing but her bucket of apples to offer as a gesture of her appreciation. With tears streaming down her wrinkled cheeks, the old woman shakily held out the bucket towards the three drivers. "Thank you, kind souls. This is all I have," she said, her voice filled with emotion. The first driver smiled softly and took an apple, patting her hand gently. "It's okay, ma'am. We're just glad you're safe." The young woman followed suit, giving the old woman a warm hug. The young man, still feeling guilty, took an apple and bowed his head slightly. "I'm so sorry for what happened. This is the least I can do." As the old woman watched them return to their cars, she felt a warmth in her heart that she hadn't felt in a long time. She knew that in this cold, busy world, there were still good people willing to lend a helping hand.
九、写作示范二
Paragraph 1
Among the growing traffic buildup, the three drivers began to gather the scattered apples. The man who had been speeding bent down low, his face flushed with embarrassment and concern, hastily collecting the apples that had rolled under his car. The other two drivers, their expressions determined, scoured the surrounding area, reaching under vehicles and dodging the passing cars to retrieve as many apples as possible. They exchanged glances of shared purpose, communicating wordlessly to ensure no apple was left behind. The honking of horns and the screeching of brakes filled the air, but they remained undeterred, focused solely on helping the old woman.
Paragraph 2
She had nothing but her bucket of apples to offer as a gesture of her appreciation. The old woman's hands trembled as she proffered the bucket to the drivers. "Please, take these. You've saved me," she implored, her eyes filled with gratitude. The drivers, touched by her sincerity, each selected an apple with a smile. The first driver said, "Ma'am, it was the right thing to do. We're all in this together." The second nodded in agreement, while the third, who had caused the scare, mumbled, "I'll be more careful next time. Thank you for forgiving me." As the old woman walked away, the drivers watched her go, knowing that this small act of kindness had not only helped her but had also made their day a little brighter. In the simplest of exchanges, they had rediscovered the power of human connection and the importance of looking out for one another.
参考答案
第一段:Among the growing traffic buildup, the three drivers began to gather the scattered apples. In their hearts, they thought that it was extremely difficult for the old lady, at such an advanced age, to earn money by selling apples. If all the apples were destroyed, it would be a huge loss for her. Fortunately，through the joint efforts of the three kind-hearted drivers, the apples finally returned to the bucket,safe and sound. The old lady was filled with gratitude that words failed her.
第二段:She had nothing but her bucket of apples to offer as a gesture of her appreciation. At first, the drivers were reluctant to accept it,considering helping the old lady as their rightful duty. But on second thought, they decided to buy all of the old lady's apples so that she wouldn't have to work so hard selling them. The moment she took the money, the old lady's eyes grew moist, and her lips trembled as she kept saying "Thank you." The vehicles around gradually started to move, and the honking of horns came one after another, yet it no longer sounded noisy and annoying. Love fills every corner of the world.
An old and weak woman approached a very busy road intersection(十字路口).She hesitated at the sidewalk's edge, holding a heavy bucket (桶) filled with red apples. The woman aimed to cross the street.
The intersection before her seemed like an impossible challenge. The traffic lights changed with clockwork regularity, and the flow of cars was endless. The old woman knew she had to cross the street to reach her destination, a small store on the other side, where she sold her apples to make ends meet.
As she slowly made her way to the crosswalk, her fingers holding the handle of the bucket, a kind-hearted driver in the first car, recognizing her struggle, stopped well before the sidewalk, allowing her to cross safely. Grateful for this act of kindness, the old woman nodded and offered a weak smile as she slowly moved forward.
A second car, in the neighboring lane (车道), also came to a stop, its driver noticing the old woman's slow progress. The kindness of strangers warmed her heart, and with their help, she moved another step closer to her destination.
However, the third lane was a different story. As the old woman progressed further into the road, a speeding car approached. The driver had not noticed her until the very last moment. With a sudden wave of fear, the old woman's hold on the bucket loosened, and the apples scattered(散落) in all directions.
The car made a sudden stop, and the driver's heart pounded in his chest as he realized how close he had come to a terrible accident.
The old woman stood frozen, her eyes wide with fear. The first two drivers, having seen the near miss, rushed out of their cars to help her.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
第一段:Among the growing traffic buildup, the three drivers began to gather the scattered apples.
第二段:She had nothing but her bucket of apples to offer as a gesture of her appreciation.
一、文章大意
一位年老体弱的妇女提着一桶苹果想要穿过繁忙的十字路口去卖苹果维持生计。第一位司机好心停车让她先过，第二位司机也跟着停下，然而第三位车道的司机因没注意到她而险些撞上，导致苹果散落一地。前两位司机和第三位司机下车帮忙捡苹果，老妇人用苹果表达感激，这个故事展现了陌生人之间的善意与温暖，传递出在平凡生活中人性的光辉时刻能照亮彼此的主题。
二、故事山分析
开场：介绍老妇人在繁忙十字路口前的艰难处境，提着沉重的苹果桶，面对川流不息的车辆，不知如何过马路，引发读者对她命运的担忧，也为后续司机们的行为做铺垫。
发展：第一位司机的善良停车举动带动了第二位司机，老妇人得以缓慢前行，这部分展现了善良行为的传递和老妇人逐渐靠近目的地的过程，情节逐渐推进，让读者感受到一丝温暖。
高潮：第三位司机的突然出现和险些发生的事故使紧张氛围达到顶点，苹果散落一地，老妇人和司机们都陷入惊慌，故事在此处达到紧张的高潮，吸引读者继续关注后续发展。
结局：三位司机共同帮忙捡苹果，老妇人用苹果表达感激，矛盾化解，以温馨的画面结束故事，给读者留下美好的情感体验，也呼应了开头老妇人的艰难处境，完成了一个完整的故事叙事。
三、伏笔及续写中的回应
伏笔：“The old woman knew she had to cross the street to reach her destination, a small store on the other side, where she sold her apples to make ends meet.”
回应：续写中老妇人用苹果向司机们表达感激，因为这些苹果是她维持生计的依靠，而司机们的帮助让她能够继续前往商店售卖，保住了她的经济来源，体现了苹果对于老妇人的重要性以及司机们行为的意义重大。
伏笔：“As she slowly made her way to the crosswalk, her fingers holding the handle of the bucket...”
回应：在事故发生时，“The old woman's hold on the bucket loosened, and the apples scattered in all directions.” 通过对老妇人手和桶的描写，前后呼应，强调了苹果散落这一情节的合理性，也因为苹果的散落引发了后续司机们帮忙捡苹果的情节。
伏笔：“a kind-hearted driver in the first car, recognizing her struggle, stopped well before the sidewalk, allowing her to cross safely.”
回应：续写中第一位司机继续参与到帮助老妇人的行动中，他之前的善良停车行为为他后续积极帮忙捡苹果做了铺垫，表明他是一个始终怀有善意并付诸行动的人，使人物形象更加丰满和连贯。
伏笔：“The kindness of strangers warmed her heart, and with their help, she moved another step closer to her destination.”
回应：即使发生了意外，司机们仍然热心帮忙，这与之前陌生人的 kindness 相呼应，进一步升华了陌生人之间相互帮助的主题，让老妇人感受到即使遭遇困难，依然有温暖存在，也让读者看到善良的延续性。
伏笔：“The car made a sudden stop, and the driver's heart pounded in his chest as he realized how close he had come to a terrible accident.”
回应：这位司机在后续帮忙捡苹果，体现了他内心的愧疚转化为实际行动来弥补过错，从险些酿成大祸到积极帮忙，完成了人物情感和行为的转变，使故事发展更加自然合理。
四、续写要点
第一段：
司机们的行动细节：描述三位司机捡苹果时的动作、神态和语言交流。比如，他们弯腰捡起苹果的姿势，眼神中透露出的焦急与关切，互相提醒着不要遗漏苹果的话语，展现出他们对老妇人的真诚帮助和对苹果的珍视，尽管身处交通拥堵之中，但他们专注于捡苹果这一行为，体现出人性的善良在紧急时刻的闪耀。
周围环境的烘托：可以提及周围车辆的喇叭声、行人的驻足观望等环境描写，与司机们安静专注地捡苹果形成对比，突出司机们行为的难能可贵，也增加了故事的紧张感和真实感，让读者更能感受到这个场景的复杂性和司机们善良行为的突出。
第二段：
老妇人的感激之情：详细描写老妇人表达感激时的表情、动作和语气。她的双手微微颤抖着递出苹果，眼中满是泪水和真诚，声音带着一丝哽咽，向司机们诉说着简单却真挚的感谢话语，让读者深切感受到她内心的感动与温暖，以及对司机们深深的谢意。
司机们的反应与互动：写出司机们接受苹果时的反应，如微笑、点头、轻声安慰老妇人等，体现出他们对老妇人感激之情的理解和接受，也展现出人与人之间这种温暖互动的美好，使故事在温馨和谐的氛围中结束，给读者留下深刻的印象。
五、情感线
故事起始于老妇人的无助与焦虑，面对繁忙的十字路口和沉重的苹果桶，不知如何是好。当第一位司机停车让行时，她心中涌起感激之情，看到了一丝希望，随后第二位司机的跟随停车让她更加感受到陌生人的善意，心情稍显宽慰，继续前行。然而，第三位司机的突然出现和事故发生使她陷入极度的恐惧和绝望之中。但三位司机下车帮忙捡苹果的举动又让她从绝望中走出来，内心被深深的感动和温暖填满，最终转化为对司机们诚挚的感激，这条情感线起伏跌宕，紧密围绕着故事的发展，深刻地反映了人物内心的变化以及善良行为对人心的触动。
六、故事线
老妇人提着苹果桶在繁忙十字路口犹豫，欲过马路去商店卖苹果维持生计。
第一位司机善良停车让老妇人过马路，第二位司机跟着停下。
老妇人在过马路途中，第三位司机因未注意到她而险些撞上，致苹果散落。
三位司机下车帮忙捡苹果，不顾交通拥堵。
老妇人用苹果向司机们表达感激之情。
司机们接受苹果，老妇人继续前往目的地，故事在温馨氛围中结束。
七、主旨升华句（英文）
A single act of kindness can spark a chain reaction, illuminating the darkest corners of our lives.（一个小小的善举可以引发连锁反应，照亮我们生活中最黑暗的角落。）
In the chaos of the world, it is the simple acts of kindness from strangers that remind us of the beauty and warmth of humanity.（在世界的喧嚣中，正是陌生人的简单善举让我们想起人性的美好与温暖。）
Kindness knows no lanes or traffic rules; it is the universal language that binds us together in times of need.（善良不分车道和交通规则；它是在困难时刻将我们联系在一起的通用语言。）
The scattered apples became the seeds of gratitude, sown in the hearts of those who witnessed the power of kindness.（散落的苹果成为了感恩的种子，播撒在那些见证了善良力量的人心中。）
When we extend a helping hand to others, we not only lift them up but also enrich our own souls with the essence of humanity.（当我们向他人伸出援手时，我们不仅帮助了他们，也用人性的本质丰富了自己的灵魂。）
八、写作示范一
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Among the growing traffic buildup, the three drivers began to gather the scattered apples. The first driver, a middle-aged man with a kind face, knelt down carefully, picking up the apples one by one and placing them gently into the bucket. His eyes were focused, as if each apple was a precious jewel. The second driver, a young woman, rushed around, her hair flying in the wind, calling out to the others to be careful of the oncoming traffic while she scooped up the apples closer to the center of the road. The driver of the speeding car, a young man still visibly shaken, muttered apologies under his breath as he joined in the task, his hands trembling slightly at the thought of what could have happened. Amidst the blaring horns and impatient shouts from other drivers, they formed an unlikely team, united by the common goal of helping the old woman.
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She had nothing but her bucket of apples to offer as a gesture of her appreciation. With tears streaming down her wrinkled cheeks, the old woman shakily held out the bucket towards the three drivers. "Thank you, kind souls. This is all I have," she said, her voice filled with emotion. The first driver smiled softly and took an apple, patting her hand gently. "It's okay, ma'am. We're just glad you're safe." The young woman followed suit, giving the old woman a warm hug. The young man, still feeling guilty, took an apple and bowed his head slightly. "I'm so sorry for what happened. This is the least I can do." As the old woman watched them return to their cars, she felt a warmth in her heart that she hadn't felt in a long time. She knew that in this cold, busy world, there were still good people willing to lend a helping hand.
九、写作示范二
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Among the growing traffic buildup, the three drivers began to gather the scattered apples. The man who had been speeding bent down low, his face flushed with embarrassment and concern, hastily collecting the apples that had rolled under his car. The other two drivers, their expressions determined, scoured the surrounding area, reaching under vehicles and dodging the passing cars to retrieve as many apples as possible. They exchanged glances of shared purpose, communicating wordlessly to ensure no apple was left behind. The honking of horns and the screeching of brakes filled the air, but they remained undeterred, focused solely on helping the old woman.
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She had nothing but her bucket of apples to offer as a gesture of her appreciation. The old woman's hands trembled as she proffered the bucket to the drivers. "Please, take these. You've saved me," she implored, her eyes filled with gratitude. The drivers, touched by her sincerity, each selected an apple with a smile. The first driver said, "Ma'am, it was the right thing to do. We're all in this together." The second nodded in agreement, while the third, who had caused the scare, mumbled, "I'll be more careful next time. Thank you for forgiving me." As the old woman walked away, the drivers watched her go, knowing that this small act of kindness had not only helped her but had also made their day a little brighter. In the simplest of exchanges, they had rediscovered the power of human connection and the importance of looking out for one another.
参考答案
第一段:Among the growing traffic buildup, the three drivers began to gather the scattered apples. In their hearts, they thought that it was extremely difficult for the old lady, at such an advanced age, to earn money by selling apples. If all the apples were destroyed, it would be a huge loss for her. Fortunately，through the joint efforts of the three kind-hearted drivers, the apples finally returned to the bucket,safe and sound. The old lady was filled with gratitude that words failed her.
第二段:She had nothing but her bucket of apples to offer as a gesture of her appreciation. At first, the drivers were reluctant to accept it,considering helping the old lady as their rightful duty. But on second thought, they decided to buy all of the old lady's apples so that she wouldn't have to work so hard selling them. The moment she took the money, the old lady's eyes grew moist, and her lips trembled as she kept saying "Thank you." The vehicles around gradually started to move, and the honking of horns came one after another, yet it no longer sounded noisy and annoying. Love fills every corner of the world.