读后续写--花园里的鹿之约 —— 人与自然的和谐篇章 讲义-浙江省宁波2025届普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语模拟试卷
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One spring, I was hired as groundskeeper at a Country Inn, a famous bed-and-breakfast located in Washington state. The grand house is in a beautiful place. Many famous people have visited and even had their own rooms there. The owners, Philip and Cecelia, have done a perfect job for the house. However, the gardens were very overgrown. Worse yet, there was another problem: a very persistent doe (母鹿).
Every day when I came to work, there was new evidence of the deer’s big appetite. I tried many preventives: spray, human hair, soap, you name it-but none of those things had effect. Often when I was weeding, I’d look over and there she’d be, munching some tasty pieces. Worst of all, she feasted on the roses, in which Cecelia took great pride. I became so frustrated that I named her “Dinner”— and wanted to serve her on plates.
One morning, I was on my hands and knees pulling out vines and bushes when I caught a movement out of the corner of my eye. There was Dinner, not five feet away, munching a large leaf and staring at me. I felt a connection with this animal. We did have something in common-we were both mothers. I got the crazy idea of communicating with her and it seemed she wanted the same thing.
What’s up I asked in my head.
I’m here because I feel safe, was the gentle reply I felt I heard. I have my fawns (幼鹿) bedded down nearby, and there is plenty to eat. When the twins are older after summer, I will move them deeper into the forest.
I understand that, I assured her. People come here too, from far away. I guess they’ll be interested to see you. I promise that nobody will harm you or your children. I don’t mind sharing the vegetation but Cecelia loves roses, too. She is very upset when they are all eaten.
A loud crash broke the magic. Our eyes met again briefly before she leaped off across the driveway, disappearing into the forest. Has I really communicated with the deer
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：I went into the kitchen where Cecelia was preparing the evening meal.
Paragraph 2：Every day, I enjoyed watching Dinner with the twins and my presence never bothered them.
文章大意：
作者受雇于一家乡村旅馆担任园丁，旅馆花园虽美但杂草丛生，且有一只贪吃的母鹿 “Dinner” 常来破坏，尤其爱吃塞西莉亚引以为傲的玫瑰，作者尝试多种方法驱赶均无效。一次劳作时，作者与母鹿 “Dinner” 四目相对，奇妙地产生了心灵感应般的交流，得知它因这里安全且食物充足带着幼鹿栖息于此，还承诺会在幼鹿长大后离开。之后作者将此事告知塞西莉亚，旅馆主人也展现出了理解与包容的态度，故事后续围绕着人和鹿如何和谐共处展开。
故事山分析：
开端：作者受雇于乡村旅馆，负责打理花园，却遭遇母鹿频繁破坏花园的问题，尤其是对玫瑰造成极大损害。
发展：作者尝试多种方法驱赶母鹿均失败，在一次劳作中与母鹿 “Dinner” 意外 “交流”，了解到它的情况。
高潮：作者向旅馆主人塞西莉亚讲述与母鹿交流的经历，主人的反应出乎意料，没有生气而是选择理解和包容，决定与鹿群和谐共处。
结局：人和鹿在花园里和谐相处，母鹿带着幼鹿自在生活，还成为旅馆独特一景，客人也欣然接受这一画面。
伏笔及续写中的回应：
伏笔：花园非常杂乱且有母鹿破坏问题，为后续作者与母鹿的接触以及关于花园处理方式的转变埋下伏笔。
回应：在续写中，主人和作者决定对花园部分区域放任不管，以满足母鹿的生存需求，从而解决了花园杂乱和母鹿生存空间的矛盾。
伏笔：作者尝试多种方法驱赶母鹿均失败，暗示母鹿不会轻易离开，为后续双方 “交流” 并达成和解做铺垫。
回应：作者与母鹿的交流中了解到它的想法，从而不再试图驱赶，而是选择共存，母鹿也继续留在花园附近。
伏笔：作者作为园丁对母鹿的破坏感到无奈，甚至给它取名 “Dinner”，这种情绪的积累为后面态度的转变提供反差。
回应：通过与母鹿的交流，作者理解了它的处境，从厌恶转变为保护，后续每天观察母鹿一家也体现出这种情感的变化。
伏笔：作者提到母鹿感觉在这里安全且有食物，暗示这里的环境适合母鹿生存，这为后续人和鹿能和谐共处提供基础。
回应：主人得知后决定让自然发展，保留部分花园区域，正是基于母鹿对环境的依赖，使得双方能够和谐相处。
伏笔：母鹿在作者劳作时离他很近且不害怕，预示着双方有可能建立某种特殊的联系，为后续的心灵交流做准备。
回应：在续写中，作者每天观察母鹿一家，它们也不害怕作者的存在，进一步强化了这种和谐共处的关系，体现出之前伏笔的延续和发展。
续写要点（两段）：
第一段：
情节发展：作者告知塞西莉亚与母鹿的交流后，两人决定在花园规划出一块区域供母鹿和幼鹿栖息、觅食，同时设置一些简单的防护措施，避免它们过度破坏其他区域，尤其是玫瑰丛。
人物互动：塞西莉亚和作者一起讨论具体的规划方案，考虑如何既满足母鹿的需求，又能保护花园的整体美观和其他花卉的生长，两人的关系因共同的决定而更加融洽。
第二段：
情节推进：随着时间推移，母鹿和幼鹿在花园的生活成为旅馆一道独特的风景线，吸引了更多客人。作者也逐渐与母鹿一家建立起深厚的情感，每天都会观察它们的生活习性，甚至在适当的时候为它们提供一些额外的食物和水。
结局呈现：在一个温暖的夏日傍晚，母鹿带着已经长大一些的幼鹿在花园边缘向作者张望，似乎在表达感谢，然后缓缓走进森林深处，作者望着它们离去的背影，心中感慨万千，旅馆花园也在人与自然的和谐共生中继续散发着独特的魅力。
情感线（150 字）：
作者最初对母鹿 “Dinner” 充满厌恶和无奈，因为它频繁破坏花园，尤其是吃掉塞西莉亚心爱的玫瑰。然而，在一次意外的 “交流” 后，作者开始理解母鹿的行为，情感发生转变，从排斥变为接纳和保护。这种情感的变化也影响了塞西莉亚，两人共同决定与母鹿和谐共处，随着时间推移，作者对母鹿一家产生了深厚的感情，最终在母鹿离开时，心中满是感慨与不舍，完成了从厌恶到喜爱再到离别的情感历程。
故事线（6 条）：
作者受雇打理乡村旅馆花园，遇到母鹿破坏花园问题。
作者尝试多种方法驱赶母鹿无果，内心沮丧。
作者与母鹿意外 “交流”，了解其情况和需求。
作者告知塞西莉亚后，两人决定与母鹿和谐共处，规划花园区域。
母鹿和幼鹿在花园生活，成为旅馆独特景观，吸引客人。
母鹿在幼鹿长大后离开，作者感慨万千，花园继续保持和谐之美。
主旨升华句（5 句英文）：
In this small corner of the world, we witnessed the beauty of coexistence between humans and nature, where understanding and tolerance bridged the gap between different species.
（在世界的这个小角落，我们见证了人与自然和谐共处的美好，在那里理解和宽容弥合了不同物种之间的鸿沟。）
The story of the deer and the inn teaches us that when we open our hearts to nature, we not only gain a deeper connection with the environment but also discover the kindness and compassion within ourselves.
（鹿与旅馆的故事告诉我们，当我们向自然敞开心扉时，我们不仅与环境建立了更深层次的联系，也发现了自己内心的善良与同情。）
Through this encounter, we realized that every living being has its place and purpose on this earth, and by respecting and sharing, we can create a harmonious and beautiful world for all.
（通过这次相遇，我们意识到每个生物在这个地球上都有其位置和目的，通过尊重和分享，我们可以为所有人创造一个和谐美好的世界。）
The harmony between the deer family and the inn is a testament to the power of acceptance and the magic that unfolds when we choose to live in harmony with nature rather than against it.
（鹿群与旅馆之间的和谐是接受力量的证明，也是当我们选择与自然和谐共处而非对抗时所展现出的魔力的见证。）
This tale of the garden and the deer shows us that in the embrace of nature's rhythm, we find the true meaning of life and the value of every creature that shares this planet with us.
（这个花园与鹿的故事向我们展示了，在顺应自然节奏的怀抱中，我们找到了生命的真正意义以及与我们共享这个星球的每一个生物的价值。）
写作示范一：
Paragraph 1:
I went into the kitchen where Cecelia was preparing the evening meal. With a bit of trepidation, I recounted my strange conversation with Dinner. Cecelia's hands paused in mid-air as she listened intently. To my relief, instead of being angry, she smiled softly and said, "Perhaps we've been too hasty in trying to drive her away. Let's see if we can find a balance." We spent the evening discussing how to designate a part of the garden for the deer family while protecting the roses. We decided to plant some extra greens in a secluded corner and put up a small fence around the rose bushes.
Paragraph 2:
Every day, I enjoyed watching Dinner with the twins and my presence never bothered them. As the days passed, the fawns grew bolder, sometimes even playfully chasing each other around the garden. The guests at the inn were enchanted by the sight, and many took pictures from a respectful distance. One sunny afternoon, as I was watering the plants, Dinner walked up to me and nuzzled my hand gently, as if to show her gratitude. When autumn came, and the leaves started to turn, Dinner led her now larger fawns to the edge of the forest. She looked back at me one last time before disappearing into the woods. The garden remained a place of beauty and harmony, a testament to the possibility of peaceful coexistence between humans and nature.
写作示范二：
Paragraph 1:
I went into the kitchen where Cecelia was preparing the evening meal. I took a deep breath and told her about my encounter with Dinner. Cecelia's eyes widened in surprise, but then a look of understanding dawned on her face. "Maybe it's a sign that we should be more accepting," she murmured. We then hatched a plan to create a deer-friendly zone in the garden, with a small water source and some native plants that the deer could enjoy without harming the rest of the flora. We also made sure to leave a clear path for them to come and go freely.
Paragraph 2:
Every day, I enjoyed watching Dinner with the twins and my presence never bothered them. The fawns grew quickly, and their antics brought much joy to the inn. The guests were delighted to witness this unique bond between humans and wildlife. As the season changed, Dinner's visits became less frequent. One chilly morning, I saw her leading her fawns away from the garden. I felt a pang of sadness but also a sense of fulfillment. The garden had become a haven not only for the plants but also for the deer, teaching us all the value of sharing our space with nature. It was a reminder that when we show kindness and respect, nature rewards us with its own kind of magic.
参考答案
I went into the kitchen where Cecelia was preparing the evening meal. “I just had a meeting of the minds with Dinner in the driveway,” I told her. “Maybe we can look at this problem in another way. The guests can see roses anywhere. But having wildlife might really add to the charm of the place. Cecelia thought about it and liked the idea. For the next few months, Dinner brought her twins into the yard. While she grazed, the siblings ran around the lawn, just like small children. She even seemed to pose so that guests could take pictures.
I enjoyed watching Dinner with the twins and my presence never bothered them. The fawns were curious. They would stare at me through the bushes and jump around. Dinner’s parenting skills were excellent. I was touched by the gentleness and affection she showed her charges. As summer wound down, Dinner and her children visited less and less. she was taking them farther into the forest. Finally, they left for good. So maybe there is a way to live in harmony with these peaceful creatures. Consider who was here first and think what we’ve done to them, not just what they’ve done to us.
One spring, I was hired as groundskeeper at a Country Inn, a famous bed-and-breakfast located in Washington state. The grand house is in a beautiful place. Many famous people have visited and even had their own rooms there. The owners, Philip and Cecelia, have done a perfect job for the house. However, the gardens were very overgrown. Worse yet, there was another problem: a very persistent doe (母鹿).
Every day when I came to work, there was new evidence of the deer’s big appetite. I tried many preventives: spray, human hair, soap, you name it-but none of those things had effect. Often when I was weeding, I’d look over and there she’d be, munching some tasty pieces. Worst of all, she feasted on the roses, in which Cecelia took great pride. I became so frustrated that I named her “Dinner”— and wanted to serve her on plates.
One morning, I was on my hands and knees pulling out vines and bushes when I caught a movement out of the corner of my eye. There was Dinner, not five feet away, munching a large leaf and staring at me. I felt a connection with this animal. We did have something in common-we were both mothers. I got the crazy idea of communicating with her and it seemed she wanted the same thing.
What’s up I asked in my head.
I’m here because I feel safe, was the gentle reply I felt I heard. I have my fawns (幼鹿) bedded down nearby, and there is plenty to eat. When the twins are older after summer, I will move them deeper into the forest.
I understand that, I assured her. People come here too, from far away. I guess they’ll be interested to see you. I promise that nobody will harm you or your children. I don’t mind sharing the vegetation but Cecelia loves roses, too. She is very upset when they are all eaten.
A loud crash broke the magic. Our eyes met again briefly before she leaped off across the driveway, disappearing into the forest. Has I really communicated with the deer
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：I went into the kitchen where Cecelia was preparing the evening meal.
Paragraph 2：Every day, I enjoyed watching Dinner with the twins and my presence never bothered them.
文章大意：
作者受雇于一家乡村旅馆担任园丁，旅馆花园虽美但杂草丛生，且有一只贪吃的母鹿 “Dinner” 常来破坏，尤其爱吃塞西莉亚引以为傲的玫瑰，作者尝试多种方法驱赶均无效。一次劳作时，作者与母鹿 “Dinner” 四目相对，奇妙地产生了心灵感应般的交流，得知它因这里安全且食物充足带着幼鹿栖息于此，还承诺会在幼鹿长大后离开。之后作者将此事告知塞西莉亚，旅馆主人也展现出了理解与包容的态度，故事后续围绕着人和鹿如何和谐共处展开。
故事山分析：
开端：作者受雇于乡村旅馆，负责打理花园，却遭遇母鹿频繁破坏花园的问题，尤其是对玫瑰造成极大损害。
发展：作者尝试多种方法驱赶母鹿均失败，在一次劳作中与母鹿 “Dinner” 意外 “交流”，了解到它的情况。
高潮：作者向旅馆主人塞西莉亚讲述与母鹿交流的经历，主人的反应出乎意料，没有生气而是选择理解和包容，决定与鹿群和谐共处。
结局：人和鹿在花园里和谐相处，母鹿带着幼鹿自在生活，还成为旅馆独特一景，客人也欣然接受这一画面。
伏笔及续写中的回应：
伏笔：花园非常杂乱且有母鹿破坏问题，为后续作者与母鹿的接触以及关于花园处理方式的转变埋下伏笔。
回应：在续写中，主人和作者决定对花园部分区域放任不管，以满足母鹿的生存需求，从而解决了花园杂乱和母鹿生存空间的矛盾。
伏笔：作者尝试多种方法驱赶母鹿均失败，暗示母鹿不会轻易离开，为后续双方 “交流” 并达成和解做铺垫。
回应：作者与母鹿的交流中了解到它的想法，从而不再试图驱赶，而是选择共存，母鹿也继续留在花园附近。
伏笔：作者作为园丁对母鹿的破坏感到无奈，甚至给它取名 “Dinner”，这种情绪的积累为后面态度的转变提供反差。
回应：通过与母鹿的交流，作者理解了它的处境，从厌恶转变为保护，后续每天观察母鹿一家也体现出这种情感的变化。
伏笔：作者提到母鹿感觉在这里安全且有食物，暗示这里的环境适合母鹿生存，这为后续人和鹿能和谐共处提供基础。
回应：主人得知后决定让自然发展，保留部分花园区域，正是基于母鹿对环境的依赖，使得双方能够和谐相处。
伏笔：母鹿在作者劳作时离他很近且不害怕，预示着双方有可能建立某种特殊的联系，为后续的心灵交流做准备。
回应：在续写中，作者每天观察母鹿一家，它们也不害怕作者的存在，进一步强化了这种和谐共处的关系，体现出之前伏笔的延续和发展。
续写要点（两段）：
第一段：
情节发展：作者告知塞西莉亚与母鹿的交流后，两人决定在花园规划出一块区域供母鹿和幼鹿栖息、觅食，同时设置一些简单的防护措施，避免它们过度破坏其他区域，尤其是玫瑰丛。
人物互动：塞西莉亚和作者一起讨论具体的规划方案，考虑如何既满足母鹿的需求，又能保护花园的整体美观和其他花卉的生长，两人的关系因共同的决定而更加融洽。
第二段：
情节推进：随着时间推移，母鹿和幼鹿在花园的生活成为旅馆一道独特的风景线，吸引了更多客人。作者也逐渐与母鹿一家建立起深厚的情感，每天都会观察它们的生活习性，甚至在适当的时候为它们提供一些额外的食物和水。
结局呈现：在一个温暖的夏日傍晚，母鹿带着已经长大一些的幼鹿在花园边缘向作者张望，似乎在表达感谢，然后缓缓走进森林深处，作者望着它们离去的背影，心中感慨万千，旅馆花园也在人与自然的和谐共生中继续散发着独特的魅力。
情感线（150 字）：
作者最初对母鹿 “Dinner” 充满厌恶和无奈，因为它频繁破坏花园，尤其是吃掉塞西莉亚心爱的玫瑰。然而，在一次意外的 “交流” 后，作者开始理解母鹿的行为，情感发生转变，从排斥变为接纳和保护。这种情感的变化也影响了塞西莉亚，两人共同决定与母鹿和谐共处，随着时间推移，作者对母鹿一家产生了深厚的感情，最终在母鹿离开时，心中满是感慨与不舍，完成了从厌恶到喜爱再到离别的情感历程。
故事线（6 条）：
作者受雇打理乡村旅馆花园，遇到母鹿破坏花园问题。
作者尝试多种方法驱赶母鹿无果，内心沮丧。
作者与母鹿意外 “交流”，了解其情况和需求。
作者告知塞西莉亚后，两人决定与母鹿和谐共处，规划花园区域。
母鹿和幼鹿在花园生活，成为旅馆独特景观，吸引客人。
母鹿在幼鹿长大后离开，作者感慨万千，花园继续保持和谐之美。
主旨升华句（5 句英文）：
In this small corner of the world, we witnessed the beauty of coexistence between humans and nature, where understanding and tolerance bridged the gap between different species.
（在世界的这个小角落，我们见证了人与自然和谐共处的美好，在那里理解和宽容弥合了不同物种之间的鸿沟。）
The story of the deer and the inn teaches us that when we open our hearts to nature, we not only gain a deeper connection with the environment but also discover the kindness and compassion within ourselves.
（鹿与旅馆的故事告诉我们，当我们向自然敞开心扉时，我们不仅与环境建立了更深层次的联系，也发现了自己内心的善良与同情。）
Through this encounter, we realized that every living being has its place and purpose on this earth, and by respecting and sharing, we can create a harmonious and beautiful world for all.
（通过这次相遇，我们意识到每个生物在这个地球上都有其位置和目的，通过尊重和分享，我们可以为所有人创造一个和谐美好的世界。）
The harmony between the deer family and the inn is a testament to the power of acceptance and the magic that unfolds when we choose to live in harmony with nature rather than against it.
（鹿群与旅馆之间的和谐是接受力量的证明，也是当我们选择与自然和谐共处而非对抗时所展现出的魔力的见证。）
This tale of the garden and the deer shows us that in the embrace of nature's rhythm, we find the true meaning of life and the value of every creature that shares this planet with us.
（这个花园与鹿的故事向我们展示了，在顺应自然节奏的怀抱中，我们找到了生命的真正意义以及与我们共享这个星球的每一个生物的价值。）
写作示范一：
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I went into the kitchen where Cecelia was preparing the evening meal. With a bit of trepidation, I recounted my strange conversation with Dinner. Cecelia's hands paused in mid-air as she listened intently. To my relief, instead of being angry, she smiled softly and said, "Perhaps we've been too hasty in trying to drive her away. Let's see if we can find a balance." We spent the evening discussing how to designate a part of the garden for the deer family while protecting the roses. We decided to plant some extra greens in a secluded corner and put up a small fence around the rose bushes.
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Every day, I enjoyed watching Dinner with the twins and my presence never bothered them. As the days passed, the fawns grew bolder, sometimes even playfully chasing each other around the garden. The guests at the inn were enchanted by the sight, and many took pictures from a respectful distance. One sunny afternoon, as I was watering the plants, Dinner walked up to me and nuzzled my hand gently, as if to show her gratitude. When autumn came, and the leaves started to turn, Dinner led her now larger fawns to the edge of the forest. She looked back at me one last time before disappearing into the woods. The garden remained a place of beauty and harmony, a testament to the possibility of peaceful coexistence between humans and nature.
写作示范二：
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I went into the kitchen where Cecelia was preparing the evening meal. I took a deep breath and told her about my encounter with Dinner. Cecelia's eyes widened in surprise, but then a look of understanding dawned on her face. "Maybe it's a sign that we should be more accepting," she murmured. We then hatched a plan to create a deer-friendly zone in the garden, with a small water source and some native plants that the deer could enjoy without harming the rest of the flora. We also made sure to leave a clear path for them to come and go freely.
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Every day, I enjoyed watching Dinner with the twins and my presence never bothered them. The fawns grew quickly, and their antics brought much joy to the inn. The guests were delighted to witness this unique bond between humans and wildlife. As the season changed, Dinner's visits became less frequent. One chilly morning, I saw her leading her fawns away from the garden. I felt a pang of sadness but also a sense of fulfillment. The garden had become a haven not only for the plants but also for the deer, teaching us all the value of sharing our space with nature. It was a reminder that when we show kindness and respect, nature rewards us with its own kind of magic.
参考答案
I went into the kitchen where Cecelia was preparing the evening meal. “I just had a meeting of the minds with Dinner in the driveway,” I told her. “Maybe we can look at this problem in another way. The guests can see roses anywhere. But having wildlife might really add to the charm of the place. Cecelia thought about it and liked the idea. For the next few months, Dinner brought her twins into the yard. While she grazed, the siblings ran around the lawn, just like small children. She even seemed to pose so that guests could take pictures.
I enjoyed watching Dinner with the twins and my presence never bothered them. The fawns were curious. They would stare at me through the bushes and jump around. Dinner’s parenting skills were excellent. I was touched by the gentleness and affection she showed her charges. As summer wound down, Dinner and her children visited less and less. she was taking them farther into the forest. Finally, they left for good. So maybe there is a way to live in harmony with these peaceful creatures. Consider who was here first and think what we’ve done to them, not just what they’ve done to us.