2025届高考英语读后续写专题之友情类--机器人之缘：Susan 的勇气与友谊 （讲义）
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Susan had a secret: she loved robots. She had helped her dad in his workshop and knew a lot about motors, but her friends didn’t know this.
One day, she heard Alex and Jacob talking about their robot, Robbie. They were preparing for a big competition but Robbie wasn’t working properly. Susan was surprised by their courage, as they always seemed unpopular among the boys. She felt bad for them and wanted to help.
On the school bus home, Susan sat behind Alex and Jacob, who were still trying to fix their robot. “This is impossible! The legs move before you press the switch and stop after you press the switch!” Alex said, looking at Robbie’s legs, which were not moving right. “The competition is only eight days away!” Jacob looked sad. He thought they were going to lose.
“Umm, how did you connect the wires from the switch ” Susan asked quietly over their shoulders. Alex turned and gave her a cautious look. Susan smiled and asked, “Did you connect the NO wire or the NC wire to the motor ” The boys stared at her as if she had just landed from Mars.
Susan gently took the robot and pointed out the wire connected to the motor. “Here’s the problem!” She explained that it was the NC wire. It means the circuit (电路)is Normally Closed. She then pulled a loose wire out of the robot and explained that it was the NO wire, which means Normally Open.
“If you connect this wire instead, Robbie will walk when you press the switch.” Susan handed the robot back to Alex, who was staring at her with his mouth open.
“Change the wires and see,” she said before getting off the bus. Ten minutes later, her phone rang. It was Jacob: “Your idea worked, and we’re wondering if you could come over and help improve our Robbie.” Susan smiled. She knew she had made the right choice.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house.
……
Finally, the competition day came, and the new team was ready.
文章大意：Susan 热爱机器人但不为人知，偶然听到 Alex 和 Jacob 的机器人 Robbie 出故障，她主动帮忙指出电路连接问题，随后受邀去帮忙改进。在比赛当天，他们的团队表现出色并获得第三名，从此 Susan 不再隐藏爱好，三人也成为好友。
故事山分析：
开端：Susan 听到 Alex 和 Jacob 谈论故障机器人，想帮忙。
发展：Susan 在公交上指出问题，后去帮忙改进。
高潮：比赛日到来，机器人出色表现。
结局：获奖，三人成为好友。
伏笔及续写回应：
伏笔：Susan 热爱机器人且懂电机知识（为她能解决机器人问题做铺垫）。
回应：在后续帮助中充分展现其专业知识，解决各种技术难题。
伏笔：Alex 和 Jacob 准备比赛但机器人故障（引出 Susan 帮忙情节）。
回应：Susan 的帮助使机器人恢复正常并不断改进，最终参赛。
伏笔：Susan 询问电线连接问题（暗示她能解决问题的能力）。
回应：通过更换电线解决了机器人腿部运动异常的问题。
伏笔：Jacob 打电话邀请 Susan 帮忙（推动故事发展，加深合作）。
回应：Susan 积极参与，进一步改进机器人，为比赛做准备。
伏笔：三人共同努力改进机器人（预示团队合作的成果）。
回应：比赛中团队协作，机器人表现出色，获得名次。
续写要点：
第一段：可以描述 Susan 到 Jacob 家后，他们如何进一步调试和优化 Robbie，比如检查程序、调试传感器等细节，以及遇到新问题时如何共同解决，突出三人合作的紧密和努力。
第二段：比赛现场，详细描写 Robbie 的精彩表现，如动作的流畅性、任务的完成情况等，以及三人的紧张心情和最终获奖后的激动反应，包括观众的欢呼、评委的认可等场景。
情感线：Susan 从最初对自己热爱机器人但因朋友不知而有所隐藏的状态，转变为勇敢展现自我并与 Alex 和 Jacob 建立深厚友谊。Alex 和 Jacob 从因机器人故障而沮丧焦虑，到对 Susan 提供帮助的惊讶与感激，再到与 Susan 合作成功后的喜悦和自豪，整个过程中团队情感逐渐升温，彼此信任与依赖增强，体现了友情在共同兴趣和努力下的升华。
故事线：
Susan 热爱机器人却瞒着朋友。
听到 Alex 和 Jacob 的机器人故障，主动询问。
在公交上指出电线连接问题，机器人初步修复。
应邀请去 Jacob 家帮忙进一步改进机器人。
比赛日三人带着 Robbie 参赛。
最终获奖，Susan 不再隐藏爱好，三人成为好友。
主旨升华句：
True friendship is not only about sharing joys and sorrows but also about discovering and supporting each other's hidden passions.（真正的友谊不仅在于分享喜怒哀乐，还在于发现并支持彼此隐藏的热情。）
In the journey of pursuit, the power of unity and the courage to reveal oneself can lead to unexpected achievements and precious friendships.（在追求的旅程中，团结的力量和展现自我的勇气能够带来意想不到的成就和珍贵的友谊。）
Sometimes, a helping hand extended in secrecy can unlock the potential of friendship and success that lies beneath the surface.（有时，暗中伸出的援手能够开启隐藏在表面之下的友谊和成功的潜力。）
The beauty of friendship blossoms when we embrace our true selves and join hands with those who share our dreams, regardless of the initial differences.（当我们接纳真实的自己并与那些怀有共同梦想的人携手共进时，友谊之花便会绽放，无论最初有何差异。）
Hidden talents and kind hearts, when combined with the spirit of cooperation, can create a symphony of victory and a bond that lasts a lifetime.（隐藏的才能和善良的心，与合作精神相结合，能够奏响胜利的交响曲和建立一生的纽带。）
写作示范：
范文一
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house. Once inside, they huddled around Robbie, checking every detail meticulously. Susan adjusted the motor speed while Alex fine-tuned the control panel. Jacob double-checked the connections, and they tested Robbie's movements again and again. When a new glitch emerged with the sensor, Susan calmly analyzed the problem and found a solution. Their teamwork was seamless, and as the night grew late, they felt confident and ready for the competition.
Finally, the competition day came, and the new team was ready. Standing on the stage, Susan, Alex, and Jacob held their breaths as Robbie powered on. The audience watched in anticipation. Robbie smoothly navigated through the obstacle course, performing each task with precision. The cheers grew louder with every successful move. When the final scores were tallied, they had achieved an impressive third place. The boys rushed to Susan, hugging her tightly. Their friendship had been forged through the love of robotics, and Susan knew she had found a place where she could be herself.
范文二
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house. The moment she arrived, they got down to business. Susan examined Robbie's programming, finding several areas for improvement. She patiently explained the changes to Alex and Jacob, and together they worked to implement them. They faced challenges with the battery life, but Susan's quick thinking led to a makeshift solution. As the hours passed, Robbie became more advanced and reliable.
Finally, the competition day came, and the new team was ready. The stage was set, and the tension was palpable. When Robbie started its performance, it was like a well-choreographed dance. The judges were impressed by its fluid movements and accurate responses. The crowd erupted in applause. At the end of the competition, the team's hard work paid off with a well-deserved third-place finish. Susan, Alex, and Jacob beamed with pride. Their shared passion had not only led to success but also to a friendship that would last, proving that when we embrace our interests and help others, wonderful things can happen.
参考例文：
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob’s house. On arriving, she was greeted by the curious inquiries from Alex and Jacob, who were busy trying out ways to make Robbie stand out. “The way you fix the problem! That’s awesome! How would you know it ” Smilingly, Susan explained how she loved and helped her dad with robots, and offered to join them. Excited, Jacob exclaimed, “Let’s get started!” The new team worked tirelessly, experimenting with wires and adjusting Robbie’s arms and legs. Within a week, they made Robbie walk, run, and perform additional moves, even giving him a voice! On the seventh day, they completed their masterpiece.
Finally. the competition day arrived, and the new team was ready. As they displayed Robbie, they noticed robots of various kinds were presented. Few paid attention to their work until Jacob pressed the switch on Robbie. Robbie moved flexibly, sped up as directed, and even made a bounce and landed steadily. Amazed, people began to gather. When Robbie suddenly took a bow, introducing himself with a human-like voice, “Hi! I am Robbie. Nice to meet you!” the crowed erupted, clapping and cheering for the team’s creativity. They won a big prize, along with the joy of being seen and recognized. Seeing Alex and Jacob's beaming faces, Susan felt a sense of pride and delight, realizing she had made the right choice.
Susan had a secret: she loved robots. She had helped her dad in his workshop and knew a lot about motors, but her friends didn’t know this.
One day, she heard Alex and Jacob talking about their robot, Robbie. They were preparing for a big competition but Robbie wasn’t working properly. Susan was surprised by their courage, as they always seemed unpopular among the boys. She felt bad for them and wanted to help.
On the school bus home, Susan sat behind Alex and Jacob, who were still trying to fix their robot. “This is impossible! The legs move before you press the switch and stop after you press the switch!” Alex said, looking at Robbie’s legs, which were not moving right. “The competition is only eight days away!” Jacob looked sad. He thought they were going to lose.
“Umm, how did you connect the wires from the switch ” Susan asked quietly over their shoulders. Alex turned and gave her a cautious look. Susan smiled and asked, “Did you connect the NO wire or the NC wire to the motor ” The boys stared at her as if she had just landed from Mars.
Susan gently took the robot and pointed out the wire connected to the motor. “Here’s the problem!” She explained that it was the NC wire. It means the circuit (电路)is Normally Closed. She then pulled a loose wire out of the robot and explained that it was the NO wire, which means Normally Open.
“If you connect this wire instead, Robbie will walk when you press the switch.” Susan handed the robot back to Alex, who was staring at her with his mouth open.
“Change the wires and see,” she said before getting off the bus. Ten minutes later, her phone rang. It was Jacob: “Your idea worked, and we’re wondering if you could come over and help improve our Robbie.” Susan smiled. She knew she had made the right choice.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house.
……
Finally, the competition day came, and the new team was ready.
文章大意：Susan 热爱机器人但不为人知，偶然听到 Alex 和 Jacob 的机器人 Robbie 出故障，她主动帮忙指出电路连接问题，随后受邀去帮忙改进。在比赛当天，他们的团队表现出色并获得第三名，从此 Susan 不再隐藏爱好，三人也成为好友。
故事山分析：
开端：Susan 听到 Alex 和 Jacob 谈论故障机器人，想帮忙。
发展：Susan 在公交上指出问题，后去帮忙改进。
高潮：比赛日到来，机器人出色表现。
结局：获奖，三人成为好友。
伏笔及续写回应：
伏笔：Susan 热爱机器人且懂电机知识（为她能解决机器人问题做铺垫）。
回应：在后续帮助中充分展现其专业知识，解决各种技术难题。
伏笔：Alex 和 Jacob 准备比赛但机器人故障（引出 Susan 帮忙情节）。
回应：Susan 的帮助使机器人恢复正常并不断改进，最终参赛。
伏笔：Susan 询问电线连接问题（暗示她能解决问题的能力）。
回应：通过更换电线解决了机器人腿部运动异常的问题。
伏笔：Jacob 打电话邀请 Susan 帮忙（推动故事发展，加深合作）。
回应：Susan 积极参与，进一步改进机器人，为比赛做准备。
伏笔：三人共同努力改进机器人（预示团队合作的成果）。
回应：比赛中团队协作，机器人表现出色，获得名次。
续写要点：
第一段：可以描述 Susan 到 Jacob 家后，他们如何进一步调试和优化 Robbie，比如检查程序、调试传感器等细节，以及遇到新问题时如何共同解决，突出三人合作的紧密和努力。
第二段：比赛现场，详细描写 Robbie 的精彩表现，如动作的流畅性、任务的完成情况等，以及三人的紧张心情和最终获奖后的激动反应，包括观众的欢呼、评委的认可等场景。
情感线：Susan 从最初对自己热爱机器人但因朋友不知而有所隐藏的状态，转变为勇敢展现自我并与 Alex 和 Jacob 建立深厚友谊。Alex 和 Jacob 从因机器人故障而沮丧焦虑，到对 Susan 提供帮助的惊讶与感激，再到与 Susan 合作成功后的喜悦和自豪，整个过程中团队情感逐渐升温，彼此信任与依赖增强，体现了友情在共同兴趣和努力下的升华。
故事线：
Susan 热爱机器人却瞒着朋友。
听到 Alex 和 Jacob 的机器人故障，主动询问。
在公交上指出电线连接问题，机器人初步修复。
应邀请去 Jacob 家帮忙进一步改进机器人。
比赛日三人带着 Robbie 参赛。
最终获奖，Susan 不再隐藏爱好，三人成为好友。
主旨升华句：
True friendship is not only about sharing joys and sorrows but also about discovering and supporting each other's hidden passions.（真正的友谊不仅在于分享喜怒哀乐，还在于发现并支持彼此隐藏的热情。）
In the journey of pursuit, the power of unity and the courage to reveal oneself can lead to unexpected achievements and precious friendships.（在追求的旅程中，团结的力量和展现自我的勇气能够带来意想不到的成就和珍贵的友谊。）
Sometimes, a helping hand extended in secrecy can unlock the potential of friendship and success that lies beneath the surface.（有时，暗中伸出的援手能够开启隐藏在表面之下的友谊和成功的潜力。）
The beauty of friendship blossoms when we embrace our true selves and join hands with those who share our dreams, regardless of the initial differences.（当我们接纳真实的自己并与那些怀有共同梦想的人携手共进时，友谊之花便会绽放，无论最初有何差异。）
Hidden talents and kind hearts, when combined with the spirit of cooperation, can create a symphony of victory and a bond that lasts a lifetime.（隐藏的才能和善良的心，与合作精神相结合，能够奏响胜利的交响曲和建立一生的纽带。）
写作示范：
范文一
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house. Once inside, they huddled around Robbie, checking every detail meticulously. Susan adjusted the motor speed while Alex fine-tuned the control panel. Jacob double-checked the connections, and they tested Robbie's movements again and again. When a new glitch emerged with the sensor, Susan calmly analyzed the problem and found a solution. Their teamwork was seamless, and as the night grew late, they felt confident and ready for the competition.
Finally, the competition day came, and the new team was ready. Standing on the stage, Susan, Alex, and Jacob held their breaths as Robbie powered on. The audience watched in anticipation. Robbie smoothly navigated through the obstacle course, performing each task with precision. The cheers grew louder with every successful move. When the final scores were tallied, they had achieved an impressive third place. The boys rushed to Susan, hugging her tightly. Their friendship had been forged through the love of robotics, and Susan knew she had found a place where she could be herself.
范文二
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house. The moment she arrived, they got down to business. Susan examined Robbie's programming, finding several areas for improvement. She patiently explained the changes to Alex and Jacob, and together they worked to implement them. They faced challenges with the battery life, but Susan's quick thinking led to a makeshift solution. As the hours passed, Robbie became more advanced and reliable.
Finally, the competition day came, and the new team was ready. The stage was set, and the tension was palpable. When Robbie started its performance, it was like a well-choreographed dance. The judges were impressed by its fluid movements and accurate responses. The crowd erupted in applause. At the end of the competition, the team's hard work paid off with a well-deserved third-place finish. Susan, Alex, and Jacob beamed with pride. Their shared passion had not only led to success but also to a friendship that would last, proving that when we embrace our interests and help others, wonderful things can happen.
参考例文：
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob’s house. On arriving, she was greeted by the curious inquiries from Alex and Jacob, who were busy trying out ways to make Robbie stand out. “The way you fix the problem! That’s awesome! How would you know it ” Smilingly, Susan explained how she loved and helped her dad with robots, and offered to join them. Excited, Jacob exclaimed, “Let’s get started!” The new team worked tirelessly, experimenting with wires and adjusting Robbie’s arms and legs. Within a week, they made Robbie walk, run, and perform additional moves, even giving him a voice! On the seventh day, they completed their masterpiece.
Finally. the competition day arrived, and the new team was ready. As they displayed Robbie, they noticed robots of various kinds were presented. Few paid attention to their work until Jacob pressed the switch on Robbie. Robbie moved flexibly, sped up as directed, and even made a bounce and landed steadily. Amazed, people began to gather. When Robbie suddenly took a bow, introducing himself with a human-like voice, “Hi! I am Robbie. Nice to meet you!” the crowed erupted, clapping and cheering for the team’s creativity. They won a big prize, along with the joy of being seen and recognized. Seeing Alex and Jacob's beaming faces, Susan felt a sense of pride and delight, realizing she had made the right choice.