读后续写--替补登台：尴尬与成长交织的表演经历（ 讲义）-湖北省腾云联盟2024-2025学年高二上学期12月联考英语试卷
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In love with acting,I have even studied method acting,techniques for developing deeply emotional,intense roles.When I tried out for the school play,The Twelve Dancing Princesses,I was confident I would get one of the best parts.But Mr.Ellison,the director,didn't cast me.Instead he encouraged me to join the stage crew.
The middle child in a large family,I often felt that my parents paid more attention to my sisters and brothers.When my family appeared interested in my part in the play,however,I pretended that I had a role onstage.
A few weeks later,when Mom told me that she'd bought tickets for the whole family,I started to wonder if I should have been honest about being on the stage crew.But I couldn't come clean with my family.I was sure they wouldn't care as much if they knew I was only working behind the scenes.
On performance Friday,the eldest princess actress had to quit due to her sudden broken leg.I stepped toward Mr.Ellison and told him that I could play the role.Though doubting whether I could play it well,Mr.Ellison had no alternative but to agree my request at last since the show had to goon.I couldn't believe my good luck,feeling like bubbles were running through my veins.Having got everything ready,we took our places in the wings,waiting for our show time.Mr.Ellison took the stage before the curtain went up and tapped the microphone."Welcome,family,friends,and guests.Due to unforeseen circumstances,the role of the eldest princess will be played by Gillian Crenshaw,from our stage crew."I was boiled with anger and felt embarrassed.No one would have known I was a last-minute understudy if he hadn't told them.But I let it go.
注意：1.续写词数为150词左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
第一段：The curtain was rising,and I needed to concentrate._______
第二段：The terrible performance finally over;I sighed with a relief,hoping no one noticed my mistakes._____________
一、文章大意
“我” 热爱表演且学习了方法演技，在学校话剧《十二个跳舞的公主》试镜时自信能获得好角色，却被导演安排进舞台工作组。来自大家庭的 “我” 因觉得父母更关注其他兄弟姐妹，便向家人隐瞒了此事。演出前夕，饰演大公主的演员因腿伤退出，“我” 毛遂自荐替补出演。导演上台前向观众宣布了这一临时变动，这让 “我” 感到愤怒和尴尬，但仍硬着头皮上台表演，演出结束后心情复杂地面对家人。
二、故事山分析
开场：介绍 “我” 热爱表演却未被选角，反而进入舞台工作组，同时提及 “我” 的家庭背景，为后续隐瞒家人一事做铺垫，引发矛盾冲突。
上升：演出前主演受伤，“我” 获得替补机会，本是幸运之事，但导演的公开宣布使情况变得复杂，矛盾进一步升级，营造紧张氛围。
高潮：“我” 在尴尬和愤怒的情绪下上台表演，演出过程充满未知，观众反应、自身表现等都使情节达到高潮。
下降：演出结束，“我” 暂时松了一口气，紧张情绪有所缓解，故事走向尾声。
结局：“我” 面对家人，内心仍担忧他们的反应，未明确故事最终走向，给读者留下想象空间。
三、伏笔及续写回应
伏笔：“我” 学习了方法演技，为后面替补出演时能够凭借演技进入角色埋下伏笔。
续写回应：在第一段续写中，“我” 上台后起初紧张，但凭借之前的演技训练逐渐进入状态，使表演得以顺利进行，呼应了前文对演技的学习。
伏笔：“我” 因家庭原因向家人隐瞒在舞台工作组的事，导致后来对家人的反应格外在意，担心被他们轻视。
续写回应：在第二段续写中，家人对 “我” 的表现给予肯定和鼓励，与 “我” 之前的担忧形成对比，解决了因隐瞒而产生的内心矛盾，也回应了这一伏笔。
伏笔：导演对 “我” 能否演好大公主角色持怀疑态度，这为 “我” 表演时的不自信以及担心犯错埋下伏笔。
续写回应：第一段中 “我” 上台后的紧张表现以及努力克服困难进入角色，都体现了导演的怀疑对 “我” 的影响，同时也展示了 “我” 克服这种心理的过程。
伏笔：“我” 在演出前对自己替补出演感到幸运，与演出时因导演的宣布而产生的愤怒和尴尬形成对比，突出了事件的转折。
续写回应：这种情绪的变化在后续表演中一直影响着 “我”，“我” 在表演时努力克服这些负面情绪，专注于演出，使故事更加真实和生动。
伏笔：导演在演出前公开宣布角色变动，这使得 “我” 在表演时担心被观众看出是临时替补，增加了表演的压力。
续写回应：在第一段续写中，“我” 上台后一直努力表现自然，试图不让观众察觉自己的紧张和不专业，体现了导演这一行为对 “我” 表演的影响，同时也推动了情节的发展。
四、续写要点
第一段：
表演过程中的细节描述：详细描述 “我” 在舞台上的动作、表情、语言以及心理活动，如刚开始因紧张而声音颤抖，但随着表演的深入，逐渐想起方法演技的技巧，眼神变得坚定，动作更加流畅自然，与其他演员的配合也越来越默契等，展现 “我” 从紧张到逐渐适应的过程。
舞台上的意外情况及应对：可以设置一些小的意外情况，如道具出现问题或忘词等，然后描述 “我” 是如何凭借机智和平时的积累巧妙化解危机，突出 “我” 在表演中的成长和应变能力。
第二段：
家人的具体反应和对话：描述家人在看到 “我” 表演后的具体反应，如父母的眼神中充满骄傲和欣慰，兄弟姐妹跑过来拥抱并夸赞 “我”，然后引用家人的一些具体话语，如 “你在舞台上真的很勇敢，我们为你骄傲” 等，通过这些细节展现家人对 “我” 的支持和爱。
“我” 的内心感受和领悟：写出 “我” 在听到家人的话后的内心感受，从最初的担忧转为感动和幸福，同时领悟到家人的爱是无条件的，不应该因为角色的主次而产生误解，并且意识到自己在这次经历中获得的成长和自信，决定以后更加坦诚地面对家人和自己的梦想。
五、情感线
起初，“我” 热爱表演却未被选角，感到失落和不甘，进入舞台工作组后又因家庭原因向家人隐瞒，内心充满纠结和不安。获得替补出演机会时，“我” 感到幸运，但导演的宣布让 “我” 陷入愤怒和尴尬。上台表演时，紧张和担忧占据主导，随着表演的进行，逐渐变得自信和专注。表演结束后，先是松了一口气，随后面对家人时又充满担忧，最后在家人的肯定下，内心被感动和幸福填满，完成了从消极情绪到积极情绪的转变，同时也实现了自我认知和成长。
六、故事线
“我” 热爱表演，学习方法演技，参加学校话剧试镜未被选角，进入舞台工作组。
因家庭原因向家人隐瞒在舞台工作组的事，家人买了演出票。
演出前主演受伤，“我” 替补出演，导演公开宣布这一变动。
“我” 在台上表演，从紧张到逐渐进入角色，克服一些意外情况。
演出结束，“我” 松了一口气，担心家人的反应。
家人对 “我” 的表现给予肯定和鼓励，“我” 内心有所感悟。
七、主旨升华句（英文）
True courage is not the absence of fear, but the ability to face it and carry on, as I did on that stage.（真正的勇气不是没有恐惧，而是有能力面对恐惧并继续前行，就像我在舞台上那样。）
Family's love is like a warm light, always shining through the darkest moments of self-doubt.（家人的爱就像一束温暖的光，总是能穿透自我怀疑的黑暗时刻。）
In the face of unexpected challenges, our hidden potential emerges, leading us to discover a stronger and more resilient self.（面对意想不到的挑战，我们隐藏的潜力会显现出来，引导我们发现一个更强大、更有韧性的自己。）
Sometimes, what we perceive as setbacks are actually stepping stones to a greater understanding of ourselves and the importance of those around us.（有时，我们认为是挫折的事情实际上是通向更好地理解自己和认识周围人重要性的垫脚石。）
The journey of self-discovery often takes place in the most unexpected circumstances, teaching us that our worth is not defined by the roles we play, but by the courage and authenticity with which we face life's opportunities.（自我发现的旅程常常发生在最意想不到的情况下，它教导我们，我们的价值不是由我们所扮演的角色定义的，而是由我们面对生活机遇时的勇气和真诚所决定的。）
八、写作示范
第一篇
The curtain was rising, and I needed to concentrate. I forced myself to push aside the humiliation and focus on the role. As I began to move and speak, I could feel the weight of the audience's eyes. My first few lines were shaky, but then I remembered the countless hours I had spent practicing method acting. I visualized the character's emotions and experiences, and gradually, my voice grew stronger and more confident. There were a few hiccups along the way - a missed cue and a nearly dropped prop - but I managed to cover them up with a smile and a quick improvisation. By the end of the scene, I was almost enjoying myself, lost in the world of the play.
The terrible performance finally over; I sighed with a relief, hoping no one noticed my mistakes. As I walked offstage, my heart was pounding. I dreaded facing my family, certain they would be disappointed. But when I saw them waiting for me, their faces were filled with pride and excitement. "You were amazing up there, Gillian!" my mother exclaimed. My siblings chimed in with their compliments, and even my usually reserved father gave me a thumbs up. In that moment, I realized that their love and support had been there all along, regardless of my role. I had been so worried about impressing them that I had forgotten what truly mattered. From that day on, I vowed to be more honest with my family and to pursue my passion without fear of judgment.
第二篇
The curtain was rising, and I needed to concentrate. I took a deep breath and centered myself, trying to block out the chaos in my mind. As the lights hit my face, I channeled all my nervous energy into the character. I let the emotions I had practiced so hard to convey flow through me. My steps became more deliberate, my gestures more graceful. There was a moment when I forgot my lines, but I improvised smoothly, drawing on the essence of the character. The other actors seemed to sense my determination and supported me with their performances. I could feel the audience's attention, and it gave me the strength to keep going.
The terrible performance finally over; I sighed with a relief, hoping no one noticed my mistakes. I made my way to my family, my heart in my throat. To my astonishment, they greeted me with open arms and beaming smiles. "We're so proud of you for stepping up like that," my father said. My mother added, "You were a star up there, no matter what." Their words melted away my fears and insecurities. I understood that it wasn't about the role or the recognition, but about the courage to take a chance and the love of my family that would always be there. I was determined to cherish both my passion for acting and my family's unwavering support, and to never let self-doubt hold me back again.
读后续写参考范文
The curtain was rising, and I needed to concentrate. So confident did I feel that I walked towards the stage as if I had been the princess for a long time. I was sure I could deeply impress the audience as well as Mr. Ellison with my excellent acting skills. Everything was perfect at the beginning. However, since I had only watched the rehearsal but hadn’t practiced, I said other actor’s lines twice and forgot several of my own with the show progressing. What was even worse, my awkward movements and intentional acting ended with more laughter from the audience. Their laughter, in turn, triggered my attempt to try harder, which, however, made me the laughingstock of the whole performance.
The terrible performance finally over, I sighed with a relief, hoping no one noticed my mistakes.
No sooner had I gone down the stage than I found my families waiting there. Feeling even more embarrassed, I told them that I had lied to them and that I had never been a part of the show until the last minute. I thought my sisters and brothers would laugh at me. However, to my surprise, they all came over and hugged me tightly, comforting me gently and congratulating me on my first formal performance in public. “We are here to support you since you are our family whether you are performing on the stage or working behind the curtains,” my mother said, scratching my head. It was not until then that I realized the true meaning of family—we are supporting each other not because of our excellence but due to our connection.
In love with acting,I have even studied method acting,techniques for developing deeply emotional,intense roles.When I tried out for the school play,The Twelve Dancing Princesses,I was confident I would get one of the best parts.But Mr.Ellison,the director,didn't cast me.Instead he encouraged me to join the stage crew.
The middle child in a large family,I often felt that my parents paid more attention to my sisters and brothers.When my family appeared interested in my part in the play,however,I pretended that I had a role onstage.
A few weeks later,when Mom told me that she'd bought tickets for the whole family,I started to wonder if I should have been honest about being on the stage crew.But I couldn't come clean with my family.I was sure they wouldn't care as much if they knew I was only working behind the scenes.
On performance Friday,the eldest princess actress had to quit due to her sudden broken leg.I stepped toward Mr.Ellison and told him that I could play the role.Though doubting whether I could play it well,Mr.Ellison had no alternative but to agree my request at last since the show had to goon.I couldn't believe my good luck,feeling like bubbles were running through my veins.Having got everything ready,we took our places in the wings,waiting for our show time.Mr.Ellison took the stage before the curtain went up and tapped the microphone."Welcome,family,friends,and guests.Due to unforeseen circumstances,the role of the eldest princess will be played by Gillian Crenshaw,from our stage crew."I was boiled with anger and felt embarrassed.No one would have known I was a last-minute understudy if he hadn't told them.But I let it go.
注意：1.续写词数为150词左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
第一段：The curtain was rising,and I needed to concentrate._______
第二段：The terrible performance finally over;I sighed with a relief,hoping no one noticed my mistakes._____________
一、文章大意
“我” 热爱表演且学习了方法演技，在学校话剧《十二个跳舞的公主》试镜时自信能获得好角色，却被导演安排进舞台工作组。来自大家庭的 “我” 因觉得父母更关注其他兄弟姐妹，便向家人隐瞒了此事。演出前夕，饰演大公主的演员因腿伤退出，“我” 毛遂自荐替补出演。导演上台前向观众宣布了这一临时变动，这让 “我” 感到愤怒和尴尬，但仍硬着头皮上台表演，演出结束后心情复杂地面对家人。
二、故事山分析
开场：介绍 “我” 热爱表演却未被选角，反而进入舞台工作组，同时提及 “我” 的家庭背景，为后续隐瞒家人一事做铺垫，引发矛盾冲突。
上升：演出前主演受伤，“我” 获得替补机会，本是幸运之事，但导演的公开宣布使情况变得复杂，矛盾进一步升级，营造紧张氛围。
高潮：“我” 在尴尬和愤怒的情绪下上台表演，演出过程充满未知，观众反应、自身表现等都使情节达到高潮。
下降：演出结束，“我” 暂时松了一口气，紧张情绪有所缓解，故事走向尾声。
结局：“我” 面对家人，内心仍担忧他们的反应，未明确故事最终走向，给读者留下想象空间。
三、伏笔及续写回应
伏笔：“我” 学习了方法演技，为后面替补出演时能够凭借演技进入角色埋下伏笔。
续写回应：在第一段续写中，“我” 上台后起初紧张，但凭借之前的演技训练逐渐进入状态，使表演得以顺利进行，呼应了前文对演技的学习。
伏笔：“我” 因家庭原因向家人隐瞒在舞台工作组的事，导致后来对家人的反应格外在意，担心被他们轻视。
续写回应：在第二段续写中，家人对 “我” 的表现给予肯定和鼓励，与 “我” 之前的担忧形成对比，解决了因隐瞒而产生的内心矛盾，也回应了这一伏笔。
伏笔：导演对 “我” 能否演好大公主角色持怀疑态度，这为 “我” 表演时的不自信以及担心犯错埋下伏笔。
续写回应：第一段中 “我” 上台后的紧张表现以及努力克服困难进入角色，都体现了导演的怀疑对 “我” 的影响，同时也展示了 “我” 克服这种心理的过程。
伏笔：“我” 在演出前对自己替补出演感到幸运，与演出时因导演的宣布而产生的愤怒和尴尬形成对比，突出了事件的转折。
续写回应：这种情绪的变化在后续表演中一直影响着 “我”，“我” 在表演时努力克服这些负面情绪，专注于演出，使故事更加真实和生动。
伏笔：导演在演出前公开宣布角色变动，这使得 “我” 在表演时担心被观众看出是临时替补，增加了表演的压力。
续写回应：在第一段续写中，“我” 上台后一直努力表现自然，试图不让观众察觉自己的紧张和不专业，体现了导演这一行为对 “我” 表演的影响，同时也推动了情节的发展。
四、续写要点
第一段：
表演过程中的细节描述：详细描述 “我” 在舞台上的动作、表情、语言以及心理活动，如刚开始因紧张而声音颤抖，但随着表演的深入，逐渐想起方法演技的技巧，眼神变得坚定，动作更加流畅自然，与其他演员的配合也越来越默契等，展现 “我” 从紧张到逐渐适应的过程。
舞台上的意外情况及应对：可以设置一些小的意外情况，如道具出现问题或忘词等，然后描述 “我” 是如何凭借机智和平时的积累巧妙化解危机，突出 “我” 在表演中的成长和应变能力。
第二段：
家人的具体反应和对话：描述家人在看到 “我” 表演后的具体反应，如父母的眼神中充满骄傲和欣慰，兄弟姐妹跑过来拥抱并夸赞 “我”，然后引用家人的一些具体话语，如 “你在舞台上真的很勇敢，我们为你骄傲” 等，通过这些细节展现家人对 “我” 的支持和爱。
“我” 的内心感受和领悟：写出 “我” 在听到家人的话后的内心感受，从最初的担忧转为感动和幸福，同时领悟到家人的爱是无条件的，不应该因为角色的主次而产生误解，并且意识到自己在这次经历中获得的成长和自信，决定以后更加坦诚地面对家人和自己的梦想。
五、情感线
起初，“我” 热爱表演却未被选角，感到失落和不甘，进入舞台工作组后又因家庭原因向家人隐瞒，内心充满纠结和不安。获得替补出演机会时，“我” 感到幸运，但导演的宣布让 “我” 陷入愤怒和尴尬。上台表演时，紧张和担忧占据主导，随着表演的进行，逐渐变得自信和专注。表演结束后，先是松了一口气，随后面对家人时又充满担忧，最后在家人的肯定下，内心被感动和幸福填满，完成了从消极情绪到积极情绪的转变，同时也实现了自我认知和成长。
六、故事线
“我” 热爱表演，学习方法演技，参加学校话剧试镜未被选角，进入舞台工作组。
因家庭原因向家人隐瞒在舞台工作组的事，家人买了演出票。
演出前主演受伤，“我” 替补出演，导演公开宣布这一变动。
“我” 在台上表演，从紧张到逐渐进入角色，克服一些意外情况。
演出结束，“我” 松了一口气，担心家人的反应。
家人对 “我” 的表现给予肯定和鼓励，“我” 内心有所感悟。
七、主旨升华句（英文）
True courage is not the absence of fear, but the ability to face it and carry on, as I did on that stage.（真正的勇气不是没有恐惧，而是有能力面对恐惧并继续前行，就像我在舞台上那样。）
Family's love is like a warm light, always shining through the darkest moments of self-doubt.（家人的爱就像一束温暖的光，总是能穿透自我怀疑的黑暗时刻。）
In the face of unexpected challenges, our hidden potential emerges, leading us to discover a stronger and more resilient self.（面对意想不到的挑战，我们隐藏的潜力会显现出来，引导我们发现一个更强大、更有韧性的自己。）
Sometimes, what we perceive as setbacks are actually stepping stones to a greater understanding of ourselves and the importance of those around us.（有时，我们认为是挫折的事情实际上是通向更好地理解自己和认识周围人重要性的垫脚石。）
The journey of self-discovery often takes place in the most unexpected circumstances, teaching us that our worth is not defined by the roles we play, but by the courage and authenticity with which we face life's opportunities.（自我发现的旅程常常发生在最意想不到的情况下，它教导我们，我们的价值不是由我们所扮演的角色定义的，而是由我们面对生活机遇时的勇气和真诚所决定的。）
八、写作示范
第一篇
The curtain was rising, and I needed to concentrate. I forced myself to push aside the humiliation and focus on the role. As I began to move and speak, I could feel the weight of the audience's eyes. My first few lines were shaky, but then I remembered the countless hours I had spent practicing method acting. I visualized the character's emotions and experiences, and gradually, my voice grew stronger and more confident. There were a few hiccups along the way - a missed cue and a nearly dropped prop - but I managed to cover them up with a smile and a quick improvisation. By the end of the scene, I was almost enjoying myself, lost in the world of the play.
The terrible performance finally over; I sighed with a relief, hoping no one noticed my mistakes. As I walked offstage, my heart was pounding. I dreaded facing my family, certain they would be disappointed. But when I saw them waiting for me, their faces were filled with pride and excitement. "You were amazing up there, Gillian!" my mother exclaimed. My siblings chimed in with their compliments, and even my usually reserved father gave me a thumbs up. In that moment, I realized that their love and support had been there all along, regardless of my role. I had been so worried about impressing them that I had forgotten what truly mattered. From that day on, I vowed to be more honest with my family and to pursue my passion without fear of judgment.
第二篇
The curtain was rising, and I needed to concentrate. I took a deep breath and centered myself, trying to block out the chaos in my mind. As the lights hit my face, I channeled all my nervous energy into the character. I let the emotions I had practiced so hard to convey flow through me. My steps became more deliberate, my gestures more graceful. There was a moment when I forgot my lines, but I improvised smoothly, drawing on the essence of the character. The other actors seemed to sense my determination and supported me with their performances. I could feel the audience's attention, and it gave me the strength to keep going.
The terrible performance finally over; I sighed with a relief, hoping no one noticed my mistakes. I made my way to my family, my heart in my throat. To my astonishment, they greeted me with open arms and beaming smiles. "We're so proud of you for stepping up like that," my father said. My mother added, "You were a star up there, no matter what." Their words melted away my fears and insecurities. I understood that it wasn't about the role or the recognition, but about the courage to take a chance and the love of my family that would always be there. I was determined to cherish both my passion for acting and my family's unwavering support, and to never let self-doubt hold me back again.
读后续写参考范文
The curtain was rising, and I needed to concentrate. So confident did I feel that I walked towards the stage as if I had been the princess for a long time. I was sure I could deeply impress the audience as well as Mr. Ellison with my excellent acting skills. Everything was perfect at the beginning. However, since I had only watched the rehearsal but hadn’t practiced, I said other actor’s lines twice and forgot several of my own with the show progressing. What was even worse, my awkward movements and intentional acting ended with more laughter from the audience. Their laughter, in turn, triggered my attempt to try harder, which, however, made me the laughingstock of the whole performance.
The terrible performance finally over, I sighed with a relief, hoping no one noticed my mistakes.
No sooner had I gone down the stage than I found my families waiting there. Feeling even more embarrassed, I told them that I had lied to them and that I had never been a part of the show until the last minute. I thought my sisters and brothers would laugh at me. However, to my surprise, they all came over and hugged me tightly, comforting me gently and congratulating me on my first formal performance in public. “We are here to support you since you are our family whether you are performing on the stage or working behind the curtains,” my mother said, scratching my head. It was not until then that I realized the true meaning of family—we are supporting each other not because of our excellence but due to our connection.