应用文写作--关于学校英文网站新版块的建议 —— 致 Chris （讲义）-安徽省江南十校2024-2025学年高二上学期12月联考英语试卷

应用文写作
假定你是李华，你校英文网站拟增设一个新版块（section），正向同学们征求建议。请你给负责人Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.阐述理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段：
表明目的：开篇点明写信的目的是为学校英文网站的新版块提供建议，简单提及自己对学校网站建设的关注和期待，引出下文具体的建议内容。
第二段：
提出建议：详细阐述建议设立的新版块内容，例如 “英语学习交流区”。具体说明该版块可以包括学生分享英语学习方法、学习资源推荐、英语学习心得交流等方面。
阐述理由：从提高学生英语学习积极性、增强学习效果、促进学生之间的互动与合作等角度，分点阐述设立该版块的好处和意义，使用具体事例或合理假设来支撑观点，使理由更具说服力。
第三段：
表达期待：表达对建议被采纳的期待，再次强调自己认为该版块对学校英语学习氛围营造的积极作用，同时感谢负责人阅读并考虑自己的建议，体现礼貌和诚恳的态度。
语言积累
I am writing to put forward a suggestion regarding the new section on our school's English website.
（我写信是为了就我们学校英文网站的新版块提出一个建议。）
It occurred to me that a "Creative English Writing Showcase" section would be a great addition.
（我突然想到，设立一个 “创意英语写作展示” 版块会是一个很棒的补充。）
This section could provide a platform for students to display their excellent English writing works.
（这个版块可以为学生提供一个展示他们优秀英语写作作品的平台。）
By sharing and learning from each other's writing, students' writing skills are bound to improve significantly.
（通过相互分享和学习彼此的作品，学生的写作能力肯定会显著提高。）
Another reason for this suggestion is that it can stimulate students' creativity and enthusiasm for English writing.
（提出这个建议的另一个原因是它可以激发学生对英语写作的创造力和热情。）
For example, students could post their short stories, poems, or essays written in English.
（例如，学生可以发布他们用英语写的短篇小说、诗歌或散文。）
I firmly believe that such a section would enrich the content of our school's English website.
（我坚信这样一个版块会丰富我们学校英文网站的内容。）
It would also create a positive and active learning atmosphere among students.
（它还会在学生中营造一种积极活跃的学习氛围。）
I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestion and give it a try.
（我真诚地希望您能考虑我的建议并尝试一下。）
Thank you for taking the time to read my email and for your efforts in improving our school's English website.
（感谢您抽出时间阅读我的邮件，以及您为改进我们学校的英文网站所做的努力。）
写作示范
范文一
Dear Chris,
I am Li Hua, a student who is really interested in the development of our school's English website. I am writing to offer you a practical suggestion.
I suggest setting up a "English Learning Tips and Tricks" section. In this section, students can share their unique and effective ways of learning English, such as how to remember words more easily, how to improve listening and speaking skills, and some useful grammar learning methods. The reason is that different students have different learning styles and experiences, and by sharing these tips, we can learn from each other and find the most suitable learning methods for ourselves. This will not only enhance our learning efficiency but also strengthen the communication and cooperation among students. It can make the process of learning English more interesting and enjoyable.
I really look forward to seeing this new section on our website. Thank you for your attention and consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文二
Dear Chris,
I hope this letter finds you in good spirits. I am writing to share my idea about the new section for our school's English website.
How about creating a "Global News and Views" section This section could feature the latest international news, interesting cultural events from around the world, and different perspectives on various global issues. By reading and discussing these topics, we can expand our horizons, improve our English reading and comprehension abilities, and develop a global perspective. It will also enable us to keep up with the pace of the world and understand different cultures and values. This way, our English learning will be more closely connected with the real world, making it more meaningful and practical.
I sincerely hope you will take my suggestion into account. Thanks a lot!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文三
Dear Chris,
Greetings! I am Li Hua, and I am excited to contribute my thoughts on the new section of our school's English website.
I propose a "English Movie and Music Appreciation" section. Students can recommend their favorite English movies and music, share their reviews and feelings about them, and even discuss the cultural and language elements in them. This is beneficial because it combines entertainment with learning. We can improve our English listening skills while enjoying the movies and music. Moreover, it can arouse our interest in English culture and provide more topics for our daily conversations in English. It will surely add a lot of fun and vitality to our English learning journey.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to the new and improved website.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to offer a suggestion regarding the new section on our school's English website. I propose adding a "Cultural Exchange" section.
In this section, students can share their experiences of different cultures, such as festivals, traditions, and customs they have encountered. This would not only enhance our understanding of various cultures but also improve our English writing and communication skills as we describe these experiences. Moreover, it provides a platform for students to learn from each other and broaden their horizons. It would surely enrich our school's English learning atmosphere and make the website more attractive and educational.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua