九年级全册Unit 8-Unit 14 书面表达期末复习课件(共36张PPT)

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unit 8-unit 14
书面表达专期中复习
话
题
分
析
本单元以“Mysteries”为话题，此类写作命题通常采用“Guided Writing”形式，根据中文或英文内容提示写作；也有根据图画内容，发挥合理想象，描绘细节，连接成一个故事。
早上，同学们发现Jack两眼通红。于是大家纷纷猜测Jack发生了什么事情，有的同学认为他昨天晚上一直在玩手机游戏，有的同学认为他昨晚做作业做到很晚，也有的同学认为……，而真正的原因是他感冒了，没有睡好。请以“What happened to Jack ”为题，写一篇短文。
实
例
分
析
What
happened
to Jack
引出话题
各种猜想
最终结果
Jack’s eyes were red
played mobile games all night
did his homework very late
watched TV the whole night
caught a bad cold
连
句
成
篇
This morning, we found that Jack’s eyes were red. What happened to him We guessed.
Some of the boys thought that he must have played mobile games all night, because he always spent a long time doing that. But some girls didn’t agree. They believed that he must have done his homework very late.
Others thought that he was watching TV the whole night, because there was an NBA game last night. But I didn’t agree with them. His parents were very strict with him, so he couldn’t have played games or watched TV.
Then, we asked him during the break, and he said he cought a bad cold. Poor Jack!
抓要点
Key points
My favorite Music
kinds of music （音乐类型）
why （推荐的理由）
importance of music （音乐的重要性）
【妙笔成篇1】
My Favorite Song
My favorite song changes depending on how I feel that day. Usually I like songs that have great lyrics or rhythm.
When I’m down and tired, I prefer songs which can cheer me up, songs like Big Big World are my first choice because they are delightful and easy to follow. The lyrics may be simple, but very cheerful, and the rhythm, too.
开篇点题
展开表述
When I sing along with them, I feel refreshed and relaxed.
If I’m stressed out or uneasy, I love to listen to songs that are gentle and quiet, Our Canon in D is my favorite, which is performed by two people, a guitarist and a singer. The guitar player is great, the lyrics are comforting and the
singer sings perfectly. After listening to it, I’ll calm down and gain my strength again.
Life without songs will be empty and meaningless. If you feel like listening to something, choose a song that you like best.
结尾综述
Mind-mapping
Simple writing
Dear Tony,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs. When you are eating at the table, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. You are not supposed to point at anyone with your chopsticks.
In our house, you’re supposed to shake hands with my father for the first time. You are not supposed to kiss when you meet my mother. You can say “nihao” to her with a big smile.
When you go out with people, you are expected to call first. It’s important to make plans to do something interesting or go somewhere together.
Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meet-
ing you soon!
Best wishes,
Lin Jie
明天英语课上的duty report该你发言了。请你以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题写一篇英语短文，给大家讲述你的一次难忘的经历。
写作指导
本文根据要求是一篇记叙文。
它主要是说明事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”（what, who, when, where, why ）和一个“ H”(how)。
人称应是 __________，时态应是 _______。
第一人称
过去时
写作指导
My day
What did you learn from the experience
Where did it happen
Why
How did it make you feel
What happened
When did it happen
An unforgettable experience
Everyone has their own unforgettable experiences. So do I.
At about 9:00 a.m. last Saturday, I was taking a walk in the park near my home. Suddenly I saw a backpack lying on a bench. I picked it up and opened it. I found some cash, an ID card and a notebook with the owner’s name Wang Gang and his mobile phone number on it. Then I called the owner right away.
He was very glad that I had found his backpack and asked me to wait for him for a while. About 20 minutes later, he arrived. I gave the backpack back to him and he thanked me again and again.
Helping others makes me happy and proud. I think everyone should help others.
写作训练
Write a story about your lucky or unlucky day and tell your story to a partner or the class.
My Unlucky Day
I will always remember the date. It was June 7th, Sunday. It was sunny. It was the unluckiest day of my life.
　 When I woke up that morning, it was 10: 00. I had to get up quickly and eat breakfast. After breakfast I decided to go to another city to buy a computer. When I arrived at the bus stop, I found I had left my wallet at home, so I had to go back to get it.
参考范文
Finally, I got on the bus. Unluckily, the bus broke down on the way. I couldn’t believe I had to wait for five hours. By the time I got to the city, all the computer shops had closed. Therefore, I had to get back to the bus station, but the last bus had already left. In the end, I had to stay at a hotel for one night.
What an unlucky day!
文
章
结
构
开头句
中间段落
结尾句
提出问题 + 描述现象
What's the problem
分析原因 What caused the problem
提出解决方法 What should we do
呼吁大家共同努力解决问题
Let's take action!　
略写
略写
详写
开头句
These days，(with the rapid development of the society，) air/water pollution is becoming a serious problem.
提出问题 + 描述现象
What's the problem
通
过
对
比
描
述
现
象
In the past, there used to be blue skies/fresh air/clean rivers/many beautiful wild animals...
But now, skies are grey/air is filled with haze(雾霾)/rivers are full of rubbish/the number of wild animals is getting smaller and smaller...
中间段落
分析原因 What caused the problem
空
气
污
染
＊There are more and more cars on the road.
＊Many factories that burn coal pollut air with a lot of black
smoke.
段首：段落中心句
水
污
染
＊Many people throw litter into the rivers in daily lives.
＊Many factories put waste into the rivers.
中间段落
分析原因 What caused the problem
食
物
浪
费
＊Many people haven't realized that the food is valuable.
＊Some of us always order too many dishes when we eat in
restaurants.
＊Many people never take away the rest food after eating in
reataurants because they are afraid to lose their faces.
段首：段落中心句
动物濒危
＊More and more animals get homeless because of bad
environment conditions.
＊Many people take risks to kill animals for money.
中间段落
提出解决方法How can we solve the problem
空
气
污
染
＊To cut down air pollution, we should take the bus or
subway instead of driving.
＊We can reduce air pollution by planting more trees.
段首：段落中心句
水
污
染
＊Everyone should help to clean up the rivers.
＊We should write to the government to close down the
factories.
中间段落
节约能源
＊We should remember to turn off the lights when we leave
the room.
＊It's a good habit to use both sides of paper.
段首：段落中心句
动
物
濒
危
＊We should improve the environment to provide homes for
them.
＊We should ask the government to develop laws to stop
people from killing wild animals.
提出解决方法How can we solve the problem
1. Let’s take action from now on to make the environment more
and more beautiful！
2. We should work harder to protect our world.
3. So together， our actions can make a difference and lead to a
better future.
结尾句
呼吁大家共同努力解决问题　
写作练兵
改善人居环境， 提高生活质量， 是人们共同的愿望和应尽的责任。请以“How to keep our city clean”为题， 写一篇英语短文并给出你的建议。
写作练兵
How to keep our city clean
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Our city used to be a green city. But now some pollution gets into the environment. So it is very necessary to protect the environment now. But how to keep our city green
Firstly, we shouldn’t pollute the environment. We should stop littering around. And we should separate the waste before we throw it into the bins. Secondly, it’s better to plant more trees to make the air cleaner. Besides, we should save water and electricity.
In a word, if everyone makes a contribution to building a green city, our city will be greener.
If you want to write about a person …
The first time you meet
The person
Appearance & personality
Things happened to you
How he / she helped you
How you’ve been changed
What you want to tell him / her
The person from my junior high school days that I will never forget is Mrs. Wang, my English teacher in Grade 7. When I first started Grade 7, I was shy and did not dare to speak to anyone. My English was not very good and I felt quite unhappy with myself.
One day Mrs. Wang spoke to me after class.
定语从句
范文赏读
dare to do sth
敢于做某事
She also told me that she believed I could speak well
if I practice more. I was touched by what she said
and it made me work harder on my speaking skills.
Mrs. Wang continued to encourage me and I became
even more confident. I improved so much that I won
an English speech contest that year! I will always be
grateful to Mrs. Wang for her advice and support.
两个宾语从句