人教版九年级全册 Unit 8-Unit 14 书面表达期末复习课件 (共27张PPT)

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unit 8-unit 14
书面表达专期末复习
How to write a news story
开篇点题
描述经过
总结结论
Outline
Beginning
Ending
Body
What
(background information)
What
(conclusion,feeling)
How
(How the mystery was solved.)
Linking
words
unit 8
假如你叫张强，你校英文报本期专栏的话题是“讲述一件令人惊恐的事情”。请根据下面提供的开头部分，发挥你的想象力，就此话题为该专栏写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1．文中应至少使用两个含有情态动词表示推测的句子；
2．文中应体现人物由恐惧到惊喜的情感变化过程；
3．词数80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Writing
实
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演
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I had a frightening and exciting experience last Thursday night.
After finishing my homework, I was going to bed. Just then, I heard the sound of footsteps outside my door. I wondered who it could be. It couldn’t be my father or my mother, because they had gone to their friend’s party. They said they would come back home late. Who’s that Perhaps it could be my neighbor. He may have come back home from work. He always works late in the office. I said to myself, “Be brave! There’s nothing to be worried about.” Then I opened the door and all my friends were there saying “Happy birthday”!
How excited I was!
One possible version
Writing
Para.1
Opinion
My favorite kind of music is ...
Topic:My Favorite Kind of Music
Para.2
Reasons
Why
I always enjoy it.
I like it because it’s...
It has a simple name,...but it is one of the...that I have ever heard. It was written by...
How
When I listen to it, I can sense ...It makes me ...
Para.3
Conclusion
Moreover,it is .../has become...so I think you should listen to it.It’s...
unit 9
Writing: My Favorite Music
There are many kinds of music ,such as country music, rock music, classical music and so on. My favorite music is pop music.
开篇点题，说明喜欢的音乐
On the one hand I like pop music because it is easy to learn, and this kind of music is often about our life. On the other hand they are very popular among people and it is sung easily by people. they are very interesting and when I listen to it, I feel very relaxed.
I think you should listen to it too because it is also a good way to learn English.
具体介绍喜欢的音乐，注意用到定语从句
将自己喜欢的电影推荐给他人
Writing Structures
步骤 构思 列纲
总 开篇点题 I'm very happy to hear...hope to see you soon...
分 介绍风俗 ...different countries have different customs.
shake hands, for the first time, greet each other, table manners...
总 表达愿望 I hope you'll...
unit 10
框架
Dear ___________,
You must be excited about coming to China soon …
When you meet your friends for the first time in China, you ‘re supposed to shake hands…
Hope you have …
Beginning
(Greetings)
Body
(Customs)
Ending
(Wishes)
Your name
Sender
Writing
Receiver
Writing Structures
Dear Mary,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs.
When you’re eating at the table, it’s impolite to start eating first if there are older people at the table. You should let them start first. When you are eating with chopsticks, it is impolite to point at other people with your chopsticks. It is also impolite to stick your chopsticks into the bowl of rice and leave them there. In our house, you’re supposed to take off your shoes before you enter the house or just inside the front door. In our culture, we don’t usually hug or kiss people. When you go out with people, you should tell the hostess where you are going, who you are going with and when you will come back. In our culture, the hostess will worry a lot about the safety of her guests, so a polite guest will always let her know these things.
Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!
Best wishes,
Xiao Wei
Writing sample
本单元的话题是“Feelings(情感)”.
谈论人或事物或经历给人们的生活和情感带来的影响。
写作时，要求能针对日常生活中的一些人或事物或经历，描述事物经历以及自己或他人的感受。
语篇结构通常是记叙文。主要说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即5W1H( what, who, when, where, why)和(how)。
人称应是________人称，时态应是_________。
第一
过去时
Writing
unit 11
Make an outline
outline
Beginning
Body
Ending
开篇点题
事件及经历
总结感受
What
What I learned...
5W1H
Writing
实
战
演
练
Writing
（2022·重庆·中考真题）有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English Coner 将进行“Control YourAnger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。 要求：
1. 80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考词汇：1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）
2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better
Here is my experience.
Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger.
From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better.
Thanks for listening.
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本单元以“unexpected events”为话题展开学习，重点学习了语法——过去完成时态。该话题涉及内容较多，可以讲述自己的亲身经历，也可以讲述自己的亲眼所见或亲耳所闻。话题命题形式常采用语言描述形式，涉及日记、记叙文等文体。具体到本单元书面表达中，要求同学们能运用一般过去时和过去完成时描述自己或他人的经历。
单元话题解析
unit 13
unit 13
开篇点题
阐述经历
My lucky/
unlucky day
I will always remember the date...
This was the luckiest/ unluckiest day of my life...
When I woke up that morning...
Later that day... I couldn’t believe... Then/After that,... Finally,...
What a lucky/ an unlucky day!
总结感慨
1. It was the (un)luckiest day of my life!
2. You can’t imagine how ... I was.
3. I was so ... that ...
4. I couldn’t believe that ...
5. What’s more, I even ...
6. After the competition / game / show, I learned / realized that ...
7. What good / bad luck!
8. How lucky / unlucky I was!
Good sentences
Later that day, I realized that I had forgotten my wallet and couldn’t buy lunch. I couldn’t believe it. Then my friend Lisa said that she could share her lunch with me.
After that, I was praised by my math teacher. Because I got the highest score in the math exam.That night my parents were so happy that .they promised me that they would buy a bike for me as a prize.
I think that was the best day I’d had in a long time.
What a lucky day!
以第一人称为主, 时态用一般过去时和过去完成时
总结感慨，抒发感情
Post writing
unit 13
To protect the environment
话题分类
环境污染
资源浪费
动物保护
环境污染
资源浪费
动物保护
air pollution 空气污染
water pollution 水污染
waste pollution 废物污染
food waste 食物浪费
energy waste 能源浪费
save the endangered animals
拯救濒危动物
Topic
To protect the environment
Topic
To protect the environment
文
章
结
构
开头句
中间段落
结尾句
提出问题 + 描述现象
What's the problem
分析原因 What caused the problem
提出解决方法 What should we do
呼吁大家共同努力解决问题
Let's take action!　
略写
略写
详写
Topic
Sample Writing
Dear friends,
Our environment is getting worse and worse. The air in our city is not as fresh as before. There is a lot of traffic which causes air pollution. There are also many factories which causes water pollution.
Facing so many serious problems, we should take action to protect our environment. First, we should plant more trees as far as possible, which can help clean the air and make our city more beautiful. Second, we should turn off lights to save electricity when we leave the room. Last, walk or ride to school instead oftaking a car. This can help reduce pollution greatly.
All in all, everyone should make an effort to make the earth better.
本单元话题是“School days (学校生活）”，让学生回顾初中三年的学习生活并展望未来，叙述对自己有较大影响的某个人或某件事。
写作指导：
1) 写中学生活中的难忘的人/事。
2) 事件要有五要素：when, where, who, what, how
3) 最后阐述这件事对自己所产生的影响。
以回忆自己或他人的学校生活为主线，以感恩为主题，主要描写人物或记叙事件。此类话题源于实际生活，注意从平时的生活中提炼素材并写出自己的所感所想。
话题分析(Topic Analysis)
unit 14
Writing
3
How did you feel when you met this person
An unforgettable
person
4
How did this person help you
1
Who is the person
5
How has this peson's advicechanged your life
2
When and where did you meet this person
How to talk about a person
一般现在时
/一般过去时
3
How did it make you feel
An unforgettable
event
4
What happened later
1
What is the event
5
How has this event changed your life
2
When and Where did it happen
How to talk about an event
一般过去时
Writing
Make an outline
outline
Beginning
Body
Ending
introduction
5W1H
Influence
Writing
实
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演
练
（2022·新疆）初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如： 1.一次难忘的旅行
2.一次难忘的比赛
3.一次难忘的志愿服务……
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：
3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories…
Writing
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories.
Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself.
What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.
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