2025届高考英语写作书面表达公开课 课件（共20张PPT)

(共20张PPT)
Period Two
Paragraph Writing
Because I speak English well, and I like doing sports very much, I will be a good volunteer for the Games. I often do sports if I have time. I know the local conditions well…
With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I am keen on sports and I exercise a lot in my spare time…
A
B
Because I speak English well and I like doing sports very much, I will be a good volunteer for the Games. I often do sports if I have time. I know the local conditions well. I think I will give the best service to everyone in the Games.
With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I am keen on sports and I exercise a lot in my spare time. What’s more, I am familiar with the local conditions. So I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games.
Because I speak English well, and I like doing sports very much, I will be a good volunteer for the Games. I often do sports if I have time. I know the local conditions well…
With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I am keen on sports and I exercise a lot in my spare time…
A
B
What makes a
good paragraph
Because I speak English well, and I like doing sports very much,
With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports,
A
B
I will be a good volunteer for the
Games.
I often do sports if I have time.
I know the
local conditions well.
I think I will give the best
service to everyone in the Games.
I am qualified to be a
volunteer for the Games.
Besides, I am keen on
sports and I exercise a lot in my spare time.
What’s
more, I am familiar with the local conditions.
So I
promise I will offer the best service to whoever
participates in the Games.
时间先后
first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while…
转折关系
but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless,…
因果关系
because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that…
让步关系
though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of, despite , as , while …
cause-effect
concession
transition
time
递进关系
what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand
条件关系
if, unless, as long as, on condition that , provided, suppose, in case…
表 列 举
for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words
表 总 结
in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated
progress
conditions
particularize
conclusion
A good paragraph is one
with varied sentence patterns.
丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）
利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，
能增加文章的文采。
e.g. What a kind boy he is!
How disappointed he was !
感叹句
exclamatory
sentence
强调句
emphasis
e.g. It was this young boy that
helped the old granny.
I do hope you can come
if possible.
e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem.
There comes the police car.
Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.
e.g. They read while walking or
riding on a bus.
Come to me if necessary.
倒装句
inversion
省略句
elliptical
e.g. In my opinion, that room should be a place where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
定语 从句
attributive
clause
e.g. I saw a young lady walking
slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.
With
复合结构
e.g. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting.
Time passed quickly before we knew it.
So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later.
状语从句
名词性从 句
noun
clause
e.g. That’s what I should do.
We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.
6. I passed the physics exam because of your help.
5. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.
1. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort.
2. We all think he is a great man.
7. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.
3. I won’t believe what he says.
4. I like English best at school.
summary
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.
A good paragraph is one that usually consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.
Do I use any linking words
Are there any mistakes
Is there any advanced vocabulary
Are there any good sentence patterns
Do I avoid using Chinglish
Suggestions
最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we give more attention to students’ health or grades ”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。
Homework
支持方 的理由 反对方 的理由 你的看法
及理由
1．可以促进对体育的重视； 2．可以增强学生的体魄； 3．更有利于提高学习效率。 1．学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途； 2．过高的要求学生难以达到； 3．长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。
(考生自行发挥2—3点)
注意：1．任选内容写成一个段落，或是写整篇文章。
2．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥。
Homework
Goodbye!