2025年广东省深圳中考英语作文备考资料（含答案）

2025届深圳中考英语作文备考资料（20241230版）
作文分档
第四档（优）：（12—15分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。
第三档（良）：（8—11分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
第二档（中）：（4—7分） 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
第一档（差）：（0—3分） 未完成试题规定的任务。
作文评分标准
1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分　
2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;
3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;
4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。
【征文活动】
1．某英语网站正在开展以“节能”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文，谈谈目前的资源浪费情况及解决办法。
提示：
1.很多人浪费水；
2.有些人出门不关灯；
3.人们每天制造很多垃圾；
4.很多资源被浪费，资源短缺；
5.呼吁人们不要浪费资源，回收利用废物。
【写作指导】本文时态采用一般现在时，以第三人称为主，先引出主题，总起全文，再描述目前存在的浪费现象以及造成的后果，最后呼吁人们节约能源。写作时注意语句连贯，逻辑严谨，做到无语法和拼写错误。
【参考例题】
As we know, some natural resources can’t be produced again, but there are still many people who haven’t realized the importance of saving resources. Some people waste plenty of water; Some leave home without turning off the lights while others produce a lot of waste every day. As a result, many resources have been wasted, and we are short of resources. Now, it’s time for us to take action to save resources. We should call on more people to stop wasting resources. We can also try our best to recycle the waste. In this way, we can save more natural resources.
2．假定你是李华，你在澳大利亚的笔友Brown看到了《深圳文旅》公众号上发布的宣传视频，他对深圳非常感兴趣，希望你能给他推荐来深圳旅游的攻略。请写一封回信，介绍深圳的特点并邀请他到深圳旅行。
包含以下要点内容：
1. 自然景观
2. 人文景观
3. ……
要求：
1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 词数80左右 (信的开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。
提示词：Splendid China Folk Village (锦绣中华民俗村) ；high tech enterprise (高科技企业)
【参考例文】
Dear Brown,
It’s great to know that you are interested in travelling in Shenzhen. I’m writing to tell you something about Shenzhen.
Shenzhen lies in the south of China. It is a modern city with many beautiful landscapes. If you’re looking for a perfect place for a summer holiday, Shenzhen is a good choice. You will get an amazing view of the mountain and the sea if you enjoy natural beauty. Man made tourist spots are also wonderful. You can’t miss Splendid China Folk Village and Window of the World if you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. Shenzhen is also famous for many high tech enterprises because of the fast development of technology. You will learn about the charm of high technology when you visit these companies.
I truly hope my letter will help you know more about Shenzhen and I sincerely welcome you to visit Shenzhen.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一封书信；②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍深圳的特点，适当增加细节。
【写作思路】
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍深圳的自然景观和人文景观；
第三步，邀请他到深圳旅行。
【参考词汇】
①look for寻找 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③because of因为 ④learn about了解
【高分句型】
①If you’re looking for a perfect place for a summer holiday, Shenzhen is a good choice.
②You will learn about the charm of high technology when you visit these companies.
③I truly hope my letter will help you know more about Shenzhen and I sincerely welcome you to visit Shenzhen.
3．今年国庆期间，深圳举办的万架无人机灯光秀惊艳了海内外观众。假设你校英文校报正通过征稿形式招聘一位记者，请你以应聘者身份写一份英文稿介绍这次盛大活动。
要点提示：
主题 天空之城
时间 10月1—7号，每晚8点，持续15分钟左右
现场情景 上万架无人机飞向天空，在空中慢慢变成不同图案，点亮了整片天空；观众们兴奋的欢呼起来……
个人感受并提出希望 感受：1、…… 2、……
注意：
1.词数为80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）：
2.要点齐全，可适当增加细节；
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
【参考例文】
During this National Day holiday, a series of magnificent drone light shows were held in the theme parks of Shenzhen. This is the unique way in which people in Shenzhen celebrate this festival.
From October 1st to 7th, the shows with the theme of “City in the Sky” started at 8 p.m. and lasted for around 15 minutes. Every night, crowd of people with their families flooded into the parks to enjoy the wonderful shows. As it was getting dark, tens of thousands of drones took to the sky, gradually changed into different patterns and lit up the whole sky. People looked up to the sky and couldn’t help cheering and screaming with excitement. What a visual feast it is! The event is so remarkable that people from every corner of the world were continuously posting their highly praise on the Internet.
As a witness of this grand event, I was really shocked by the extremely high technological level and innovation ability of our country. It made me realize how fortunate I am to be a part of this amazing country and I’m looking forward to more events like that in the future.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
【写作思路】
第一步，介绍无人机灯光秀举办的时间、地点等信息；
第二步，介绍主题和现场的情景；
第三步，表达个人感受，并突出希望。
【高分句型】
①This is the unique way in which people in Shenzhen celebrate this festival.
②What a visual feast it is!
③The event is so remarkable that people from every corner of the world were continuously posting their highly praise on the Internet.
4．你的德国朋友Alex下周就要来深圳，请你写篇文章，向他介绍深圳的自然风光、人文景点、购物中心和饮食文化，可适当发挥。80词左右。
内容提示：
1.很多漂亮的主题公园（theme park)，人们喜欢在这些主题公园里休闲；
2.有漂亮的海滩，很多人喜欢去海里游泳；
3.逛街的地方很多，大家都喜欢来深圳购物；
4.还有很多美味的食物。
【参考例文】
Shenzhen is a beautiful modern city in the south of China. It’s comfortable to live here.
It is called “a garden city” because there are many different kinds of theme parks. People like to relax in these parks. If you want to enjoy the seaside and go swimming in the sea, come to Shenzhen. There are long beautiful beaches and clean water. And Shenzhen has many large shops. Here, you can buy things from all over the world. After shopping, you can enjoy different kinds of delicious food, too. At night, you can go to the Citizen Square to enjoy the electric light show. What a magical night you can have!
Shenzhen is a good place for you to come.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【写作步骤】
第一步，点明主题； 第二步，详细介绍深圳； 第三步，做出总结。
【亮点词汇】
①comfortable舒适的 ②different kinds of不同种类的 ③magical神奇的
【高分句型】
①It is called “a garden city” because there are many different kinds of theme parks.（because引导原因状语从句）
②What a magical night you can have!（感叹句）
5．以“龙岗GO美好”为主题的2023龙岗美好生活节于2023年3月在深圳市龙岗区创新推出。市民群众通过“欣春”“乐夏”“雅秋”“悦冬”四季活动主题，立体式沉浸式地感受到了“龙岗魅力”。假设你是你校英语报的小记者，请你编写一篇新闻报道。
美好生活节目的 鼓励人们寻找生活乐趣，感受四季的美好。
美好生活节部分活动介绍 1. 春和艺术森林Art Forest Festival：在大运公园里欣赏画作，和画家交流，谈论艺术之美； 2. 风尚生活市集Vibe Fair：了解和购买各种各样的产品，特别是可以低价购买“横岗制造”的眼镜。
学生感受 1. 有很多志愿活动；学生也可以成为志愿者，帮助他人； 2. （补充一至两点）
1. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯
参考词汇：美好生活节Merry Life Carnival 横岗制造made in Henggang
【参考例文】
Last month, Merry Life Carnival was held in Longgang. It lasted for a month. It was held to encourage people to find the joy of life and experience the beauty of the four seasons. There were many activities. One of them was Chunhe Art Forest Festival. We appreciated paintings in the Dayun Park, talked with the painters and talked about the beauty of art. Another activity was Vibe Fair. We knew and bought a variety of products, especially glasses made in Henggang could be purchased at a low price. There were many volunteer activities. Students could also become volunteers and help others. Students realized that they could learn a lot from it. This activity also lets them feel the beauty of life and nature.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①encourage鼓励 ②experience体验 ③appreciate欣赏
④a variety of 各种各样的 ⑤purchase购买 ⑥volunteer志愿者
6．深圳的春天是最美丽的季节，你们班上周组织了一次班级春游，请你根据以下提示，以“Walk in spring”为题给校报写一篇文章，介绍此次活动。
地点 东湖公园
天气 风和日丽
景色 鸟语花香，春意盎然
活动 上午：大草坪，放风筝，做游戏
下午 行走绿道，欢歌笑语
捡落叶和落花，做书签
你的感受
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清晰、行文连贯；
4、标点正确，书面整洁。
【参考例文】
Walk in spring
The spring in Shenzhen is the most beautiful season all the year round. Our class organized a spring outing to Donghu Park last week. We gathered at the school gate at 8 o’clock in the morning, and then we took the school bus to get there. That day was sunny, with birds singing and flowers fragrant, and spring was full of vitality. In the morning, we flew kites and played games on the big lawn. We also took some photos. In the afternoon, we walked along the greenway with joy and laughter. We even picked up fallen leaves and flowers and used them as bookmarks. Although we were very tired that day, we were very happy.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据表格内容介绍此次春游活动，可适当增加细节，以使条理清晰、行文连贯。
【写作步骤】
第一步，引出主题，介绍班上上周组织了一次春游活动；
第二步，根据表格具体介绍活动的内容；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
【亮点词汇】
①spring outing春游 ②be full of充满 ③take photos拍照 ④pick up捡起
7.假如你是深圳市某青少年宣讲团的李华，国外友人Peter 对今年第三十一届成都大运会的吉祥物 “蓉宝”很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息提示给 Peter 写一封邮件介绍“蓉宝”。
Name Rong Bao 蓉宝
Appearance 1.“蓉宝”以大熊猫“芝麻”为原型 2.手握大运火炬
Design Background 火炬上有数字31；意味着（至少写一点）... 4.耳朵、眼睛、尾巴看起来像火焰，原因是...(可自由发挥，至少写两点）
要求：1．词数：80 左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
【参考例文】
Dear Peter,
I’m excited to tell you about Rong Bao, the mascot of the Chengdu 2023 World University Games! Rong Bao is a cute panda, designed after the famous panda “Zhima”. It’s holding the Games torch, symbolizing unity and determination among athletes from around the world. The number “31” on the torch shows this as the 31st Games, making it a significant event.
What’s even more special about Rong Bao is that its ears, eyes, and tail all look like flames. This design represents energy and excitement, just like the athletes at the Games. Moreover, in Chinese, flame sounds like the word “popular”, China hopes that we can attract more friends throughout the world.
I hope this gives you a better picture of Rong Bao.
If you have more questions, feel free to ask!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作目的。开头已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌、设计背景”两方面具体展开；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望或者感受。
【亮点词汇】
①design after以……为原型设计 ②sounds like听起来像
【高分句型】
①Rong Bao is a cute panda, designed after the famous panda “Zhima”.
②What’s even more special about Rong Bao is that its ears, eyes, and tail all look like flames.
8．近日，深圳揭牌了公园自然教育联盟，这也意味着环境保护在深圳越来越重要。为了政府更好地开展工作，我们学校也积极响应，团委举办了一次“我和家人保护环境的日常”演讲比赛，请你写一份演讲稿，参加此次活动。演讲稿中包含以下内容：
1.假设你叫Peter，今年12岁，来自深圳；
2.你和家人保护环境的日常措施：
①每天进行垃圾分类；
②每个月一次去公园做志愿者，号召大家保护大自然；
③其他措施；（至少2点）
3.呼吁大家保护环境
作文要求：
（1）须包含提示内容，可以适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整；
（3）不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【参考例文】
Hello everyone! It’s my honour to be here to share with you how my family and I are protecting the environment.
My name is Peter. I’m twelve years old, and I come from Shenzhen. In my daily life, my family and I take actions to protect the environment. First, we do garbage classification every day. We have different bins for different types of waste, such as recyclables, kitchen waste and non-recyclables. Second, we go to the park and participate in voluntary work once a month. There we help to clean up litter and plant trees. In addition, we use public transportation or ride bicycles instead of driving. We also save water at home and turn off lights when leaving the room.
If all of us try our best to protect the environment, we’ll lead a better life. Let’s pull together and take action from now on.
Thank you!
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，介绍自己的基本信息；
第三步，介绍自己和家人日常保护环境的一些措施；
第四步，呼吁大家一起行动起来保护环境。
【亮点词汇】
①take actions 采取行动
②different types of 不同种类的
③such as 例如
④instead of 代替
9．当前, 深圳市各学校正开展“深圳读书月”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合所给信息，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。
倡议书要点：
读书的益处： 2. 发出的倡议：
【参考例文】
My dear friends,
As we know, reading is very important. I’m writing to tell you something about our discussion today. Reading can broaden our horizons. It’s a good way to help you learn knowledge and open your mind. Through reading, you can tell what is right and what is wrong. Reading can also bring us a lot of joy and peace.
It’s necessary for us to read. We should read good books which can help us learn more. Besides, it’s important to form a good habit of reading every day. What’s more, we can go back home and read a good book together with our parents. It’s a good chance for us to improve our knowledge as well as our relationship. After reading, you can try to write down what you think. It’s also helpful for you to improve your writing skills.
Come on and join us in reading!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意条理清晰、逻辑连贯、无语法错误。
【写作步骤】
第一步，谈谈读书的益处；
第二步，向同学们发出读书的倡议。
【亮点词汇】
①broaden one’s horizon 开阔眼界
②as well as 和，以及
③helpful 有帮助的
【高分句型】
①We should read good books which can help us learn more.
②It’s a good chance for us to improve our knowledge as well as our relationship.
10．露营，作为一种亲近自然、培养生活技能的业余活动，已成为今年深圳最流行的周末消遣方式。假如你是某国际学校初一年级某班班长，你的班级将组织同学们去马峦山进行露营活动，请根据以下要点要求，写一篇本次露营的活动计划。
要点：
（1）集合时间地点：本周六上午八点，学校门口；
（2）出行方式：乘坐校车；
（3）活动内容：放风筝、徒步、搭帐篷、……（至少补充一点）
（4）返校时间：本周六晚上七点。
【参考例文】
To get closer to nature and develop life skills, we are going to go camping in Maluan Mountain.We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 this Saturday morning. Then we will go there by school bus. We will fly kites, go hiking and set up tents there for a picnic. What’s more, we will also sing, dance and play games. I am looking forward to going there. We will enjoy ourselves there. We will return to school at seven this Saturday evening. If you are interested in it, please contact us before school on Wednesday. I hope that everyone can join us.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作方向已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，注意表述清晰，逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
【写作步骤】
第一步，写出参加露营活动的目的；
第二步，告知集合时间，返回时间，出行方式以及活动内容；
第三步，表达想要大家都参加的愿望。
【亮点词汇】
①what’s more并且，还 ②look forwad to doing sth.期望做某事 ③return to返回
【高分句型】
①I am looking forward to going there.
② If you are interested in it, please contact us before school on Wednesday.
11．为了落实国家“双减”政策，控制中小学生的书面作业总量，优化作业设计，深圳市教科院正在对中学生英语作业进行调查。请你根据下面提示写一篇英语短文。
写作要点： 1. 你做过的最有创意的一次作业，包括作业形式和内容。
2. 你的收获。
3. 对英语作业布置的建议（至少两条）。
参考作业类型：
要求： 1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【参考例文】
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my writing skills but also provided a good chance to spread traditional Chinese culture.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develops.
I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据所给提示内容介绍进行写作，注意不要遗漏要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，自己做过的最有创意的一次作业，包括作业形式和内容，及其收获。
第二步，提出对英语作业布置的建议。
第三步，表达希望。
【亮点词汇】
①write a letter to sb.给某人写信
②a good chance to do做某事的好机会
③as well as也
【高分句型】
①We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter.
②I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.
12．2023年深圳公园文化节（Park Culture Season of Shenzhen）期间，深圳市各大公园举办了各种文化活动，例如音乐节，露天电影，花展，书展等。你参加了哪项活动？请你根据以下提示和所给标题，写一则活动评论。
要点：
1. 你参加了哪项/些活动（不超过2项）；
2. 活动的内容；
3. 谈谈你的感受和想法。
【参考例文】
Park Culture Season of Shenzhen is a yearly event
During the season, different kinds of events were held in the parks around the city. This year, I went to quite a few events, such as Music Festival at the beach and the Book Fair.
At the Music Festival, I enjoyed many pieces of pop music and traditional music and I also made some friends with the same interests. This is a really enjoyable experience for me. At the Book Fair, different types of books are displayed and sold, which is a wonderful activity for book lovers. I bought one of my favorite books and I had a good time there.
Thanks to all people’s hard work, Shenzhen has developed very fast in recent years. I feel proud of my city. I will work hard and try to play a role in building a better city in the future.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
【写作步骤】
第一步，引出话题，讲述自己参加了不少活动；
第二步，介绍参加音乐节、书展的内容；
第三步，谈谈你的感受和想法。
【亮点词汇】
①quite a few相当多
②make friends with sb与某人交朋友
③have a good time玩得开心
④Thanks to多亏
⑤play a role in doing sth在做某事中发挥作用
13．2023年春节期间，深圳宝安区举办了首届“民族美食嘉年华”活动，将民族美食融入新春文化。假如你是李华，你在春节期间参加了这次美食嘉年华。请根据以下提示，给你的外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。
要点：
1. 时间地点：2023年1月15日，宝安万达广场
2. 内容：
①品尝不同民族的美食；②欣赏少数民族舞蹈表演；③……（请自行补充两点内容）
3. 你的感受：……（请自行补充两点感受）
要求：
1. 80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：
美食嘉年华Food Carnival
少数民族ethnic minority
万达广场Wanda Plaza
【参考例文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
During the Spring Festival, we held a Food Carnival in Shenzhen. It was wonderful and I would like to tell you some details about it.
The Food Carnival was held at Wanda Plaza in Baoan, on January 15, 2023. People celebrated the Spring Festival by enjoying delicious food. Firstly, we tasted different ethnic food from all over the country, such as Tibetan food and drinks and Miao food. Then, we enjoyed a dance show from Ethnic minorities. The dancers wore beautiful clothes. The performance was so fantastic that it attracts many audiences. Also, there was a DIY activity which we could join in and make handicrafts by ourselves. What’s more, there were many lanterns and people could try to solve the puzzles on the lanterns.
The carnival was really interesting and unforgettable. We can experience colorful Chinese culture in a different way. I hope you can attend the Food Carnival next year.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点提示介绍活动的时间、地点，以及活动的具体内容，需要自行补充至少两个活动内容，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发此活动带来的感受并书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①from all over the country来自全国各地
②solve the puzzles on the lanterns猜灯谜
【高分句型】
①The performance was so fantastic that it attracts many audiences.
②Also, there was a DIY activity which we could join in and make handicrafts by ourselves.
14．深圳正成为一座体育之城，健身文化浓厚。为增强学生们的锻炼意识，你所在的学校将举行“奥运冠军进校园”（Olympic Champions Entering Campus）活动。假定你是校英文报的编辑李华，请你代表校学生会写一则通知发布在校英文报上，预告此次活动。
要点：
1.时间地点：下周五下午，学校田径场；
2.活动内容：①冠军成长故事分享；②冠军体育课；
3.注意事项：①穿运动装；②……
提示词：
track-and-field ground田径场 sportswear运动装
要求：
1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
【参考例文】
Notice
Shenzhen is becoming a sports city with a strong fitness culture. To enhance the students’ awareness of exercise, our school plans to organize an activity, Olympic Champions Entering Campus. Here are some details.
The activity is scheduled to be held next Friday afternoon on our school track-and-field ground, where three excellent athletes will share their inspiring growth stories, giving students some useful suggestions on how to deal with stress from daily life and study. What will be the most impressive and exciting part is the P. E lessons specially designed by the champions, which is a perfect opportunity for us students to have a close interaction with them.
For convenience and comfort, please make sure to wear sportswear. Besides, it is highly expected that we all interact with the champions actively to show our warmest welcome and respect.
The Students’ Union
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇通知；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，同时注意适当补充和发挥注意事项，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意语法正确。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图，以“这是一些细节”来引出后文；
第二步，具体介绍活动的时间和地点，并介绍活动内容，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性；
第三步，介绍并补充注意事项。
【亮点词汇】
①deal with处理
②a perfect opportunity一个完美的机会
【高分句型】
The activity is scheduled to be held next Friday afternoon on our school track-and-field ground.
15．因新冠病毒肺炎疫情，深圳市开展学生线上学习。线上学习有什么利弊呢？请你写一篇短文，谈谈线上学习的好处和存在的问题，以及你是否喜欢线上学习及原因。
内容包括：
1.线上学习的好处，比如：学习资源丰富，培养自主学习和自我管理的能力等；
2.线上学习的问题，比如：网络不稳定错过上课内容，长时间对着电脑有害眼睛等；
3.你是否喜欢线上学习及其原因。
要求：
1.80 词以上，开头不计入字数；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
3.文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。
【参考例文】
Because of the outbreak of COVID-19, students in Shenzhen have been studying online. I think studying online has two sides.
First, there are rich learning resources on the Internet to help with our study. We are able to improve our abilities to learn independently and manage ourselves by studying online. But at the same time, sometimes the network is unstable, students may miss what teachers have taught. What’s more, sitting in front of the computer or the mobile phone for a long time is very bad for our eyes and health.
I don’t like studying online because I prefer having a face to face communication with teachers and classmates. But when we have to studying online, we should be strict with ourselves so that we can go on getting good grades.
【总体分析】
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中“你是否喜欢线上学习及其原因”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山阐明观点：网上学习有利有弊；
第二步，具体阐述网上学习的利弊；
第三步，书写结语，表明自己的观点。
【亮点词汇】
①learning resources学习资源 ②be able to能够 ③what’s more而且 ④be bad for对……不好
【高分句型】
①there are rich learning resources on the Internet to help with our study.
②students may miss what teachers have taught.
16．来自英国的David是深圳市某中学的国际生，计划今年参加中考，考取深圳的高中。最近，David由于一次考试成绩不佳，压力倍增。假如你是Alice，David是你的笔友，请你根据以下表格内容，给David写一封邮件鼓励他，并给他提出恰当的建议。
表达鼓励 1.作为国际生，备战中考不易 2.不要因为一次考试失利就失去信心
提出建议 1.坚持学习，永不言弃 2.平衡学习和娱乐 3.……
要求：
1.包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；
2.条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词语：senior high school entrance examination 中考
【参考例文】
Dear David,
I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling stressed after you failed in the last exam. In fact, you were doing quite well in it. For an international student, it is really not easy to prepare for the senior high school entrance examinations. And don’t lose heart just because of the only one failure in the exams. So, you must cheer up first.
In order to keep a better state of mind before taking the exams, here are some tips for you. First, you’d better keep on studying and never give up. What’s more, you should find the balance between study and entertainment. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Last but not least, believe in yourself and keep trying even if you fail.
I’m sure you will succeed in your exams and make your dream come true in the end.
Sincerely,
Alice
【题干解读】本文属于电子邮件写作。根据题目要求，针对David要备战中考的事情，给David写一封邮件，一是给他鼓励，二是给他建议。
【写作指导】本文主要采用第一人称来写，时态采用一般现在时为主。写作时承接开头，先对David的考试失利后的失落心情表示安慰，接着再按提示要点内容对其进行鼓励，然后根据提示给David的备考提出至少三个建议，最后表达祝愿并结尾。
17．假设你是深圳市第一中学的初二学生Simon，你在报纸上了解到深圳市第一届传统文化嘉年华(the First Traditional Culture Carnival) 现正在招募50名志愿者，你对此很感兴趣，你决定递交一封80词左右的自我推荐信。内容包括一下要点：
1.你英语口语不错，曾在体育中心做过志愿者，为外国人引路。
2.能用手势等肢体语言为残疾人提供一些基本的帮助。
3.你热衷于中国传统文化，在学校是皮影戏俱乐部(Shadow Puppet Club) 的成员。
4.你对志愿者工作的看法或你对中国传统文化的期望。
要求：1.文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；
2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书面规范。
【参考例文】
Dear sir,
My name is Simon, a Junior 2 student in No. 1 Middle School, Shenzhen. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.
My spoken English is quite good. I used to be a volunteer in the sports center, guiding foreigners. I can provide basic help with gestures and other body language. I am keen on traditional Chinese culture. I am a member of the shadow Play club in school. I like volunteer work very much and hope to contribute to the activities. I also hope more and more people can understand Chinese traditional culture.
Yours sincerely,
Simon
【题干解读】本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写一封申请做志愿者的信，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
【写作指导】写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为两段，第一段引出话题，表明自己想成为一名志愿者；第二段介绍个人信息，自己做志愿者的经历和优势以及自己对志愿者工作和中国文化的看法。