2025年浙江省中考英语二轮复习课件：书写表达 主题六经历与感受(共21张PPT)

(共21张PPT)
主题六　经历与感受
一、教材链接
八年级下Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came Section A 3a、Section B 1b; Self-check
九年级Unit 1 How can we become good learners Section A 3a
九年级Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.Section A 3a、Section B
九年级Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.Section B 2b
九年级Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.
二、课内描写感受好句回顾
1.When I heard my name,my heart was beating so quickly that I thought I would stop breathing.
2.My parents were completely shocked! My parents did not talk after that,and we finished the rest of our dinner in silence.
3.I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that.
4.Peter kept his eyes on the ground.He felt like there was a heavy weight on his shoulders as he walked home alone.
5.His mind couldn’t stop thinking about what happened only just one hour ago on the school soccer field.
6.Peter’s feelings were written all over his face.
7.“What bad luck!” I thought to myself.
三、 话题语料库
经历类写作素材
学习类 1.fail the exam 　2. _______　3. _______
比赛类 1.join a singing/dancing/drawing/basketball/speech/… competition
2.miss scoring the goal /lose the game
3. ___________________________________
人际交往 1. _______　　2.make friends with …
助人为乐 1.help a girl who…　　2. _______
其他 1.leave … at home　2.miss the bus　3.learn to do the chores
写作过程框架性语言
考点1What happened
开头:1.When I was in the seventh/… grade,I …
2.One day,…/Last year/summer vacation/…
3.I still remember it as if (仿佛) it happened yesterday …
连接词
表达事情发生先后顺序:At first,… Then,… After that,… In the end/At last/Finally,…
表达情绪的连接词:To my surprise/relief/disappointment/great joy,… Unluckily/Luckily,…
表达突然变化的连接词:Suddenly/All of a sudden,…
考点2How did it make you feel
注意:在表达情绪时,可使用不同情感词汇,并佐以细节描写(动作、
心理、环境等)
情绪词、 不同表达 细节描写(动作、心理等)
激动的 惊喜的 surprised/amazed/ excited stare at … in surprise/in disbelief 1.Hearing the news/result,I jumped up and down with excitement.
2.I couldn’t believe my eyes/ears when I…
开心的 快乐的 happy/pleased/delighted/joyful burst into laughter My eyes lighted up with happiness.
情绪词 不同表达 细节描写(动作、心理等)
悲伤的 沮丧的 sad/down/upset frustrated/depressed heart-broken burst into tears 1.I kept my eyes on the ground.
2.I couldn’t help crying when I knew the result.
3.I didn’t talk after that,and I finished the rest of my dinner in silence.
生气的 mad/annoyed/angry I was so angry that I was speechless.
情绪词 不同表达 细节描写(动作、心理等)
紧张的 nervous walk back and forth have/get butterflies in my stomach When I heard my name,my heart was beating so quickly that I thought I would stop breathing.
As I was waiting for the result,I got butterflies in my stomach.
I was sweating(v.流汗) all over when…
考点3What did you learn from the experience
挫折类:
1.All the hard work will pay off.
2.The harder you work,the better grades you will get.
3.Nothing is impossible if we stick to our dreams.
4.No pain,no gain.
5.Life is full of ups and downs.No matter what happens,be ready to face it with courage and never give up!
6.Winning or losing is only half the games.The other half is learning from your mistakes.
家庭/家务类:
1.I understand that we need to share the housework to have a clean and comfortable home.
2.The earlier kids learn to be independent,the better it is for their future.
3.Everyone should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy.
4.It’s not enough to just get good grades at school.
5.Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.
友谊类:
1.Friends are like books—you don’t need a lot of them as long as they are good.
2.A true friend reaches for you hand and touches your heart.
3.A friend in need is a friend indeed.
助人为乐:
1.No matter how big or how small it is,an act of kindness shows that someone cares.And the results can be everlasting (持久的).
2.From the experience I’ve learned that a simple act of kindness can bring great joy.
3.Together,individuals(个人) can make a big difference.
例　(2023·金华)假如你叫李华,你的英国朋友Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路,柳岸花明又一村”(For every cloud,there is a silver lining),来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息,并结合自身例子给他回一封e-mail,谈谈你的理解。
内容要点 写作参考
About the sentence Written by Lu You
In English:For every cloud,there is a silver lining.
Your example Any difficult situation that you experienced,and how did you get out
Your understanding Never give up,find a way out,…
注意:1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;写作参考供选择使用;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80~100;
4.正文首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
参考答案
Dear Alex, Glad to hear from you.It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence.①It’s written by Lu You and similar to “For every cloud,there’s a silver lining” in English. You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties.My example may help you better understand it. Once,I entered our school’s photo competition but couldn’t find a proper subject.②I felt worried and hopeless.One day,my friend May gave me a big smile.Suddenly,I was hit and touched,feeling something bright. An idea came to me that I could bring the warmth to others through photos.After many tries,I took the subject—A Warm Hug.Finally,I got the prize. I hope my reply will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 【精彩旁批】
①对于外国人不理解的句子,作者指出其是陆游所写,并与英文谚语 “For every cloud,there’s a silver lining” 进行类比,有助于收信人更好地理解其含义,同时也促进了文化交流。
②个人经历部分感受描写较为细腻,如:从一开始“I felt worried and hopeless” 到“Suddenly,I was hit and touched,feeling something bright.” 生动地展现了朋友的微笑给自己带来的触动,让读者能更好地感受到主人公心理变化的过程。
【牛刀小试】
　　每一次经历都是学习的体验, 成长的的积淀。近期你校英语社团将举办以“在学习中成长”为主题的征文活动。请以“To Learn,To Grow”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括:
(1)介绍你在文化、艺术、体育等方面的一次活动经历;
(2)谈谈你的感受。
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
(2)词数 90~110;
(3)可适当发挥,以使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:activity,pleasure,improve,valuable
To Learn,To Grow
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Every experience is a learning experience,and we can always
learn something valuable from it.
Last term,there was an English speech contest in my school.
I decided to take part in it,because I thought I was good at speaking
English and I had some experience in giving speeches.I was sure
I could win the contest easily,so I spent little time practicing.Did I
win Of course not.The winner was Jim,one of my classmates,who
had practiced after school every day.
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“Practice makes perfect”,as the saying goes.No one can succeed
without hard work.This is what I learned from my failure.If there’s
another chance,I’ll take it seriously and do my best.