2025年中考英语二轮复习课件满分作文专训之活动类(共20张PPT)

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作文专训
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为什么作文拿不到高分？
为什么作文不知道该表达些什么？
为什么作文不精彩？
为什么想写的表达不出来？
朋友，你可曾有过这些困惑？
CONTENTS
目录
写作思路
Review of work content
真题演练
Existing problem reflection
写作内容
2
Work performance display
自我精修
4
Work plan of Next stage
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Review of work content
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写作思路之活动类
PART.01
类型分析
关于活动的写作类型大同小异，不同的类型要针对题目的要求进行重点的调整。
50%
40%
10%
报道篇
举办了一个活动，让你写一篇新闻报道
写信式
向你的朋友介绍活动邀请他来参加，或是向他分享这个活动。
筹办式
该活动尚未举行，要你写出筹备活动的细节或是写一片文章张贴来引流。
Work performance display
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写作思路
PART.02
【2024·济南卷】假如你是李华，你校和希望中学（Hope Middle School）是友好学校，上周五你校和希望中学英语社团在希望学校举行了英语戏剧表演。请你以“An English Textbook Drama Show”写一篇新闻稿，不少于100词。
写作要求：
1.时间、地点参会人员
2.简要介绍过程
3.活动意义
参考词汇：
友好学校：sister school；英语戏剧表演：an English textbook drama show
写什么？怎么写？
开头
1.一句话带过活动目的，这句话要精彩。
2.说出时间地点等关键信息。
正文
1.详写活动内容
2.一两句话写出活动意义
结尾
可以抒发情感，也可以写意义。
提示
如果是有特定的要求，要在结尾发出邀请等等。
开头表目的：为了提高我们对学习的兴趣
1.in order to improve learning interest
2. aiming to improve learning interest
3. with the purpose/aim of improving learning interest
4. in an attempt to improve learning interest
aim n.目标，目的，v.致力于
purpose n.目的，意图；v.有意，打算
attempt n.企图，努力；v.努力，尝试
5. in order that+句子
典例应用
为了促进两校之间的友谊和提高英语学习能力，我们在下周一举办了一场英语戏剧表演。
在哪一天
1.fall on 正逢，恰值
fall on next Monday 在下周一-
举办
hold an activity
launch an activity
organize an activity组织活动
参加
take apart in
participate in
get involved in
attend
In order to promote the friendship between the two schools and improve the ability of English learning,we will hold an English textbook drama show on next Monday.
连接词
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02
03
04
首先
firstly；to begin with
at first,at the beginning;
first of all
然后，除此之外
moreover；in addition；
what's more；besides
additionally;
at the same time
in the meanwhile
最后
finally；lastly
the last but not least
总结
to sum up；in a word；
in general；
generally;
generally speaking
表因果，因此：therefore，hence（必须加逗号）
表转折，however （必须加逗号）
表举例，for example/instance（必须加逗号）
表观点，在我看来：in my view/opinion（必须加逗号）
表示导致，由于：due to/thanks to/because of+名词
表引用，根据……according to；基于……based on
活动介绍
活动形式
social practice社会实践
speech 演讲
lecture讲座
voluntary work义务劳动
sports meeting运动会
活动形式
graduation ceremony
毕业典礼
afterschool activities
课外活动
contest/competition比赛
参与者
participant
n.参加者
compititor
n.竞争者
活动
activity
event
theme
title
意义表达
促进；提升
promote；improve；develop
improve the ability of……
促进……的能力
should：be expected/supposed to
speak highly of 被高度评价
highlight 高光时刻，精彩时刻
影响
have a better understanding of……对……有更好的理解
set an example for为……树立了榜样
make a difference有影响
cultivate /raise/arouse the awareness of
被动句式
It’s said that 据说
It’s reported that据报道
It’s believed that人们相信
It’s known that众所周知
As is known /as we all know;
Existing problem reflection
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真题演练
PART.03
真题演练
·这个活动恰逢上周五在学校大厅。
The activity fell on last Friday in the shool hall.
·这场戏剧表演被分为三个部分。
The drama show was divided into three parts .
·起初，我们学校的学生表演“愚公移山”的故事
To begin with,the students from our school performed the story”Yugong Moves the Mountains”
·此外，希望学校的学生表演猴王的故事，猴王是中国最受欢迎的故事之一。
In addition,the students from Hope Middle School played “The Monkey King”,which is one of the most popular stories in China.
真题演练
·所有的演员都有一个精彩的表演
All the players gave a wonderful performance.
·最后，活动的高光时刻是我们一起唱了歌。
Finally,the highlight of this activity was that we sang some English songs together.
·这次活动获得了全体师生的高度评价，因为它不仅促进了两校的友谊，，也唤醒了我们对英语的兴趣。
The event was spoken highly of by all the teachers and students,because it not only promoted the friendship between the two schools,but also aroused the interest of learning English.
Work plan of Next stage
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精修
PART.04
作文精修
精修版
In order to promote the friendship between the two schools and improve the ability of English learning,we held an English textbook drama show.
The activity fell on last Friday in the shool hall.The drama show was divided into three parts/sections . To begin with,the students from our school performed the story”Yugong Moves the Mountains”.In addition,the students from Hope Middle School played “The Monkey King”,which is one of the most popular stories in China.All the players gave a wonderful performance.Finally,the highlight of this activity was that we sang English songs together.
The event was spoken highly of by all the teachers and students,because it not only promoted the friendship between the two schools,but also aroused the interest of learning English.
谢谢
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