应用文写作--关于 “亲情” 摄影展的投稿信 讲义-重庆缙云教育联盟2025届高考高三上学期第零次诊断性质量检测英语试题
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应用文写作
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你所在的学校即将举行主题为“亲情”的摄影展， 邀请同学们提交一张自己拍摄的照片参展。请你写一封投稿信件给组委会，内容须包括：(1)描述该照片背后的亲情故事;(2)你选择该照片参展的理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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写作提纲
一、开头段
表明身份与目的：简单介绍自己是明启中学高三学生李华，提及学校即将举办的 “亲情” 摄影展，表明写信是为了投稿，并简要引出照片背后的亲情故事。
示例：Dear Photo Exhibition Committee, I am Li Hua, a student from Mingqi Middle School. I am writing to submit my photograph for the upcoming "Family Affection" photo exhibition. This photo holds a special place in my heart as it encapsulates a beautiful moment of love and care within my family.
二、中间段
描述照片背后的故事：详细讲述照片拍摄的时间、地点、人物以及当时发生的具体事情，突出亲情元素。
阐述参展理由：说明该照片如何体现亲情主题，如通过人物的表情、动作或场景的氛围等，强调照片的独特性和感染力，解释为什么选择它来参展。
示例：The photo was taken on a rainy evening last winter. My younger sister had fallen ill and was feeling very weak. I noticed her discomfort and immediately went to the kitchen to make her a cup of warm ginger tea. As I carefully carried the steaming cup to her bedside, my mother snapped this photo. In the picture, you can see the concern on my face and the gratitude in my sister's eyes. I believe this photo is a perfect representation of the selfless love and care that exists within a family. It shows how, in times of need, we are always there for each other, offering comfort and support. The simple act of making tea might seem ordinary, but it is filled with the warmth of family affection.
三、结尾段
表达期待与感谢：表达对自己作品参展的期待，并感谢组委会提供这样一个展示亲情的平台。
示例：I sincerely hope that my photo will be selected for the exhibition, allowing others to also feel the power of family love through this image. Thank you for considering my submission and for organizing this meaningful event.
语言积累
This photograph freezes a heartwarming moment of our family gathering, where laughter and love filled the air.（这张照片定格了我们家庭聚会的温馨时刻，空气中洋溢着欢笑和爱。）
The image captures the essence of the unbreakable bond between me and my parents, as we stand side by side facing life's challenges.（这张照片捕捉到了我和父母之间坚不可摧的纽带的精髓，我们并肩站在一起面对生活的挑战。）
In this photo, the tender expression on my grandmother's face as she tells us old stories is a vivid portrayal of the love and wisdom passed down through generations.（在这张照片中，祖母给我们讲老故事时脸上温柔的表情生动地描绘了代代相传的爱和智慧。）
The picture showcases the silent but powerful support of my family during my difficult times, with their presence being my greatest source of strength.（这张照片展示了在我困难时期家人默默但有力的支持，他们的陪伴是我最大的力量源泉。）
This snapshot reflects the small yet significant acts of kindness that make our family life so rich and meaningful.（这张快照反映了那些虽小但意义重大的善举，使我们的家庭生活如此丰富和有意义。）
The photo is a testament to the unconditional love that flows within our family, regardless of the circumstances.（这张照片证明了无论在何种情况下，我们家庭中流淌的无条件的爱。）
It beautifully illustrates how our family members are always there to catch us when we fall, both literally and metaphorically.（它完美地说明了当我们跌倒时，无论是字面意义还是比喻意义上，我们的家人总是在那里扶持我们。）
This image encapsulates the precious memories we create together as a family, memories that will be cherished for a lifetime.（这张照片浓缩了我们作为一个家庭共同创造的珍贵回忆，这些回忆将被珍藏一生。）
The photograph vividly displays the unique connection and understanding that exists only among family members.（这张照片生动地展示了只存在于家庭成员之间的独特联系和理解。）
With this photo, I hope to convey the message that family affection is the most precious gift we can ever receive and should always be treasured.（通过这张照片，我希望传达这样一个信息：亲情是我们所能得到的最珍贵的礼物，应该永远珍惜。）
写作示范
第一篇
Dear Committee Members,
I am Li Hua, a senior at Mingqi Middle School. The photo I'm sharing was taken during a family dinner on my grandfather's birthday. As we all sat around the table, my grandfather, with a big smile on his face, was about to cut the cake. My parents and I were looking at him with love and respect. At that moment, my cousin snapped the photo.
I choose this photo because it shows the unity and love within our family. The warm smiles and the joyous atmosphere are palpable. It represents the simple yet profound happiness that comes from being together with our loved ones, celebrating the important moments of life. This is what family affection means to me, and I believe it will resonate with others.
Thank you for your consideration.
Best regards,
Li Hua
第二篇
Dear Photo Exhibition Committee,
I'm Li Hua, a student in grade three of Mingqi Middle School. The photograph I'm submitting was captured during a trip to the beach with my family. I was trying to build a sandcastle, but the waves kept knocking it down. My father noticed my frustration and came to help. He held my hand and showed me how to make a stronger foundation. My mother took the photo just as we were laughing together.
I selected this picture for the exhibition because it embodies the spirit of family support. It shows how my father was there to guide me through a small setback, and our shared laughter represents the love and happiness that fills our family. I hope it can convey the beauty of family affection to all who see it.
Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三篇
Dear Committee,
I am Li Hua, from Mingqi Middle School. The photo I offer was taken on a snowy day. I had caught a cold and was feeling unwell. My sister, who is usually quite playful, became very gentle and caring. She wrapped a warm blanket around me and made me a hot bowl of soup. As she was feeding me the soup, my father took this photo.
I picked this photo as it exemplifies the deep care and love that siblings have for each other. The tenderness in my sister's actions and the concern on her face are a true display of family affection. It is a moment that I will always cherish, and I want to share this beautiful instance of love with everyone through the exhibition.
Thank you for giving me this opportunity.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Photo Exhibition Committee,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student at Mingqi Middle School. The photo I'm submitting was taken during a family hike. My father, who has a bad knee, was struggling on the uphill path. Without hesitation, I offered my shoulder for him to lean on. At that moment, my mother captured this scene.
I choose this photo because it vividly portrays the mutual care and support within a family. It's a simple yet powerful display of how love is expressed in our daily lives, which I believe perfectly embodies the theme of "family affection".
Thank you!
Best regards,
Li Hua
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你所在的学校即将举行主题为“亲情”的摄影展， 邀请同学们提交一张自己拍摄的照片参展。请你写一封投稿信件给组委会，内容须包括：(1)描述该照片背后的亲情故事;(2)你选择该照片参展的理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作提纲
一、开头段
表明身份与目的：简单介绍自己是明启中学高三学生李华，提及学校即将举办的 “亲情” 摄影展，表明写信是为了投稿，并简要引出照片背后的亲情故事。
示例：Dear Photo Exhibition Committee, I am Li Hua, a student from Mingqi Middle School. I am writing to submit my photograph for the upcoming "Family Affection" photo exhibition. This photo holds a special place in my heart as it encapsulates a beautiful moment of love and care within my family.
二、中间段
描述照片背后的故事：详细讲述照片拍摄的时间、地点、人物以及当时发生的具体事情，突出亲情元素。
阐述参展理由：说明该照片如何体现亲情主题，如通过人物的表情、动作或场景的氛围等，强调照片的独特性和感染力，解释为什么选择它来参展。
示例：The photo was taken on a rainy evening last winter. My younger sister had fallen ill and was feeling very weak. I noticed her discomfort and immediately went to the kitchen to make her a cup of warm ginger tea. As I carefully carried the steaming cup to her bedside, my mother snapped this photo. In the picture, you can see the concern on my face and the gratitude in my sister's eyes. I believe this photo is a perfect representation of the selfless love and care that exists within a family. It shows how, in times of need, we are always there for each other, offering comfort and support. The simple act of making tea might seem ordinary, but it is filled with the warmth of family affection.
三、结尾段
表达期待与感谢：表达对自己作品参展的期待，并感谢组委会提供这样一个展示亲情的平台。
示例：I sincerely hope that my photo will be selected for the exhibition, allowing others to also feel the power of family love through this image. Thank you for considering my submission and for organizing this meaningful event.
语言积累
This photograph freezes a heartwarming moment of our family gathering, where laughter and love filled the air.（这张照片定格了我们家庭聚会的温馨时刻，空气中洋溢着欢笑和爱。）
The image captures the essence of the unbreakable bond between me and my parents, as we stand side by side facing life's challenges.（这张照片捕捉到了我和父母之间坚不可摧的纽带的精髓，我们并肩站在一起面对生活的挑战。）
In this photo, the tender expression on my grandmother's face as she tells us old stories is a vivid portrayal of the love and wisdom passed down through generations.（在这张照片中，祖母给我们讲老故事时脸上温柔的表情生动地描绘了代代相传的爱和智慧。）
The picture showcases the silent but powerful support of my family during my difficult times, with their presence being my greatest source of strength.（这张照片展示了在我困难时期家人默默但有力的支持，他们的陪伴是我最大的力量源泉。）
This snapshot reflects the small yet significant acts of kindness that make our family life so rich and meaningful.（这张快照反映了那些虽小但意义重大的善举，使我们的家庭生活如此丰富和有意义。）
The photo is a testament to the unconditional love that flows within our family, regardless of the circumstances.（这张照片证明了无论在何种情况下，我们家庭中流淌的无条件的爱。）
It beautifully illustrates how our family members are always there to catch us when we fall, both literally and metaphorically.（它完美地说明了当我们跌倒时，无论是字面意义还是比喻意义上，我们的家人总是在那里扶持我们。）
This image encapsulates the precious memories we create together as a family, memories that will be cherished for a lifetime.（这张照片浓缩了我们作为一个家庭共同创造的珍贵回忆，这些回忆将被珍藏一生。）
The photograph vividly displays the unique connection and understanding that exists only among family members.（这张照片生动地展示了只存在于家庭成员之间的独特联系和理解。）
With this photo, I hope to convey the message that family affection is the most precious gift we can ever receive and should always be treasured.（通过这张照片，我希望传达这样一个信息：亲情是我们所能得到的最珍贵的礼物，应该永远珍惜。）
写作示范
第一篇
Dear Committee Members,
I am Li Hua, a senior at Mingqi Middle School. The photo I'm sharing was taken during a family dinner on my grandfather's birthday. As we all sat around the table, my grandfather, with a big smile on his face, was about to cut the cake. My parents and I were looking at him with love and respect. At that moment, my cousin snapped the photo.
I choose this photo because it shows the unity and love within our family. The warm smiles and the joyous atmosphere are palpable. It represents the simple yet profound happiness that comes from being together with our loved ones, celebrating the important moments of life. This is what family affection means to me, and I believe it will resonate with others.
Thank you for your consideration.
Best regards,
Li Hua
第二篇
Dear Photo Exhibition Committee,
I'm Li Hua, a student in grade three of Mingqi Middle School. The photograph I'm submitting was captured during a trip to the beach with my family. I was trying to build a sandcastle, but the waves kept knocking it down. My father noticed my frustration and came to help. He held my hand and showed me how to make a stronger foundation. My mother took the photo just as we were laughing together.
I selected this picture for the exhibition because it embodies the spirit of family support. It shows how my father was there to guide me through a small setback, and our shared laughter represents the love and happiness that fills our family. I hope it can convey the beauty of family affection to all who see it.
Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三篇
Dear Committee,
I am Li Hua, from Mingqi Middle School. The photo I offer was taken on a snowy day. I had caught a cold and was feeling unwell. My sister, who is usually quite playful, became very gentle and caring. She wrapped a warm blanket around me and made me a hot bowl of soup. As she was feeding me the soup, my father took this photo.
I picked this photo as it exemplifies the deep care and love that siblings have for each other. The tenderness in my sister's actions and the concern on her face are a true display of family affection. It is a moment that I will always cherish, and I want to share this beautiful instance of love with everyone through the exhibition.
Thank you for giving me this opportunity.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Photo Exhibition Committee,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student at Mingqi Middle School. The photo I'm submitting was taken during a family hike. My father, who has a bad knee, was struggling on the uphill path. Without hesitation, I offered my shoulder for him to lean on. At that moment, my mother captured this scene.
I choose this photo because it vividly portrays the mutual care and support within a family. It's a simple yet powerful display of how love is expressed in our daily lives, which I believe perfectly embodies the theme of "family affection".
Thank you!
Best regards,
Li Hua