应用文写作--关于 “用英语讲好中国故事” 演讲比赛的回信 讲义-辽宁名校联盟2025届高三上学期12月联考英语试题（考后强化版）
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应用文写作
假如你是李华，在你校举办的“用英语讲好中国故事”(Chinese Stories Retold in English)演讲比赛中，你获得了一等奖。你的英国笔友Tom发来邮件向你表示祝贺并想了解你讲的故事，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 感谢关注;
2. 故事概况;
3. 参加活动的感受。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
一、开头段
表达感谢与问候：首先对 Tom 的祝贺表示诚挚的感谢，简单询问对方近况，引出下文关于比赛故事的分享，体现礼貌和友好。
示例：Dear Tom, I hope this email finds you in good health. I am truly grateful for your warm congratulations. It means a lot to me. How have you been lately Well, I'm excited to tell you about the story I shared in the "Chinese Stories Retold in English" speech contest.
二、中间段
讲述故事概况：详细介绍所讲中国故事的背景、主要情节和核心人物，突出故事的独特魅力和文化价值，让 Tom 对该故事有清晰的了解，可适当引用故事中的经典语句或场景描述，增强故事的吸引力。
分享活动感受：阐述参加此次演讲比赛的收获和体会，如英语能力的提升、对中国文化的新认识、个人自信心的增强等，表达这次活动对自己的重要意义和积极影响，同时也可提及在准备过程中遇到的困难以及如何克服它们。
示例：The story I chose was about the Legend of the White Snake. It is a well-known Chinese folktale that tells the love story between a white snake spirit, Bai Suzhen, and a human, Xu Xian. Bai Suzhen, who had been cultivating for thousands of years, transformed into a beautiful woman and fell in love with Xu Xian. However, their love was opposed by Fa Hai, a monk. Despite the many obstacles and hardships they faced, their love remained steadfast. In my speech, I vividly described the touching scenes of their encounter, the trials they endured, and the unwavering love that bound them together.
Regarding the activity, it was an eye-opening and rewarding experience. Firstly, it significantly enhanced my English speaking skills. I had to search for the most accurate and vivid English words and expressions to retell this ancient Chinese story, which broadened my English vocabulary and improved my fluency. Secondly, it deepened my understanding and appreciation of Chinese culture. Through preparing for the speech, I delved into the details and cultural connotations of the story, realizing the richness and profundity of our traditional tales. Moreover, it boosted my confidence. Standing on the stage and sharing this story with the audience, I overcame my initial stage fright and learned to express myself bravely. Although I encountered some difficulties in pronunciation and intonation at the beginning, with continuous practice and the help of my teacher and friends, I was able to make great progress.
三、结尾段
期待回复与交流：再次表达对 Tom 的感谢，期待他的回信，并表示希望与他继续分享更多关于中国文化和自己生活的故事，保持友好的交流氛围，加强彼此之间的联系。
示例：Thank you again for your interest and support. I look forward to hearing from you and sharing more stories and experiences with you. Have a great day!
语言积累
I am deeply honored to have received your congratulations, and I'm more than willing to share the details of the story with you.（收到你的祝贺我深感荣幸，并且非常愿意与你分享这个故事的细节。）
The story I presented was steeped in Chinese history and culture, carrying profound moral lessons and values.（我讲述的故事沉浸在中国的历史和文化中，蕴含着深刻的道德教训和价值观。）
By retelling this Chinese story in English, I aimed to bridge the cultural gap and introduce the unique charm of Chinese culture to a wider audience.（通过用英语复述这个中国故事，我的目标是弥合文化差距，向更广泛的受众介绍中国文化的独特魅力。）
Participating in this activity was like embarking on a journey of self-discovery and cultural exploration, which broadened my horizons in numerous ways.（参加这次活动就像是踏上了一次自我发现和文化探索的旅程，在许多方面拓宽了我的视野。）
The process of preparing for the speech was not without challenges, but it was precisely these difficulties that spurred me on to strive for excellence.（准备演讲的过程并非没有挑战，但正是这些困难促使我努力追求卓越。）
Through this contest, I not only honed my language skills but also developed a stronger sense of cultural identity and pride.（通过这次比赛，我不仅磨练了我的语言技能，还培养了更强的文化认同感和自豪感。）
The story I told was a microcosm of Chinese wisdom and values, reflecting the essence of our traditional culture.（我讲的故事是中国智慧和价值观的一个缩影，反映了我们传统文化的精髓。）
This experience has been a catalyst for my personal growth, inspiring me to continue exploring and sharing the treasures of Chinese culture.（这次经历是我个人成长的催化剂，激励我继续探索和分享中国文化的瑰宝。）
I am grateful for the opportunity to participate in this meaningful event, which has left an indelible mark on my life.（我很感激有机会参加这个有意义的活动，它在我的生命中留下了不可磨灭的印记。）
Sharing this Chinese story with others was a fulfilling endeavor, as it allowed me to spread the beauty and warmth of our culture.（与他人分享这个中国故事是一项有意义的努力，因为它让我传播了我们文化的美丽和温暖。）
写作示范
第一篇
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. Thank you so much for your kind congratulations. It really made my day.
The story I told was about the Monkey King. This legendary figure from Chinese mythology is known for his incredible strength, wit, and rebellious spirit. He accompanied the Tang Monk on a journey to the West to obtain Buddhist scriptures. Along the way, he encountered numerous demons and monsters but always managed to outsmart them with his clever tricks. I focused on the episode where he single-handedly defeated the Bull Demon King, using his magical powers and fearless courage. It was a story full of action and adventure.
As for the activity, it was an amazing journey. I got to practice my English in a practical and meaningful way. It also made me realize how rich and fascinating our Chinese stories are. I felt a great sense of accomplishment when I saw the audience's reactions. There were moments of nervousness, but I overcame them with the support of my teachers and friends. This experience has definitely boosted my confidence and motivated me to learn more about both English and Chinese culture.
Thank you again. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二篇
Dear Tom,
I trust you're doing fine. I'm extremely grateful for your congratulations. It means the world to me.
I shared the story of The Butterfly Lovers, a tragic love story in Chinese folklore. Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai, two young scholars, fell deeply in love while studying together. However, due to the feudal system, their love was doomed. Zhu Yingtai was forced to marry another man, but on her wedding day, she passed by Liang Shanbo's grave and the two transformed into butterflies, flying away together. In my speech, I tried to convey the deep emotions and the social background of that era.
Taking part in this contest was a valuable learning experience. It improved my public speaking skills and my ability to express complex ideas in English. I also learned a lot about the importance of cultural heritage. It was not easy to condense such a profound story into a short speech, but it was a challenge I enjoyed. This event has given me a new perspective on how to share our culture with the world.
Thanks again for your interest. I can't wait to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
第三篇
Dear Tom,
Hi there! I hope you're having a great time. Thank you for your warm congratulations.
The story I selected was about the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl. It's a beautiful love story that has been passed down for generations. The Cowherd, a poor but kind-hearted man, fell in love with the Weaver Girl, a fairy from heaven. They got married and lived a happy life until the Queen Mother of the West separated them with the Milky Way. But once a year, on the Qixi Festival, magpies would form a bridge to reunite them. I described their daily life and the heart-breaking moment of separation in my speech.
This activity was a turning point for me. I became more proficient in English and more passionate about Chinese culture. I had to research a lot to understand the story better and present it in an engaging way. The whole process was filled with difficulties, but I learned and grew from them. It was truly an unforgettable experience.
Thank you again. I'm looking forward to sharing more with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well.
Having received your congratulations on my winning first prize in the activity, Chinese Stories Retold in English, I’m writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your concern and introduce the story —Chinese Silk.
Dating back to the Western Zhou period, Chinese silk boasts a long history of over 3, 000 years. Legend has it that Leizu, the wife of the Yellow Emperor, discovered the silk-making process. There was an ancient trade and communication route called “The Silk Road”, promoting the exchange of ideas and goods between China and other civilizations.
The activity has not only deepened my understanding of Chinese culture, but also strengthened my courage to speak English. I hope you can come to China to experience our culture.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，在你校举办的“用英语讲好中国故事”(Chinese Stories Retold in English)演讲比赛中，你获得了一等奖。你的英国笔友Tom发来邮件向你表示祝贺并想了解你讲的故事，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 感谢关注;
2. 故事概况;
3. 参加活动的感受。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
一、开头段
表达感谢与问候：首先对 Tom 的祝贺表示诚挚的感谢，简单询问对方近况，引出下文关于比赛故事的分享，体现礼貌和友好。
示例：Dear Tom, I hope this email finds you in good health. I am truly grateful for your warm congratulations. It means a lot to me. How have you been lately Well, I'm excited to tell you about the story I shared in the "Chinese Stories Retold in English" speech contest.
二、中间段
讲述故事概况：详细介绍所讲中国故事的背景、主要情节和核心人物，突出故事的独特魅力和文化价值，让 Tom 对该故事有清晰的了解，可适当引用故事中的经典语句或场景描述，增强故事的吸引力。
分享活动感受：阐述参加此次演讲比赛的收获和体会，如英语能力的提升、对中国文化的新认识、个人自信心的增强等，表达这次活动对自己的重要意义和积极影响，同时也可提及在准备过程中遇到的困难以及如何克服它们。
示例：The story I chose was about the Legend of the White Snake. It is a well-known Chinese folktale that tells the love story between a white snake spirit, Bai Suzhen, and a human, Xu Xian. Bai Suzhen, who had been cultivating for thousands of years, transformed into a beautiful woman and fell in love with Xu Xian. However, their love was opposed by Fa Hai, a monk. Despite the many obstacles and hardships they faced, their love remained steadfast. In my speech, I vividly described the touching scenes of their encounter, the trials they endured, and the unwavering love that bound them together.
Regarding the activity, it was an eye-opening and rewarding experience. Firstly, it significantly enhanced my English speaking skills. I had to search for the most accurate and vivid English words and expressions to retell this ancient Chinese story, which broadened my English vocabulary and improved my fluency. Secondly, it deepened my understanding and appreciation of Chinese culture. Through preparing for the speech, I delved into the details and cultural connotations of the story, realizing the richness and profundity of our traditional tales. Moreover, it boosted my confidence. Standing on the stage and sharing this story with the audience, I overcame my initial stage fright and learned to express myself bravely. Although I encountered some difficulties in pronunciation and intonation at the beginning, with continuous practice and the help of my teacher and friends, I was able to make great progress.
三、结尾段
期待回复与交流：再次表达对 Tom 的感谢，期待他的回信，并表示希望与他继续分享更多关于中国文化和自己生活的故事，保持友好的交流氛围，加强彼此之间的联系。
示例：Thank you again for your interest and support. I look forward to hearing from you and sharing more stories and experiences with you. Have a great day!
语言积累
I am deeply honored to have received your congratulations, and I'm more than willing to share the details of the story with you.（收到你的祝贺我深感荣幸，并且非常愿意与你分享这个故事的细节。）
The story I presented was steeped in Chinese history and culture, carrying profound moral lessons and values.（我讲述的故事沉浸在中国的历史和文化中，蕴含着深刻的道德教训和价值观。）
By retelling this Chinese story in English, I aimed to bridge the cultural gap and introduce the unique charm of Chinese culture to a wider audience.（通过用英语复述这个中国故事，我的目标是弥合文化差距，向更广泛的受众介绍中国文化的独特魅力。）
Participating in this activity was like embarking on a journey of self-discovery and cultural exploration, which broadened my horizons in numerous ways.（参加这次活动就像是踏上了一次自我发现和文化探索的旅程，在许多方面拓宽了我的视野。）
The process of preparing for the speech was not without challenges, but it was precisely these difficulties that spurred me on to strive for excellence.（准备演讲的过程并非没有挑战，但正是这些困难促使我努力追求卓越。）
Through this contest, I not only honed my language skills but also developed a stronger sense of cultural identity and pride.（通过这次比赛，我不仅磨练了我的语言技能，还培养了更强的文化认同感和自豪感。）
The story I told was a microcosm of Chinese wisdom and values, reflecting the essence of our traditional culture.（我讲的故事是中国智慧和价值观的一个缩影，反映了我们传统文化的精髓。）
This experience has been a catalyst for my personal growth, inspiring me to continue exploring and sharing the treasures of Chinese culture.（这次经历是我个人成长的催化剂，激励我继续探索和分享中国文化的瑰宝。）
I am grateful for the opportunity to participate in this meaningful event, which has left an indelible mark on my life.（我很感激有机会参加这个有意义的活动，它在我的生命中留下了不可磨灭的印记。）
Sharing this Chinese story with others was a fulfilling endeavor, as it allowed me to spread the beauty and warmth of our culture.（与他人分享这个中国故事是一项有意义的努力，因为它让我传播了我们文化的美丽和温暖。）
写作示范
第一篇
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. Thank you so much for your kind congratulations. It really made my day.
The story I told was about the Monkey King. This legendary figure from Chinese mythology is known for his incredible strength, wit, and rebellious spirit. He accompanied the Tang Monk on a journey to the West to obtain Buddhist scriptures. Along the way, he encountered numerous demons and monsters but always managed to outsmart them with his clever tricks. I focused on the episode where he single-handedly defeated the Bull Demon King, using his magical powers and fearless courage. It was a story full of action and adventure.
As for the activity, it was an amazing journey. I got to practice my English in a practical and meaningful way. It also made me realize how rich and fascinating our Chinese stories are. I felt a great sense of accomplishment when I saw the audience's reactions. There were moments of nervousness, but I overcame them with the support of my teachers and friends. This experience has definitely boosted my confidence and motivated me to learn more about both English and Chinese culture.
Thank you again. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二篇
Dear Tom,
I trust you're doing fine. I'm extremely grateful for your congratulations. It means the world to me.
I shared the story of The Butterfly Lovers, a tragic love story in Chinese folklore. Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai, two young scholars, fell deeply in love while studying together. However, due to the feudal system, their love was doomed. Zhu Yingtai was forced to marry another man, but on her wedding day, she passed by Liang Shanbo's grave and the two transformed into butterflies, flying away together. In my speech, I tried to convey the deep emotions and the social background of that era.
Taking part in this contest was a valuable learning experience. It improved my public speaking skills and my ability to express complex ideas in English. I also learned a lot about the importance of cultural heritage. It was not easy to condense such a profound story into a short speech, but it was a challenge I enjoyed. This event has given me a new perspective on how to share our culture with the world.
Thanks again for your interest. I can't wait to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
第三篇
Dear Tom,
Hi there! I hope you're having a great time. Thank you for your warm congratulations.
The story I selected was about the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl. It's a beautiful love story that has been passed down for generations. The Cowherd, a poor but kind-hearted man, fell in love with the Weaver Girl, a fairy from heaven. They got married and lived a happy life until the Queen Mother of the West separated them with the Milky Way. But once a year, on the Qixi Festival, magpies would form a bridge to reunite them. I described their daily life and the heart-breaking moment of separation in my speech.
This activity was a turning point for me. I became more proficient in English and more passionate about Chinese culture. I had to research a lot to understand the story better and present it in an engaging way. The whole process was filled with difficulties, but I learned and grew from them. It was truly an unforgettable experience.
Thank you again. I'm looking forward to sharing more with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well.
Having received your congratulations on my winning first prize in the activity, Chinese Stories Retold in English, I’m writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your concern and introduce the story —Chinese Silk.
Dating back to the Western Zhou period, Chinese silk boasts a long history of over 3, 000 years. Legend has it that Leizu, the wife of the Yellow Emperor, discovered the silk-making process. There was an ancient trade and communication route called “The Silk Road”, promoting the exchange of ideas and goods between China and other civilizations.
The activity has not only deepened my understanding of Chinese culture, but also strengthened my courage to speak English. I hope you can come to China to experience our culture.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua