2025届西南名校联盟3+3+3高三上学期高考备考诊断性联考（一）英语试题读后续写骑行追船：一场爱心与毅力的旅程（讲义）
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When we arrived in Tournus, Gabriel and I parked our bikes near the wharf and walked to the town square, starving after a 33-kilometer ride. We made it within one and a half hours, which is really something! We planned to get lunch and then bike back to Macon, a city on the Saone River where I was staying with Gabriel’s family for the summer.
It was market day, bustling with locals buying groceries and tourists hunting for souvenirs. We bought a long, thin loaf of bread called a baguette and some Brie, a soft cheese I’m obsessed with. It tastes awesome with the crispy crust of the baguette. While eating, I noticed a girl in a USA Basketball T-shirt smiling at us.
Basketball is popular in France too. You can even watch NBA games on TV. The girl stopped to buy cookies with someone that I guessed was her mom because they looked so much alike. We later saw her and her mom by the river, enjoying pastries(糕点) on a bench near a riverboat named Voyageur, which had docked earlier. Then they boarded the boat. As it was preparing to leave, I spotted a colorful shopping bag on the bench. The girl had left it! Gabriel and I called out to her in French and English, waving the bag. When the girl noticed us, she was surprised but disappointed as the boat began to leave. Gabriel suggested throwing it to her, but I feared it would fall into the river. We had to find another way !
Running alongside the boat, Gabriel learned from a sailor that the next stop was Macon-our destination as well. It would take the boat just under two hours at a speed of 12 knots. Gabriel searched on the phone about the speed. “That’s 22 kilometers-or 14 miles-per hour,” he said. “Do you think we can keep up ” I asked. With a laugh, he replied, “We’re about to find out!”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off.
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The girl’s eyes lit up with astonishment while her mom clapped in delight.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
作者和 Gabriel 骑自行车抵达 Tournus 后，在集市买了食物享用时，注意到一个穿美国篮球 T 恤的女孩。女孩和她妈妈买了糕点在河边一艘名为 Voyageur 的船附近的长椅上吃，之后上船离开时落下了一个购物袋。作者和 Gabriel 呼喊女孩但船已启动，得知船下一站是他们要回的 Macon，且船速约每小时 14 英里，他们决定骑车追赶，试图归还购物袋，故事在此处留下悬念，等待续写。
二、故事山分析
开端：作者和 Gabriel 骑行 33 公里后到达 Tournus，饥肠辘辘，在集市买食物时发现了女孩和她妈妈。
发展：女孩上船离开后落下购物袋，作者和 Gabriel 决定归还，得知船的下一站及船速后，决定骑车追赶。
高潮：两人在途中奋力骑行追赶船，体力消耗巨大但仍坚持不懈，为故事营造紧张氛围。
结局：续写部分应呈现两人是否成功归还购物袋以及各方的反应，升华故事主题。
三、伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：We planned to get lunch and then bike back to Macon.
回应：在续写中，两人正是朝着 Macon 的方向追赶船，与原计划的行程相呼应，同时也为他们追赶船提供了合理性，因为本来就要回 Macon，所以才有动力去追。
伏笔：It was market day, bustling with locals buying groceries and tourists hunting for souvenirs.
回应：集市的热闹场景为女孩的出现做了铺垫，使她的出现不显得突兀。而在续写中，可通过回忆集市上人们的善意和互助氛围，来强化两人归还购物袋的决心，因为在这样一个充满生活气息和善意的环境中，他们更愿意去做一件好事。
伏笔：The girl stopped to buy cookies with someone that I guessed was her mom because they looked so much alike.
回应：对女孩和她妈妈关系的描述，为后面女孩妈妈对两人归还购物袋的反应做了铺垫。续写中女孩妈妈的感激和热情，正是基于她们之间亲密的母女关系，体现出这份善意对整个家庭的影响。
伏笔：Gabriel and I called out to her in French and English, waving the bag.
回应：这表明作者和 Gabriel 一开始就有归还购物袋的意图，在续写中，这种善良的初衷贯穿始终，无论遇到多少困难，他们都没有放弃，突出了他们的坚持和善良的品质。
伏笔：Gabriel searched on the phone about the speed. “That’s 22 kilometers-or 14 miles-per hour,” he said.
回应：提前交代船速，为后面两人骑车追赶船的艰难程度做了铺垫。续写中可以描述他们在追赶过程中，不断根据船速调整自己的骑行节奏和策略，更加凸显他们克服困难的过程和决心。
四、续写要点（两段）
第一段：
要点 1：详细描述两人追赶船的艰难过程，包括沿途的风景、身体的疲惫（如腿部酸痛、气喘吁吁）以及心理的变化（从一开始的决心满满到中途的些许动摇但仍坚持）。
要点 2：可以穿插一些两人之间的对话或互相鼓励的话语，体现他们的友谊和共同面对困难的精神。
第二段：
要点 1：描绘船到达 Macon 时女孩和她妈妈的期待心情，以及看到作者和 Gabriel 出现时的惊喜反应，如女孩的眼神、妈妈的动作等。
要点 2：描述归还购物袋后的场景，包括女孩和妈妈的感激之情，以及作者和 Gabriel 的内心感受，最后以一个温馨的画面或细节结束故事，如大家一起欢笑、合影等，升华主题。
五、情感线
文章起始，作者和 Gabriel 怀着轻松愉悦的心情抵达 Tournus，享受美食时对女孩友好地关注。发现女孩落下购物袋后，他们产生了强烈的责任感和善良的意愿去归还。在追赶船的过程中，尽管疲惫不堪，但坚定的信念支撑着他们，情感逐渐升华至坚韧与执着。最终成功归还购物袋，收获了女孩和妈妈的感激，内心充满了成就感和温暖，整个情感线从日常的友好过渡到面对困难时的坚定，再到完成善举后的满足。
六、故事线
作者和 Gabriel 骑行 33 公里到达 Tournus，在集市买食物后发现女孩和她妈妈。
女孩上船离开时落下购物袋，作者和 Gabriel 决定追赶船归还。
两人得知船下一站是 Macon 及船速后，踏上追赶之旅。
追赶途中，两人克服种种困难，坚持不懈地骑行。
船到达 Macon，女孩和妈妈期待购物袋的归还，作者和 Gabriel 及时赶到。
两人归还购物袋，女孩和妈妈表达感激，大家以温馨的方式结束这次经历。
七、主旨升华句
This journey of chasing the boat not only tested our physical strength but also proved that a small act of kindness can be the driving force that pushes us beyond our limits.
In the pursuit of returning the forgotten bag, we discovered that the power of determination and friendship can overcome any obstacle and bring warmth to strangers' lives.
The adventure of chasing the boat was a testament to the fact that when kindness takes root in our hearts, no distance or difficulty can stop us from doing the right thing.
What began as a simple attempt to return a lost item turned into a remarkable journey that taught us the value of perseverance and the beauty of helping others, making this a day we would cherish forever.
This unexpected chase showed us that in a world full of uncertainties, our choices to act with kindness and determination can create ripples of positive change and connect us in the most unexpected ways.
八、写作示范
示范一
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. The sun was high in the sky, casting a golden glow on the river. We pedaled furiously, the wind whipping through our hair. The path was narrow and uneven, but we didn't dare slow down. Our legs ached with every turn of the pedals, but the thought of the girl's disappointed face kept us going. Gabriel shouted words of encouragement, and I nodded, too out of breath to reply. We passed by old fishermen casting their lines and children playing by the water. As the boat disappeared around a bend, we pushed ourselves even harder, determined not to let it out of our sight.
The girl's eyes lit up with astonishment while her mom clapped in delight. When we finally reached the dock in Macon, just as the boat was pulling in, the girl and her mom were waiting. The girl rushed forward, a huge smile on her face. "Thank you so much!" she exclaimed. Her mom hugged us both, tears in her eyes. We handed her the bag, feeling a sense of relief and joy. The mom insisted on buying us ice cream, and as we sat by the river, licking our cones, we knew that this was a day we would never forget. It wasn't just about the bag; it was about the journey and the kindness that had brought us all together.
示范二
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. The road ahead seemed long and daunting, but our hearts were set on returning the bag. We cycled past fields of sunflowers, their bright faces turning with the sun. Our muscles burned, and sweat dripped into our eyes, but we kept going. Gabriel kept checking the map on his phone to make sure we were on the right track. As we neared Macon, we could see the boat in the distance. We summoned our last bit of energy and sped up. The town came into view, and we knew we were close.
The girl's eyes lit up with astonishment while her mom clapped in delight. When the boat docked, the girl and her mom were standing at the railing, looking expectantly. As we handed them the bag, the girl's mom thanked us over and over. She told us how much the items in the bag meant to them. We grinned at each other, proud of what we had accomplished. This adventure had not only tested our endurance but also strengthened our belief in the power of kindness. We parted ways with warm smiles and newfound friends, knowing that this small act of kindness had made a big difference in someone's day.
When we arrived in Tournus, Gabriel and I parked our bikes near the wharf and walked to the town square, starving after a 33-kilometer ride. We made it within one and a half hours, which is really something! We planned to get lunch and then bike back to Macon, a city on the Saone River where I was staying with Gabriel’s family for the summer.
It was market day, bustling with locals buying groceries and tourists hunting for souvenirs. We bought a long, thin loaf of bread called a baguette and some Brie, a soft cheese I’m obsessed with. It tastes awesome with the crispy crust of the baguette. While eating, I noticed a girl in a USA Basketball T-shirt smiling at us.
Basketball is popular in France too. You can even watch NBA games on TV. The girl stopped to buy cookies with someone that I guessed was her mom because they looked so much alike. We later saw her and her mom by the river, enjoying pastries(糕点) on a bench near a riverboat named Voyageur, which had docked earlier. Then they boarded the boat. As it was preparing to leave, I spotted a colorful shopping bag on the bench. The girl had left it! Gabriel and I called out to her in French and English, waving the bag. When the girl noticed us, she was surprised but disappointed as the boat began to leave. Gabriel suggested throwing it to her, but I feared it would fall into the river. We had to find another way !
Running alongside the boat, Gabriel learned from a sailor that the next stop was Macon-our destination as well. It would take the boat just under two hours at a speed of 12 knots. Gabriel searched on the phone about the speed. “That’s 22 kilometers-or 14 miles-per hour,” he said. “Do you think we can keep up ” I asked. With a laugh, he replied, “We’re about to find out!”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The girl’s eyes lit up with astonishment while her mom clapped in delight.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
作者和 Gabriel 骑自行车抵达 Tournus 后，在集市买了食物享用时，注意到一个穿美国篮球 T 恤的女孩。女孩和她妈妈买了糕点在河边一艘名为 Voyageur 的船附近的长椅上吃，之后上船离开时落下了一个购物袋。作者和 Gabriel 呼喊女孩但船已启动，得知船下一站是他们要回的 Macon，且船速约每小时 14 英里，他们决定骑车追赶，试图归还购物袋，故事在此处留下悬念，等待续写。
二、故事山分析
开端：作者和 Gabriel 骑行 33 公里后到达 Tournus，饥肠辘辘，在集市买食物时发现了女孩和她妈妈。
发展：女孩上船离开后落下购物袋，作者和 Gabriel 决定归还，得知船的下一站及船速后，决定骑车追赶。
高潮：两人在途中奋力骑行追赶船，体力消耗巨大但仍坚持不懈，为故事营造紧张氛围。
结局：续写部分应呈现两人是否成功归还购物袋以及各方的反应，升华故事主题。
三、伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：We planned to get lunch and then bike back to Macon.
回应：在续写中，两人正是朝着 Macon 的方向追赶船，与原计划的行程相呼应，同时也为他们追赶船提供了合理性，因为本来就要回 Macon，所以才有动力去追。
伏笔：It was market day, bustling with locals buying groceries and tourists hunting for souvenirs.
回应：集市的热闹场景为女孩的出现做了铺垫，使她的出现不显得突兀。而在续写中，可通过回忆集市上人们的善意和互助氛围，来强化两人归还购物袋的决心，因为在这样一个充满生活气息和善意的环境中，他们更愿意去做一件好事。
伏笔：The girl stopped to buy cookies with someone that I guessed was her mom because they looked so much alike.
回应：对女孩和她妈妈关系的描述，为后面女孩妈妈对两人归还购物袋的反应做了铺垫。续写中女孩妈妈的感激和热情，正是基于她们之间亲密的母女关系，体现出这份善意对整个家庭的影响。
伏笔：Gabriel and I called out to her in French and English, waving the bag.
回应：这表明作者和 Gabriel 一开始就有归还购物袋的意图，在续写中，这种善良的初衷贯穿始终，无论遇到多少困难，他们都没有放弃，突出了他们的坚持和善良的品质。
伏笔：Gabriel searched on the phone about the speed. “That’s 22 kilometers-or 14 miles-per hour,” he said.
回应：提前交代船速，为后面两人骑车追赶船的艰难程度做了铺垫。续写中可以描述他们在追赶过程中，不断根据船速调整自己的骑行节奏和策略，更加凸显他们克服困难的过程和决心。
四、续写要点（两段）
第一段：
要点 1：详细描述两人追赶船的艰难过程，包括沿途的风景、身体的疲惫（如腿部酸痛、气喘吁吁）以及心理的变化（从一开始的决心满满到中途的些许动摇但仍坚持）。
要点 2：可以穿插一些两人之间的对话或互相鼓励的话语，体现他们的友谊和共同面对困难的精神。
第二段：
要点 1：描绘船到达 Macon 时女孩和她妈妈的期待心情，以及看到作者和 Gabriel 出现时的惊喜反应，如女孩的眼神、妈妈的动作等。
要点 2：描述归还购物袋后的场景，包括女孩和妈妈的感激之情，以及作者和 Gabriel 的内心感受，最后以一个温馨的画面或细节结束故事，如大家一起欢笑、合影等，升华主题。
五、情感线
文章起始，作者和 Gabriel 怀着轻松愉悦的心情抵达 Tournus，享受美食时对女孩友好地关注。发现女孩落下购物袋后，他们产生了强烈的责任感和善良的意愿去归还。在追赶船的过程中，尽管疲惫不堪，但坚定的信念支撑着他们，情感逐渐升华至坚韧与执着。最终成功归还购物袋，收获了女孩和妈妈的感激，内心充满了成就感和温暖，整个情感线从日常的友好过渡到面对困难时的坚定，再到完成善举后的满足。
六、故事线
作者和 Gabriel 骑行 33 公里到达 Tournus，在集市买食物后发现女孩和她妈妈。
女孩上船离开时落下购物袋，作者和 Gabriel 决定追赶船归还。
两人得知船下一站是 Macon 及船速后，踏上追赶之旅。
追赶途中，两人克服种种困难，坚持不懈地骑行。
船到达 Macon，女孩和妈妈期待购物袋的归还，作者和 Gabriel 及时赶到。
两人归还购物袋，女孩和妈妈表达感激，大家以温馨的方式结束这次经历。
七、主旨升华句
This journey of chasing the boat not only tested our physical strength but also proved that a small act of kindness can be the driving force that pushes us beyond our limits.
In the pursuit of returning the forgotten bag, we discovered that the power of determination and friendship can overcome any obstacle and bring warmth to strangers' lives.
The adventure of chasing the boat was a testament to the fact that when kindness takes root in our hearts, no distance or difficulty can stop us from doing the right thing.
What began as a simple attempt to return a lost item turned into a remarkable journey that taught us the value of perseverance and the beauty of helping others, making this a day we would cherish forever.
This unexpected chase showed us that in a world full of uncertainties, our choices to act with kindness and determination can create ripples of positive change and connect us in the most unexpected ways.
八、写作示范
示范一
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. The sun was high in the sky, casting a golden glow on the river. We pedaled furiously, the wind whipping through our hair. The path was narrow and uneven, but we didn't dare slow down. Our legs ached with every turn of the pedals, but the thought of the girl's disappointed face kept us going. Gabriel shouted words of encouragement, and I nodded, too out of breath to reply. We passed by old fishermen casting their lines and children playing by the water. As the boat disappeared around a bend, we pushed ourselves even harder, determined not to let it out of our sight.
The girl's eyes lit up with astonishment while her mom clapped in delight. When we finally reached the dock in Macon, just as the boat was pulling in, the girl and her mom were waiting. The girl rushed forward, a huge smile on her face. "Thank you so much!" she exclaimed. Her mom hugged us both, tears in her eyes. We handed her the bag, feeling a sense of relief and joy. The mom insisted on buying us ice cream, and as we sat by the river, licking our cones, we knew that this was a day we would never forget. It wasn't just about the bag; it was about the journey and the kindness that had brought us all together.
示范二
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. The road ahead seemed long and daunting, but our hearts were set on returning the bag. We cycled past fields of sunflowers, their bright faces turning with the sun. Our muscles burned, and sweat dripped into our eyes, but we kept going. Gabriel kept checking the map on his phone to make sure we were on the right track. As we neared Macon, we could see the boat in the distance. We summoned our last bit of energy and sped up. The town came into view, and we knew we were close.
The girl's eyes lit up with astonishment while her mom clapped in delight. When the boat docked, the girl and her mom were standing at the railing, looking expectantly. As we handed them the bag, the girl's mom thanked us over and over. She told us how much the items in the bag meant to them. We grinned at each other, proud of what we had accomplished. This adventure had not only tested our endurance but also strengthened our belief in the power of kindness. We parted ways with warm smiles and newfound friends, knowing that this small act of kindness had made a big difference in someone's day.
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