江苏省学科基地2024-2025学年高三上学期十二月第一次大联考英语试题读后续写越野骑行（讲义）

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Majestic Road Hill in the suburb of our city is so steep (陡峭的) in some places that if you stopped pedaling (踩踏板), your bike would stop immediately and start to roll backwards. The uphill path is so long that it is difficult for one to make it to the top.
The thirty of us came from the same class. We had a cross-country bicycle tour that day. Once we got to its top, there were two flat places: Dairy Queen for burgers and Becker’s for homemade donuts (a small cake). Usually we had little money to spare, but for this challenging event, we all had saved up a little. The deal was simple: The first one that got to the top would get his meal paid for by the rest of us.
Ed and I had gone ahead of the whole team. We positioned ourselves at an advantageous point to observe the other riders who fell behind to struggle on the path. We reached the shortest, but steepest part of the hill, called “Heartbreak Ridge”. It got the name because many strong young people, who want to make it without their feet leaving their pedal to that point, only fail with a broken heart as they gather up bikes.
As sixteen-year-old teenagers, Ed and I were the best at climbing hills on our bikes. I had strong legs good at climbing and Ed was so strong that he could make a football fifty yards away with a kick. The hill got the steepest for us to get to the top. Our upper body had to hang over the handle bars to keep us from falling backwards. Ed was in front of me and he eventually made it to the top. He wiped sweat from his forehead and then he looked at me, cheering. “Kev, come on!” I tried. When I was nine feet away from Ed, something happened. My legs began to cramp (抽筋). I, standing on my bike, couldn’t pedal, or move forwards. I was about to lose my balance.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just at the critical moment, Ed jumped down from the top and gave me a helping hand.
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Ed and I cheered for them while they were struggling to ride towards the top.
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一、文章大意
本文讲述了作者和同学们参加越野自行车旅行，来到了陡峭难行的 Majestic Road Hill。他们约定第一个到达山顶的人由其他人请客吃饭，作者和 Ed 领先众人，但在接近山顶最陡峭的 “Heartbreak Ridge” 处，作者腿部抽筋，无法前行。关键时刻，Ed 折返帮助作者，两人最终一起到达山顶，之后他们又为后面奋力爬坡的同学们加油助威。这次经历不仅是一次体力的挑战，更增进了同学们之间的情谊。
二、故事山分析
开端：三十名同学参加越野自行车旅行，来到了以陡峭著称的 Majestic Road Hill，约定第一个到达山顶者由其他人请客吃饭，大家都为此次挑战攒了钱，作者和 Ed 领先众人。
发展：作者和 Ed 来到了最陡峭的 “Heartbreak Ridge”，Ed 成功登顶，而作者在距山顶九英尺处腿部抽筋，无法前进，面临摔倒危险。
高潮：关键时刻，Ed 跳下来帮助作者，两人一起推车上山。
结局：两人到达山顶后，为后面奋力爬坡的同学们加油，同学们陆续到达山顶，大家共同分享征服这座山的喜悦。
三、伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：The thirty of us came from the same class. We had a cross-country bicycle tour that day.
回应：在续写中，同学们之间相互帮助、共同克服困难，体现了班级同学之间的团结友爱，如 Ed 帮助作者，大家一起为后面的同学加油，这种团结的氛围正是因为他们来自同一个班级，一起参加活动所形成的。
伏笔：The uphill path is so long that it is difficult for one to make it to the top.
回应：后文同学们奋力爬坡，有的同学气喘吁吁但仍不放弃，呼应了上坡路艰难这一伏笔，突出了大家克服困难的精神。
伏笔：The deal was simple: The first one that got to the top would get his meal paid for by the rest of us.
回应：虽然没有明确提及最终谁获得了请客吃饭的资格，但从同学们一起欢呼庆祝征服山峰来看，这个约定已经不重要，重要的是大家共同经历的过程，暗示了这次活动的意义超越了最初的竞争约定。
伏笔：It got the name [Heartbreak Ridge] because many strong young people, who want to make it without their feet leaving their pedal to that point, only fail with a broken heart as they gather up bikes.
回应：作者在 “Heartbreak Ridge” 处遇到困难，几乎要失败，但在 Ed 的帮助下成功克服，与这一伏笔形成对比，突出了友谊和团队精神的力量，即使在被认为容易失败的地方也能战胜困难。
伏笔：Ed was in front of me and he eventually made it to the top. He wiped sweat from his forehead and then he looked at me, cheering.
回应：Ed 成功登顶后没有独自享受胜利，而是立刻关注并帮助作者，进一步深化了两人之间的友谊，同时也为后文大家相互鼓励、共同完成挑战奠定了情感基础。
四、续写要点（两段）
第一段：
要点 1：描述 Ed 帮助作者时两人的具体动作和对话，如 Ed 如何搀扶作者、给予安慰和鼓励的话语，体现两人之间的深厚友谊。
要点 2：写两人克服困难到达山顶后的状态，包括身体的疲惫和内心的喜悦，为下文给同学们加油做铺垫。
第二段：
要点 1：详细描写同学们爬坡的艰难过程，如他们的表情、动作和坚持不懈的精神表现。
要点 2：突出大家最终成功登顶后的集体氛围，如欢呼、拥抱等庆祝动作，以及作者对这次经历的感悟，升华主题。
情感线
文章起始，同学们怀着兴奋与期待开始这次越野自行车之旅，在攀登陡峭山坡时，作者和 Ed 之间展现出深厚的友谊与互助精神，从 Ed 毫不犹豫地折返帮助作者，到两人共同克服困难，情感逐渐升温。而后面对同学们爬坡的艰难，大家相互鼓励加油，充满了团结友爱的情感。最终成功登顶后，喜悦、自豪与集体荣誉感交织在一起，整个情感线从个人之间的友情扩展到班级集体的团结之情，展现了这次活动对大家情感的深刻影响。
六、故事线
同学们组队参加越野自行车旅行，来到 Majestic Road Hill，准备挑战爬坡。
作者和 Ed 领先众人，到达最艰难的 “Heartbreak Ridge”，Ed 成功登顶，作者却腿部抽筋遇险。
Ed 折返帮助作者，两人一起推自行车向山顶前进。
两人成功到达山顶，稍作休息后，开始为后面爬坡的同学们加油助威。
同学们在爬坡过程中奋力坚持，尽管艰难，但都不放弃。
同学们陆续到达山顶，大家一起庆祝这次成功征服陡坡的经历，共同分享喜悦。
七、主旨升华句
This challenging journey on the bike not only strengthened our physical endurance but also deepened the bond of friendship and unity among us, proving that together we can overcome any obstacle.
The steep hill became a stage where our perseverance and mutual support were vividly displayed, teaching us that the power of a team is far greater than the sum of individuals.
Through this arduous bicycle tour, we realized that the most precious reward is not the destination but the journey filled with friendship, determination, and the spirit of never giving up.
The struggle on Majestic Road Hill was a testament to our growth and the value of unity. It showed us that when we face difficulties hand in hand, we can turn a seemingly impossible task into a memorable triumph.
This cross-country bicycle adventure was more than just a physical activity; it was a lesson in life. It taught us that in the face of challenges, the love and support of our companions are the strongest driving forces that lead us to success.
八、写作示范
示范一
Just at the critical moment, Ed jumped down from the top and gave me a helping hand. He held the back of my bike with one hand and my arm with the other, steadying me. "Don't worry, Kev. We'll get there together," he said, his eyes full of determination. With his support, I managed to get off the bike and stretch my cramped legs. Slowly, we pushed our bikes up the remaining part of the hill, step by step. When we finally reached the top, we were both exhausted but filled with a sense of accomplishment. We looked at each other and grinned, knowing that this was a moment we would never forget.
Ed and I cheered for them while they were struggling to ride towards the top. We saw John's face turn red as he gritted his teeth and pedaled with all his might. Sarah was breathing heavily but kept going, her eyes fixed on the goal. As they got closer, we could hear their shouts of determination. One by one, they made it to the top, collapsing on the ground with exhaustion but with huge smiles on their faces. In that moment, I realized that this was not just about winning a meal. It was about the journey, the friendship, and the spirit of never giving up. We had conquered the hill together, and our bond as a class had grown even stronger.
示范二
Just at the critical moment, Ed jumped down from the top and gave me a helping hand. He quickly assessed the situation and said, "Lean on me, Kev. Let's do this." With his strength and my determination, we managed to move forward. As we walked, he shared some words of encouragement, reminding me of all the tough rides we had been through before. Step by step, we made our way to the top. Once there, we took a moment to catch our breath and looked back at the path we had just conquered.
Ed and I cheered for them while they were struggling to ride towards the top. The sight of our classmates pushing themselves to the limit was inspiring. Tom was sweating profusely but didn't slow down, and Lisa was shouting words of motivation to herself. We could feel their energy and their will to succeed. When the last of them reached the top, we all gathered in a circle, high-fiving and hugging each other. This experience had shown us that with friendship and teamwork, we could overcome any steep hill in our lives. It was a day filled with challenges, but more importantly, it was a day that strengthened our unity and made us cherish the bond we shared as a class.