山西中考书面表达讲义
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*There are 百分数1 +of the students believing that +观点1 while those considering +主题 as something to 观点2 take up(are/reach)+百分数2.The percentage of the students who think that +观点3 is 百分数3. And only 百分数4 of them choose/enjoy others.
*xx% of the students like..., and students who prefer to ... take up xx%.
*xx percent of the students believe ..., while xx percent consider ..., and the rest students think...
*xx% of the students choose to ..., and xx% of the students like/enjoy...
*The percentage of the students who think/consider/believe... is xx%, and there are xx% of the students who...
例子:1. 86%的学生相信他们可以用善良的眼睛看待世界,53%的学生认为自己是积极的。
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36% of the students choose to get close to nature in their free time. Only 5% like to stay at home reading.
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80% of the students thinks it’s important to learn to do housework.
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选出观点+经历+总结感悟
阐述观点:
There is no doubt that... “毫无疑问……”
There is no denying that... “不可否认……”=It goes without saying that...
As far as I am concerned.../as far as I can see/know “就我而言”
In my view/opinion/point,... /From my point of view,... “在我看来...”
例子:1. 不可否认,我们在生活中做出合理的选择是很重要的。(reasonable 合理的)
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毫无疑问,孩子们可以通过旅行开阔视野。
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就我而言,当我们的父母和老师指责或批评我们时,保持冷静和理智是非常重要的。
______________________________________________ to stay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachers blame(责备) or criticize(批评) us.
我认为,对我们来说在空闲时间亲近大自然是有意义的。
I think it is meaningful for us to get close to nature in our free time.
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叙述经历:
叙述经历开篇:
When it comes to (=talking about)+主题(e.g. solving problems, courage, work group, teamwork, my favorite sports, helping others,doing sports...), an unforgettable experience comes into my mind.(=enters my mind/steps into my mind)
I still remember the day when I ...: 我仍然记得那一天我……
Never can I forget when I was.../entered .... 我不会忘记当我……
What impressed me most was that when I .... 是让我印象深刻的是当我……
例子:1. 我还记得我在上英语课的那一天。
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我无法忘记我们国家的历史。
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经历结尾;
To my joy/surprise/excitement,...“令我高兴的/惊讶的兴奋的是……”
In this way, I succeeded in doing sth. 用这种方法,成功做成某事。
After tow-month study with my teammate,I made progress in my English. /my English was improved a lot.
A strong sense/feeling of satisfaction /achievement/happiness/warmth...rose from the bottom of my heart.
一种强烈的满足感/成就感/幸福感油然而生。
Believe it or not, since then I have felt healthier and happier. 信不信由你,自从那以后,我变得跟健康和开心。
Finally, I was surprised to find that I mastered the secret to learn English and my English was improved/increased greatly. 最后,我惊奇地发现我掌握了学习英语的秘决,并且我的英语提高了很多。
In addition/Besides, I recovered my confidence in learning English.此外,我还恢复了在学习英语上的自信。
Words failed to express my excitement when the math problem was perfectly worked out.
当这个数学问题被完美地解决时,没有什么语言可以表达我的兴奋。
例子:1. 令我开心的是,我得到了一个令人满意的结果。
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用这种方法,我成功跟上了老师的步伐并且更加高效地学习。
___________________________keeping pace with the teachers and learnt more efficiently(高效地)》
在他们的帮助下,我没有任何抱怨,完成了我应该做的。
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那一刻看着我的作品,一种强烈的成就感油然而生。
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渐渐地,我变得跟家精力充沛,而且保持健康。
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兴奋,混杂着开心涌上心头。
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悲伤,夹杂着紧张席卷了我。
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结果是,我得到了来自同学的表扬。
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总结感悟、启示:
万能模板:From the experience, I finally realize(d)/understand(understood)/ the important role/part played by +主题(e.g communication ability,courage,helping others, solving problems bravely/wisely,tradition culture, reasonable choices,doing sports,facing difficulties actively, not complaining...),which can not only +总结1(好处1),but also can +总结2.
Only through this experience did I realize... 通过这次经历,我才意识到……
What I have learned from this experience is ... 我从这段经历中学习到的是……
Not only did I..., but also I got a deeper understanding of ... 我不但……,而且对……有了更深的理解。
The experience made me deeply understand the saying “谚语”.
例子:1. 从这次经历中,我不仅学会了洗衣服,而且我也明白了独立的重要性。
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这次经历使我对“一分耕耘,一分收获”有了更深的理解。
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通过这次经历,我才意识到是我的努力让我获得了别人的尊重。(用到强调句)
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我从这段经历中学习到的是只要我们勇敢地,积极地面对挑战,我们就可以成功地把他们转换成机遇。
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从这次经历中,它不但使我对历史有更深的理解,而且在我内心中种下了文化自信的种子。
From the experience, not only does it make me ______________ understand the history, but also ________________________ of cultural confidence in my heart.
其他表达:
表达观点好处:
It is meaningful/important/helpful/necessary for us/students to do sth.
做某事对我们来说,是有意义的/重要的/有帮助的/必要的。
=It is of mean/great help/great importance for us /students to do sth.
It is beneficial(受益的) to sth.(e.g.my growth/study/health/ability./our lifelong development.. ) 对……有益处。
It is good for us/me. = It can benefit me/us a lot. 对我/我们也有好处。
Doing sth.(主题)is one of the best ways to do sth(好处).
E.g. . Doing volunteer work is one of the best ways to develop my abilities to communicate and cooperate. 做志愿者是培养我沟通和合作能力的最好方法之一。
5. It is a good idea/way to do sth. 做某事是不错的想法。
6. Doing sth. can brings us quite a lot of benefits. 做什么事情给我带来了很多好处。
7. Nothing is more important than to do sth. 没有什么比做……更重要的。
E.g. Nothing is more important than to protect our environment.
8. ... have a good/great/better/bad/terrible influence on... 对……有很大的好的影响/坏的影响。
9. ... make/makes a big difference in ...
一些高分表达:
心中充满了……
I felt that every corner of my heart was full of (filled with) nervousness/happiness/sadness/stress.
我感到我的心中的每一个角落充满了紧张/幸福/悲伤/压力。
心头涌上……
I felt a strong sense/feeling of pride/happiness/achievement/satisfaction rose from the bottom of my heart.
so... that...句式
I was so excited at the news that I jumped in excitement. 听到这则新闻,我兴奋得跳起来。
I was so moved by his words that I burst into tears. 我被他的话感动的流出眼泪了。
I was so nervous/excited that I couldn’t say any words. 我紧张/兴奋得说不出话来。
My English was so poor that I couldn’t follow my teacher in class.
I was so poor at English/swimming that I was afraid of speaking English in public/jumping into the pool.
He was so thankful to me that he wanted to give me a gift/present.
逗号加形容词表示状态
1.I just stood there, hopeless and helpless. 我就站在那里,无助又失望。
2.I just looked at her, excited and happy. 我就看着她,兴奋又高兴。
Only 开头的部分倒装句结构
Only when we are healthy ca we study well and enjoy life.
Only in this way will we have a brighter future/live a happier life.
Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.
Only by getting over difficulties can we become better men.
Only after I joined the basketball club did I know more about team spirit.
6.find/discover/think/consider it +adj./n +to do sth. 发现做某事是……
1. If we can develop/take up more interests, we will find it easy to keep away from online games.
如果我们能培养更多的兴趣,我们会发现远离网络游戏很容易。
I found it difficult/easy to master the secret to learning English. 我发现掌握英语学习秘诀是很难的/容易的。
I found it useful to take part in after-school activities. 我发现参加课后活动是有用的。
I think it a good idea to go over the lessons and finish our homework on time.
我认为按时复习课程和完成家庭作业是个好主意。
7. It is/was... that .... (强调句)
1. It is sunlight that makes us feel good.
2. It is the teachers’ instruction that has made us who we are today. 正是老师的教导成就了今天的我们。
3. It was because I followed her advice/suggestions that I became more energetic.
4. It was from then on that I started to stick to practicing guitar.
8.When 引导的时间状语从句的省略。
When I was walking in the quiet street, I came across a lovely cat and its owner named Ben.
=When walking in the quiet street ,....
When I was walking home, I saw a old man lying down the street, hopeless and helpless.
=When walking home, ....
We all had a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement when working in a group and cooperating with each other.
9.现在分词做状语相当于状语从句
When I hurried to school, I fell off my bike and hurt my leg.
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Not stopping to listen to them, I shouted at the children and explained how angry I was at what they had done. 现在分词作伴随状语,宾语从句中嵌套宾语从句。
Seeing Li Ming falling asleep, our teacher woke him up and reminded him to listen to her carefully.
Looking back on the old days of my junior high school, I can see plenty of wonderful moments shared with my teachers and classmates.
10.过去分词作状语
Compared with any other student in his class, Tony is better at communicating.
托尼比班里其他同学更善于沟通。
Because he was encouraged by his mother, he gradually became happier and happier.
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翻译:在爸爸温暖话语的鼓励下,我下定决心要坚持梦想。
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Written in a hurry, the article was not so good. 因为写得匆忙,这篇文章不是很好。
11.……的主要理由是…… The main reason why ... is/was (that).../That is the reason why...
I choose to make friends with Joe because we both like playing basketball.
______________________________________________ is that we both like playing basketball.
The reason why he was late for school was that he helped a man in need on his way to school.
12.Not only 放句首,要倒装。 not only ...., but also...
网络不但正在给中国人民带来更多的便利,而且也帮助世界成为一个更好的居住地。
The internet is not only bringing more convenience to Chinese people, but it is also helping to make the world a better place to live in.
=___________________________________________________,but it is also helping to make the world a better place to live in.
Friendship means not only caring and understanding ,but also supporting and encouraging each other.
=________________________caring and understand, but also supporting and encouraging each other.
13.据说…… It is said that...
一般认为…… It is thought that..
大家都知道……/众所周知…… It is known that
据报道…… It is reported that ...
人们期望…… It is expected that ...
人们相信/一般认为…… It is believed that...
E.g . It is believed that reading increase our knowledge and broadens our mind.
14.俗话说得好…… As an old saying goes(runs,says),...=An old saying goes,...=It’s an old saying(that)...
E.g. As an old saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy”. 城实为上策。
15. Life is difficult. We should face it with courage and a smile.
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If you can read more, you will read faster.
_________________________________________________(用the +比较级……,the +比较级……)
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As teenagers, we should play an active role in improving the environment.(把should 替换)
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_______________________ to play an active role in improving the environment.(It’ one’s duty to...)
I hope to run in the most beautiful park in my city.
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Mom taught me to be polite and helpful.
_____________________________________________________________(teach sb. a lesson that...)
Mother play an important role in the growth of children.
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最好不要逃避我们的问题。我们总是应该想办法解决它们。(It is best (not) to do sth.)
_____________________________________. We should always try to solve them.
如果你担心考试,最好通过锻炼来放松自己。
If you are worried about exam, __________________________________________
多亏了老师的帮助,我进步了很多。
_______________________, I have made much progress.
=_______________________, I have made much progress.