期末作文复习（含范文解析）2024-2025学年牛津译林版英语九年级上册

牛津英语9A期末作文复习
1．根据要求，完成写作。
音乐、电影、绘画、摄影，在众多的艺术形式中，电影广受人们的喜爱。假如你最喜欢的艺术形式是英语电影，请根据以下提示写一篇短文。
内容提示：1. 艺术形式：英语电影；
2. 喜欢的理由：学到英语单词，训练听说技能；有教育意义；认识一些著名的演员；……（自拟）；
3. 存在问题：有作业要做，没时间看电影；
4. 建议大家每周至少看一次电影来放松一下。
要求：1. 必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 词数 90 左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them.
Firstly, I can learn many English words and practice listening and speaking through watching English films. Secondly, most of the English films are educational. Some of them make you more confident. Thirdly, I can know some famous actors, such as Audrey Hepburn. She was considered by many people as a superstar, not only for her acting in the films but also for her efforts in charity work. Finally, I also can learn about the culture of England and America.
However, there is a problem. I have no time to watch films because of too much homework now. But I believe it’s important to take a break and relax. So I suggest that everyone should watch a movie once a week to relax.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式——英语电影，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍喜欢英语电影的理由；
第二步，介绍存在的问题以及建议。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②be considered as被认为是
③because of因为
[高分句型]
①Firstly, I can learn many English words and practice listening and speaking through watching English films. (动名词作宾语)
②So I suggest that everyone should watch a movie once a week to relax. (that引导的宾语从句)
2．快乐的寒假将如约而至，一班同学们热火朝天地讨论着自己的计划。Mike同学结合以下问题展开了对自己寒假计划的描述。
请根据以下提示，写一篇文章，关于Mike同学的寒假计划。
1. What’s his study and reading plan for vacation 2. How will he keep healthy 3. Where do you think he is going to take a trip 4. How about his feelings
要求：1.语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写美观；
2.70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.要点齐全，可适当发挥。
Winter vacation is coming.
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【答案】例文
Winter vacation is coming. It’s a great chance for Mike to improve himself because his dream is to become the brightest star in the sky. Here is his plan for this winter vacation.
In this winter vacation, he will review all the subjects first and then read some favorite books. As for sports, he will play basketball twice a week with his best friends. And he will also go for a walk three times a week. Because it can make him keep healthy and energetic. What’s more, he will go to Beijing to visit the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. He will go there with his parents and they will spend a week there.
According to his plan, he will spend a meaningful vacation. And he will enjoy himself during the vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据提示信息描述Mike同学的寒假计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示信息具体描述Mike同学的寒假计划；
第三步，总结Mike同学将会有什么样的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②twice a week一周两次
③go for a walk散步
④three times a week一周三次
⑤according to根据
⑥enjoy himself玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①It’s a great chance for Mike to improve himself because his dream is to become the brightest star in the sky. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Because it can make him keep healthy and energetic. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3．假如你是学生 Huang Lei，你的学校正在开展“最美教师”的评选活动，你想推荐你们班的赵老师获得今年的最佳教师，根据提示和要求用英文写一封推荐信。内容提示见下表。
基本信息 1.有绘画天赋，作品常获奖； 2.喜欢观看关于体育的电视节目。
优秀品质 1.有耐心，有爱心，经常捐钱给需要的人； 2.对学生严格， 一直关心学生。
个人想法 1.经常鼓励学生，遇到困难不放弃； 2.希望通过他的努力帮助更多学生。
对他的评价 ……
写作要求：1.短文必须包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.字迹工整，卷面整洁，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚，语法正确；
3.文中不能出现真实校名、人名和其他真实信息；
4.词数为80左右。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数。)
参考词汇：have a talent for (有……的天赋)，works (作品)，excellent quality (优秀品质)，make progress (进步)，efforts (努力)，suitable (合适的)
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to recommend (推荐) Mr. Zhao for this year’s Best Teacher Award (奖).
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Yours faithfully,
Huang Lei
【答案】例文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to recommend (推荐) Mr. Zhao for this year’s Best Teacher Award (奖).
Mr. Zhao is not only our teacher but also a person with many talents and excellent qualities. He has a talent for painting, and his works often win awards. Besides, he enjoys watching TV programs about sports, which makes him approachable and fun. As for his qualities, Mr. Zhao is very patient and caring. He often donates money to people in need, showing his kindness and generosity. He is strict with us students but always concerned about our well-being. Mr. Zhao often encourages us to never give up when facing difficulties. He believes in us and helps us make progress step by step. I hope through his efforts, he can help more students achieve their goals and dreams.
In my opinion, Mr. Zhao is the most suitable candidate for the Best Teacher Award. He deserves this honor for all the hard work and dedication he has put into teaching us.
Yours faithfully,
Huang Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为推荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应确保包含所有要点，同时使文章逻辑连贯、结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写信的目的，即推荐Mr. Zhao获得今年的最佳教师奖；
第二步，列举Mr. Zhao的品质和能力，并通过具体事例来支持评价；
第三步，总结推荐的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①have a talent for…有……的天赋
②be strict with…对……严格要求
③give up放弃
④step by step逐步地：逐渐地
[高分句型]
①Besides, he enjoys watching TV programs about sports, which makes him approachable and fun. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②He often donates money to people in need, showing his kindness and generosity. (现在分词短语作伴随状语)
4．新年的钟声即将敲响，我们也将迎来期待已久的寒假。这是一个放松身心、充实自我、探索新兴趣的好时机。那么，你将如何规划一个多姿多彩的寒假呢？请根据所给题目和下面的图文提示写一篇短文，在英语课上与大家分享你的计划。
写作要求：
（1）包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）词数90~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How Will You Spend Your Winter Vacation
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【答案】例文
How Will You Spend Your Winter Vacation
The winter vacation is just around the corner. I have some cool plans.
First, I plan to explore some historical and cultural places around our country. There’s so much to learn about our rich cultural heritage. Second, I’ll play sports every day to stay healthy, such as playing basketball, going for a run or cycling through the park. Next, I’m going to read a lot. Books are a window to different worlds and I can’t wait to see where my reading journey will take me. Finally, I’m going to take up a new instrument because I love music so much. It’s also a fun way to challenge myself!
I’m so excited to see what the vacation will bring. I’m sure my dream will come true through my hard work and my life in the future will get better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，使行文更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的寒假计划；
第二步，具体阐述寒假计划，从“阅读、旅行、运动”等几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy保持健康；
②can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事；
③take up从事。
[高分句型]
①There’s so much to learn about our rich cultural heritage. (there be句型)
②I’m so excited to see what the vacation will bring. (宾语从句)
5．如今，人工智能(artificial intelligence，简称AI)已走进人们的生活，它正迅速地改变着世界。一方面，它给大家带来诸多便利，比如，有的翻译软件，它能使人们轻松与外国人交流，在医院……。另一方面，它也引发不少问题，例如很多工作将被人工取代，许多人会失去工作，有的人过于依赖AI 而不会自己思考了……。请你根据下表提示，以“AI in Our Life”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍同学们的不同观点，并谈谈你的看法。
advantage life, easy; translation apps; in hospital, read pictures …
disadvantage problem; job, be taken; depend on, think less …
your opinion use properly …
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所选观点的要点提示，并结合自身实际，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校姓名：
3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
AI in Our Life
Nowadays, artificial intelligence (AI) has come into almost every part of our daily lives, and it’s changing our world really fast.
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【答案】范文：
AI in Our Life
Nowadays, artificial intelligence (AI) has come into almost every part of our daily lives, and it’s changing our world really fast.
On the one hand, AI makes our lives much easier. For example, we can talk to people from other countries easily with the help of some translation apps. In the hospital, doctors can use AI to read pictures and find diseases early.
On the other hand, AI brings some problems. Lots of jobs might be taken by AI. Many people will lose their jobs because of this. What’s more, some people depend too much on AI. They don’t want to think by themselves any more.
In my opinion, we should use AI properly. We should find ways to stop the bad things about AI. Only in this way can AI do more good for us and serve us well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接文章开头，开篇点题，点出人工智能正迅速地改变着世界；
第二步，具体阐述人工智能带来的优点和不利方面；
第三步，写出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of在……帮助下
②in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①Only in this way can AI do more good for us and serve us well.（only+状语放于句首，后面的句子半倒装）
6．寒假即将到来，请以My favourite time of year为题，根据以下的中文提示写一篇短文。
最喜欢的时光 寒假
最想做的事情 1. 看Audrey Hepburn的电影，因为欣赏她在电影和慈善领域的成就； 2. 看各种纪录片，可以更多了解大自然和真实生活的事件； 3. 边看书边聆听谭盾的音乐，他的音乐使人感到平静； 4. 前往北京旅游，例举两个景点。
喜欢寒假的原因 1. ……； 2. ……。
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：90词左右；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My favourite time of year
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【答案】例文
My favourite time of year
My favorite time of the year is winter vacation, because during the winter holiday, I have time to do what I like. I will practice playing the piano in the winter holiday. I can also travel during the winter vacation.
However, my favourite thing to do in winter vacation is to see a movie starring Audrey Hepburn, because I like her achievements in film and charity. I also like to watch all kinds of documentaries, because I can learn a lot about nature and real life events. When I am bored, I can also enjoy Tan Dun’s music while I am reading a book. His music can make me calm. I will also travel to Beijing during the holiday. I will visit the Forbidden City and the Great Wall.
This is my favorite winter holiday life. It must be colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般将来；
③提示：描述一年中自己最喜欢的的时光，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己在一年当中最喜欢的时光是寒假，解释原因，引出下文；
第二步，介绍自己在寒假最想做的事情，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，总结全文，表达对寒假的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①practice doing练习做某事
②all kinds of各种各样的
③learn about…学习……
[高分句型]
①However, my favourite thing to do in winter vacation is to see a movie starring Audrey Hepburn, because I like her achievements in film and charity.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When I am bored, I can also enjoy Tan Dun’s music while I am reading a book.（时间状语从句）
7．假如你是李华，请你以做一个以“做更好的自己”为主题分享活动，讲述生活中你如何享受快乐的演讲，内容要点如下：
To be a better self
懂感恩 敬爱生命，服务社会……
亲自然 保护环境，关爱动物……
爱自己 健康生活，培养兴趣……
写作要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
2. 书写工整规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
4. 词数：90词左右。
To be a better self
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【答案】例文
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.
In order to become a better version of ourselves, we should first be grateful. We should respect life. We also use our spare time to serve the society. If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. Second, we should get close to nature. We should protect the environment and care for animals. We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants. Finally, we have to love ourselves. We should live a healthy life and develop our hobbies. We should learn ways to relax ourselves and keep a good mood.
I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题“做更好的自己”；
第二步，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面具体阐述怎么做。
第三步，总结话语。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②get close to亲近
③keep a good mood保持好心情
[高分句型]
①If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on. (宾语从句)
8．Spud Webb的骄傲时刻来临之前，他为克服自己的身高劣势付出了常人难以想象的努力；谭盾创造出令人惊叹的音乐之前，他为弥补创造上的不足，想尽了办法；Audrey Hepburn被全世界看见之前，她在童年时期却承受着超出她年龄的苦难和压力……我们都会经历苦难，我们也有机会获得成功。请以“Everyone can be a winner”为题写一篇作文。
内容包括：
1.What difficulty did you meet with
2.How did you overcome (克服) it？Who influenced you
3.What have you learnt from this experience
注意:
1.必须包含所有提示内容，并作适当发挥；
2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3.词数不少于100；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等。
Everyone can be a winner
A winner’s attitude (态度)：it may be difficult but it is possible. Let me share my story.
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【答案】例文：
Everyone can be a winner
A winner’s attitude：it may be difficult but it is possible. Let me share my story.
I used to have great difficulty in spoken English. I was shy and afraid of mistakes. But I made up my mind to overcome it. I joined an English-speaking club. There, I had a lot of chances to communicate with foreigners. My English teacher also influenced me a lot. She always encouraged me to be brave and not be afraid of making mistakes.
Gradually, my spoken English improved. Through this experience, I have learned that nothing is impossible if you have the will and determination to do it. Everyone may face difficulties, but as long as we keep trying and find the right ways to deal with them, we can all become winners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己遇到的困难；是如何克服它的以及影响我的人；
第三步，最后总结从这件事学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①make up one’s mind 下定某人的决心
②be afraid of害怕
③make mistakes犯错误
[高分句型]
①Everyone may face difficulties, but as long as we keep trying and find the right ways to deal with them, we can all become winners. (as long as引导的条件状语从句)
②I have learned that nothing is impossible if you have the will and determination to do it. (that引导的宾语从句)
9．时间飞逝，转眼一学期快要结束了，寒假也即将开始。请根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿，给同学们讲一讲应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假。
学习 计划好每一天；将作业列清单；复习所学内容； 多读书，更多了解世界；
休闲 听音乐、看电视、锻炼身体； 旅游……（至少一条）
志愿服务 ……（至少一条）
要求：
1. 词数：90词左右，文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
How to Have a Meaningful Winter Holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we make it a meaningful one I have some good ideas to share with you.
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Wish you all a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
【答案】例文
How to Have a Meaningful Winter Holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we make it a meaningful one I have some good ideas to share with you.
Firstly, plan our days well. I think we should make a list of all the homework we have to do and allocate the time needed for each task. We should also review what we have learned during the semester.
Secondly, we should read some books so that we can gain a better understanding of the world. Additionally, remember to have fun. Listen to music, watch some good shows, and stay active by playing sports or exercising. Perhaps we can even visit a new place nearby.
And don’t forget to help others. Volunteering at a local event or contributing to our community is a great way to learn new things and make a positive impact.
Wish you all a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍寒假即将开始，引出话题：分享自己的想法；
第二步，依据表格提示，逐一介绍自己的想法，适当拓展；
第三步，书写总结，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①make a list 列清单
②make a positive impact 产生积极影响
[高分句型]
①We should also review what we have learned during the semester. (what引导的宾语从句)
②Secondly, we should read some books so that we can gain a better understanding of the world. (so that引导状语从句)
10．假如你是阳光中学的一名九年级的学生 Shirley，你要写一封推荐信给班主任Mr. Smith，告诉他你想推荐Sandy做你们班的班长。请你从以下几方面写一封自荐信。
提示：
1. What qualities does she have
2. What examples do you use to prove the qualities
3. Why do you want to recommend her
要求：
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名，校名和地名，词数 90 左右。
2. 内容应包含提示中的要点并适当发挥。
3. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m writing to recommend Sandy as our monitor. I think she has many strong qualities for this position.
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Yours faithfully,
Shirley
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to recommend Sandy as our monitor. I think she has many strong qualities for this position.
Sandy is clever. She can do all the things well. She is hard-working, and always does extra work for class. Sandy is organized. She never forgets the things she needs to do. She is helpful and ready to help others any time. Sandy likes reading because she can learn a lot from books. She loves blue. Blue is a calm colour. It represents peace. When others are angry or excited, she can often make them calm down.
I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours faithfully,
Shirley
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇书信；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：向班主任Mr. Smith推荐Sandy做你们班的班长，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己写信的目的，引出下文；
第二步，详细介绍你推荐Sandy的理由，包括Sandy的优点，爱好等，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，表达期待，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①strong qualities 优点
②be ready to… 乐于……
③calm down 冷静下来
[高分句型]
①Sandy likes reading because she can learn a lot from books.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When others are angry or excited, she can often make them calm down.（when引导的时间状语从句）
11．亲爱的同学们，学期接近尾声， 快乐的寒假就要来临。怎样安排好寒假生活，过一个充实而有意义的假期呢？请根据下文提示，写一下你的寒假计划吧。
学习计划 认真学习， 坚持读书，练习听力……
生活安排 健康饮食，锻炼身体，发展兴趣……
家庭活动 感恩父母，多做家务,， 欢度春节……
注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
The winter holiday is coming. Here’s my plan for it.
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I think it will be a meaningful winter holiday if I can carry out the plan.
【答案】例文
The winter holiday is coming. Here’s my plan for it.
Firstly, I will focus on my studies by reading books and practicing listening every day to improve my skills. Secondly, I will make sure to maintain a healthy lifestyle by eating balanced meals and exercising regularly. I also plan to develop a new hobby such as painting or playing a musical instrument. Thirdly, I want to show my gratitude to my parents by doing more housework and spending quality time with them. We will enjoy the Spring Festival together with a big family dinner and share joy. I think it will be a meaningful winter holiday if I can carry out the plan.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：为一般将来时；
③ 提示：根据提示内容完成写作，包含三个主要方面的计划：学习、生活、家庭活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出写作意图：介绍寒假计划；
第二步，从学习计划、生活安排及家庭活动三方面具体展开描述；
第三步，结尾表达对寒假计划效果的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①focus on专注于
②balanced meals平衡膳食
③carry out执行
[高分句型]
I think it will be a meaningful winter holiday if I can carry out the plan. (宾语从句和条件状语从句)
12．假设你是李华，你们学校将开设两个社团。请根据提示，向同学们介绍一个你喜欢的社团，并谈谈你喜欢的理由和你对该社团的建议。
Teens’ Corner·on Friday afternoon, at the school hall ·share ideas and feelings ·ask for advice to solve teenage problems ·make friends with each other … Art Club·on Tuesday afternoon, in the art room ·talk about different art forms ·enjoy beautiful paintings ·attend concerts …
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括一个社团的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 对你所喜欢的社团说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3. 文章不少于90词，已给出部分不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear classmates,
I am glad that our school will set up two new clubs. I’d like to introduce___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear classmates,
I am glad that our school will set up two new clubs. I’d like to introduce the Art Club to you. The Art Club will meet every Tuesday afternoon in the art room. During the club meetings, we will discuss different art forms, enjoy beautiful paintings, and have the opportunity to attend concerts. I am particularly fond of the Art Club because it allows me to appreciate diverse artistic expressions and develop my creativity. My suggestion for the Art Club is to invite local artists to give workshops, which would provide us with professional insights and inspiration. I hope more students will join and enjoy the club activities.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般将来时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍学校新社团以及选择你喜欢的社团的理由，给社团提出好的建议等；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待和愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be fond of喜欢、喜爱
②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
③provide sb. with sth.为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①I am particularly fond of the Art Club because it allows me to appreciate diverse artistic expressions and develop my creativity.（原因状语从句）
②I hope more students will join and enjoy the club activities.（宾语从句）
13．路虽远，行则将至；事虽难，做则必成。青年人应有自己的梦想，未来可期。请根据下表所给要点写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。
Name Dream Details
Millie 艺术家 痴迷于画画，艺术节上赢得高度赞扬，父母一直鼓励不断尝试
Tom 音乐家 认为最好的音乐来自于大自然；梦想将中西方音乐融合，搭建中西桥梁
Sam 导演 喜欢表演，最喜爱的电影明星是赫本（Hepburn）；……（原因自拟一条）
I 侦探 喜欢读侦探故事，擅长解谜
为了实现梦想，我认为……
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头己给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚，语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Our dreams
Everyone has a dream, but different students have different dreams. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Everyone has a dream, but different students have different dreams. Millie wants to be an artist. She is crazy about painting and she won high praise in the art festival. Moreover, her parents encourage her to keep trying all the time. Tom hopes to be a musician. He thinks the best music comes from nature. He dreams of mixing Chinese music with Western music to build a bridge between the East and the West. Sam would like to be a director because he likes acting very much. His favourite film star is Hepburn. She is considered as a superstar by many people, not only for her success in the films, but also for her efforts in charity work. As for me, my dream is to be a detective. I like reading detective stories and enjoy solving mysteries.
To realize our dreams, I think we should work harder. Remember, it is you who shape your life and future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，特别注意不要遗漏表格中需要自行补充的内容，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。介绍每个学生都有不同的梦想；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍Millie、Tom、Sam以及自己的梦想；
第三步，书写结语。我们应该更加努力去实现自己的梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①be crazy about着迷于……，热衷于……
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人去做某事
③hope to do sth.希望去做某事
④come from来自
⑤not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Sam would like to be a director because he likes acting very much.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I like reading detective stories and enjoy solving mysteries.（动名词作宾语）
③To realize our dreams, I think we should work harder.（动词不定式作目的状语；think后接省略引导词that的宾语从句）
14．时间飞逝，难忘的2023在身后渐行渐远，不知不觉我们已经沐浴在2024的阳光里。过去的一年你一定有所收获，新的一年你也一定有所期待。请以“Say goodbye to 2023, and say hi to 2024”为题，用英文写一篇短文，内容必须包含表格中所有要点。
总结2023 收获：结交了很多朋友；学习了更多知识；掌握了一些技能。 感谢：(对象及原因)
计划2024 1、努力学习，进入理想高中； 2、读几本好书，提升自我； 3、(至少再列举一条计划并阐述其目的)
注意：
1. 100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Say goodbye to 2023, and say hi to 2024
How time flies! The year of 2023 has been over.
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I believe I can meet a better myself in 2024.
【答案】例文
Say goodbye to 2023, and say hi to 2024
How time flies! The year of 2023 has been over.
In the past year, I have gained a lot. I made a lot of new friends with the same interests, learned more new knowledge and mastered some useful skills. I would like to thank my classmates who helped me with my schoolwork, my teachers who taught me knowledge, and my parents who took good care of me. Looking ahead to 2024, I also had some new plans. First, I will work harder and try my best to enter my ideal high school. Second, I want to read some good books to improve myself. Last, I will eat healthy food and exercise more to keep fit, so that I can be ready for new challenges.
I believe I can meet a better myself in 2024.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总结2023年的收获，如结交朋友、学习知识和掌握技能；
第二步，表达感谢，包括感谢老师的指导和朋友的陪伴；
第三步，规划2024年，包括努力学习、读好书、自我提升和定期锻炼。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot很多
②take good care of好好照顾
[高分句型]
①I would like to thank my classmates who helped me with my schoolwork, my teachers who taught me knowledge, and my parents who took good care of me.（定语从句）
②Last, I will eat healthy food and exercise more to keep fit, so that I can be ready for new challenges.（状语从句）
15．一个榜样不仅具备优秀的能力和品质，更重要的是他的人格魅力和对社会贡献的付出。生命中总有一些值得我们学习的榜样。最近，江苏教育电视台将举办题为“The Great Person I Admire Most”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
要求：
（1）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（2）词数 100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
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【答案】
例文：
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
Standing here, many great figures come into my mind, scientists, politicians, history makers and so on. Among them, I admire Yuan Longping most, an agricultural pioneer of China. It is known that there are many people suffering from hunger in many countries. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.
As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏流程图中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我最尊敬的人是袁隆平”来引出下文中对袁隆平的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“介绍、经历和贡献”三方面入手，重点介绍袁隆平；
第三步，书写结语。袁隆平的事迹对我有很大的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on 等等
②suffer from 遭受
③devote oneself into 致力于
④thanks to 由于，归功于
⑤as for 至于
⑥have difficulty in doing sth 做某事有困难
[高分句型]
①More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.（which引导的定语从句）
②It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot.（强调句）
③I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.（that引导的宾语从句）