读后续写 错过的写作比赛：男孩的梦想折翼与重生（讲义）-黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市2024-2025学年高三1月大联考考后英语强化卷
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整短文。
The boy sat on his chair, with his hand above the keyboard. He thought about what to write.
He recalled that the competition deadline was merely a week away. But he still had not even started on his piece. He looked at the brochure again. “WRITING COMPETITION!” the title read. His mom had encouraged him to enter the writing competition, and now he was taking it on as his personal task for the holidays.
As the boy reflected on his previous writing efforts, he realized how hopeless his task of winning was. Every story he ever wrote was based on other stories. He had little imagination, and unfortunately, imagination was the key to writing.
Suddenly, he had a brainwave. This time, he came up with an original and imaginative story.
The words shot towards him like a storm of leaves. Words were coming easily, flowing through him, faster than he could type. He typed faster than he ever had before. He continued to type, amazed at how easy writing this story was. The boy could not stop writing. He looked at the word count and saw the number “248” staring right back at him. He was not even halfway yet.
Then he heard the call of his mother saying time for bed. He continued writing the piece, ignoring her. He had to make up for the time he had lost thinking about a topic to write. Finally, he finished. The word count now read “498”.
“Perfect,” he thought, “just under the word limit.” He knew this was the story that would win.
He went onto Google and searched for the competition. He found the page but there was no “Enter” button.
Confused, he then re-read the page again. It read COMPETITION CLOSED.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
After a few seconds, the boy eagerly checked the deadline of the COMPETITION on the website.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
His mother came up and comforted him.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
一个男孩坐在电脑前，为即将截止的写作比赛发愁，他以往写作多借鉴他人缺乏想象力，这次却灵感突发，文思泉涌，很快写出一篇近 500 字、自认为能获奖的故事。当他准备提交作品时，却发现比赛网站上没有 “提交” 按钮，仔细一看，比赛已于一周前结束，他的满心期待瞬间落空。
二、故事山分析
开端：男孩面临写作比赛截稿只剩一周，却毫无头绪，在妈妈鼓励下决定参赛。
发展：苦思冥想后突然灵感乍现，奋笔疾书完成作品，且刚好符合字数要求。
高潮：准备提交时发现比赛已结束。
结局：男孩陷入极度失望，后在妈妈安慰下重拾信心。
三、伏笔及续写中的回应
伏笔：比赛截止日期仅一周，为后文发现已结束做铺垫。
回应：续写中男孩看到截止日期已过，希望破灭，情绪急转直下。
伏笔：男孩之前写作多借鉴他人，缺乏想象力，突出这次原创故事来之不易。
回应：虽比赛失利，但妈妈肯定他这次创作展现的创造力，让他重拾信心。
伏笔：妈妈鼓励男孩参赛，暗示妈妈在男孩成长中的支持作用。
回应：妈妈后续及时安慰，引导男孩走出沮丧，体现亲情温暖。
伏笔：男孩文思泉涌，快速写完故事，与之前写作困难对比，凸显他对这次比赛的期待。
回应：正因期待高，发现比赛结束才格外失望，反差强化情感。
伏笔：男孩关注字数，确保符合要求，体现他对比赛规则的重视，也反映其求胜心切。
回应：满心以为符合要求就能获奖，结果落空，失望感加剧。
四、续写要点
第一段：
详细描写男孩看到截止日期已过的震惊、沮丧心情，可从神态、心理等方面入手，如眼睛瞪大、大脑空白等。
通过回忆创作过程艰辛，与此刻失落形成对比，突出打击之大。
第二段：
妈妈安慰的语言要真挚、有针对性，提及努力的价值、未来机会等。
描写男孩听后心理变化，从伤心到振作，展现亲情力量与成长。
五、情感线
起初男孩因比赛临近、毫无思路而焦虑，灵感闪现后转为兴奋、自信，满心期待获奖；发现比赛结束时，极度震惊、失望、自我怀疑；妈妈安慰后，慢慢感受到温暖，重拾写作信心，情感起伏紧扣故事发展，围绕对写作梦想的追求与挫折。
六、故事线
男孩受妈妈鼓励，准备参加写作比赛。
赛前一周仍无头绪，以往写作缺想象力。
突然灵感爆发，快速写出故事。
完成作品，字数达标，准备提交。
发现比赛已结束，陷入绝望。
妈妈安慰，男孩重拾信心。
七、主旨升华句
Failure is not the end, but a new beginning that leads us to grow and strive for better.（失败不是终点，而是引领我们成长、追求更好的新起点。）
Every setback is a stepping stone on the path to success, as long as we have the courage to persevere.（每一次挫折都是通往成功路上的垫脚石，只要我们有勇气坚持下去。）
The journey of chasing dreams is often filled with bumps and bruises, but it's these hardships that shape our true selves.（追逐梦想的旅程常常充满坎坷，但正是这些艰难困苦塑造了真实的我们。）
Sometimes, life doesn't go as planned, but it's our attitude in the face of disappointment that defines our future.（有时候，生活并不如计划的那样，但我们在失望面前的态度决定了我们的未来。）
In the face of failure, the support of loved ones is like a lighthouse, guiding us back to the path of hope and perseverance.（在失败面前，亲人的支持就像一座灯塔，指引我们回到希望与坚持的道路上。）
八、写作示范
第一篇
Paragraph 1:
After a few seconds, the boy eagerly checked the deadline of the COMPETITION on the website. His eyes widened in disbelief as he saw the glaring date that confirmed his worst fears. The competition had closed a week ago. He felt like he had been punched in the gut. All the enthusiasm and energy he had put into writing that story drained away in an instant. Memories of the past hour, with words flowing effortlessly from his fingertips, now seemed like a cruel joke. He slumped in his chair, staring blankly at the screen, tears threatening to spill over as he thought about how foolish he had been to think he could win.
Paragraph 2:
His mother came up and comforted him. She knelt beside his chair and took his hand gently. “Sweetheart, I know it hurts right now, but remember, this is just one small bump in your long writing journey.” She looked into his eyes, her own filled with love and understanding. “You wrote that story with so much heart and creativity. That's what matters most. There will be other competitions, other chances to shine.” Her words were like a warm balm to his wounded spirit. Slowly, he sat up straight, wiped his tears, and nodded. He realized that she was right. This setback wouldn't stop him. He would keep writing, and one day, he was sure, his story would find its way to the world.
第二篇
Paragraph 1:
After a few seconds, the boy eagerly checked the deadline of the COMPETITION on the website. A wave of cold shock washed over him as he saw the dreaded words “COMPETITION CLOSED” and the date that was already a week past. His hands trembled as he gripped the mouse tighter, as if trying to change the reality in front of him. He thought back to how the story had practically written itself, how he had felt on top of the world, believing it was his ticket to victory. Now, it all crumbled, and he was left with a hollow feeling in his chest. Anger, disappointment, and self-loathing welled up inside him as he cursed his bad luck.
Paragraph 2:
His mother came up and comforted him. She wrapped her arms around him from behind and whispered softly, “Baby, don't be too hard on yourself. This isn't the end. You've discovered a new side of yourself through this writing. You were able to create something original, and that's a huge achievement.” She rocked him gently as she continued, “Life has its twists and turns, but you're strong enough to handle them. Next time, you'll be even better prepared.” Her soothing voice and warm embrace gradually calmed his raging emotions. He took a deep breath and turned to face her, a new determination in his eyes. He would pick himself up and continue his pursuit of writing, no matter what obstacles lay ahead.
【答案】
After a few seconds, the boy eagerly checked the deadline of the COMPETITION on the website. Hardly had he opened the webpage when the capitalized letters COMPETITION CLOSED leapt into his eyes again. How could that be The deadline was a week away. “No!!!” silent screams exploded inside him. He rubbed his eyes, got closer to the screen and fixed his eyes on the letters. The Cruel capitalized letters just stood out as if naughtily winking at him. Unwilling though he was, he was forced to accept the irreversible fact that the competition had closed. Noticing mom leaning against his room door gazing at him with affection, he couldn’t fight back tears of grievance, bursting out crying loudly.
His mother came up and comforted him. “Dear, it’s OK. You’ve written an award-winning story which is original and imaginative. That’s the biggest gain in the process.” mom said gently, patting him on the shoulder. Mom’s heartwarming comfort dispersed his shame, but still he regretted, “Mom, I should have started earlier and met the deadline! All my efforts have gone to waste.” As he recollected the struggle in choosing the topic and writing the imaginative story, mom wiped his tears, ruffled his hair and asked him to go to bed. Tossing and turning in bed, he was drawn to the fact that less procrastination, more satisfaction.
The boy sat on his chair, with his hand above the keyboard. He thought about what to write.
He recalled that the competition deadline was merely a week away. But he still had not even started on his piece. He looked at the brochure again. “WRITING COMPETITION!” the title read. His mom had encouraged him to enter the writing competition, and now he was taking it on as his personal task for the holidays.
As the boy reflected on his previous writing efforts, he realized how hopeless his task of winning was. Every story he ever wrote was based on other stories. He had little imagination, and unfortunately, imagination was the key to writing.
Suddenly, he had a brainwave. This time, he came up with an original and imaginative story.
The words shot towards him like a storm of leaves. Words were coming easily, flowing through him, faster than he could type. He typed faster than he ever had before. He continued to type, amazed at how easy writing this story was. The boy could not stop writing. He looked at the word count and saw the number “248” staring right back at him. He was not even halfway yet.
Then he heard the call of his mother saying time for bed. He continued writing the piece, ignoring her. He had to make up for the time he had lost thinking about a topic to write. Finally, he finished. The word count now read “498”.
“Perfect,” he thought, “just under the word limit.” He knew this was the story that would win.
He went onto Google and searched for the competition. He found the page but there was no “Enter” button.
Confused, he then re-read the page again. It read COMPETITION CLOSED.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
After a few seconds, the boy eagerly checked the deadline of the COMPETITION on the website.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
His mother came up and comforted him.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
一个男孩坐在电脑前，为即将截止的写作比赛发愁，他以往写作多借鉴他人缺乏想象力，这次却灵感突发，文思泉涌，很快写出一篇近 500 字、自认为能获奖的故事。当他准备提交作品时，却发现比赛网站上没有 “提交” 按钮，仔细一看，比赛已于一周前结束，他的满心期待瞬间落空。
二、故事山分析
开端：男孩面临写作比赛截稿只剩一周，却毫无头绪，在妈妈鼓励下决定参赛。
发展：苦思冥想后突然灵感乍现，奋笔疾书完成作品，且刚好符合字数要求。
高潮：准备提交时发现比赛已结束。
结局：男孩陷入极度失望，后在妈妈安慰下重拾信心。
三、伏笔及续写中的回应
伏笔：比赛截止日期仅一周，为后文发现已结束做铺垫。
回应：续写中男孩看到截止日期已过，希望破灭，情绪急转直下。
伏笔：男孩之前写作多借鉴他人，缺乏想象力，突出这次原创故事来之不易。
回应：虽比赛失利，但妈妈肯定他这次创作展现的创造力，让他重拾信心。
伏笔：妈妈鼓励男孩参赛，暗示妈妈在男孩成长中的支持作用。
回应：妈妈后续及时安慰，引导男孩走出沮丧，体现亲情温暖。
伏笔：男孩文思泉涌，快速写完故事，与之前写作困难对比，凸显他对这次比赛的期待。
回应：正因期待高，发现比赛结束才格外失望，反差强化情感。
伏笔：男孩关注字数，确保符合要求，体现他对比赛规则的重视，也反映其求胜心切。
回应：满心以为符合要求就能获奖，结果落空，失望感加剧。
四、续写要点
第一段：
详细描写男孩看到截止日期已过的震惊、沮丧心情，可从神态、心理等方面入手，如眼睛瞪大、大脑空白等。
通过回忆创作过程艰辛，与此刻失落形成对比，突出打击之大。
第二段：
妈妈安慰的语言要真挚、有针对性，提及努力的价值、未来机会等。
描写男孩听后心理变化，从伤心到振作，展现亲情力量与成长。
五、情感线
起初男孩因比赛临近、毫无思路而焦虑，灵感闪现后转为兴奋、自信，满心期待获奖；发现比赛结束时，极度震惊、失望、自我怀疑；妈妈安慰后，慢慢感受到温暖，重拾写作信心，情感起伏紧扣故事发展，围绕对写作梦想的追求与挫折。
六、故事线
男孩受妈妈鼓励，准备参加写作比赛。
赛前一周仍无头绪，以往写作缺想象力。
突然灵感爆发，快速写出故事。
完成作品，字数达标，准备提交。
发现比赛已结束，陷入绝望。
妈妈安慰，男孩重拾信心。
七、主旨升华句
Failure is not the end, but a new beginning that leads us to grow and strive for better.（失败不是终点，而是引领我们成长、追求更好的新起点。）
Every setback is a stepping stone on the path to success, as long as we have the courage to persevere.（每一次挫折都是通往成功路上的垫脚石，只要我们有勇气坚持下去。）
The journey of chasing dreams is often filled with bumps and bruises, but it's these hardships that shape our true selves.（追逐梦想的旅程常常充满坎坷，但正是这些艰难困苦塑造了真实的我们。）
Sometimes, life doesn't go as planned, but it's our attitude in the face of disappointment that defines our future.（有时候，生活并不如计划的那样，但我们在失望面前的态度决定了我们的未来。）
In the face of failure, the support of loved ones is like a lighthouse, guiding us back to the path of hope and perseverance.（在失败面前，亲人的支持就像一座灯塔，指引我们回到希望与坚持的道路上。）
八、写作示范
第一篇
Paragraph 1:
After a few seconds, the boy eagerly checked the deadline of the COMPETITION on the website. His eyes widened in disbelief as he saw the glaring date that confirmed his worst fears. The competition had closed a week ago. He felt like he had been punched in the gut. All the enthusiasm and energy he had put into writing that story drained away in an instant. Memories of the past hour, with words flowing effortlessly from his fingertips, now seemed like a cruel joke. He slumped in his chair, staring blankly at the screen, tears threatening to spill over as he thought about how foolish he had been to think he could win.
Paragraph 2:
His mother came up and comforted him. She knelt beside his chair and took his hand gently. “Sweetheart, I know it hurts right now, but remember, this is just one small bump in your long writing journey.” She looked into his eyes, her own filled with love and understanding. “You wrote that story with so much heart and creativity. That's what matters most. There will be other competitions, other chances to shine.” Her words were like a warm balm to his wounded spirit. Slowly, he sat up straight, wiped his tears, and nodded. He realized that she was right. This setback wouldn't stop him. He would keep writing, and one day, he was sure, his story would find its way to the world.
第二篇
Paragraph 1:
After a few seconds, the boy eagerly checked the deadline of the COMPETITION on the website. A wave of cold shock washed over him as he saw the dreaded words “COMPETITION CLOSED” and the date that was already a week past. His hands trembled as he gripped the mouse tighter, as if trying to change the reality in front of him. He thought back to how the story had practically written itself, how he had felt on top of the world, believing it was his ticket to victory. Now, it all crumbled, and he was left with a hollow feeling in his chest. Anger, disappointment, and self-loathing welled up inside him as he cursed his bad luck.
Paragraph 2:
His mother came up and comforted him. She wrapped her arms around him from behind and whispered softly, “Baby, don't be too hard on yourself. This isn't the end. You've discovered a new side of yourself through this writing. You were able to create something original, and that's a huge achievement.” She rocked him gently as she continued, “Life has its twists and turns, but you're strong enough to handle them. Next time, you'll be even better prepared.” Her soothing voice and warm embrace gradually calmed his raging emotions. He took a deep breath and turned to face her, a new determination in his eyes. He would pick himself up and continue his pursuit of writing, no matter what obstacles lay ahead.
【答案】
After a few seconds, the boy eagerly checked the deadline of the COMPETITION on the website. Hardly had he opened the webpage when the capitalized letters COMPETITION CLOSED leapt into his eyes again. How could that be The deadline was a week away. “No!!!” silent screams exploded inside him. He rubbed his eyes, got closer to the screen and fixed his eyes on the letters. The Cruel capitalized letters just stood out as if naughtily winking at him. Unwilling though he was, he was forced to accept the irreversible fact that the competition had closed. Noticing mom leaning against his room door gazing at him with affection, he couldn’t fight back tears of grievance, bursting out crying loudly.
His mother came up and comforted him. “Dear, it’s OK. You’ve written an award-winning story which is original and imaginative. That’s the biggest gain in the process.” mom said gently, patting him on the shoulder. Mom’s heartwarming comfort dispersed his shame, but still he regretted, “Mom, I should have started earlier and met the deadline! All my efforts have gone to waste.” As he recollected the struggle in choosing the topic and writing the imaginative story, mom wiped his tears, ruffled his hair and asked him to go to bed. Tossing and turning in bed, he was drawn to the fact that less procrastination, more satisfaction.