读后续写--清洁工礼物的暖心故事 （讲义）-江苏省G4（南师附中、无锡天一、南通海安、海门四校）2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考英语试题
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阅读下面材料，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一篇完整的故事。
In my community, there’s a much-loved street cleaner named Paul Spiery. Since 2017, the 63-year-old has been dutifully cleaning our streets. As he sweeps, he always sings along with the melodious tunes of Elvis Presley (猫王) . Paul’s beautiful voice floats in the air, adding a unique charm to our community.
Paul has developed deep and genuine friendships with many of us locals. I’m his best friend as we both love Elvis’ songs. Whenever we express our gratitude to him, he always smiles brightly and says he’s just doing his job. His presence has not only kept our roads clean but also lifted out spirits.
We, the neighbours, were deeply touched by Paul’s hard work and positive attitude. So we decided to come together to give him a special gift. We managed to raise over 3,000 to send him on a holiday to Portugal a place he had always dreamed of revisiting since he had only been abroad once, and that was to Portugal.
However, our kind plan encountered a big problem. Paul’s employer, a waste management company, stated that employees couldn’t receive any gifts in the form of money other than their regular salary according to strict corporate rules. At this news, Paul said, “Well, rules are rules. It’s okay. I’m grateful for what everyone has tried to do for me.” He continued to sweep the floor, humming a song of Elvis Presley as usual.
We were all disappointed that Paul couldn’t enjoy this well-deserved holiday as a reward for all his hard work for our community and determined to find a proper way to recognize Paul.
I posted Paul’s story on social media, “Giving him this incredible gift would be a heartfelt way to show our appreciation for everything he does. Let’s come together to make this dream happen for someone who truly deserves it.” The post went viral and caught the attention of a package holiday company, OnTheBeach.
The manager of OnTheBeach got in touch with me, and put forward a proper way to recognize Paul.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win.
______________________________________________________________________________
文章大意：
在社区备受爱戴的 63 岁街道清洁工保罗，清扫时爱哼唱猫王歌曲，与居民情谊深厚。居民感恩其付出，众筹 3000 多英镑想送他去葡萄牙度假，却因公司规定员工不能收受金钱形式礼物受阻。保罗坦然接受，居民未放弃，“我” 将故事发网上后引发关注，度假公司 OnTheBeach 介入，提出特别方式帮助实现大家心愿。
故事山分析：
开端：保罗多年如一日清扫街道并哼唱歌曲，与居民交好，展现温馨日常场景，引出人物与背景。
发展：居民感恩策划送度假礼物，体现社区温情，推动情节发展。
高潮：公司规则打破原计划，制造冲突与悬念。
低谷：保罗虽失落仍坚守岗位，凸显其豁达，情绪短暂下沉。
回升：网上发帖引度假公司关注，带来转机，情节转折上扬。
伏笔及续写中的回应：
伏笔：保罗爱唱猫王歌曲，“As he sweeps, he always sings along with the melodious tunes of Elvis Presley.”，为后续唱歌比赛做铺垫。
回应：续写中度假公司举办以猫王歌曲为主题的比赛，保罗凭此优势参赛有望获奖。
伏笔：保罗仅去过一次国外即葡萄牙，“a place he had always dreamed of revisiting since he had only been abroad once, and that was to Portugal.”，明确其向往之地。
回应：比赛奖品设定为葡萄牙度假套餐，精准契合保罗心愿。
伏笔：公司严格规定员工不能收受金钱礼物，“Paul’s employer, a waste management company, stated that employees couldn’t receive any gifts in the form of money other than their regular salary according to strict corporate rules.”，制造情节阻碍。
回应：度假公司另辟蹊径，以比赛获胜形式让保罗合规获奖，化解矛盾。
伏笔：“我” 与保罗因共同喜爱猫王歌曲成为好友，“I’m his best friend as we both love Elvis’ songs.”，暗示 “我” 助力的合理性。
回应：“我” 在网上发帖推动故事发展，利用社交力量帮保罗，源于友谊且顺理成章。
伏笔：保罗平日积极乐观，面对礼物受阻坦然处之，“He continued to sweep the floor, humming a song of Elvis Presley as usual.”，刻画性格特点。
回应：后续即使参赛有压力，他也保持状态，最终收获美好，性格促使其迎来人生小高峰。
续写要点：
第一段：
详细描述唱歌比赛的筹备过程，包括场地布置、宣传推广等，展现社区对此次活动的重视。
例如：The community center was quickly transformed into a makeshift concert hall. Colorful banners with Elvis’ portraits hung everywhere, and a professional sound system was installed. Volunteers spread the word through flyers and social media, attracting contestants from all corners of the neighborhood.
突出比赛当日的热烈氛围，保罗的精彩表现及竞争对手的实力，增强故事紧张感与可读性。
像：On the big day, the place was packed. Contestants one after another took the stage, belting out classic Elvis numbers. Paul, in his neatly pressed uniform, stepped up last. His voice, rich and resonant, sent shivers down the spines of the audience. But the others were no slouches either, making it a nail-biting competition.
第二段：
讲述保罗得知公司同意后的反应，包括内心的激动、对众人的感谢表达等细节，将情感推向高潮。
比如：When Paul got the green light from the waste management company, he broke down in tears of joy. He immediately called each and every neighbor who had supported him, his voice choked with gratitude. At the send-off party before his trip, he gave a heartfelt speech, vowing to come back and continue serving the community even better.
描绘保罗度假归来后的变化，如工作态度更加积极，社区凝聚力更强，升华故事主题。
示例：After his wonderful vacation in Portugal, Paul returned with a sun-kissed glow and renewed spirit. He swept the streets with a beaming smile, his singing louder and more energetic than ever. The community, too, felt a new sense of unity, bound by the shared experience of making someone’s dream come true.
情感线：
起初，居民对保罗心怀感恩与喜爱，积极筹备礼物，满是期待；遇公司规则阻碍时，大家沮丧失望；保罗虽失落却乐观坚守，令人心疼又敬佩；网上求助引发关注后重燃希望；比赛过程紧张，众人情绪随选手表现起伏；最终保罗获奖、公司同意，喜悦与欣慰充斥，度假归来更让社区情感升温，从个人感恩升华为集体凝聚力，温暖贯穿始终。
故事线：
保罗多年清扫街道，哼唱猫王歌曲，与居民结下情谊。
居民感恩，众筹资金想送保罗去葡萄牙度假。
公司规定致礼物计划泡汤，保罗坦然接受。
“我” 网上发帖求助，引发度假公司关注。
度假公司办唱歌比赛，保罗参赛。
保罗获奖，公司同意，度假归来更添社区温情。
主旨升华句：
True kindness knows no bounds; it can break through the toughest of rules and make the impossible possible, just as the neighbors did for Paul. （真正的善良没有界限，它能冲破最严苛的规则，让不可能成为可能，就像邻居们为保罗所做的那样。）
In the face of obstacles, the power of a community united by love and gratitude can create miracles, turning disappointment into delight for someone worthy. （面对阻碍，一个因爱与感恩而团结的社区力量能创造奇迹，将失望转化为值得之人的喜悦。）
Sometimes, the simplest acts of appreciation, like a song or a holiday, can light up a person’s life and ripple through a whole community, spreading warmth and hope. （有时，像一首歌或一次度假这样最简单的感恩之举，能点亮一个人的生活，并在整个社区泛起涟漪，传播温暖与希望。）
A dream deferred doesn’t mean a dream denied; with perseverance and the support of others, it can take flight again, as Paul’s journey to Portugal proved. （梦想被推迟并不意味着梦想被否定；有了毅力和他人的支持，它可以再次起航，正如保罗的葡萄牙之旅所证明的那样。）
The story of Paul and his community shows that no matter how humble one’s job, when filled with passion and kindness, it can inspire a whole neighborhood to come together and rewrite someone’s story. （保罗和他社区的故事表明，无论一个人的工作多么平凡，只要充满热情和善良，它就能激励整个社区团结起来，改写某人的故事。）
写作示范两篇：
第一篇：
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. The rules were simple: sing an Elvis Presley song and win a dream holiday to Portugal. Word spread quickly, and soon the community was abuzz with excitement. The local park was chosen as the venue, and volunteers worked tirelessly to set up the stage, complete with bright lights and a state-of-the-art sound system. On the day of the competition, contestants of all ages gathered, each hoping to give Paul a chance at his dream. Paul, looking a bit nervous but determined, took the stage. His voice, which had so often charmed the neighborhood, now soared through the park, captivating everyone. The other singers were strong, but Paul’s passion was palpable.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. When the judges declared him the winner, the crowd went wild. Paul stood there, tears streaming down his face, unable to believe his luck. He thanked everyone, his voice cracking with emotion. Before leaving for Portugal, he visited each neighbor, expressing his gratitude. While on vacation, he sent postcards and pictures, sharing his joy. When he returned, he was a changed man. His work had new meaning, and he sang louder than ever, knowing that his community had his back. The community, too, was closer than ever, bound by the love and kindness shown to Paul.
第二篇：
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. It was an open invitation to all who loved Elvis and wanted to help Paul. The local school auditorium was decked out with Elvis memorabilia, from posters to life-size cutouts. Flyers were distributed, and social media was flooded with posts about the event. Contestants signed up in droves, eager to be part of this heartwarming endeavor. On the day of the event, the atmosphere was electric. Paul, dressed in his best, stepped onto the stage. His rendition of an Elvis classic was flawless, his voice echoing through the hall. The competition was fierce, but Paul’s connection to the music and his community set him apart.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. Paul was overjoyed. He hugged his neighbors, his eyes filled with tears of gratitude. At the airport, before boarding, he promised to bring back memories and souvenirs. While in Portugal, he explored every corner, his face beaming in the photos he sent back. Upon his return, he resumed his duties with a renewed sense of purpose. The community witnessed his transformation and felt a sense of pride. This act of kindness had not only given Paul a holiday but had strengthened the bonds of the community, proving that a little love can go a long way.
读后续写参考范文（满分25分）
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. This event, which was designed for people who love Elvis Presley’s music, offered a grand prize of a dream vacation to Portugal. Anyone who could sing Elvis’s songs was welcome to join. Paul, who had a passion for Elvis and often sang while working, was encouraged by his friends to enter the contest. To everyone’s delight, Paul performed wonderfully and won the hearts of the judges. As a result, he became the winner of the competition, earning the trip that he had longed for.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. The company thought it was a prize for his talent rather than a direct gift of money. After learning about his victory, Paul felt overjoyed and grateful. The news spread quickly, and many neighbors came to congratulate him. Paul, who was always modest, thanked everyone for their support. With this unexpected opportunity, Paul finally got to revisit Portugal, the place he had dreamed of seeing again. His achievement not only brought him personal joy but also made the whole community proud.
In my community, there’s a much-loved street cleaner named Paul Spiery. Since 2017, the 63-year-old has been dutifully cleaning our streets. As he sweeps, he always sings along with the melodious tunes of Elvis Presley (猫王) . Paul’s beautiful voice floats in the air, adding a unique charm to our community.
Paul has developed deep and genuine friendships with many of us locals. I’m his best friend as we both love Elvis’ songs. Whenever we express our gratitude to him, he always smiles brightly and says he’s just doing his job. His presence has not only kept our roads clean but also lifted out spirits.
We, the neighbours, were deeply touched by Paul’s hard work and positive attitude. So we decided to come together to give him a special gift. We managed to raise over 3,000 to send him on a holiday to Portugal a place he had always dreamed of revisiting since he had only been abroad once, and that was to Portugal.
However, our kind plan encountered a big problem. Paul’s employer, a waste management company, stated that employees couldn’t receive any gifts in the form of money other than their regular salary according to strict corporate rules. At this news, Paul said, “Well, rules are rules. It’s okay. I’m grateful for what everyone has tried to do for me.” He continued to sweep the floor, humming a song of Elvis Presley as usual.
We were all disappointed that Paul couldn’t enjoy this well-deserved holiday as a reward for all his hard work for our community and determined to find a proper way to recognize Paul.
I posted Paul’s story on social media, “Giving him this incredible gift would be a heartfelt way to show our appreciation for everything he does. Let’s come together to make this dream happen for someone who truly deserves it.” The post went viral and caught the attention of a package holiday company, OnTheBeach.
The manager of OnTheBeach got in touch with me, and put forward a proper way to recognize Paul.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win.
______________________________________________________________________________
文章大意：
在社区备受爱戴的 63 岁街道清洁工保罗，清扫时爱哼唱猫王歌曲，与居民情谊深厚。居民感恩其付出，众筹 3000 多英镑想送他去葡萄牙度假，却因公司规定员工不能收受金钱形式礼物受阻。保罗坦然接受，居民未放弃，“我” 将故事发网上后引发关注，度假公司 OnTheBeach 介入，提出特别方式帮助实现大家心愿。
故事山分析：
开端：保罗多年如一日清扫街道并哼唱歌曲，与居民交好，展现温馨日常场景，引出人物与背景。
发展：居民感恩策划送度假礼物，体现社区温情，推动情节发展。
高潮：公司规则打破原计划，制造冲突与悬念。
低谷：保罗虽失落仍坚守岗位，凸显其豁达，情绪短暂下沉。
回升：网上发帖引度假公司关注，带来转机，情节转折上扬。
伏笔及续写中的回应：
伏笔：保罗爱唱猫王歌曲，“As he sweeps, he always sings along with the melodious tunes of Elvis Presley.”，为后续唱歌比赛做铺垫。
回应：续写中度假公司举办以猫王歌曲为主题的比赛，保罗凭此优势参赛有望获奖。
伏笔：保罗仅去过一次国外即葡萄牙，“a place he had always dreamed of revisiting since he had only been abroad once, and that was to Portugal.”，明确其向往之地。
回应：比赛奖品设定为葡萄牙度假套餐，精准契合保罗心愿。
伏笔：公司严格规定员工不能收受金钱礼物，“Paul’s employer, a waste management company, stated that employees couldn’t receive any gifts in the form of money other than their regular salary according to strict corporate rules.”，制造情节阻碍。
回应：度假公司另辟蹊径，以比赛获胜形式让保罗合规获奖，化解矛盾。
伏笔：“我” 与保罗因共同喜爱猫王歌曲成为好友，“I’m his best friend as we both love Elvis’ songs.”，暗示 “我” 助力的合理性。
回应：“我” 在网上发帖推动故事发展，利用社交力量帮保罗，源于友谊且顺理成章。
伏笔：保罗平日积极乐观，面对礼物受阻坦然处之，“He continued to sweep the floor, humming a song of Elvis Presley as usual.”，刻画性格特点。
回应：后续即使参赛有压力，他也保持状态，最终收获美好，性格促使其迎来人生小高峰。
续写要点：
第一段：
详细描述唱歌比赛的筹备过程，包括场地布置、宣传推广等，展现社区对此次活动的重视。
例如：The community center was quickly transformed into a makeshift concert hall. Colorful banners with Elvis’ portraits hung everywhere, and a professional sound system was installed. Volunteers spread the word through flyers and social media, attracting contestants from all corners of the neighborhood.
突出比赛当日的热烈氛围，保罗的精彩表现及竞争对手的实力，增强故事紧张感与可读性。
像：On the big day, the place was packed. Contestants one after another took the stage, belting out classic Elvis numbers. Paul, in his neatly pressed uniform, stepped up last. His voice, rich and resonant, sent shivers down the spines of the audience. But the others were no slouches either, making it a nail-biting competition.
第二段：
讲述保罗得知公司同意后的反应，包括内心的激动、对众人的感谢表达等细节，将情感推向高潮。
比如：When Paul got the green light from the waste management company, he broke down in tears of joy. He immediately called each and every neighbor who had supported him, his voice choked with gratitude. At the send-off party before his trip, he gave a heartfelt speech, vowing to come back and continue serving the community even better.
描绘保罗度假归来后的变化，如工作态度更加积极，社区凝聚力更强，升华故事主题。
示例：After his wonderful vacation in Portugal, Paul returned with a sun-kissed glow and renewed spirit. He swept the streets with a beaming smile, his singing louder and more energetic than ever. The community, too, felt a new sense of unity, bound by the shared experience of making someone’s dream come true.
情感线：
起初，居民对保罗心怀感恩与喜爱，积极筹备礼物，满是期待；遇公司规则阻碍时，大家沮丧失望；保罗虽失落却乐观坚守，令人心疼又敬佩；网上求助引发关注后重燃希望；比赛过程紧张，众人情绪随选手表现起伏；最终保罗获奖、公司同意，喜悦与欣慰充斥，度假归来更让社区情感升温，从个人感恩升华为集体凝聚力，温暖贯穿始终。
故事线：
保罗多年清扫街道，哼唱猫王歌曲，与居民结下情谊。
居民感恩，众筹资金想送保罗去葡萄牙度假。
公司规定致礼物计划泡汤，保罗坦然接受。
“我” 网上发帖求助，引发度假公司关注。
度假公司办唱歌比赛，保罗参赛。
保罗获奖，公司同意，度假归来更添社区温情。
主旨升华句：
True kindness knows no bounds; it can break through the toughest of rules and make the impossible possible, just as the neighbors did for Paul. （真正的善良没有界限，它能冲破最严苛的规则，让不可能成为可能，就像邻居们为保罗所做的那样。）
In the face of obstacles, the power of a community united by love and gratitude can create miracles, turning disappointment into delight for someone worthy. （面对阻碍，一个因爱与感恩而团结的社区力量能创造奇迹，将失望转化为值得之人的喜悦。）
Sometimes, the simplest acts of appreciation, like a song or a holiday, can light up a person’s life and ripple through a whole community, spreading warmth and hope. （有时，像一首歌或一次度假这样最简单的感恩之举，能点亮一个人的生活，并在整个社区泛起涟漪，传播温暖与希望。）
A dream deferred doesn’t mean a dream denied; with perseverance and the support of others, it can take flight again, as Paul’s journey to Portugal proved. （梦想被推迟并不意味着梦想被否定；有了毅力和他人的支持，它可以再次起航，正如保罗的葡萄牙之旅所证明的那样。）
The story of Paul and his community shows that no matter how humble one’s job, when filled with passion and kindness, it can inspire a whole neighborhood to come together and rewrite someone’s story. （保罗和他社区的故事表明，无论一个人的工作多么平凡，只要充满热情和善良，它就能激励整个社区团结起来，改写某人的故事。）
写作示范两篇：
第一篇：
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. The rules were simple: sing an Elvis Presley song and win a dream holiday to Portugal. Word spread quickly, and soon the community was abuzz with excitement. The local park was chosen as the venue, and volunteers worked tirelessly to set up the stage, complete with bright lights and a state-of-the-art sound system. On the day of the competition, contestants of all ages gathered, each hoping to give Paul a chance at his dream. Paul, looking a bit nervous but determined, took the stage. His voice, which had so often charmed the neighborhood, now soared through the park, captivating everyone. The other singers were strong, but Paul’s passion was palpable.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. When the judges declared him the winner, the crowd went wild. Paul stood there, tears streaming down his face, unable to believe his luck. He thanked everyone, his voice cracking with emotion. Before leaving for Portugal, he visited each neighbor, expressing his gratitude. While on vacation, he sent postcards and pictures, sharing his joy. When he returned, he was a changed man. His work had new meaning, and he sang louder than ever, knowing that his community had his back. The community, too, was closer than ever, bound by the love and kindness shown to Paul.
第二篇：
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. It was an open invitation to all who loved Elvis and wanted to help Paul. The local school auditorium was decked out with Elvis memorabilia, from posters to life-size cutouts. Flyers were distributed, and social media was flooded with posts about the event. Contestants signed up in droves, eager to be part of this heartwarming endeavor. On the day of the event, the atmosphere was electric. Paul, dressed in his best, stepped onto the stage. His rendition of an Elvis classic was flawless, his voice echoing through the hall. The competition was fierce, but Paul’s connection to the music and his community set him apart.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. Paul was overjoyed. He hugged his neighbors, his eyes filled with tears of gratitude. At the airport, before boarding, he promised to bring back memories and souvenirs. While in Portugal, he explored every corner, his face beaming in the photos he sent back. Upon his return, he resumed his duties with a renewed sense of purpose. The community witnessed his transformation and felt a sense of pride. This act of kindness had not only given Paul a holiday but had strengthened the bonds of the community, proving that a little love can go a long way.
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OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. This event, which was designed for people who love Elvis Presley’s music, offered a grand prize of a dream vacation to Portugal. Anyone who could sing Elvis’s songs was welcome to join. Paul, who had a passion for Elvis and often sang while working, was encouraged by his friends to enter the contest. To everyone’s delight, Paul performed wonderfully and won the hearts of the judges. As a result, he became the winner of the competition, earning the trip that he had longed for.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. The company thought it was a prize for his talent rather than a direct gift of money. After learning about his victory, Paul felt overjoyed and grateful. The news spread quickly, and many neighbors came to congratulate him. Paul, who was always modest, thanked everyone for their support. With this unexpected opportunity, Paul finally got to revisit Portugal, the place he had dreamed of seeing again. His achievement not only brought him personal joy but also made the whole community proud.
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