应用文写作--校运会:青春热血与成长的舞台 讲义-江苏省2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考英语试题 (1)

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名称 应用文写作--校运会:青春热血与成长的舞台 讲义-江苏省2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考英语试题 (1)
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应用文写作
假定你是李华,你校举办了第12届运动会。请你给你的英国笔友Linda写一封邮件介绍相关情况,内容包括:
1.你参与的体育项目;
2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Linda,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲:
第一段:
开篇问候,引出主题,简要介绍学校举办运动会这一背景信息。
示例:Dear Linda, How’s everything going I hope this letter reaches you in good health. I am writing to share with you the wonderful and exciting experience of our school’s 12th sports meeting which took place recently. It was truly a carnival that brought so much life and energy to our campus.
提及同学们对运动会的期待以及前期准备氛围,如训练场景、布置赛场等,为下文自己参与项目做铺垫。
比如:In the weeks leading up to the event, the whole school was buzzing with anticipation. Athletes could be seen practicing on the track and field every day after school, while others were busy decorating the stadium with colorful flags and banners, creating a vibrant and festive atmosphere.
第二段:
详细描述自己参与的体育项目,包括项目名称、赛前心情、比赛过程中的具体表现(如起跑、冲刺、跳跃等动作细节,和遇到的困难、挑战自我的瞬间)。
例如:I decided to participate in the 400-meter race. Before the race, my heart was pounding like a drum. Standing on the starting line, I took a deep breath and tried to calm my nerves. As the starting gun fired, I exploded forward with all my might. The wind rushed past my ears as I focused on maintaining my pace. In the middle of the race, I started to feel the burn in my legs, but I gritted my teeth and told myself to keep going. When I crossed the finish line, exhausted but proud, I knew I had given it my best shot.
可适当增加与对手竞争的细节,体现竞技精神,如超越对手的瞬间、对手给自己的压力促使自己爆发等。
像:There was one particular moment when I was trailing behind a classmate. But seeing his determined stride ahead of me, something inside me snapped. I summoned all my strength and made a sprint, managing to overtake him in the final stretch. That moment of victory over myself and the competition was truly exhilarating.
第三段:
分享自己在运动会上的整体感受,包括对体育精神的感悟(如拼搏、坚持、团结协作等),观看其他项目的收获,运动会给自己带来的积极影响(如心态变化、与同学关系增进等)。
比如:Overall, this sports meeting was an eye-opener for me. I witnessed firsthand the power of perseverance and the spirit of never giving up. Whether it was the long-distance runners who kept going despite their exhaustion or the relay teams who coordinated perfectly to win, everyone was inspiring. It also made me cherish the friendships and camaraderie that developed during the event. I found myself closer to my classmates, sharing in their joys and sorrows. I truly believe that events like these are what make school life so meaningful.
结尾表达期待对方回信,分享类似经历,加强与笔友的互动。
示例:I can’t wait to hear about your experiences in sports or any other exciting events in your life. Write back soon!
语言积累 10 句英文:
The sports meeting was like a grand symphony, with each athlete playing their part to create a harmonious and exciting melody. (运动会就像一场盛大的交响乐,每位运动员都奏响自己的乐章,共同创造出和谐而激动人心的旋律。)
Standing on the starting line, I was a bundle of nerves, my palms sweaty and my heart racing like a runaway train. (站在起跑线上,我紧张得要命,手心冒汗,心跳如脱缰的野马。)
As I sprinted towards the finish line, I felt like I was flying, the wind whistling in my ears and my legs pumping with all their might. (当我冲向终点线时,我感觉自己在飞翔,风在耳边呼啸,双腿全力摆动。)
The cheers and applause from the spectators were like a powerful booster, fueling my determination to perform better. (观众的欢呼和掌声就像强大的助推器,激发了我想要表现得更好的决心。)
In the heat of the competition, I learned to dig deep within myself and find that extra ounce of strength when I needed it most. (在激烈的竞争中,我学会了在最需要的时候深入挖掘自己的潜力,找到那额外的一股力量。)
The relay race was a perfect display of teamwork, with each team member passing the baton smoothly and trusting their partners to carry on the momentum. (接力赛是团队合作的完美展示,每位队员都顺利交接棒,信任队友延续势头。)
Despite the exhaustion, I wore a smile on my face after finishing my event, because I knew I had conquered my fears and challenged myself. (尽管疲惫不堪,但完成比赛后我脸上挂着笑容,因为我知道我征服了恐惧,挑战了自我。)
The long-distance runners’ perseverance was truly admirable, as they trudged on mile after mile, their faces showing determination and grit. (长跑运动员的毅力真的令人钦佩,他们一英里又一英里地艰难前行,脸上展现出决心和坚韧。)
Participating in the sports meeting not only strengthened my body but also toughened my spirit, making me more confident and resilient. (参加运动会不仅锻炼了我的身体,还磨炼了我的精神,让我更加自信和有韧性。)
The colorful flags fluttering around the stadium added to the festive atmosphere, making it feel like a carnival of sports. (体育场周围飘扬的彩旗增添了节日气氛,使其感觉像一场体育狂欢节。)
写作示范三篇:
第一篇:
Dear Linda,
Greetings! I trust you’re having a great time. Let me tell you about the amazing 12th sports meeting at our school. It was a glorious event that had everyone on their toes.
I participated in the high jump. Before the competition, I practiced religiously, trying to perfect my technique. On the day of the event, as I walked up to the bar, my knees were shaking a bit. But once I started my approach, I focused on nothing else. I took a running start, leaped into the air, and for a moment, I felt weightless. I managed to clear a few heights, and though I didn’t win the top prize, the feeling of pushing my limits was incredible.
During the rest of the meeting, I watched my classmates shine in various events. The sprinters’ explosive speed, the throwers’ powerful throws, all left me in awe. I realized that sports bring out the best in us, teaching us to strive for excellence and support each other. This experience has made me more motivated in my studies and more connected to my peers.
I’d love to hear about your adventures. Write back as soon as you can!
Best regards,
Li Hua
第二篇:
Dear Linda,
Hi! How are you doing I have some exciting news to share. Our school’s 12th sports meeting was just held, and it was a blast!
I took part in the 100-meter dash. Oh my, the anticipation before the race was nerve-wracking. My heart was thumping so hard I thought it might burst out of my chest. When the gun went off, I shot forward like a bullet. The adrenaline rush was insane. I could see my competitors out of the corner of my eye, but I focused on my own lane. In the blink of an eye, I crossed the finish line. I didn’t come first, but I was proud of my performance.
Watching the other events was equally fascinating. The gymnasts’ graceful routines, the footballers’ strategic plays, they all made me appreciate the diversity of sports. It also made me understand that in sports, as in life, you have to be brave enough to take risks and keep going even when things get tough. This sports meeting has truly been a memorable experience for me.
Looking forward to your reply. Have a great day!
Yours,
Li Hua
第三篇:
Dear Linda,
Dear friend, hope this letter finds you well. I want to fill you in on our school’s recent 12th sports meeting. It was an event that lit up our campus.
I joined the javelin throw. In the days before the competition, I worked on my grip, my stance, and my throwing technique. When it was my turn, I picked up the javelin, feeling its weight. I took a deep breath, wound up, and let it fly. The javelin soared through the air, and I watched with bated breath. I had a decent throw, and the sense of achievement was overwhelming.
Throughout the meeting, I was inspired by the dedication of my classmates. The swimmers’ endurance in the pool, the volleyball players’ teamwork on the court, all of them were examples for me. This sports meeting not only enhanced my physical ability but also broadened my perspective on life. I now have a deeper understanding of the value of hard work and cooperation.
I can’t wait to hear from you. Drop me a line when you can.
Take care,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Linda,
I hope this email finds you well. Last week, our school held its 12th annual sports meet, and it was an amazing experience!
I participated in the 100-meter dash and the 4×100-meter relay race. The sprint was incredibly exciting, pushing me to my limits, while the relay taught me the importance of teamwork. Seeing everyone cheer for their classmates filled me with warmth and pride. It reminded me that sports are not just about winning but also about unity and personal growth.
How are sports events in your school
Yours,
LiHua
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