专题6 书面表达 10篇-2024-2025学年人教版八年级英语上册期末复习（含答案解析+试题分析）

人教版八年级英语上册期末复习
专题6书面表达10篇
1．假如今天是9月21号星期六。你和你的父母参观了一个以旧居而闻名的小镇。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语日记, 记录你这次的旅游经历。
提示：
1. How is the weather today
2. How did you go to the town
3. What did you do there
要求：
1. 日记应包含以上要点, 可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80左右（日记格式已给出, 不计入总词数）。
Saturday, September 21st
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2．Write a passage according to the result of the survey. Use superlatives.
The Best Place in Our Town
Place Name Reasons
high school No. 1 High School good teachers, beautiful
hospital People's Hospital comfortable beds, friendly service
movie theater New Century Cinema big screens
clothes store Xiwang Clothes Store good quality, popular
radio station Music 100 FM interesting music
Last week we did a survey about the best places in our town. And here are the results.
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3．Simon和Peter在学习中遇到很多问题。请根据表格提供的信息，写一篇短文。要求:
短文内容必须包括表格中的要点，可以适当发挥，语意连贯。
词数:80个左右。
Name Problems Advice
Simon 有时感到很孤独，不善言辞，对学习无兴趣 积极参加各种活动……
Peter 整天为学习担心，在考试前睡不着觉 请求老师与同学帮助……
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4．书面表达。
上周日你和弟弟去看望你们的姑姑，姑姑给你们做了可口的牛肉三明治，你觉得姑姑做的三明治特别好吃。午饭后，你请姑姑教你做牛肉三明治。请你根据提示描述一下姑姑做牛肉三明治的过程。
提示: pieces of bread;spoon of butter;onion and tomato; lettuce; pieces of beef; some cheese
要求:语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确；词数:80左右。
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5． 假设你叫迈克，你的好朋友杰克邀请你这个周末参观他的农场，但是你不能接受邀请，请你根据以下内容提示，给他发一封电子邮件说明原因。
写作要点：
1）周五晚上和表弟去看电影。
2）周六上午帮爸爸洗车，下午和父母一起去看望奶奶。
3）周日和朋友去踢足球。晚上学习，为数学考试做准备。
写作要求：
1）内容必须包含写作要点中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
3）使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4）词数60左右(短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for asking me to visit your farm. I'd love to, but I'm afraid I can't.
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Yours,
Mike
6．假如你是李华，本期你班英语手抄报的主题是"快乐寒假"，请根据以下提示用英语为手抄报写一篇短文。
提示：1) What are your plans for the winter vacation
2) What are you going to do to carry out (执行) your plans
要求：1）短文应包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。
2）语言表达要准确，语句通顺、连贯。
3）词数：80—100。
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7．提示：2021 年已接近尾声，2022 年正向我们走来。回望过去，你的目标有没有实现？展望未来，你要下定决心做哪些事？请你以"My New Year's Resolutions"为题，写
一篇英语短文，谈谈你的新年愿景与决心，以及你要如何实现。
要求：1）短文词数不少于 50 词。
2）语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁。
3）文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。
4）短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。
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8．新时代的青少年要有理想，更要有责任和担当。学校论坛本期主题是"坚持理想信念"。请以梦想为主题，谈谈你的想法。文中不得出现真实的人名或校名。不少于80词。
提示∶梦想犹如灯塔，照亮我们前行的路。那么你的梦想是什么 你的梦想将给自己和他人带来什么 你将如何做，才能实现你的梦想
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9．中学生在成长的过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。
你的烦恼 你的做法
个头不高 不必在意，相信自己
父母不理解，朋友少 学会沟通，友善待人
学习压力大，课外活动少 ......（自主发挥，至少两点）
要求：
1）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；
2）不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
3）80词左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello everyone!
I am Li Hua. I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
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That's all. Thank you.
10．愉快的寒假即将到来，假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Mike想要到湖州游玩。请你写信向他推荐一个你最喜欢的地方，可以是书店、餐馆、咖啡馆、电影院……并说明理由。
注意：1）文中不得出现与真实身份相关的信息；
2）语句通顺，字迹工整，词数80左右；
3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
I'm glad to know that you will come to Huzhou for your winter vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hua
答案解析部分
1．One possible version:
Saturday, September 21st
Today the weather is fine. I went to a famous Chinese town with my parents. We went there by bus. It took us an hour to get there. The town is very beautiful. There are many old houses. Around these houses, we could see many old trees. They are very tall. There are also many gardens with beautiful flowers. Though the houses are very old, they are still very strong. We visited them in the morning. And we had lunch in a restaurant. The food was delicious. Though I was a little tired, I was very happy.
这是一篇日记。要求按照所给的提示内容写一篇英语日记，记录你这次的旅游经历。通过分析材料可知，写作中要包含所给的三方面的内容，今天天气怎么样、你是怎么进城的以及你在那里做了什么？本文要用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如a famous Chinese town；many gardens with beautiful flowers等以及句型结构，如It took us an hour to get there.Though I was a little tired, I was very happy.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然
2．One possible version:
Last week we did a survey about the best places in our town. And here are the results.
No. 1 High School is the best in our city. It has the best teachers and it's the most beautiful. People's Hospital is the best hospital. It has the most comfortable beds and the friendliest service. New Century Cinema is the best movie theater. It has the biggest screens. The best clothes store in our city is Xiwang Clothes Store. It has the best quality and it's the most popular. As for radio stations, Music 100 FM is the best. It has the most interesting music.
这是一篇提纲作文，是一篇说明文。根据表格中的内容介绍城镇里最好的地方。内容涉及高中，医院，电影院，服装店，广播站等，介绍名字和原因，注意使用形容词的最高级，时态是一般现在时态，人称是第三人称。同时注意上下午的连贯和主谓一致问题。
这篇范文主要描述了一篇关于本城最佳地点的调查报告，围绕高中，医院，电影院，服装店，广播站介绍了城市中最好的地方，内容贴切，表达连贯，时态运用正确，最高级的使用较为贴切，句式灵活多样，文章优美。文章开篇明确指出进行了一个关于本城最佳地点的调查，并给出了调查结果。接着，按照不同地点类别，如学校、医院、电影院、服装店和广播电台，分别介绍了最佳地点。在描述每个地点时，作者使用了较为具体的形容词和名词，如 "best teachers"、"most beautiful"、"most comfortable beds"、"friendliest service"、"biggest screens"、"best quality"、"most interesting music" 等，使得文章更加生动形象。整篇文章结构紧凑，没有出现冗余的表述，各个部分之间连贯性较强。整篇文章结构清晰，内容丰富，语言表达准确，符合英语写作的基本要求。
3．Simon has some problems. He feels lonely all the time and he isn't good at talking with others. He isn't interested in studying. I suggest that he should take part in many activities. He should make friends with some honest and friendly people.
Peter worries about his studies all day, he can't sleep well before exams. That makes him very sad. I think he should ask his teachers or classmates for help. He can also listen to some music or watch TV before exams. That would help him relax.
这是一篇提纲作文，本文要求按照所给提示介绍Simon和Peter在学习中遇到的问题，写作中要包含具体的问题以及给出建议，根据材料内容可知时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称和第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将具体的问题和建议逐一进行了陈述，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，连贯，时态运用灵活准确，一些固定短语如all the time一直，be good at doing sth擅长做某事，be interested in doing sth对做某事感兴趣，take part in参加，make friends交朋友，ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助，listen to听，help sb do sth帮助某人做某事等以及句型结构，如I suggest that he should take part in many activities.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加自然流畅。
4．Last Sunday I went to see my aunt with my brother. My aunt made some beef sandwiches for us. They were very delicious. After lunch, I asked my aunt to teach me how to make a beef sandwich.
First, she put a spoon of butter on a piece of bread. After that, she cut up an onion and a tomato. She added them to the bread. Then, she put some lettuce and four pieces of beef on the bread. Next, she put some cheese on the beef. Finally, she put another piece of bread on the top.
这是一篇提示类作文。主要以一般过去时和第一人称及第三人称讲述 ：上周日你和弟弟去看望姑姑，姑姑给你们做了可口的牛肉三明治，你觉得姑姑做的三明治特别好吃。午饭后，你请姑姑教你做牛肉三明治。 写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。ask sb to do sth请某人做某事；cut up切碎；Last Sunday I went to see my aunt with my brother. (不定式作目的状语) After lunch, I asked my aunt to teach me how to make a beef sandwich.(疑问词+不定式作宾语)还运用了first，then，finally等使上下文衔接的更好。
5．Dear Jack,
Thank you for asking me to visit your farm. I'd love to, but I'm afraid I can't. Today is Friday, I'm going to the movies with my cousin this evening. Tomorrow morning, I have to help my father wash his car. And in the afternoon, I am going to visit my grandma with my parents. On Sunday, I'm going to play soccer with my friends. In the evening, I have to study for the math test. Write soon.
Yours,
Mike
这是一篇提纲类作文，你的好朋友杰克邀请你这个周末参观他的农场，但是你不能接受邀请，请给他发一封电子邮件说明原因需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要适当添加内容，使文章看起来更充实，最后检查所用时态 人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法 拼写 标点 移行 大小写等方面是否有误。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中Thank you for doing，ask sb to do，be afraid，情态动词have to等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了be going to句型 I'm going to play soccer with my friends，宾语从句I'm afraid I can't大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，也更富有条理。
6．One possible version:
Here are my plans for winter vacation.
Firstly, I am going to visit my grandparents. I miss them very much so I hope to stay there for at least a week.
Secondly, I'm going to spend more time learning English. I will read some English books and magazines and I will watch some English movies. I think doing so will help me a lot. Thirdly, I will learn how to cook from my parents. They're usually too busy and too tired to cook dinner for me. If I learn to cook, I can make dinner for them.
I'm looking forward to my vacation.
这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍你的快乐寒假，突出介绍你寒假的计划是什么 你打算做什么来实施你的计划，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题，可以使用first，second 进行列举，使文章显得更加条理。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中be going to do，hope to do，spend doing等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用I think doing so will help me a lot宾语从句和动名词做主语， If I learn to cook, I can make dinner for them条件状语从句等，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
7．My New Year's Resolutions
Hello, everyone! For the coming new year, I have some resolutions. First of all, I will study all my subjects harder. I will listen to my teachers carefully and finish my homework on time. I hope to get better grades next year.
What's more, I am not good at sports. Next year I am going to do more sports to keep healthy. For example, I can run to school. I can play football or basketball at school every day. I think swimming is a good way to exercise. I will take up swimming.
The last but not the least, I will spend more time with my parents. I am going to help my parents do the housework. And I will talk to them more often.
In a word, I hope I can make great progress next year.
这是一篇命题作文，主要介绍自己的新年决心。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己的新年决心；然后介绍怎样实现自己的新年决心；最后介绍总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：first of all；listen to；on time；hope to do；get better grades；what's more；be good at；a good way to do；talk to sb.；in a word；make great progress等。比较级和一般将来时Next year I am going to do more sports to keep healthy.The last but not the least, I will spend more time with my parents. I am going to help my parents do the housework. And I will talk to them more often.；动名词做主语和宾语从句I think swimming is a good way to exercise.的运用为文章增色不少等。连词first of all、what's more、the last but not the least、in a word、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
8．略
这是一篇提纲作文作文。本文要求以梦想为题，写一篇议论文，要求包含以下要点：梦想犹如灯塔，照亮我们前行的路。那么你的梦想是什么 你的梦想将给自己和他人带来什么 你将如何做，才能实现你的梦想 都应在文中有所体现，人称应为第一人称，时态为一般将来时。
写作时注意文章的内容需要包含提示的所有要点，可以结合实际谈论一下自己的人生规划，充实作文。注意单词拼写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。文章中可能用到的短语：stronger and stronger越来越强大；come true实现等等。
9．暂未更新
这是一篇提示性作文，要求写一篇发言稿。短文包括两个方面，一部分是自己的烦恼，包括个头不高；父母不理解，朋友少；学习压力大，课外活动少等；一部分是作者自己的做法，包括相信自己；学会沟通，友善待人等。人称主要为第一人称单数和第三人称复数，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
写作时注意文章的内容需要包含提示的所有要点，可以结合实际谈论自己的观点，充实作文。注意单词拼写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。文章中可能用到的词语：deal with处理；believe myself相信我自己； learn to communicate学会沟通；be friendly to others友善待人。等等。
10．Dear Mike，
I'm glad to know that you will come to Huzhou for your winter vacation. Huzhou is a great place to visit because it is really beautiful and has fantastic places to go to. I think the best movie theater in Huzhou is Dena Cinema. It has the biggest screen and the most comfortable seats. And the service there is also the best. I often choose to go to the movies there when I'm free. And I can always enjoy my time the most wonderfully there. So when you come here you can also try seeing movies there. I'm sure you'll feel great!
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
本文是一篇应用文写作。要求写信向外国朋友Mike推荐一个你最喜欢的地方，可以是书店、餐馆、咖啡馆、电影院……并说明理由。 合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第一人称单数和第三人称单数，一般现在时。
考查提示作文和应用文作文。内容切题，语法正确，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如be glad to do sth.很高兴做某事， go to the movies 去看电影，等等及句型结构，如 I'm glad to know that you will come to Huzhou for your winter vacation. (宾语从句)， Huzhou is a great place to visit because it is really beautiful and has fantastic places to go to.(because引导原因状语从句)等等的运用较为得体，使得文章根据流畅，自然。
试题分析部分
1、试卷总体分布分析
总分：50分
分值分布 客观题（占比） 0.0(0.0%)
主观题（占比） 50.0(100.0%)
题量分布 客观题（占比） 0(0.0%)
主观题（占比） 10(100.0%)
2、试卷题量分布分析
大题题型 题目量（占比） 分值（占比）
书面表达 10(100.0%) 50.0(100.0%)
3、试卷难度结构分析
序号 难易度 占比
1 普通 (40.0%)
2 困难 (60.0%)
4、试卷知识点分析
序号 知识点（认知水平） 分值（占比） 对应题号
1 书信、电子邮件 5.0(10.0%) 5
2 演讲稿 5.0(10.0%) 9
3 其他类作文 5.0(10.0%) 4
4 旅游观光类 5.0(10.0%) 1
5 日记 5.0(10.0%) 1
6 命题作文 5.0(10.0%) 7
7 应用文写作 10.0(20.0%) 1,9
8 提纲作文 20.0(40.0%) 2,3,5,6
9 材料作文 15.0(30.0%) 4,8,10