辽宁省县级重点高中协作体2024-2025学年高三上学期读后续写--孤鹰Arnold的父爱奇迹 讲义
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| 名称 | 辽宁省县级重点高中协作体2024-2025学年高三上学期读后续写--孤鹰Arnold的父爱奇迹 讲义 |  | |
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Arnold, an eagle, was living at a reserve. As a cute and pretty bird, he was well cared for and loved by the staff.
One day last month, one of the caretakers noticed something strange. Keeper Eric saw Arnold protecting a large low-lying land in the ground. The spot was carefully decorated with leaves and branches, and featured a simple rock right in the center. Later that day, Eric even saw Arnold sitting on the rock as if it were an egg. And Eric found Arnold continued to do so day after day. “Male eagles take an equal part in raising young, so this is a very natural behavior for Arnold, a male eagle,” Eric thought.
Then Eric shared Arnold’s story on the Internet. He posted something like this: Every so often, our lovely eagle, Arnold, rearranges the sticks in his nest and cackles (咯咯叫) at any other eagles that come too close. We wish Arnold all the luck in the world, but we’re not telling him the reality of the situation. We have to see a rock hatch(孵化)!
Many viewers were impressed by Eric’s humour and meanwhile assumed that Arnold was lonely and needed some mates, but Eric insisted Arnold was choosing to do this on his own. “Arnold is not lonely! He is housed with four other bald eagles—two males and two females,” Eric responded. “He is not welcome help with his nest, nor is he seeking help! He has not been finding mates, so he very clearly wants to do this on his own. He is perfectly content! Maybe he wishes to be a father.” More and more viewers agreed with Eric and advised finding a baby eagle for Arnold before having his own baby.
Last week, an eagle nest containing one chick (雏鸟) was blown down by very high winds. The chick’s mother died, but the chick was found and rescued by a faithful nest watcher. Eric suddenly had a good idea. He finally decided to bring the chick to Arnold’s side.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him.
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When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意：
这篇文章讲述了一只名叫Arnold的鹰在保护区的生活。Arnold被工作人员深爱和照顾，他展现出了想要孵化石头的奇怪行为，这引起了管理员Eric的注意。Eric将Arnold的故事分享到了互联网上，许多人认为Arnold孤独需要伴侣，但Eric坚持认为Arnold是自愿这么做的。后来，一场大风摧毁了一个鹰巢，导致一只雏鸟失去了母亲，但幸运地被救。Eric决定将这只雏鸟带到Arnold身边，给Arnold一个成为真正父亲的机会，同时也是一个挑战。当雏鸟靠近Arnold时，Arnold展现出了父爱，开始照顾这只雏鸟。
伏笔及回应：
伏笔：Arnold保护并装饰了地面上的一块地方，仿佛它是一个蛋。 回应：Eric和网友们猜测Arnold想要成为父亲。
伏笔：Eric在互联网上分享Arnold的故事，提到Arnold咯咯叫着保护石头。 回应：网友们被Eric的幽默所吸引，并关注Arnold的行为。
伏笔：Arnold被安排与其他四只秃鹰一起生活。 回应：Eric解释说Arnold并不孤独，他不需要伴侣，而是想要独自孵化。
伏笔：一场大风摧毁了鹰巢，一只雏鸟失去了母亲。 回应：Eric决定将这只雏鸟带给Arnold，给他一个成为真正父亲的机会。
伏笔：Arnold对雏鸟的初步反应未知。 回应：Arnold展现出父爱，开始照顾这只雏鸟。
续写要点（两段）：
第一段：描述将雏鸟介绍给Arnold的过程，以及这对Arnold的挑战。
第二段：描述Arnold对雏鸟的反应，以及他如何展现出父爱。
情感线： 文章中的情感线是Arnold从孤独的石头孵化者到成为真正父亲的转变，以及人们对他的关爱和支持。
故事线： 故事从Arnold的奇怪行为开始，经历了人们对他的关注和讨论，到Eric将雏鸟带给Arnold，最后Arnold展现出父爱。
主旨升华句（5句英文）：
"Sometimes, nature's greatest teachers are found in the most unexpected places."
"The heart that yearns to nurture is never truly alone."
"In the eyes of a protector, even the smallest charge can reflect a universe of love."
"The desire to be a parent is a fundamental drive that transcends species."
"A new life can bring out the best in even the most unlikely of parents."
两篇写作示范：
示范一：
The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him. The integration process was filled with anticipation and caution. Eric and his team monitored their interactions closely, ensuring that Arnold's new role was accepted gracefully. To their delight, Arnold showed immediate signs of acceptance, gently extending his wing over the chick as if to provide shelter. This heartwarming scene confirmed that Arnold's maternal instincts were not misplaced, and he was ready to embrace fatherhood.
When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred. The once solitary eagle transformed into a doting parent right before their eyes. Arnold's protective stance and the soft coos he offered the chick were a testament to his newfound role. The staff, who had been following Arnold's journey, were overjoyed to see him finally get the chance to be a father, and Arnold seemed to revel in his new responsibilities.
示范二：
The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him. The team at the reserve had to ensure the transition was smooth, fearing that Arnold's territorial instincts might be triggered. However, as the chick was placed near Arnold, a remarkable scene unfolded. Arnold's initial curiosity soon gave way to a gentle acceptance, as he began to preen and care for the young one as if it were his own.
When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred. The transformation in Arnold was nothing short of miraculous. He took on the role of a father figure with ease, providing warmth and security to the orphaned chick. The bond that formed between them was a beautiful sight to behold, and it was clear that Arnold had found a new purpose in life. The staff and the online community that had been following Arnold's story were touched by this unexpected turn of events, and they eagerly awaited the next chapter in Arnold's journey as a father figure.
【答案】The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him. It was possible that Arnold, who had no experience of raising young eagles, would possibly dislike the chick, or even worse, he might hurt it. But Erie didn’t change his mind. When Arnold was away, he gently put the chick in the nest. When Arnold came back to his nest, he stood in the distance to see how Arnold treated the chick. He was a little worried, so he approached slowly and watched carefully.
When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred. Arnold gave the chick a gentle touch, then covered it under his wings to keep it warm, He obviously accepted the chick. After a while, Arnold flew away and brought back the food Eric had prepared for him and fed it to the chick. Seeing all this, Eric was completely relieved. Arnold took care of his “baby” every day. The chick grew healthily day by day, And Arnold’s wish to raise a baby as a father came true.
Arnold, an eagle, was living at a reserve. As a cute and pretty bird, he was well cared for and loved by the staff.
One day last month, one of the caretakers noticed something strange. Keeper Eric saw Arnold protecting a large low-lying land in the ground. The spot was carefully decorated with leaves and branches, and featured a simple rock right in the center. Later that day, Eric even saw Arnold sitting on the rock as if it were an egg. And Eric found Arnold continued to do so day after day. “Male eagles take an equal part in raising young, so this is a very natural behavior for Arnold, a male eagle,” Eric thought.
Then Eric shared Arnold’s story on the Internet. He posted something like this: Every so often, our lovely eagle, Arnold, rearranges the sticks in his nest and cackles (咯咯叫) at any other eagles that come too close. We wish Arnold all the luck in the world, but we’re not telling him the reality of the situation. We have to see a rock hatch(孵化)!
Many viewers were impressed by Eric’s humour and meanwhile assumed that Arnold was lonely and needed some mates, but Eric insisted Arnold was choosing to do this on his own. “Arnold is not lonely! He is housed with four other bald eagles—two males and two females,” Eric responded. “He is not welcome help with his nest, nor is he seeking help! He has not been finding mates, so he very clearly wants to do this on his own. He is perfectly content! Maybe he wishes to be a father.” More and more viewers agreed with Eric and advised finding a baby eagle for Arnold before having his own baby.
Last week, an eagle nest containing one chick (雏鸟) was blown down by very high winds. The chick’s mother died, but the chick was found and rescued by a faithful nest watcher. Eric suddenly had a good idea. He finally decided to bring the chick to Arnold’s side.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意：
这篇文章讲述了一只名叫Arnold的鹰在保护区的生活。Arnold被工作人员深爱和照顾，他展现出了想要孵化石头的奇怪行为，这引起了管理员Eric的注意。Eric将Arnold的故事分享到了互联网上，许多人认为Arnold孤独需要伴侣，但Eric坚持认为Arnold是自愿这么做的。后来，一场大风摧毁了一个鹰巢，导致一只雏鸟失去了母亲，但幸运地被救。Eric决定将这只雏鸟带到Arnold身边，给Arnold一个成为真正父亲的机会，同时也是一个挑战。当雏鸟靠近Arnold时，Arnold展现出了父爱，开始照顾这只雏鸟。
伏笔及回应：
伏笔：Arnold保护并装饰了地面上的一块地方，仿佛它是一个蛋。 回应：Eric和网友们猜测Arnold想要成为父亲。
伏笔：Eric在互联网上分享Arnold的故事，提到Arnold咯咯叫着保护石头。 回应：网友们被Eric的幽默所吸引，并关注Arnold的行为。
伏笔：Arnold被安排与其他四只秃鹰一起生活。 回应：Eric解释说Arnold并不孤独，他不需要伴侣，而是想要独自孵化。
伏笔：一场大风摧毁了鹰巢，一只雏鸟失去了母亲。 回应：Eric决定将这只雏鸟带给Arnold，给他一个成为真正父亲的机会。
伏笔：Arnold对雏鸟的初步反应未知。 回应：Arnold展现出父爱，开始照顾这只雏鸟。
续写要点（两段）：
第一段：描述将雏鸟介绍给Arnold的过程，以及这对Arnold的挑战。
第二段：描述Arnold对雏鸟的反应，以及他如何展现出父爱。
情感线： 文章中的情感线是Arnold从孤独的石头孵化者到成为真正父亲的转变，以及人们对他的关爱和支持。
故事线： 故事从Arnold的奇怪行为开始，经历了人们对他的关注和讨论，到Eric将雏鸟带给Arnold，最后Arnold展现出父爱。
主旨升华句（5句英文）：
"Sometimes, nature's greatest teachers are found in the most unexpected places."
"The heart that yearns to nurture is never truly alone."
"In the eyes of a protector, even the smallest charge can reflect a universe of love."
"The desire to be a parent is a fundamental drive that transcends species."
"A new life can bring out the best in even the most unlikely of parents."
两篇写作示范：
示范一：
The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him. The integration process was filled with anticipation and caution. Eric and his team monitored their interactions closely, ensuring that Arnold's new role was accepted gracefully. To their delight, Arnold showed immediate signs of acceptance, gently extending his wing over the chick as if to provide shelter. This heartwarming scene confirmed that Arnold's maternal instincts were not misplaced, and he was ready to embrace fatherhood.
When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred. The once solitary eagle transformed into a doting parent right before their eyes. Arnold's protective stance and the soft coos he offered the chick were a testament to his newfound role. The staff, who had been following Arnold's journey, were overjoyed to see him finally get the chance to be a father, and Arnold seemed to revel in his new responsibilities.
示范二：
The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him. The team at the reserve had to ensure the transition was smooth, fearing that Arnold's territorial instincts might be triggered. However, as the chick was placed near Arnold, a remarkable scene unfolded. Arnold's initial curiosity soon gave way to a gentle acceptance, as he began to preen and care for the young one as if it were his own.
When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred. The transformation in Arnold was nothing short of miraculous. He took on the role of a father figure with ease, providing warmth and security to the orphaned chick. The bond that formed between them was a beautiful sight to behold, and it was clear that Arnold had found a new purpose in life. The staff and the online community that had been following Arnold's story were touched by this unexpected turn of events, and they eagerly awaited the next chapter in Arnold's journey as a father figure.
【答案】The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him. It was possible that Arnold, who had no experience of raising young eagles, would possibly dislike the chick, or even worse, he might hurt it. But Erie didn’t change his mind. When Arnold was away, he gently put the chick in the nest. When Arnold came back to his nest, he stood in the distance to see how Arnold treated the chick. He was a little worried, so he approached slowly and watched carefully.
When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred. Arnold gave the chick a gentle touch, then covered it under his wings to keep it warm, He obviously accepted the chick. After a while, Arnold flew away and brought back the food Eric had prepared for him and fed it to the chick. Seeing all this, Eric was completely relieved. Arnold took care of his “baby” every day. The chick grew healthily day by day, And Arnold’s wish to raise a baby as a father came true.