尝试找回爷爷曾经交过的土豆沙拉制作过程 家庭情感类（讲义）-广东省六校联考2024-2025学年高二上学期月考英语试题

广东省高二考试读后续写
第二节 (满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was time for the annual Potato-Salad Contest in Russet Park. Ater trying for the third time, Alexis shook her head sadly. There was no way she would win the Golden Potato again because Grandpa wasn't here this year.
Memories of how Grandpa taught her to make potato rose in her mind. She signed and missed Grandpa so much.
Alexis cut the potatoes and mixed the boiled potatoes, some sauces and a little salt and peppers in a bowl. But it didn't taste right. Alexis tried a bite of the salad mixture, wondering what was missing. Seeing her frown, Mom suggested, " What about something spicy Your Grandpa loved spicy things."
" You're right! Maybe he put a jalapeno pepper in it," Alexis said, cutting up a bright green jalapeno and adding it to the bowl.
It was closer, but it still didn't taste right. Alexis was drooping her head, disappointed " should we look in a cookbook "
"Grandpa was never one to follow a recipe," Dad entered the kitchen and said.
It was true. People loved Grandpa's potato salad because it was one of a kind. Alexis remembered posing with Grandpa for a photo while they were making the salad.
Photo! That geve her an idea. Alexis hurried to the bookcase and found an old photo album. She immediately flipped it open, expecting to find clues in the photos there. Lots of photos showed Grandpa and Grandma cooking together. Dad laughed, " He and Grandma loved to tease each other but he always called her Honey."
" Do you think he put honey in the potato salad " Mum asked.
" It is worth a try." said Alexis. She stirred some honey into the bowl.
But it still wasn't quite right. Alexis' heart sank, on the verge of giving up, Dad kept flipping the album. At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: It cooked like Grandpa was crying in the photo.
Paragraph 2: With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it.
第二节 (满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was time for the annual Potato-Salad Contest in Russet Park(背景信息). Ater trying for the third time, Alexis shook her head sadly(情感线). There was no way she would win the Golden Potato again(定从或同位从) because Grandpa wasn't here this year(状从).
Memories of how Grandpa taught her to make potato(宾从) rose in her mind. She sighed and missed Grandpa so much.
Alexis cut the potatoes and mixed the boiled potatoes, some sauces and a little salt and peppers in a bowl. But it didn't taste right. Alexis tried a bite of the salad mixture, wondering(非谓语动词做伴随动作) what was missing(宾从). Seeing her frown(非谓语动词做mom的伴随动作), Mom suggested, " What about something spicy Your Grandpa loved spicy things."
" You're right! Maybe he put a jalapeno pepper in it," Alexis said, cutting up a bright green jalapeno and adding it to the bowl(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作).
It was closer, but it still didn't taste right. Alexis was drooping her head, disappointed(adj做补语或状语，情绪) " should we look in a cookbook "
"Grandpa was never one to follow a recipe," Dad entered the kitchen and said.
It was true. People loved Grandpa's potato salad because it was one of a kind(状从). Alexis remembered posing with Grandpa for a photo while they were making the salad(状从).
Photo! That geve her an idea. Alexis hurried to (情绪)the bookcase and found an old photo album. She immediately flipped it open, expecting to find clues in the photos there(非谓语动词做伴随动作，心理). Lots of photos showed Grandpa and Grandma cooking together. Dad laughed, " He and Grandma loved to tease each other but he always called her Honey."
" Do you think he put honey in the potato salad " Mum asked.
" It is worth a try." said Alexis. She stirred some honey into the bowl.
But it still wasn't quite right. Alexis' heart sank(情绪), on the verge of giving up(介词短语做补语), Dad kept flipping the album. At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: It cooked like Grandpa was crying in the photo.
Paragraph 2: With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it.
1. 高考读后续写分类与分析
分析角度 内容 原文反映句
故事类型 家庭情感与传统的怀念故事 Grandpa wasn't here this year.
Memories of how Grandpa taught her to make potato rose in her mind.
构思思路 以情感为主线，通过物品（照片）引发灵感，解决问题，体现家人间的传承与怀念。 Photo! That gave her an idea.
布局方式 按“情感失落—寻找线索—问题解决”的模式布局：
1. 表达对爷爷的怀念；
2. 在制作过程中逐步探寻缺少的食材；
3. 以情感温暖的方式解决问题，并赋予意义。 Alexis shook her head sadly.
Seeing her frown, Mom suggested...
Alexis' heart sank, on the verge of giving up.
提炼框架 1. 开篇：通过情感失落引入；
2. 中间：行动与回忆交织，展示寻找食材的过程；
3. 结尾：利用象征物解决问题，唤起温暖情感。 Dad kept flipping the album. At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together.
实施策略 - 结合故事线索，注重细节描写；
- 通过对动作、心理、环境的刻画提升情感张力；
- 在结尾凸显家庭温情与传承主题。 Dad laughed, "He and Grandma loved to tease each other but he always called her Honey."
承接原文注意事项 - 延续原文怀念的情感基调；
- 保持线索的逻辑性（如从照片中找到启发）；
- 设计合理的解决方式（与“蜂蜜”和“洋葱”的线索呼应）。 Grandpa was never one to follow a recipe.
Photo! That gave her an idea.
At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together.
续写设计建议 - 使用象征性食材（如洋葱）引发情感升华；
- 增加互动场景，突出家人间的合作与支持；
- 通过细节展示爷爷的影响力（如记忆中的笑容、语言等）。 "Do you think he put honey in the potato salad " Mum asked.
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it.
2. 故事山模式 (Story Mountain) 思维导图
主要部分：
开端 (Exposition): Alexis想念爷爷，尝试制作爷爷的土豆沙拉。
冲突 (Conflict): 无论怎样尝试，沙拉的味道都不对。
高潮 (Climax): 在照片中发现爷爷的秘密。
解决 (Resolution): 添加洋葱后，沙拉味道接近完美，家庭的温暖情感得到升华。
结尾 (Ending): Alexis获得信心，感受到爷爷的陪伴与指导仍在身边。
3. 推荐续写语料
描写类别 英文例句 高级替换词
动作描写 - Alexis stirred the honey into the mixture, her hands trembling with hope.
- Dad flipped through the album eagerly, a smile lighting up his face.
- She gently wiped the dust off the old photograph, her eyes scanning for clues. stirred → whisked
flipped → browsed
心理描写 - Alexis’ heart sank as disappointment overwhelmed her.
- She held her breath, hoping this time it would work.
- A wave of nostalgia swept over her as she gazed at the photograph. overwhelmed → engulfed
hoping → yearning
环境描写 - The aroma of freshly boiled potatoes filled the air, mingling with the tang of spices.
- The kitchen was alive with the sound of chopping and stirring.
- A beam of sunlight illuminated the dusty album, casting a golden glow. aroma → scent
beam → ray
4. 语法与词汇分析
语法现象 例子 搭配与语料
非谓语动词 Seeing her frown, Mom suggested... Seeing (伴随状况)；suggested + 动名词。
情态动词 "Do you think he put honey in the potato salad " 情态动词 (Do you think...) 表达推测或不确定性。
复合句 "At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together." at the end of + 地点；... was the picture (倒装句型)。
可积累语料 - "It is worth a try."
- "Grandpa was never one to follow a recipe." worth a try (值得一试)；one to follow (某人习惯于某事)。
Possible Answers
Possible Answer 下水作文呢:
Paragraph 1:
It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo. Alexis stared at the image for a long moment, her mind whirling with possibilities(独立主格). She noticed the bowl of chopped onions faintly visible in the background(adj做后置定语). Her heart skipped a beat. “Onions!” she exclaimed. Without wasting time, she pulled an onion from the pantry, her hands steady(独立主格) despite her growing excitement. As she peeled and chopped the onion(状从), the sharp scent filled the kitchen, bringing tears to her eyes(非谓语动词做结果状语). It was as though Grandpa was guiding her once again(表从). Carefully, she added the onions to the salad and stirred gently. The familiar aroma began to emerge, but Alexis still held her breath, wondering if she had captured the true essence of Grandpa’s recipe(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从).
Paragraph 2:
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it. As the flavors spread across their tongues(状从), a collective smile lit up their faces. “This is it!” Dad said with conviction(n.坚定，笃信), his voice tinged(vt.给某事物带上某种气味，颜色) with emotion. Mom nodded, her eyes shimmering(vi.闪微光) with unshed tears. “It tastes just like Grandpa’s,” she whispered. For a moment, the kitchen was filled with a comforting silence, broken only by the sound of spoons(非谓语动词做后置定语) clinking against the bowl(非谓语动词做后置定语). Alexis felt a wave of warmth and pride wash over her. She realized that recreating Grandpa’s salad was about more than the ingredients(宾从)—it was about the love, memories, and legacy(宾从) he had left behind(宾从). Determined to honor him(非谓语动词做主语补语或目的状语), she carried the bowl to the contest, her heart full of gratitude and confidence(独立主格). She knew Grandpa’s spirit would always be with her(宾从), cheering her on(非谓语动词做后置定语).
范文结构分析
整体布局：
开篇抓住灵感：通过照片中的“洋葱”引出关键点，细节描写体现人物心情转折。
动作和情感推动：用具体动作（切洋葱、搅拌沙拉）表现主人公的努力，同时融入情感（思念与期待）。
高潮与结尾升华：一家人品尝成功后的满足感，升华主题，体现情感价值和人物成长。
亮点语言点
语言点 类型 高级替换表达 例句
whirling with possibilities 情感描写 buzzing with possibilities Her mind was buzzing with possibilities as she stared at the old photo.
sharp scent filled the kitchen 环境描写 pungent aroma filled the air The pungent aroma filled the air, bringing back vivid memories of Grandpa’s cooking sessions.
shimmering with unshed tears 情感描写 eyes glistened with emotion Mom’s eyes glistened with emotion as she tasted the familiar flavors of Grandpa’s potato salad.
legacy he had left behind 抽象主题 the heritage he had passed on Recreating the dish was a way of honoring the heritage Grandpa had passed on to their family.
carried the bowl to the contest 动作描写 brought the dish with determination She brought the dish with determination, ready to share Grandpa’s love with the world.
语法与结构亮点
语法点 例句 升级替换或解释
强调句型 It was as though Grandpa was guiding her once again. 强调感受，增添情感力度：It felt as if Grandpa himself was watching over her every move.
非谓语动词 Determined to honor him, she carried the bowl to the contest. 使用非谓语动词表达因果逻辑：Inspired by the moment, she proudly carried the dish to the competition.
复杂句型（定语从句） For a moment, the kitchen was filled with silence, broken only by the sound of spoons. 描述静谧氛围，增加情境细节感。
现在分词短语 Bringing tears to her eyes, the onions reminded her of Grandpa’s jokes. 强调过程并连接情感。
高分积累语料
情感描写：
Her heart skipped a beat as she realized what was missing.
A wave of pride and warmth washed over her as she saw her family’s reactions.
Tears welled up in her eyes, but this time, they were tears of joy.
动作描写：
She peeled and chopped the onion with careful precision, the sharp scent making her eyes water.
She stirred the salad gently, her hands steady despite her excitement.
Alexis carried the dish confidently, her footsteps light with determination.
环境描写：
The kitchen filled with the familiar aroma of the salad, evoking cherished memories.
Sunlight streamed through the window, casting a warm glow over the family’s moment of triumph.
The scent of spices and onions hung in the air, mingling with the laughter of her family.
高级替换词汇：
普通表达 高级替换 例句
happy overjoyed Alexis was overjoyed to see her family’s smiles of approval.
smell aroma The aroma of the dish brought back fond memories of Grandpa’s cooking.
legacy heritage The salad wasn’t just a recipe; it was a part of the heritage Grandpa had left behind.
Possible Answer 1:
Paragraph 1:
It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo. Inspired(非谓语动词做原因状语), Alexis suddenly remembered Grandpa often joked that onions added "tears of joy" to his dishes(宾从). She quickly diced(vt.切成四方块，n.筛子) an onion and added it to the salad, hoping(动作串) it was the missing ingredient(宾从).
Paragraph 2:
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it. Instantly, the familiar taste of Grandpa's unique recipe brought smiles to their faces. Alexis felt a wave of relief and joy. "It’s perfect," Mom said, her voice trembling with emotion(独立主格). They decided to call it ‘Grandpa’s Golden Potato’ in honor of him.
亮点搭配与短语 替换选项与例句
onions added "tears of joy" - 升级: onions brought "a touch of magic"
- 例句: The addition of onions brought "a touch of magic" to the dish.
familiar taste - 替换: comforting flavor
- 例句: The comforting flavor instantly brought back fond memories of Grandpa.
wave of relief - 替换: surge of calmness
- 例句: Alexis felt a surge of calmness wash over her as the family approved of the recipe.
6. 核心词汇
单词 词性 词义 近义词 联想词 例句
inspiration n. 灵感 motivation, idea creativity She drew inspiration from the old photographs.
hesitation n. 犹豫 doubt, uncertainty pause With hesitation, the family tasted the dish, unsure of what to expect.
legacy n. 遗产，传承 heritage, inheritance tradition Grandpa's recipe was more than just food; it was a legacy of love and creativity.
Possible Answer 2:
Paragraph 1:
It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo. Alexis leaned closer, noticing a small bowl of finely chopped onions on the counter in the background(非谓语动词做伴随动作). She gasped, realizing the missing ingredient(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Quickly, she grabbed an onion, chopped it carefully, and added it to the mixture(动作串). Stirring the salad(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), she felt a flicker of hope ignite in her heart.
Paragraph 2:
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it. A moment of silence passed, and then their faces lit up with delight. “This is it!” Mom exclaimed. Tears welled up in Alexis’ eyes as she felt Grandpa’s spirit in the room(状从). “It’s perfect,” Dad said softly. Alexis smiled, proud of recreating Grandpa’s special recipe and determined to honor him at the contest(adj短语做补语).
亮点分析
亮点搭配与短语 替换选项与例句
finely chopped onions - 替换: minced onions
- 例句: She carefully added the minced onions to the dish, ensuring the flavor was balanced.
flicker of hope - 替换: glimmer of optimism
- 例句: A glimmer of optimism returned as Alexis stirred the salad with newfound determination.
felt Grandpa’s spirit - 替换: sensed Grandpa’s presence
- 例句: As the familiar flavor emerged, Alexis sensed Grandpa’s presence guiding her hands.
Possible Answer 3:
Paragraph 1:
It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo. Alexis stared at the picture, her mind racing. Suddenly, she remembered Grandpa once joked that onions added a "secret touch" to his cooking.(宾从) Could that be it Without wasting a second, Alexis peeled and chopped an onion, her hands trembling slightly (独立主格)as she worked(状从).
Paragraph 2:
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it. The familiar taste burst forth, flooding their senses with memories of Grandpa(非谓语动词做后置定语). "This is exactly how he made it(宾从)!" Dad exclaimed. Alexis couldn’t help but smile, feeling a sense of accomplishment and warmth(非谓语动词做伴随动作). She knew Grandpa would be proud of her(宾从), and together, they prepared to honor his legacy at the contest.
亮点分析
亮点搭配与短语 替换选项与例句
secret touch - 替换: hidden charm
- 例句: Adding the onions brought a hidden charm that transformed the entire dish.
trembling slightly - 替换: shaking subtly
- 例句: Her hands shook subtly as she carefully chopped the onion, determined to replicate Grandpa’s recipe.
burst forth - 替换: exploded with flavor
- 例句: The dish exploded with flavor, evoking fond memories of Grandpa’s joyful cooking sessions.
高分点总结
语言亮点
非谓语动词：
Without wasting a second, Alexis peeled and chopped an onion.
升级表达: Not wasting another moment, Alexis got straight to chopping.
强调句型：
This is exactly how he made it!
升级表达: It was this exact flavor that made Grandpa’s recipe unforgettable.
情态动词：
Could that be it
升级表达: Might this be the missing piece of the puzzle
积累语料
类别 短语/单词 升级替换 例句
情感描写 tears welled up eyes glistened with tears Tears welled up in her eyes as she tasted the dish that brought Grandpa’s memory to life.
动作描写 grabbed an onion seized an onion Without hesitation, she seized an onion and began chopping it with determination.
环境描写 flooded their senses enveloped their senses The familiar aroma of the dish enveloped their senses, taking them back to cherished times.
一、挖空填空（根据上下文补全句子）
Alexis stared at the photo, her mind _______ (回忆起可能的线索).
The sharp _______ (气味) of onions filled the kitchen, bringing tears to her eyes, as though Grandpa was _______ (陪伴).
With hesitation, the family _______ (品尝) the potato salad, hoping to recreate _______ (独特的味道).
The kitchen was filled with a comforting _______ (沉默), broken only by the sound of _______ (勺子碰撞).
Determined to honor Grandpa’s legacy, Alexis _______ (带着信心端着沙拉).
二、翻译练习（一句多译）
原句：It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo.
要求：将句子翻译成至少三种不同的表达方式：
照片里的样子，就像爷爷在哭泣。
看起来，照片中的爷爷正在流泪。
在照片里，仿佛能看到爷爷在哭。
三、句式改写与升级
改写句子：
Grandpa’s potato salad was one of a kind, loved by everyone.
改为强调句：
Alexis felt a wave of pride and warmth wash over her as she saw her family’s reactions.
改为非谓语句式：
The familiar aroma began to emerge as Alexis added onions to the salad.
改为更高级的表达：
.
四、情境写作填空
根据提示补全句子，注意使用合适的高级词汇和语法结构
看到家人满意的微笑，Alexis感到_________ (情感：骄傲和感激).
.
厨房里弥漫着熟悉的香味，让她想起了_________ (情感：回忆).
答案.
她的手很稳，尽管她_________ (情绪：激动).
答案.
五、扩写与改写（语法与表达升级）
句子扩写：
原句：Alexis added onions to the salad.
扩写要求：加入心理描写、环境描写及情绪转折。
答案
句式升级：
原句：She carried the bowl confidently to the contest.
升级要求：使用高级词汇和从句表达信心与情感。
答.
六、情景仿写与造句
仿写练习：
“It tastes just like Grandpa’s,” she whispered.
仿写要求：描述家庭成员的情感，使用间接引语或动作描写。
造句练习：根据关键词造句，仿照文中语言风格：
关键词：on the verge of giving up
关键词：one of a kind
一、挖空填空（参考答案）
Alexis stared at the photo, her mind flooded with possible clues.
The sharp scent of onions filled the kitchen, bringing tears to her eyes, as though Grandpa was right there with her.
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad, hoping to recreate its unique flavor.
The kitchen was filled with a comforting silence, broken only by the sound of spoons clinking against bowls.
Determined to honor Grandpa’s legacy, Alexis confidently carried the salad to the contest.
二、翻译练习（一句多译参考答案）
原句：It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo.
照片里的样子，就像爷爷在哭泣。
看起来，照片中的爷爷正在流泪。
照片中仿佛有爷爷在流泪的影子。
三、句式改写与升级（参考答案）
强调句改写：
原句：Grandpa’s potato salad was one of a kind, loved by everyone.
改写：It was Grandpa’s potato salad that was one of a kind and loved by everyone.
非谓语句式改写：
原句：Alexis felt a wave of pride and warmth wash over her as she saw her family’s reactions.
改写：Seeing her family’s reactions, Alexis felt a wave of pride and warmth wash over her.
高级表达改写：
原句：The familiar aroma began to emerge as Alexis added onions to the salad.
改写：As Alexis added onions to the salad, the familiar aroma wafted through the air, evoking cherished memories.
四、情境写作填空（参考答案）
看到家人满意的微笑，Alexis感到骄傲和感激。
答案：Alexis felt a surge of pride and gratitude seeing the satisfied smiles on her family’s faces.
厨房里弥漫着熟悉的香味，让她想起了回忆。
答案：The kitchen was filled with the familiar aroma, bringing back fond memories of her childhood with Grandpa.
她的手很稳，尽管她激动。
答案：Her hands remained steady, even though she was brimming with excitement.
五、扩写与改写（参考答案）
句子扩写：
原句：Alexis added onions to the salad.
扩写：With trembling hands, Alexis chopped the onions and added them to the salad. The sharp scent filled the air, making her eyes water, but she couldn’t help smiling as the familiar aroma began to emerge. It was as though Grandpa’s presence was filling the kitchen once again.
句式升级：
原句：She carried the bowl confidently to the contest.
升级：With her heart brimming with confidence and gratitude, she carried the bowl to the contest, determined to honor Grandpa’s legacy and share his love with the world.
六、情景仿写与造句（参考答案）
仿写练习：
原句：“It tastes just like Grandpa’s,” she whispered.
仿写：“It brings back so many memories,” Dad said, his voice choked with emotion, as he placed his hand gently on Alexis’s shoulder.
造句练习：
关键词：on the verge of giving up
Just when she was on the verge of giving up, an idea sparked in her mind, reigniting her determination.
关键词：one of a kind
Her artwork was one of a kind, leaving everyone in awe of her creativity and talent.