读后续写 诚实与关爱：Kitty的善良之举（讲义）-云南省红河州2025届高三上学期一轮复习阶段检测（一）英语试题
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One windy day in March, Kitty Miller was on her way to school when she glanced into a store window and saw a great pile of lovely red apples. “Oh!” she exclaimed (惊叫). “How lovely! If only Mamma could have one!” Immediately, the store e owner recognized the familiar girl and asked her to pick one. Kitty just shook her head and ran away shyly.
Kitty’s mother was extremely poor. She had been a dressmaker ever since Kitty’s father died, and had to work hard to earn a living for herself and Kitty. Unfortunately, she had recently become very sick and had to lie in bed all day long. When Kitty was away at school, the house was incredibly cold and cheerless. She missed her little angel-that is what she called Kitty. Kitty took great care of her mother. She cooked her food, mostly soup. They could not afford fresh fruit. Kitty would even sing to her mother at night.
When Kitty reached the school that day, her thoughts were full of her sick mother and the lovely red apples. She was usually an excellent student, but that day she made so many mistakes that the teacher looked at her in surprise. The little girl could only sit at her desk, with her book before her, and dream of those red apples.
When the class was dismissed, Kitty started homeward slowly. She had walked only a short distance when she saw a man in front of her drop his wallet. Running quickly forward, she picked it up. The wallet felt quite heavy in Kitty’s little hand.
“There must be a good deal of money in it,” thought Kitty. “How I wish I could keep it, so that I would then be able to purchase a red apple for Mamma, and so many other things she needs.”
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
第一段：Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man.
第二段：The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand.
文章大意
这篇文章讲述了Kitty Miller在三月的一个多风的日子里，看到商店橱窗里堆满的红苹果时，想起了生病的母亲。Kitty的母亲是一位贫穷的裁缝，自从Kitty的父亲去世后，她一直努力工作以维持生计。不幸的是，她最近生病了，不得不整天躺在床上。Kitty在学校时，因为想着生病的母亲和红苹果而心不在焉，犯了很多错误。放学后，Kitty在路上捡到了一个钱包，尽管她很想用里面的钱为母亲买苹果和其他必需品，但她知道这样做不对，于是追上失主归还了钱包。失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元。Kitty拿着钱去商店，店主看到她后，免费给了她一个红苹果。Kitty把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴，母女俩在寒冷的家中感受到了一丝温暖和幸福.这个故事展示了Kitty的善良、诚实和对母亲的关爱，以及善良行为带来的积极影响.
故事山分析
引入：Kitty看到商店橱窗里的红苹果，想起了生病的母亲.
上升：Kitty在学校心不在焉，放学后捡到了一个钱包，想要用里面的钱为母亲买苹果.
高潮：Kitty决定归还钱包，失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元.
下降：Kitty拿着钱去商店，店主免费给了她一个红苹果.
结局：Kitty把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴，母女俩感受到了温暖和幸福.
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：Kitty看到商店橱窗里的红苹果，想起了生病的母亲.
回应：在续写中，Kitty用失主给的一美元去商店买苹果，最终店主免费给了她一个红苹果，实现了她为母亲买苹果的愿望.
伏笔：Kitty的母亲生病了，家里非常冷清.
回应：在续写中，Kitty把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴，母女俩在寒冷的家中感受到了一丝温暖和幸福.
伏笔：Kitty在学校心不在焉，犯了很多错误.
回应：在续写中，Kitty放学后捡到了钱包，面对金钱的诱惑，她选择了诚实，体现了她的善良和对母亲的关爱.
伏笔：Kitty捡到了一个钱包，里面有很多钱.
回应：在续写中，Kitty归还了钱包，失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元，这笔钱帮助她实现了为母亲买苹果的愿望.
伏笔：Kitty的母亲是一位贫穷的裁缝，家里经济困难.
回应：在续写中，Kitty用失主给的一美元去商店买苹果，体现了她对母亲的关爱和对家庭的责任感.
续写要点（两段）
第一段：Kitty归还钱包，失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元.
第二段：Kitty拿着钱去商店，店主免费给了她一个红苹果，她把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴.
情感线
Kitty对母亲的关爱贯穿整个故事，她看到红苹果时，首先想到的是生病的母亲，希望能为她买一个。在学校心不在焉，也是因为担心母亲。捡到钱包后，尽管她很想用里面的钱为母亲买苹果和其他必需品，但她选择了诚实，归还了钱包。失主给的一美元和店主免费给的红苹果，让她实现了为母亲买苹果的愿望，母女俩在寒冷的家中感受到了一丝温暖和幸福，这种情感的传递和回报，展现了善良和爱的力量.
故事线
Kitty看到商店橱窗里的红苹果，想起了生病的母亲.
Kitty在学校心不在焉，放学后捡到了一个钱包.
Kitty归还钱包，失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元.
Kitty拿着钱去商店，店主免费给了她一个红苹果.
Kitty把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴.
母女俩在寒冷的家中感受到了一丝温暖和幸福.
主旨升华句
Kindness and honesty can bring unexpected joy and warmth to our lives.
Caring for others, especially our loved ones, is a powerful source of happiness.
Small acts of goodness can have a significant impact on those around us.
The love and compassion we show to others often come back to us in unexpected ways.
In difficult times, the support and care from family and others can make a world of difference.
两篇写作示范
写作示范一
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man. She caught up with him and said, "Sir, you dropped your wallet." The man turned around, surprised, and looked at Kitty. He was touched by her honesty and said, "Thank you, little girl. You're very kind. Here, take this dollar as a reward for your honesty." Kitty smiled and thanked him, feeling proud of herself for doing the right thing. She continued on her way home, thinking about how she could use the dollar to buy something for her mother.
The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand. He greeted her warmly and asked, "What can I do for you today, Kitty " She replied, "I have a dollar, and I'd like to buy a red apple for my mother." The store owner smiled and said, "Of course, you can have one for free. I'm glad to see you're such a caring and honest girl." He handed her a beautiful red apple, and Kitty thanked him gratefully. As she walked home, she felt happy and excited to surprise her mother with the apple. When she arrived, she presented the apple to her mother, who was overjoyed and hugged Kitty tightly. The simple act of kindness had brought a moment of happiness and warmth to their cold and cheerless home.
写作示范二
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man. She caught up with him and said, "Sir, you dropped your wallet." The man turned around, surprised, and looked at Kitty. He was impressed by her honesty and said, "Thank you, little girl. You're very kind. Here, take this dollar as a reward for your honesty." Kitty smiled and thanked him, feeling proud of herself for doing the right thing. She continued on her way home, thinking about how she could use the dollar to buy something for her mother.
The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand. He greeted her warmly and asked, "What can I do for you today, Kitty " She replied, "I have a dollar, and I'd like to buy a red apple for my mother." The store owner smiled and said, "Of course, you can have one for free. I'm glad to see you're such a caring and honest girl." He handed her a beautiful red apple, and Kitty thanked him gratefully. As she walked home, she felt happy and excited to surprise her mother with the apple. When she arrived, she presented the apple to her mother, who was overjoyed and hugged Kitty tightly. The simple act of kindness had brought a moment of happiness and warmth to their cold and cheerless home.
【参考范文】
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man. Touching him on the arm, she said, “Please, sir. You dropped your wallet.” “Thank you, dear,” said the gentleman, taking the wallet. Then, noticing how poorly dressed she was, he said, “Why didn’t you keep the wallet, my child ” “That would be stealing,” replied Kitty. “But,” she continued honestly, “before I thought I must give it back to you, I did wish I could keep it, for then I could buy Mamma a red apple.” Hearing this, the man handed her a dollar and said, “You are a good girl. Take the dollar so that you can buy your mother a red apple.” Then, the man said goodbye to Kitty and left. With the dollar, Kitty happily ran to the store.
The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand. He quickly picked out the biggest, roundest, and reddest apple and gave it to Kitty. Taking the apple, Kitty was very happy and handed the dollar to the owner. But the owner didn’t take it, saying, “You keep it and the apple is free.” Kitty was so pleased and thanked the kind store owner. Then, she went back home. Her mother was surprised to see the apple and the dollar. Kitty told her mother the whole story. Her mother kissed her and said, “You see, dear, it always pays to be honest and truthful.”
One windy day in March, Kitty Miller was on her way to school when she glanced into a store window and saw a great pile of lovely red apples. “Oh!” she exclaimed (惊叫). “How lovely! If only Mamma could have one!” Immediately, the store e owner recognized the familiar girl and asked her to pick one. Kitty just shook her head and ran away shyly.
Kitty’s mother was extremely poor. She had been a dressmaker ever since Kitty’s father died, and had to work hard to earn a living for herself and Kitty. Unfortunately, she had recently become very sick and had to lie in bed all day long. When Kitty was away at school, the house was incredibly cold and cheerless. She missed her little angel-that is what she called Kitty. Kitty took great care of her mother. She cooked her food, mostly soup. They could not afford fresh fruit. Kitty would even sing to her mother at night.
When Kitty reached the school that day, her thoughts were full of her sick mother and the lovely red apples. She was usually an excellent student, but that day she made so many mistakes that the teacher looked at her in surprise. The little girl could only sit at her desk, with her book before her, and dream of those red apples.
When the class was dismissed, Kitty started homeward slowly. She had walked only a short distance when she saw a man in front of her drop his wallet. Running quickly forward, she picked it up. The wallet felt quite heavy in Kitty’s little hand.
“There must be a good deal of money in it,” thought Kitty. “How I wish I could keep it, so that I would then be able to purchase a red apple for Mamma, and so many other things she needs.”
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
第一段：Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man.
第二段：The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand.
文章大意
这篇文章讲述了Kitty Miller在三月的一个多风的日子里，看到商店橱窗里堆满的红苹果时，想起了生病的母亲。Kitty的母亲是一位贫穷的裁缝，自从Kitty的父亲去世后，她一直努力工作以维持生计。不幸的是，她最近生病了，不得不整天躺在床上。Kitty在学校时，因为想着生病的母亲和红苹果而心不在焉，犯了很多错误。放学后，Kitty在路上捡到了一个钱包，尽管她很想用里面的钱为母亲买苹果和其他必需品，但她知道这样做不对，于是追上失主归还了钱包。失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元。Kitty拿着钱去商店，店主看到她后，免费给了她一个红苹果。Kitty把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴，母女俩在寒冷的家中感受到了一丝温暖和幸福.这个故事展示了Kitty的善良、诚实和对母亲的关爱，以及善良行为带来的积极影响.
故事山分析
引入：Kitty看到商店橱窗里的红苹果，想起了生病的母亲.
上升：Kitty在学校心不在焉，放学后捡到了一个钱包，想要用里面的钱为母亲买苹果.
高潮：Kitty决定归还钱包，失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元.
下降：Kitty拿着钱去商店，店主免费给了她一个红苹果.
结局：Kitty把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴，母女俩感受到了温暖和幸福.
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：Kitty看到商店橱窗里的红苹果，想起了生病的母亲.
回应：在续写中，Kitty用失主给的一美元去商店买苹果，最终店主免费给了她一个红苹果，实现了她为母亲买苹果的愿望.
伏笔：Kitty的母亲生病了，家里非常冷清.
回应：在续写中，Kitty把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴，母女俩在寒冷的家中感受到了一丝温暖和幸福.
伏笔：Kitty在学校心不在焉，犯了很多错误.
回应：在续写中，Kitty放学后捡到了钱包，面对金钱的诱惑，她选择了诚实，体现了她的善良和对母亲的关爱.
伏笔：Kitty捡到了一个钱包，里面有很多钱.
回应：在续写中，Kitty归还了钱包，失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元，这笔钱帮助她实现了为母亲买苹果的愿望.
伏笔：Kitty的母亲是一位贫穷的裁缝，家里经济困难.
回应：在续写中，Kitty用失主给的一美元去商店买苹果，体现了她对母亲的关爱和对家庭的责任感.
续写要点（两段）
第一段：Kitty归还钱包，失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元.
第二段：Kitty拿着钱去商店，店主免费给了她一个红苹果，她把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴.
情感线
Kitty对母亲的关爱贯穿整个故事，她看到红苹果时，首先想到的是生病的母亲，希望能为她买一个。在学校心不在焉，也是因为担心母亲。捡到钱包后，尽管她很想用里面的钱为母亲买苹果和其他必需品，但她选择了诚实，归还了钱包。失主给的一美元和店主免费给的红苹果，让她实现了为母亲买苹果的愿望，母女俩在寒冷的家中感受到了一丝温暖和幸福，这种情感的传递和回报，展现了善良和爱的力量.
故事线
Kitty看到商店橱窗里的红苹果，想起了生病的母亲.
Kitty在学校心不在焉，放学后捡到了一个钱包.
Kitty归还钱包，失主为了奖励她的诚实，给了她一美元.
Kitty拿着钱去商店，店主免费给了她一个红苹果.
Kitty把苹果带回家，母亲非常高兴.
母女俩在寒冷的家中感受到了一丝温暖和幸福.
主旨升华句
Kindness and honesty can bring unexpected joy and warmth to our lives.
Caring for others, especially our loved ones, is a powerful source of happiness.
Small acts of goodness can have a significant impact on those around us.
The love and compassion we show to others often come back to us in unexpected ways.
In difficult times, the support and care from family and others can make a world of difference.
两篇写作示范
写作示范一
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man. She caught up with him and said, "Sir, you dropped your wallet." The man turned around, surprised, and looked at Kitty. He was touched by her honesty and said, "Thank you, little girl. You're very kind. Here, take this dollar as a reward for your honesty." Kitty smiled and thanked him, feeling proud of herself for doing the right thing. She continued on her way home, thinking about how she could use the dollar to buy something for her mother.
The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand. He greeted her warmly and asked, "What can I do for you today, Kitty " She replied, "I have a dollar, and I'd like to buy a red apple for my mother." The store owner smiled and said, "Of course, you can have one for free. I'm glad to see you're such a caring and honest girl." He handed her a beautiful red apple, and Kitty thanked him gratefully. As she walked home, she felt happy and excited to surprise her mother with the apple. When she arrived, she presented the apple to her mother, who was overjoyed and hugged Kitty tightly. The simple act of kindness had brought a moment of happiness and warmth to their cold and cheerless home.
写作示范二
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man. She caught up with him and said, "Sir, you dropped your wallet." The man turned around, surprised, and looked at Kitty. He was impressed by her honesty and said, "Thank you, little girl. You're very kind. Here, take this dollar as a reward for your honesty." Kitty smiled and thanked him, feeling proud of herself for doing the right thing. She continued on her way home, thinking about how she could use the dollar to buy something for her mother.
The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand. He greeted her warmly and asked, "What can I do for you today, Kitty " She replied, "I have a dollar, and I'd like to buy a red apple for my mother." The store owner smiled and said, "Of course, you can have one for free. I'm glad to see you're such a caring and honest girl." He handed her a beautiful red apple, and Kitty thanked him gratefully. As she walked home, she felt happy and excited to surprise her mother with the apple. When she arrived, she presented the apple to her mother, who was overjoyed and hugged Kitty tightly. The simple act of kindness had brought a moment of happiness and warmth to their cold and cheerless home.
【参考范文】
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man. Touching him on the arm, she said, “Please, sir. You dropped your wallet.” “Thank you, dear,” said the gentleman, taking the wallet. Then, noticing how poorly dressed she was, he said, “Why didn’t you keep the wallet, my child ” “That would be stealing,” replied Kitty. “But,” she continued honestly, “before I thought I must give it back to you, I did wish I could keep it, for then I could buy Mamma a red apple.” Hearing this, the man handed her a dollar and said, “You are a good girl. Take the dollar so that you can buy your mother a red apple.” Then, the man said goodbye to Kitty and left. With the dollar, Kitty happily ran to the store.
The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand. He quickly picked out the biggest, roundest, and reddest apple and gave it to Kitty. Taking the apple, Kitty was very happy and handed the dollar to the owner. But the owner didn’t take it, saying, “You keep it and the apple is free.” Kitty was so pleased and thanked the kind store owner. Then, she went back home. Her mother was surprised to see the apple and the dollar. Kitty told her mother the whole story. Her mother kissed her and said, “You see, dear, it always pays to be honest and truthful.”