读后续写 打扫房间的趣味竞赛（讲义）-内蒙古呼和浩特市2025届高三上学期第一次质量监测英语试卷

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The couple, Ella and Ken, lived in a fancy countryside house every summer together with their boys Jim and Dick, aged 7 and 11.
The two kids got on well with each other, unlike some other brothers who would often fight over small things. They shared everything happening in their school and exchanged their favourite toys and books. Except for one thing, cleaning! One sunny morning, Ella called out to her children, “Jim and Dick, it’s time to clean your room!” The kids sighed deeply. Cleaning their room was always the last thing they wanted to do.
Unhappy, Jim and Dick dragged their feet into their messy room. Toys were thrown randomly here and there on the floor, clothes were piled up on chairs, and books were haphazardly (随意的) piled on the shelves. It was a total mess!
Mom came in, “Oh, God! How come We need to work together to clean it up.” Jim and Dick exchanged looks, clearly not delighted with the task at hand. There were a few arguments between them, especially when it came to cleaning their room.
Mom, realizing their unwillingness, said to the kids, “A clean room not only looks nice but also helps us arrange our life in an orderly way. It’s important to take care of our belongings and keep our surroundings clean.” The boys didn’t respond, seemingly thinking about something.
Their father happened to hear the conversation and decided to give them a hand. He came up with a good idea. He said, “I know that cleaning can be dull, but what if we change it into a fun contest The winner, who can find the most interesting item hidden in this messy room, will decide what we have for dessert tonight!”
Their faces lighting up with excitement, they accepted their father’s suggestion.
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第一段：Curious about what they would find, they took immediate action individually.
第二段：The room became less messy gradually.
文章大意
这篇文章讲述了Ella和Ken夫妇每年夏天都会带着他们的两个儿子Jim和Dick去乡下的豪华别墅度假。Jim和Dick兄弟俩相处得很好，他们分享在学校发生的事情，也交换他们最喜欢的玩具和书籍。然而，他们不喜欢打扫房间。一天早上，Ella叫他们打扫房间，兄弟俩不情愿地进入房间，发现房间里一片混乱。妈妈告诉他们，保持房间整洁不仅能让房间看起来更漂亮，还能帮助他们有条不紊地安排生活。爸爸听到他们的对话后，想出了一个主意，把打扫房间变成一个有趣的比赛，谁能在房间里找到最有趣的物品，谁就能决定当晚的甜点。兄弟俩兴奋地接受了这个建议，开始各自寻找有趣的物品。Jim在一堆书下面找到了一辆旧玩具车，Dick发现了一本装满画的旧速写本。随着他们的搜索，房间逐渐变得整洁有序。最终，兄弟俩不仅找到了一些有趣的物品，还学会了团队合作的价值和完成工作的满足感。他们的父亲为他们的努力感到骄傲，并承诺给他们美味的甜点，强化了即使是家务活也可以变成有趣和有回报的经历这一理念.
故事山分析
引入：Ella和Ken夫妇带着两个儿子Jim和Dick去乡下的豪华别墅度假.
上升：Ella叫Jim和Dick打扫房间，兄弟俩不情愿地进入房间，发现房间里一片混乱.
高潮：爸爸想出了一个把打扫房间变成有趣比赛的主意，兄弟俩兴奋地接受了这个建议.
下降：兄弟俩开始各自寻找有趣的物品，房间逐渐变得整洁有序.
结局：兄弟俩不仅找到了一些有趣的物品，还学会了团队合作的价值和完成工作的满足感，他们的父亲为他们的努力感到骄傲，并承诺给他们美味的甜点.
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：兄弟俩不喜欢打扫房间.
回应：爸爸想出了一个把打扫房间变成有趣比赛的主意，激发了兄弟俩的兴趣和积极性.
伏笔：房间里一片混乱.
回应：兄弟俩在寻找有趣的物品的过程中，逐渐把房间打扫得整洁有序.
伏笔：妈妈告诉兄弟俩保持房间整洁的重要性.
回应：兄弟俩在打扫房间的过程中，体会到了整洁的房间带来的好处，学会了有条不紊地安排生活.
伏笔：兄弟俩相处得很好，喜欢分享.
回应：在打扫房间的过程中，兄弟俩互相帮助，分享找到的有趣物品，进一步加深了他们的友谊.
伏笔：爸爸想出了一个把打扫房间变成有趣比赛的主意.
回应：兄弟俩兴奋地接受了这个建议，通过比赛的形式，把枯燥的家务活变得有趣和有动力，最终完成了打扫任务.
续写要点（两段）
第一段：兄弟俩开始各自寻找有趣的物品，逐渐把房间打扫得整洁有序.
第段：兄弟俩不仅找到了一些有趣的物品，还学会了团队合作的价值和完成工作的满足感，他们的父亲为他们的努力感到骄傲，并承诺给他们美味的甜点.
情感线
兄弟俩对打扫房间最初是不情愿的，觉得这是一件枯燥乏味的事情。然而，在爸爸把打扫房间变成一个有趣的比赛后，他们的情感发生了转变。他们的好奇心被激发，开始兴奋地寻找有趣的物品。在寻找的过程中，兄弟俩互相帮助，分享找到的物品，增进了他们的友谊。当房间变得整洁有序时，他们体会到了完成工作的满足感和成就感，也感受到了团队合作的力量。父亲为他们的努力感到骄傲，并承诺给他们美味的甜点，进一步强化了他们的积极情感，让他们认识到即使是家务活也可以变成有趣和有回报的经历.
故事线
Ella和Ken夫妇带着两个儿子Jim和Dick去乡下的豪华别墅度假.
Ella叫Jim和Dick打扫房间，兄弟俩不情愿地进入房间，发现房间里一片混乱.
爸爸想出了一个把打扫房间变成有趣比赛的主意，兄弟俩兴奋地接受了这个建议.
兄弟俩开始各自寻找有趣的物品，逐渐把房间打扫得整洁有序.
兄弟俩不仅找到了一些有趣的物品，还学会了团队合作的价值和完成工作的满足感.
父亲为他们的努力感到骄傲，并承诺给他们美味的甜点，强化了即使是家务活也可以变成有趣和有回报的经历这一理念.
主旨升华句
Turning chores into fun activities can make them more enjoyable and rewarding.
Teamwork and cooperation can turn a daunting task into an exciting adventure.
The satisfaction of a job well done can be a powerful motivator for future tasks.
Even the most mundane tasks can become meaningful when approached with a positive attitude.
Encouraging creativity and curiosity can transform everyday activities into memorable experiences.
两篇写作示范
写作示范一
Curious about what they would find, they took immediate action individually. Jim started rummaging through the piles of clothes, while Dick began searching among the scattered toys. Their eyes were wide with anticipation, and they moved with renewed energy. Jim discovered an old toy car hidden under a pile of books, and Dick found a forgotten sketchbook filled with drawings. Each discovery brought a smile to their faces, and they eagerly showed their finds to each other, sparking friendly competition and laughter.
The room became less messy gradually. As they continued their search, the toys were neatly placed back in their boxes, clothes were folded and put away, and books were arranged on the shelves. The once chaotic room was slowly transformed into a tidy and organized space. The brothers' enthusiasm for the contest made the cleaning process enjoyable and efficient. By the time they finished, not only had they found several interesting items, but they had also learned the value of teamwork and the satisfaction of a job well done. Their father was proud of their efforts and promised a delicious dessert, reinforcing the idea that even chores could be turned into fun and rewarding experiences.
写作示范二
Curious about what they would find, they took immediate action individually. Jim dove into the pile of clothes, while Dick explored the scattered toys. Their faces lit up with excitement as they searched, each hoping to discover the most interesting item. Jim found a hidden treasure in the form of an old photograph album, and Dick unearthed a collection of colorful marbles. They shared their findings with each other, their enthusiasm growing with each new discovery.
The room became less messy gradually. As they continued their quest, the toys were put back in their rightful places, clothes were neatly folded, and books were arranged on the shelves. The room transformed from a chaotic mess into a tidy and organized space. The brothers' excitement and teamwork made the cleaning process enjoyable, and they learned the importance of taking care of their belongings. Their father was impressed by their efforts and promised a special dessert, reminding them that even the most mundane tasks can be turned into fun and rewarding experiences with a little creativity and enthusiasm.
One possible version:
Curious about what they would find, they took immediate action individually. To their surprise, Jim discovered his favorite toy car that he had been searching for weeks while Dick found a missing colorful pencil buried under a pile of papers. The boys couldn’t contain their excitement as they continued their search. As they explored the room, they came across forgotten treasures, like a model plane, candies and comic books. Each discovery brought laughter and pleasure, making the cleaning more enjoyable than they had ever expected.
The room became less messy gradually. Ken saw his boys working together, helping each other find hidden items, and laughing throughout the exploration. After what seemed like hours of searching and cleaning, the boys finally declared their search complete. The room was now tidy, and their treasures were proudly displayed. Mom entered the room, amazed at the changes. Considering their excellent performance, Mom let the boys choose their favorite dessert for the night together. Happily tasting their treats, they enjoyed the victory that came from working together and turning a boring task into a memorable exploration.