读后续写--意外的温暖:摩托车手与动物救援(讲义)-2025届1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试英语试题(八省联考)

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名称 读后续写--意外的温暖:摩托车手与动物救援(讲义)-2025届1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试英语试题(八省联考)
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更新时间 2025-01-05 15:00:33

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia(徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club- standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意:
(1) 续写词数应为150个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段:I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
第二段:When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
文章大意
这篇文章讲述了作者在费城参加一个会议时,看到一则关于救助被遗弃狗狗的纪录片的广告。尽管对动物充满爱心,但由于担心夜晚独自走在街上,作者最初决定留在酒店房间。然而,回到房间后,作者感到不安和无聊,最终决定去参加这个筹款活动。在前往剧院的路上,作者遇到了一群看起来很凶猛的摩托车手,这让她感到紧张和害怕。进入剧院后,作者发现里面有更多的摩托车手,但随着纪录片的播放,她意识到这些摩托车手其实是一个动物救援小组,他们对救助动物充满热情和奉献精神。这个故事展示了在陌生环境中克服恐惧的重要性,以及外表可能具有欺骗性,真正的善良和爱心可能隐藏在意想不到的地方.
故事山分析
引入:作者在费城参加会议时,看到一则关于救助被遗弃狗狗的纪录片的广告.
上升:作者担心夜晚独自走在街上,最初决定留在酒店房间,但后来决定去参加活动.
高潮:作者在剧院外看到一群看起来很凶猛的摩托车手,感到紧张和害怕.
下降:作者进入剧院后发现里面有更多的摩托车手,但随着纪录片的播放,她意识到他们是动物救援小组.
结局:作者对摩托车手们产生了新的尊重和欣赏,认识到外表可能具有欺骗性,真正的善良和爱心可能隐藏在意想不到的地方.
五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔:作者对动物充满爱心.
回应:在续写中,作者最终决定去参加救助被遗弃狗狗的纪录片活动,体现了她对动物的热爱.
伏笔:作者担心夜晚独自走在街上.
回应:在续写中,作者在剧院外看到一群摩托车手时,感到紧张和害怕,体现了她对独自走在街上的担忧.
伏笔:作者对摩托车手的初步印象是凶猛和可怕.
回应:在续写中,作者进入剧院后发现里面有更多的摩托车手,但随着纪录片的播放,她意识到他们是动物救援小组,改变了对他们的看法.
伏笔:剧院外的摩托车手们穿着徽章,表明他们属于某个俱乐部.
回应:在续写中,作者意识到这些摩托车手是一个动物救援小组,他们的徽章代表了他们对动物救助的承诺和奉献.
伏笔:作者对摩托车手的初步恐惧和想要逃离的冲动.
回应:在续写中,作者最终决定进入剧院,并在了解到摩托车手们的真实身份后,对他们的善良和爱心产生了敬意.
续写要点(两段)
第一段:作者进入剧院后发现里面有更多的摩托车手,感到惊讶和困惑.
第二段:随着纪录片的播放,作者意识到摩托车手们是一个动物救援小组,对他们的善良和爱心产生了敬意.
情感线
作者最初对参加活动感到犹豫和担忧,担心夜晚独自走在街上。然而,对动物的热爱驱使她克服恐惧,决定去参加活动。在剧院外看到摩托车手时,她感到紧张和害怕,但进入剧院后,随着纪录片的播放,她逐渐意识到这些摩托车手其实是一个动物救援小组,他们对救助动物充满热情和奉献精神。作者的情感从恐惧和疑惑转变为敬意和欣赏,她认识到外表可能具有欺骗性,真正的善良和爱心可能隐藏在意想不到的地方.
故事线
作者在费城参加会议时,看到一则关于救助被遗弃狗狗的纪录片的广告.
作者担心夜晚独自走在街上,最初决定留在酒店房间.
作者回到酒店房间后感到不安和无聊,决定去参加活动.
作者在剧院外看到一群看起来很凶猛的摩托车手,感到紧张和害怕.
作者进入剧院后发现里面有更多的摩托车手,但随着纪录片的播放,她意识到他们是动物救援小组.
作者对摩托车手们产生了新的尊重和欣赏,认识到外表可能具有欺骗性,真正的善良和爱心可能隐藏在意想不到的地方.
主旨升华句
True kindness often hides behind unexpected appearances.
Overcoming fear can lead to discovering unexpected sources of inspiration and support.
The love for animals can bring people from diverse backgrounds together for a common cause.
Judging by appearances alone can be misleading, as true character is revealed through actions.
Every individual has the potential to make a positive impact, regardless of their outward appearance.
两篇写作示范
写作示范一
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were scattered throughout the audience, some sitting in groups while others were alone. I felt a mix of relief and confusion. The atmosphere inside was surprisingly warm and welcoming, despite the intimidating appearance of the bikers. I chose a seat in the back, hoping to blend in and avoid drawing attention. As I settled in, I noticed that many of the bikers were engaged in friendly conversations with each other, and some were even holding dogs in their laps. This piqued my curiosity, and I began to wonder what their connection to the event was.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showcased their efforts to save abandoned dogs and provide them with safe homes. It turned out that they were there to support the local animal shelters and raise awareness about the importance of animal rescue. Throughout the film, I watched as the bikers shared their stories of rescuing dogs and the strong bond they had formed with these animals. Their passion and dedication were evident, and I felt a sense of admiration for them. By the end of the event, my initial fear had transformed into a newfound respect and appreciation for these bikers who were using their love for animals to make a positive impact in their community.
写作示范二
I hurried into the theater, surprised to see even more bikers inside. They were interspersed among the audience, and I couldn't help but feel a bit apprehensive. However, the atmosphere was surprisingly friendly, and I noticed that many of them were interacting with dogs. I took a seat near the back, curious about their presence at the event. As the lights dimmed, I prepared myself for the documentary, still unsure of the bikers' role in it.
When the film began, I was pleasantly surprised to learn that the bikers were part of an animal rescue group. The documentary highlighted their dedication to saving abandoned dogs and finding them loving homes. They had come to the event to show their support for the local shelters and to raise awareness about the plight of homeless animals. As I watched, I saw the bikers' genuine love for the dogs and their commitment to making a difference. By the end of the evening, my initial fears had dissolved, replaced by a deep respect for these bikers who were using their passion to help animals in need.
参考答案
续写第一段:
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt a bit panicked. But I noticed that they were all very orderly. Some were chatting quietly about the dogs they had rescued. I took a deep breath and found an empty seat as far away from them as possible. I was still a bit nervous but tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
续写第二段:
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They were here for the same reason as me - to support the local animal shelters. I felt so ashamed of my initial fear. As the film played, I saw their efforts in saving the abandoned dogs. They were so passionate and kind. After the film, I went up to them and apologized for my misjudgment. They just laughed and said it was okay. We even exchanged contact information to keep in touch about future animal - saving activities.
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