外研版中考英语二轮写作复习课件---如何交友(共21张PPT)

(共21张PPT)
i want to be
Warm-up:
Friendd& friendships & friendship
A good friend is somebody I can __________
A longlasting friendship is like ______.
friends & friendship
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Unit 2 I believe that the world is what you think it is.
If you think the world is beautiful, the world will be ...
Unit 2 I believe that the world is what you think it is.
A beautiful smile
Revision
八上M9s back on the title
When
Who
Why
How
Where
Friends make a difference:
What are good friends like
have the same hobbies …
be helpful/kind…
can understand/listen to you…
writing for senior high school entrance exam
全开放式书面表达
Pre-writing:
每个人都是独一无二的，都有与众不同之处，人们喜欢你一定会有很多原因。请以 “what makes me a good friend ”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80—100词左右；
4. 满分25分；
What makes me a good friend
I’m/ You are always ready to help others. I’m/You are helpful.
I/ You can listen to
my/ your friends. I/ You have the same hobbies as…
I’m
I
I
I’m
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my
What makes me a good friend
I’m always ready to help others. I’m helpful. I can listen to my friends. I have the same hobbies as …
？
What makes me a good friend
I am a boy easy to get along with. I never get angry easily. That’s the most important reason that makes me so popular.
I’m always ready to help others. Whenever my friends meet with troubles, I will give them a hand without even a moment’s thought.
I’m quite humorous. I can always tell some jokes or funny stories.
What do you think of the following writing Not good Good Or perfect
There are no grammatical(语法的) mistakes here!
What makes me a good friend
I am a boy easy to get along with. I never get angry easily. That’s the most important reason that makes me so popular.
I’m always ready to help others. Whenever my friends meet with troubles, I will give them a hand without even a moment’s thought.
I’m quite humorous. I can always tell some jokes or funny stories.
What makes me a good friend
Firstly, I am a boy easy to get along with. I never get angry easily. That’s the most important reason that makes me so popular. Secondly, I’m always ready to help others. Whenever my friends meet with troubles, I will give them a hand without even a moment’s thought. Finally, I’m quite humorous. I can always tell some jokes or funny stories.
What makes me a good friend
I’m quite popular with my friends, and the reasons can be listed as follows.
To begin with, I am a boy easy to get along with. I never get angry easily. That’s the most important reason that makes me so popular. Besides, I’m always ready to help others. Whenever my friends meet with troubles, I will give them a hand without even a moment’s thought. Finally, I’m quite humorous. I can always tell some jokes or funny stories.
All in all, friends can make a big difference in our lives, and being a good friend is so enjoyable.
What makes me a good friend
I’m quite popular with my
friends, and the reasons can be
listed as follows.
To begin with, I am a boy easy
to get along with. I never get
angry easily. That’s the most
important reason that makes
me so popular. Besides, I’m
always ready to help others.
Whenever my friends meet
with troubles, I will give them
a hand without even a
moment’s thought. Finally, I’m
quite humorous. I can always
tell some jokes or funny stories.
All in all, friends can
make a big difference in
our life, and being a good
friend is so enjoyable.
What makes me a good friend
I’m quite popular with my friends, and the reasons can be listed as follows.
To begin with, I am a boy easy to get along with. I never get angry easily. That’s the most important reason that makes me so popular. Besides, I’m always ready to help others. Whenever my friends meet with troubles, I will give them a hand without even a moment’s thought. Finally, I’m quite humorous. I can always tell some jokes or funny stories.
All in all, friends can make a big difference in our life, and being a good friend is so enjoyable.
What makes me a good friend
While-writing:
Let’s share our story about “smile”.
What kind of special thing did you receive
Who gave it to you
What happened on that day
How did you feel at that moment
…
When I was …years old, I received a/an …from …. On that day, I …. I felt … at that moment.
1．Punctuation(符号) and case（所有格） ☆☆☆☆☆
2. spelling ☆☆☆☆☆
3．varieties of sentence structures ☆☆☆☆☆
（句型多样）
4．use conjunctions to express the order☆☆☆☆☆
（连词表达顺序）
5．one idea per paragraph（段落） ☆☆☆☆☆
6．logical flow of ideas（有逻辑性） ☆☆☆☆☆
7．Grammar（语法） ☆☆☆☆☆
8．Handwriting（书写） ☆☆☆☆☆
Writing feedback:
Post-writing:
★.Rewrite the composition:
每个人都是独一无二的，都有与众不同之处，人们喜欢你一定会有很多原因。请以 “What makes me a good friend ”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80—100词左右（满分：25分）
★.Summarize the steps of open writing or free writing;
Homework
Wrap-up: