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应用文写作
突破训练
短文投稿类应用文
短文类应用文即根据写作情景的要求,写一篇短文,通常为说明文,参与征文活动或报纸、杂志的投稿。
典例示范
一、写作情景一
学校英文报YOUTH成功举办10周年,请你写一篇文章投稿,庆祝它创办10周年。内容包括:1. 读报经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期待与祝福。
注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Youth and Me
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一、审题
审题要素 情景一
写作情景 庆祝校英文报YOUTH成功举办10周年征文
话题 报刊阅读
作者 考生本人
写作对象
涉及的功能表达
全校师生
1. 表示祝贺 2. 描述读报经历和喜爱的栏目 3. 表达期待与祝福
Youth and Me
As a loyal fan of Youth, I would like to extend my warm congratulations on the occasion of the 10th anniversary of its founding. 【总起段:回应写作情景,表示祝贺】
I can well remember how deeply attracted I was by its unique layout design and language style the first time I read it. 【要点1:读报经历】 Since then, I have had to read every issue, in which I appreciate the column School Culture best. 【要点2:喜爱的栏目】 Because it introduces our school culture from many aspects, which enables me to have a deeper understanding of the connotation of school. 【要点2的展开,说明原因】The more I read, the more I love our school and Youth. During my high school life, Youth enriches my spiritual world and witnesses my progress in English.
Words fail to convey my feelings. May each succeeding year bring Youth greater development! 【要点3:期待与祝福】
【经典范文】
二、写作情景二
你校英语节组织“你最喜爱的卡通电影人物”英语征文评选。你打算推荐“花木兰”,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文参加评选。 1. 简述木兰代父从军的故事;2. 你喜欢这一角色的理由。
注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
I wish to choose Mulan as my favourite cartoon character. _________
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谋篇布局
【经典范文】
I wish to choose Mulan as my favourite cartoon character. 【总起段:推荐的人物】
Living in ancient times, (V-ing作状语) Mulan was a young girl who was determined to sacrifice herself and replace her father to join the army without hesitation. (定语从句)【主题句】 To avoid being seen through, Mulan disguised herself as a man to trick the army officers. It was not until Mulan returned to her hometown with honor and removed her disguise that her fellow soldiers realized she was a female. 【展开句;要点1:木兰代父从军的故事】
The reason why I love this character is that she is both brave and caring. 【主题句】She fighted with courage and determination and she made great contributions to her country. She is also a wonderful role model, showing women and ordinary people that they need not feel limited about what they can achieve. 【展开句;要点2:喜欢木兰的理由】
Above all, Mulan is such an attractive character that I admire most. 【总结段:再次说明木兰的人物特征】
三、写作情景三
某英文杂志开设“一周一成语”专栏,向外国读者介绍中国成语。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍成语“锲而不舍”。内容包括:1. 解释字面意思;2. 阐释道理。
注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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变式训练一 根据已给范文内容,为“写作情景三”写一个总起段,和两个主题句。
锲而不舍(Qie Er Bu She)
总起段:______________________________________________
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分段1主题句:_________________________________________
_______ “锲(Qie)” means “the act of carving on the gold stone”. As for “而(Er)”, it is similar to “and” in English. When it comes to “不舍(Bu She)”, it simply means “never give up”.
Chinese culture values the great spirit of persistence. Lots of idioms express such meaning, among which is the one we’ll introduce this week—锲而不舍(Qie Er Bu She).
Literally, the meaning of this idiom lies in each character.
分段2主题句:_________________________________________
It, as a whole, suggests if we keep carving, we will eventually turn a metal or stone piece into an artwork no matter how hard it is. Taking carving metal or stone as an analogy, this idiom highlights the moral that if we don’t give up, we will achieve our goal one day.
总结段:Short as the idiom is, it demonstrates the fundamental principle of the Chinese ancestors and has a profound influence on the Chinese.
The idiom conveys the importance of perseverance.
四、写作情景四
为迎接一年一度的重阳节,学校英文报举办以“关爱老人”为主题的征文比赛。请写一篇英语短文参赛,包括以下要点:1. 重阳节的意义;2. 如何关爱老人;3. 期望与呼吁。
注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Love the Elderly
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变式训练二 根据已给范文内容,为 “写作情景四”的分段要点2. “如何关爱老人” 写展开句。
Love the Elderly
The Chongyang Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth month of the lunar calendar. Nine, as the biggest single number, represents long life and happiness. That’s why China celebrates Senior Citizen’s Day on the ninth of the ninth month. It symbolizes respect and love for the old.
As our population ages, it’s more important than ever that the elderly are well taken care of.
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Hopefully, by working together we can improve the latter years of our senior citizens. After their lifetime of hard work, it’s the least they deserve.
Young people should keep their parents or grandparents company regularly. As a society, we should build more nursing homes where the elderly can be safe and enjoy their retirement together.
五、写作情景五
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1. 海洋的重要性;2. 保护海洋的倡议。
变式训练三 参考所给语块,完成“写作情景五”写作任务。
1. 提高人们对海洋保护的认识
raise people’s awareness of ocean conservation
2. 提供我们食物的主要来源
provide a major source of our food
3. 在调节气候方面发挥着重要作用
play a significant role in regulating the climate
4. ……是世界大部分经济的基础
…serve as the foundation for much of the world’s economy
5. 肩负起保护……的责任
shoulder the responsibility to protect …
6. 从小开始
start with small actions
7. 是时候……
it is high time to…
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.______________________________________________________
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It was launched to raise people’s awareness of ocean conservation. It is commonly acknowledged that oceans are significant to our planet Earth.
With abundant fish and other seafood, they provide a major source of our food. Besides, it plays a significant role in regulating the climate and it absorbs the heat and generates the oxygen we breathe. Last but not least, they also serve as the foundation for much of the world’s economy, supporting sectors from tourism to fisheries to international shipping.
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As oceans bring so many benefits, undoubtedly it is crucial for us to shoulder our responsibility to protect them. First of all, let’s start with small actions like not throwing garbage into the oceans to protect marine habitats. Secondly, it is high time to appeal to policymakers to take measures to handle the issues of overfishing and water pollution. All in all, to protect the ocean is to protect ourselves.
变式训练四 完成写作任务。
你校英文报“Teenage Life” 本期专栏的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 运动的重要性;2. 你的运动建议。
注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Sports and Health
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It is commonly acknowledged that sports are significant to our health. This is especially true for us teenagers. As we are still in the critical stage of growing up, doing sports can build up our bodies, thus helping us stay energetic and fit. What is also worth mentioning is the role sports play in maintaining our mental health.
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While working out, we may become more content, confident and determined.
To fully enjoy these benefits, here are some tips. First, choose the sport that interests you most and suits you best. Second, find some good workout partners. This way, it’s more likely that you’ll exercise regularly. Lastly, exercise properly to prevent injuries.
For a healthy life and a bright future, let’s do sports from now on.
The end
Thank you