2025届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写 亲情类课件（共31张PPT)
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(共31张PPT)
读后续写专题
（亲情类）
核心素养目标
【语言能力】write the outline of 2 paragraphs by their own.
【学习能力】 learn reading and writing skills;
【文化意识】overcome writing difficulties,and enhance learning interest.
【思维品质】writing things in a logical way.
By the end of this lesson,
students are able to
Lead in(Review)
1.What is continuation writing ？
读 后 续 写
2.What are the elements of a story？
时间 when
地点 where
人物 who
事件的起因 why
事件的经过 what
事件的结果 how
六要素(5W1H)
How to read
文章很长？？？ 主题不藏！！！
单词不会？？？ 找你会的！！！
四大主题
亲情类
助人类
成长类
脱困类
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
1. 先看续写给出的两句话，确定大概主题方向。
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
2. 寻找更多认识的单词，理解故事走向
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
Beginning:
Conflict:
solution :
Ending
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
经过：一开始在平稳进行，后来发生意外（矛盾出现）
起因：双胞胎想在母亲节为妈妈准备惊喜--做早饭
How to write ----“十句五定”
什么是“十句五定”？
十句：续写的两段每一段都写五句话，加起来就是十句。
五定：这十句话中，有五句是可以确定的。
每句话里可以写什么？
动作描写，情绪描写，对话
第一段：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。S1.___________________________
S2._____________________________
S3._____________________________
S4.________________________________
S5._________________________________
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了他们的妈妈。
（1）定第一句：顺着开头的话去写----父亲会有什么反应？（情绪/心理描写--震惊）
（2）定第二句：根据第二段首句确定--他们成功地做好了早餐
第二步完成S5；根据第二段首句信息，猜测第一段结局--做好早餐，然后倒推S234句
由S5，可得 S2,3,4 可能包含在父亲的帮助下，成功处理了意外（利用角色之间的对话、反应）
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了他们的妈妈。
S6.___________________________
S7._____________________________
S8._____________________________
S9.________________________________
S10._________________________________
（3）定第三句，顺着本段开头句写--妈妈看到后的反应：震惊？疑惑？
（4）定第四句，倒数第二句写结局--拥抱、开心
猜测结局（正能量）抱在一起，感激开心幸福...
（5）定第五句，万能句升华（在那时，xxx真正地明白了家是成员之间互相理解和享受爱意的地方。
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
At that time, xxx really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love. /
六、如何编故事？----“十句五定”
五句话定完了，
那其余的五句话S2 S3 S4 S7 S8要怎么写呢？
六、如何编故事？----“十句五定”
1、可以插入角色间的对话，对话后的反应；
2、可以插入动作链描写，或者人物心理/情绪、环境描写。
第一段：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。S1.___________________________
S2._____________________________
S3._____________________________
S4.________________________________
S5._________________________________
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了他们的妈妈。
（1）定第一句：顺着开头的话去写----父亲会有什么反应？（情绪/心理描写--震惊）
（2）定第二句：根据第二段首句确定--他们成功地做好了早餐
第二步完成S5；根据第二段首句信息，猜测第一段结局--做好早餐，然后倒推S234句
由S5，可得 S2,3,4 可能包含在父亲的帮助下，成功处理了意外（利用角色之间的对话、反应）
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
父亲与双胞胎之间的对话（父亲询问）
父亲与双胞胎之间的对话（孩子解释）
父亲得知实情，帮助
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了他们的妈妈。
S6.___________________________
S7._____________________________
S8._____________________________
S9.________________________________
S10._________________________________
（3）定第三句，顺着本段开头句写--妈妈看到后的反应：震惊？疑惑？
（4）定第四句，倒数第二句写结局--拥抱、开心
猜测结局（正能量）抱在一起，感激开心幸福...
（5）定第五句，万能句升华（二选一或者都写）（在那时，xxx真正地明白了家是成员之间互相理解和享受爱意的地方。/透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光，和xxx家人之间的爱，温暖了彼此。）
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
At that time, xxx really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love. / The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between xxx’s family, warmed each other.
插入角色间的对话+情绪描写（开心、感动...）
Group work:（Finish the practice）
模拟练习
1. 先看续写给出的两句话，确定大概主题方向。
Para1： Brad hesitantly walked over to her .
___________________________
Para2：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life_________________________________
practice
Avoiding people in a small town requires the skills of a spy. So Brad Ryan moved like a ghost, taking precautions to stay far away from the woman who he thought had broken his heart. He had not seen or spoken to Grandma Joy for six years
One day, he received a call from his mom, saying his elder sister had announced her engagement and a wedding date had been set for a Duncan Falls church. Brad's heart sank, because Grandma Joy would be there. But he loved his sister, and there was no way he'd miss the wedding.
2. 寻找更多认识的单词，确定主题猜测
模拟练习
Despite Joy Ryan's first name, there were lots of sufferings and regrets instead of joy in her life. She grew up in a home with no electricity, running water or plumbing. She attended a one-room schoolhouse. And she suffered the loss of two sons. She was a widow（寡妇）for 14 years. And she'd never had the chance to see what she called the great outdoors other than a trip to see relatives in Lousiana.
模拟练习
"My earliest memory of her is when I was 3," said Brad. "We'd walk to Blue Rock State Park, which is close to her house. She'd help me lift rocks in the creek（小溪）to find crawfish. We'd hold them in our hands and talk about how beautiful it was being in nature. No one in my family thought like that."
模拟练习（complete the story mountain )
Beginning:
Conflict:
solution :
Ending
有一天，Brad收到妈妈的消息---姐姐要结婚，要去参加婚礼，祖母也会去
Brad和祖母发生矛盾，两人六年没见的(conflict）
模拟练习
Para1： Brad hesitantly walked over to her. (Brad犹豫地走向了她。)
S1.___________________________
S2._____________________________
S3._____________________________
S4.________________________________
S5._________________________________
Para2：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life.(那天之后，Brad决定不在奶奶的生活中留下任何遗憾。)
请你构思：
Brad为什么犹豫？
此时他的心理活动是怎样的？
他会有什么样的表现？
他和奶奶相见后会发生什么？（动作、语言、情绪/心理）
模拟练习
Para2：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life.(那天之后，Brad决定不在奶奶的生活中留下任何遗憾。)
S6.___________________________
S7._____________________________
S8._____________________________
S9.________________________________
S10._________________________________
请你构思：
他决定不再留下遗憾，那他会怎么做？（呼应前文）
Brad和Grandma的心理变化？
这篇文章想向我们传达什么？
SHOW TIME
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
第一段：Brad hesitantly walked over to her. (Brad犹豫地走向了她。)
① Brad的心跳动地很快，手心出汗，内心有一个声音告诉他要保持冷静。
②当祖母走进Brad时，他能看到祖母眼里有泪水并且她的身体在颤抖。
⑤婚礼开始了，Brad和祖母手牵手坐在一起。
Para1：
Brad’s heart pounding fiercely and his palm sweating, an inner voice told him he should stay calm. As his grandmother approached to him, he could see her eyes was filled with tears and her body trembling. “I’m sorry, grandma. I didn’t stay with you when you needed me the most.” Brad uttered, managing a weak smile. Hearing this, she nodded, tears streaming down her cheeks. She hugged Brad tightly and whispered: “I never thought I could see you again. I miss you very much these years. I often thought that I should give you more patience and understanding.” As the wedding ceremony began, they took seats next to each other, hand in hand.
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
第二段：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life.(那天之后，Brad决定不在奶奶的生活中留下任何遗憾。)
① 他每天都去看望祖母，听祖母讲这几年的故事，并且他也和祖母分享他自己这几年的经历。
④对于祖母来说，她的生活最终也充满了JOY。
⑤在那时，Brad真正地明白了家是成员之间互相理解和享受爱意的地方。
Para2：
He visited his grandmother everyday, listening to her stories of the past and sharing his own life experiences. They went to the Blue Rock State Park together, taking her on trips to enjoy the most impressive scenery in the world. Brad accompanied her to visit her relatives in Louisiana, compensating her regrets. For Grandma Joy, her life was eventually of joys. At that time, Brad really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love.
Homework
Finish the continuation writing .
Thank You!
读后续写专题
（亲情类）
核心素养目标
【语言能力】write the outline of 2 paragraphs by their own.
【学习能力】 learn reading and writing skills;
【文化意识】overcome writing difficulties,and enhance learning interest.
【思维品质】writing things in a logical way.
By the end of this lesson,
students are able to
Lead in(Review)
1.What is continuation writing ？
读 后 续 写
2.What are the elements of a story？
时间 when
地点 where
人物 who
事件的起因 why
事件的经过 what
事件的结果 how
六要素(5W1H)
How to read
文章很长？？？ 主题不藏！！！
单词不会？？？ 找你会的！！！
四大主题
亲情类
助人类
成长类
脱困类
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
1. 先看续写给出的两句话，确定大概主题方向。
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
2. 寻找更多认识的单词，理解故事走向
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
Beginning:
Conflict:
solution :
Ending
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
经过：一开始在平稳进行，后来发生意外（矛盾出现）
起因：双胞胎想在母亲节为妈妈准备惊喜--做早饭
How to write ----“十句五定”
什么是“十句五定”？
十句：续写的两段每一段都写五句话，加起来就是十句。
五定：这十句话中，有五句是可以确定的。
每句话里可以写什么？
动作描写，情绪描写，对话
第一段：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。S1.___________________________
S2._____________________________
S3._____________________________
S4.________________________________
S5._________________________________
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了他们的妈妈。
（1）定第一句：顺着开头的话去写----父亲会有什么反应？（情绪/心理描写--震惊）
（2）定第二句：根据第二段首句确定--他们成功地做好了早餐
第二步完成S5；根据第二段首句信息，猜测第一段结局--做好早餐，然后倒推S234句
由S5，可得 S2,3,4 可能包含在父亲的帮助下，成功处理了意外（利用角色之间的对话、反应）
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了他们的妈妈。
S6.___________________________
S7._____________________________
S8._____________________________
S9.________________________________
S10._________________________________
（3）定第三句，顺着本段开头句写--妈妈看到后的反应：震惊？疑惑？
（4）定第四句，倒数第二句写结局--拥抱、开心
猜测结局（正能量）抱在一起，感激开心幸福...
（5）定第五句，万能句升华（在那时，xxx真正地明白了家是成员之间互相理解和享受爱意的地方。
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
At that time, xxx really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love. /
六、如何编故事？----“十句五定”
五句话定完了，
那其余的五句话S2 S3 S4 S7 S8要怎么写呢？
六、如何编故事？----“十句五定”
1、可以插入角色间的对话，对话后的反应；
2、可以插入动作链描写，或者人物心理/情绪、环境描写。
第一段：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。S1.___________________________
S2._____________________________
S3._____________________________
S4.________________________________
S5._________________________________
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了他们的妈妈。
（1）定第一句：顺着开头的话去写----父亲会有什么反应？（情绪/心理描写--震惊）
（2）定第二句：根据第二段首句确定--他们成功地做好了早餐
第二步完成S5；根据第二段首句信息，猜测第一段结局--做好早餐，然后倒推S234句
由S5，可得 S2,3,4 可能包含在父亲的帮助下，成功处理了意外（利用角色之间的对话、反应）
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
父亲与双胞胎之间的对话（父亲询问）
父亲与双胞胎之间的对话（孩子解释）
父亲得知实情，帮助
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了他们的妈妈。
S6.___________________________
S7._____________________________
S8._____________________________
S9.________________________________
S10._________________________________
（3）定第三句，顺着本段开头句写--妈妈看到后的反应：震惊？疑惑？
（4）定第四句，倒数第二句写结局--拥抱、开心
猜测结局（正能量）抱在一起，感激开心幸福...
（5）定第五句，万能句升华（二选一或者都写）（在那时，xxx真正地明白了家是成员之间互相理解和享受爱意的地方。/透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光，和xxx家人之间的爱，温暖了彼此。）
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
At that time, xxx really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love. / The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between xxx’s family, warmed each other.
插入角色间的对话+情绪描写（开心、感动...）
Group work:（Finish the practice）
模拟练习
1. 先看续写给出的两句话，确定大概主题方向。
Para1： Brad hesitantly walked over to her .
___________________________
Para2：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life_________________________________
practice
Avoiding people in a small town requires the skills of a spy. So Brad Ryan moved like a ghost, taking precautions to stay far away from the woman who he thought had broken his heart. He had not seen or spoken to Grandma Joy for six years
One day, he received a call from his mom, saying his elder sister had announced her engagement and a wedding date had been set for a Duncan Falls church. Brad's heart sank, because Grandma Joy would be there. But he loved his sister, and there was no way he'd miss the wedding.
2. 寻找更多认识的单词，确定主题猜测
模拟练习
Despite Joy Ryan's first name, there were lots of sufferings and regrets instead of joy in her life. She grew up in a home with no electricity, running water or plumbing. She attended a one-room schoolhouse. And she suffered the loss of two sons. She was a widow（寡妇）for 14 years. And she'd never had the chance to see what she called the great outdoors other than a trip to see relatives in Lousiana.
模拟练习
"My earliest memory of her is when I was 3," said Brad. "We'd walk to Blue Rock State Park, which is close to her house. She'd help me lift rocks in the creek（小溪）to find crawfish. We'd hold them in our hands and talk about how beautiful it was being in nature. No one in my family thought like that."
模拟练习（complete the story mountain )
Beginning:
Conflict:
solution :
Ending
有一天，Brad收到妈妈的消息---姐姐要结婚，要去参加婚礼，祖母也会去
Brad和祖母发生矛盾，两人六年没见的(conflict）
模拟练习
Para1： Brad hesitantly walked over to her. (Brad犹豫地走向了她。)
S1.___________________________
S2._____________________________
S3._____________________________
S4.________________________________
S5._________________________________
Para2：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life.(那天之后，Brad决定不在奶奶的生活中留下任何遗憾。)
请你构思：
Brad为什么犹豫？
此时他的心理活动是怎样的？
他会有什么样的表现？
他和奶奶相见后会发生什么？（动作、语言、情绪/心理）
模拟练习
Para2：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life.(那天之后，Brad决定不在奶奶的生活中留下任何遗憾。)
S6.___________________________
S7._____________________________
S8._____________________________
S9.________________________________
S10._________________________________
请你构思：
他决定不再留下遗憾，那他会怎么做？（呼应前文）
Brad和Grandma的心理变化？
这篇文章想向我们传达什么？
SHOW TIME
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
第一段：Brad hesitantly walked over to her. (Brad犹豫地走向了她。)
① Brad的心跳动地很快，手心出汗，内心有一个声音告诉他要保持冷静。
②当祖母走进Brad时，他能看到祖母眼里有泪水并且她的身体在颤抖。
⑤婚礼开始了，Brad和祖母手牵手坐在一起。
Para1：
Brad’s heart pounding fiercely and his palm sweating, an inner voice told him he should stay calm. As his grandmother approached to him, he could see her eyes was filled with tears and her body trembling. “I’m sorry, grandma. I didn’t stay with you when you needed me the most.” Brad uttered, managing a weak smile. Hearing this, she nodded, tears streaming down her cheeks. She hugged Brad tightly and whispered: “I never thought I could see you again. I miss you very much these years. I often thought that I should give you more patience and understanding.” As the wedding ceremony began, they took seats next to each other, hand in hand.
如何编故事？----“十句五定”
第二段：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life.(那天之后，Brad决定不在奶奶的生活中留下任何遗憾。)
① 他每天都去看望祖母，听祖母讲这几年的故事，并且他也和祖母分享他自己这几年的经历。
④对于祖母来说，她的生活最终也充满了JOY。
⑤在那时，Brad真正地明白了家是成员之间互相理解和享受爱意的地方。
Para2：
He visited his grandmother everyday, listening to her stories of the past and sharing his own life experiences. They went to the Blue Rock State Park together, taking her on trips to enjoy the most impressive scenery in the world. Brad accompanied her to visit her relatives in Louisiana, compensating her regrets. For Grandma Joy, her life was eventually of joys. At that time, Brad really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love.
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